IELTS Task 2 Writing Band 9 Ultimate Guide 2024

[@Abdicator]

Well, it is not hard to find an IELTS essay start with the template: "This paper will discuss ... , My writing will discuss ..." which is an absolutely terrible opening for a beginning.Not many examiners talks about this problem.

[@Aehelp]

You are right Zep. It is important to understand that an indirect thesis is usually low-level writing. We have lots more on this on our website at www.aehelp.com/

[@Panda-ys5tr]

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[@HuuPhuocVN]

Can you give me a better way to start the essay?

[@lavanyaattili1995]

How about this essay will elaborate…?

[@Abdicator]

@@lavanyaattili1995 With that opening u can get a band less than band 5.In fact, we need a good paraphrasing of the question rather than rewriting it.This only makes your become worse :(

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[@AnhDuong-ug2mj]

Your instruction is very simple and clear to follow. I have trouble learning IELTS by myself, especially in writing skill. You have my thanks.

[@SUHAILMUSTHAFA-cr7ob]

I appeared for my exam a few days back. The writing paper was a nightmare for me the last 2 times I attempted. I had scored 6 and 6.5 consecutively. My morale was low. I required above 7. I happened to watch this video just once before the exam, and I scored a 7.5 with the tips you enilightened me with. Thank you.

[@PhongLe-rx1yf]

excuse me, can you explain the sentence is " but decrease consumption HELPS " means ( in conclusion )

[@geraltofriviaa9659]

​@@PhongLe-rx1yfit means people don't have to stop eating fast food for good, but they should simply eat less.( Fast food )

[@MohinurbonuMurodova]

Tomorrow, I have a main exam. Could you please answer my question? Did you write an essay after watching this video ? Or just you watched it before sitting the exam ?

[@patelshiv6781]

​@@MohinurbonuMurodovabro what is your score.?

[@NotProManitYT]

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[@ThanhTamNguyen-pr3nz]

thank you so much, this must help me a lot 🥰 i’ll take an exam next month. I hope I’ll get a high band score, thank you 😭❤️

[@mdxnk124]

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[@saidahmadli770]

good luck

[@aravindthoppil9254]

@@mdxnk124 we'll get our predictive score within 9-10 days but the actual score will get within 13-14 days and we can write ielts exam whenever we want if we have the money.

[@sadamhussain7926]

Hopefull

[@Ra-gy7sr]

Did you get your score or not yet ? mine is next month and I'm a little nervous

[@ratnesh0307]

Thank you sir, I've my exam tomorrow...hoping for the best!

[@kevinkenny871]

what was your band score?

[@anaceciliagaitan4625]

Now everything makes sense. Some mistakes mentioned were the advice of my language teachers at school 😅

[@atom2076]

thanks sir for a free content about writing that was more than just brilliant ,please continue to post more such related videos.Have a good rest of your day

[@Aehelp]

We are working on it and we will have more videos coming soon! Make sure to subscribe : )

[@AS_IELTS_HUB]

In body paragraph, the word after studies should be "show", because studies is a plural

[@AmandeepKaur-kd1hf]

I am in Canada my study is going to complete. In Canada, I see Canadian people, white and black people can't speak clear English. But you are a teacher, a good educator and an English speaker I can learn a lot of things from you. Thanks for providing a good knowledge.

[@ramachanderg.8266]

hi @Amandeepkaur-kd1hf

[@CraftsmenFilmProduction]

15:00 > Another problem to keep a balance in healthy food and some exercise can improve the body, not just to look good, but also to be healthy. Working out at the gym is tough to lose overweight, but they can do other activities instead of doing that, such as biking, hiking and doing exercises that can assist to develop the body. Some of the vitamins that a body needs, especially vitamin D. Score this please...

[@ieltsspeakingandwriting9170]

Another significant issue is maintaining a balance between healthy eating and regular exercise to improve overall health, not just appearance. While working out at the gym can be challenging for some, alternative activities such as biking, hiking, and other forms of exercise can also effectively support weight loss and physical fitness. Additionally, ensuring adequate intake of essential vitamins, particularly vitamin D, is crucial for maintaining a healthy body.

[@krnramgarhia5195]

These things matter too much as I got 7 bands in writing with this strategy and i learnt all this from sir and i believe each student must admire this video 🥰

[@feetgoall]

I'm taking the CB IELTS test tomorrow, Inshallah this video will help me get a 7 in the writing part

[@thinkbig1260]

Hlo bhai mere ek do questions aa clear krdo ?

[@AustinQueensland]

@@feetgoall how did it go?

[@feetgoall]

@@AustinQueensland у меня 7,5💪💪

[@englishlearn8198]

Could u help me guys

[@Levideosnet]

Hi. I have another recomendations. at 18:10 “studies show” instead of “studies shows” to match the plural subject. Use “the high number” instead of “the higher numbers” to avoid comparison and confusion. Use “is” instead of “are” to match the singular subject “the high number”. Use “exercising” instead of “excercises” to correct the spelling and the verb form. Add a comma after “junk food” to separate the two independent clauses. Is that correct?

