IELTS-Simon-Writing-Task1-Academic-part-4

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@akuk2592 7 ай бұрын

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@kyrielin9721 Жыл бұрын

The pie charts compare five categories of household expenditure in the UK and New Zealand in the years 1980 and 2008. It is noticeable that the proportion of spending on food and drink fell in both countries over the 28-year period, while spending on utility bills rose. Also, UK residents spent a significantly larger percentage of their household budgets on leisure than their New Zealand counterparts. In 1980, 29% of an average New Zealand household budget went on food and drink, while the equivalent figure for a UK home was 23%. By 2008, expenditure on food and drink had fallen by 4% in New Zealand, and by a full 10% in the UK. By contrast, both countries saw an increase in expenditure on utility bills for the average home, from 27% to 31% in New Zealand and from 26% to 28% in the UK. Leisure activities accounted for the highest proportion of UK household spending in both years, but only the third highest proportion in New Zealand. In fact, in 2008, New Zealanders spent only half as much in relative terms on recreation (17%) as UK residents (34%). In both countries, transport costs and other costs took roughly 15% and 10% of household budgets respectively.

@bonjoetomisaiah2462 Жыл бұрын

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@ravindergill2180 2 жыл бұрын

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@mahikan1991 12 күн бұрын

Thank you for the video, it's very informative and educational. I've noticed you made one mistake that might not be crucial for IELTS, but that is very important to avoid in general. It's incorrect to say that the expenditure on food and drinks in the UK had fallen by 10% because the decrease from 23 to 13 is almost 50%. The correct way would be to say that it had fallen by 10 percent points.

@sonhungnguyen7939 2 жыл бұрын

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@dostonraxmonov8134 2 жыл бұрын

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@azamatmurodov921 Жыл бұрын

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@florencenkechi4157 Жыл бұрын

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@dilkikulasinghe5815 Ай бұрын

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@mexrinsogofforova6040 2 жыл бұрын

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@arezoumalek Жыл бұрын

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@bhagatpreetsingh8299 2 жыл бұрын

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@IeltsSimon9 2 жыл бұрын

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@oxygenxhunter Жыл бұрын

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@Volleyy 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you Simon for this lesson, you taught it in the simplest of terms.

@IeltsSimon9 2 жыл бұрын

Of course, if you guys keep supporting me I'll post more and more videos hopefully:)

@Volleyy 2 жыл бұрын

Please have you posted any video on process diagrams?

@JasurbekAbdualimov-bt2ck 7 ай бұрын

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@ShahribonuYitmasova 21 күн бұрын

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@unique_girl_2907 Жыл бұрын

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@sahelmiah184 Жыл бұрын

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@ENTERANAME16 Жыл бұрын

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@kimtuyen9 5 ай бұрын

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@cosmicbladee 3 ай бұрын

Great method of teaching!!! I totally enjoyed learning in fact i subscribed the channel. The only thing it was not convenient for me that the chart wasn't anywhere on writing page so i had to go back to relate writing with the chart everytime. Hopeful he'll fix it.

@张晓蕾-w3r 8 ай бұрын

Where is a worksheet

@zafarbekimmatov4694 Ай бұрын

Thank you too much and may we write the overview at the end of the chart😊😊😊

@triviet1099 10 ай бұрын

can you please explain why should we use the word 'by'? For example, you use 'by 2008' in this pie chart example. Thank you!

@khaledr5449 8 ай бұрын

Where can i find the worksheet that you mention in the last part of the lesson.?

@Saudi_reel 2 ай бұрын

Thnk you for your videos! However, the pie charts are for the years 1980 & 2008 - so it is not a "over period of 28 years" because they for only 2 sapret years and not during them. There may be a rise in 1982 in the category of "food and drink"! Am I right?

@talanttuychiyev8231 Жыл бұрын

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@tulipkhan7730 2 жыл бұрын

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@IeltsSimon9 2 жыл бұрын

Always happy to help:)

@azamatmurodov921 Жыл бұрын

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@VyTuong-xg7oy 5 ай бұрын

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@aystudiobt214ever 2 жыл бұрын

Where can I download the worksheet?

@IeltsSimon9 2 жыл бұрын

Ieltssimon9@gmail.com

@AzizLaliev Ай бұрын

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@gulasalabdumajitova Жыл бұрын

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@ngochieu_nguyen 2 жыл бұрын

Hi, I also intend to write 2 paragraphs. However, instead of comparing category by category, I decided to compare 2 charts from different years, but from the same country for each paragraph. My friend, on the other hand, compares two charts from the two countries in the same year. It is advisable to do it differently? Or will I be deducted some points relating to task achievement?

@bin5phut334 Жыл бұрын

Both ways are fine, however since the purpose of pie charts with fewer than 2 time stamps is more towards contrast and comparisons, your friend's way may be more suited to common logic. The only reason why figures are represented as a pie chart is that people would like to compare/ contrast the figures rather than see the changes, as a table/ line chart is more suited to that task.

@mavlonodev 9 ай бұрын

Where's the worksheet?

@Moonlight-tf3we Жыл бұрын

Thank you simon for the lesson. I wrote this sentence for my introduction. Is it correct? The pie charts demonstrate the proportion of five categories on which families spent annually in the UK and New Zealand in the years of 1980 and 2008.