IELTS-Simon-Writing-Task1-Academic-part-8

Here’s the report that I wrote in the video lesson:
The two pictures compare the current layout of the ground floor of a house with a plan to redesign
the same living space.
We can see that the new design proposal involves making a number of changes to the ground floor
of the house, mainly in the central hall area. There are no plans to change external walls or
entrances.
The most noticeable change from the existing to the proposed floor plan is that there will no longer
be a separate hall area when the building work has been done. This will be achieved by removing
the internal wall and door between the hall and living room, along with the current staircase and
under-stair storage cupboard. With no separate hall area, the proposed living room will also
contain the staircase to the first floor.
To replace the current straight staircase, a new set of winding stairs will be installed in the corner of
the living room. The internal door between the hall and kitchen will also be replaced with double
doors connecting the kitchen with the new living room. Finally, the planned building work will also
include the installation of some kitchen furniture.
(194 words, band 9)
Analysis task:
1. Underline examples of paraphrasing in the introduction, comparing it with the question.
2. Which two main points did I choose for the overview (paragraph 2)?
3. How many changes did I describe in paragraphs 3 and 4?
4. Underline examples of different verb tenses? Why did I use these different tenses?
5. How many sentences did I write in each paragraph?
Vocabulary task:
Watch the video lesson again. Near the end of the lesson, find the list of good vocabulary. Highlight
those phrases in the report on page 1 of this worksheet.
Extra task:
Try to write your own report about the same diagrams using what you remember from the lesson
(but without looking at my answer).
Compare your finished report with mine, and look for areas where you could improve.
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hi Simon. thanks for the video lessons. they are very informative and clear. I understand everything about task 1. However, at the and of this video, you mentioned the next lesson which is about maps and summary. Where are they? or Have you not made those yet? thanks

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Thank you for you video, Mr. Simon. Is it possible to use the word "blueprints" instead of "the two pictures" in the paraphrased introduction?

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I just want to ask you why you wrote 'we' instead of using the passive in overview?

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Hi, Simon. I’ve noticed that you used this sentence in the video and I quote, "there’s probably some changes…", the word changes is a plural form, can you explain why you use is instead of are? I’ve seen a lot of native speakers use there is this way. It just doesn’t make enough sense to me.

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