[@marvhan888]

It's so entertaining to watch you making corrections to the essay. So nice

[@aparnaearla8199]

Thank you so much Sir! The way you explained each section, is very understandable and it has helped me a lot in the writing exam that happened a couple of days ago.

[@Aehelp]

You are most welcome

[@NodirbekMuhiddinov-no6sd]

Are you native english girl right?

[@haresakrami6855]

I had no idea about the first, second and third person's voice which I have learned from this video. thanks a world.

[@Aehelp]

You are most welcome Hares, lots more great info in your course at www.aehelp.com/

[@berkany.476]

I ll take the exam 12 days later and I just started studying with your videos. Hope it works well

[@Aehelp]

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[@nocapsii]

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[@Aehelp]

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[@rajahaiderali7797]

Haha you are right

[@noelelikemnicodemus8039]

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[@zebas7716]

Haha literal

[@elperjohnalvarado1096]

Hahha

[@berkinbasar]

I’ve got exam tomorrow, wish me luck!

[@abidhassanrayat4223]

I really admire the portion Of Information You put in a single video and the way you described every minute of it, feels really connecting and understandable.

[@Aehelp]

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[@b0bursh0h]

Hello, I have a question for you 4:12 You said that we must not mix voices. But if the essay asks about our opinions, can we use the 1st person voice in the introduction and conclusion, and 3rd person voice for body paragraphs ?

[@MdRakibulHasan]

Yes, you can.

[@juvklucy]

Thanks sir, I was really confused because I didn't know many fancy words. But after watching this helpful video, I think I can get a high band.

[@Aehelp]

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[@playboiroza9718]

My exam is tomorrow wish me luck..

[@ganeshmanoori8894]

Good luck brother

[@Trendingshorts2320]

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[@medoochannel7601]

@@ganeshmanoori8894bro his exam was a year ago why are you wishing him a good luck now

[@KhondokarEbrahim]

Go ahead 😊

[@scorpionetherrealm101]

Score?

[@adekunletoheeb2813]

Your video tutorials really helped me to passed my ielts test. Thanks so much U re such a wonderful tutor.

[@Aehelp]

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[@BabalolaWuraola]

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[@girllikepearl7080]

Thank you so much for this amazing free resources to learn

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[@KirylMladenets-g5c]

Just want to clarify. You've said that we can't combine first and third person voice, but in the essay we analyzed here is exactly this combination of voices.

[@KirylMladenets-g5c]

And another question, is it necessary to write in the first person voice if in the essay question includes "To what extend do YOU agree?"

[@minhnhatvan2392]

@@KirylMladenets-g5c the question is literally asking YOU directly.However,it doesnt mean that you should use the second voice too.As the video mention,you could use either 1st person voice or 3rd person voice

[@عابرسبيل-ج8م]

I like your comment people they like watching TV. THAT'S HOW IT LOOKS WHEN YOU COMBINE THEM

[@comedyenglishvjcx]

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[@NiginaIkrom]

Wow, the way of your explaining was quite understandable. I believe if I follow your channel, I`ll score well on my February exam!

[@STROKE1263]

What part of the world are you from?

[@zafarbazarov328]

@@STROKE1263 possibly ftom Uzbekistan

[@Aehelp]

Thanks : ) Also, be sure to visit our websites aehelp.com and gieltshelp.com and watch our weekly live IELTS classes. I wish you the best of luck on your February exam.

[@Shwetay793]

How was your exam?

[@NiginaIkrom]

@@Shwetay793 hey it was gud thx but i didnt get my results yet

[@poojarao1770]

Thank you so much!! I didn’t practice writing at all and around an hour before my exam I went through this video and was able to score really well. Thank you once again ✨

[@hassanniaz09]

what was your score?

[@bts_with_me]

Armies are all around the world 💜

[@SunchuMara]

You are an excellent teacher. I feel lucky to find you on you tube

[@itzarcade5141]

I cant write so much fancy vocabularies but i can decorate the sentances and then provide valid to the point details

[@NiShi87]

13:27 Well, I’m studying in an language school for IELTS and the teacher told me that I should use could instead of can,may,might. It’s so confusing 😢

[@tkheart]

I'm going to face for the ielts writing exam today and I'm very nervous as it's my first time. Hope everything will be fine. Sir, thank you for this great video

[@Артур-т1х4м]

All the best! Write me when you got your results please

[@asimbutt32090]

How was your test

[@tkheart]

@@asimbutt32090 it was good. I got 6.5 for writing just by following these yt videos

[@asimbutt32090]

@@tkheart can u tell me about ur topics?

[@MdSiafulislam-t5v]

please, provide us more and more such videos which will aid us in being meticulous about simple errors.

[@hamzarasool7669]

Literaaly one of the best advices regarding, IELTS

[@blacknwhite6186]

I saw a video mentioning that the IELTS test is designed to basically just examine whether an individual can communicate something clearly. The video that I saw also suggested against using the standard essay structure which I was about to use in my IELTS test. It was mentioned that the reader or examiner is looking at how good the writer is in communicating his message across to the reader and writing a hook sentence is useless as the reader is not looking to really read the essay and get hooked but just to examine the writer. I am so confused.

[@lollol-p9p1o]

i refered the ielts advantage channel first, his points align with ur points. i was also confused just lik u. its been 6 months i hope u already took the exam so, as a test taker, who would u say are correct.

[@blacknwhite6186]

@@lollol-p9p1o I got a 7 and I did not follow this guy, I wrote a simple essay without using the standard structure that we are taught. Just make it clear and concise. It was 3 years ago so I don't know if this will help.

[@rondkgameel6562]

‘ in my opinion, the main reason is that people do not have time to prepare a healthy meal for themselves mostly due to their busy work life , and fast foods are an easy option for them. Another reason is that , people prefer to sit on the sofa and watch TV all day long instead of going to gym and doing some exercises to improve their physical fitness levels.’ Is that correct?

[@psicotiagoregis]

Great edition! Great production and remarkable content! Congratulations

[@Aehelp]

Thanks Tiago, I appreciate it. If you have and IELTS related question, just let us know.

[@monikadeswal81]

How can I contact you??

[@monikadeswal81]

I want to take information about ur course...this is recording batch or live session?

[@stevensuen1075]

This is a classic example of level 2 in HKDSE. After correction,that’s much better.

[@JayVibe2022]

You are giving me a lof of confidence, thank you!

[@obunachipodpischik]

If before correction his/her marks were: Task responce :8 Coherence:6 Lexical: 7 Grammar: 5 If added and divided by 4 he could get 6.5 ? How he/she could get 5 before correction? How come?

[@minhnhatvan2392]

i dont get the difference between exercise and exercises you mentioned in the essay, what is it then?

[@lilkwinass5077]

thank u, sir! it was really understandable, but I could not image, that current essay really had band 6... when I started to read, I thought that it had band 5 as maximum..

[@ramisamorshedanadi6462]

In the 3:25 minute, isn’t the spelling "persuasive"?

[@can_do2024]

Thanks for all your great points but in fact the country that you are taking the exam really matters. In my country, Iran, unfortunately many examiners pay attention to academic and complex words. For example the band 6.0 that you read in the video will get 5.0 or even less in Iran I think there should be an option that if we have any doubt in the correction of our writing, we can report it to IELTS center in UK and they recorrect the paper themselves.

[@iqraashiq382]

Thank you so much. This vedio help me a lot. I will take my exam next month i hope w will get good bands😢😊

[@aidagholampour100]

Wow, bunch of brilliant tips, thank you so my

[@ramachanderg.8266]

True..

[@DosenNoob]

I will take the IELTS test on 2nd Feb. Thank you so much for the explanation! wish me luck and get overall band 7.5

[@Aehelp]

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[@ieltsproinsights]

How was it, please Writing next wee

[@feelinincredible3366]

What score did u get?

[@frankbobby1930]

Hello brother are u done with your exams

[@artbysarkhan7420]

Hi, i really do like this channel, please if it is possible could you make a video about how to use " the" . I mean it is easy when i need to just remember some grammar rules about "the" but when it is about the specificity of a subject it becomes really confusing, i had been searching for answers on the internet and still couldn't find any video with proper explanation in it.😢When i write the ielts essays, I always spend most of my time just guessing if i should use " the " before a subject or shouldn't, THIS " THE " DESTROYS MY LIFE AND MENTAL HEALTH ON A DAILY BASIS, PLEASE HELP :(

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[@nttnguyen304]

Really appreciate! How about the LR criteria, sir? It seems that the vocabulary you used in the band 9 version does not reach to C1, C2 levels. So, is it necessary to add high-level and fancy vocabulary while we are writing?

[@safraneloq8524]

mmm... Why the second statement starts with 'although'? Although what? Does not make sense to me.

[@majestympofu5851]

Im writing my exam in the next couple of days thank you for the videos i believei will pass😊

[@Aehelp]

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[@magarone1919]

this kind of video is more effective than other plz make more like this sir

[@REBOR1]

This video was very useful for me, please create more videos like that plssss

[@Aehelp]

We are working on it.

[@nettigloriasitumorang2630]

Great. Thank you for the explanation

[@Aehelp]

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[@arjandhillonbai]

A mistake which I have found is that in conclusion the word helps need to be replaced by help because plural subject

[@op-gamer3668]

17:20 In conclusion, studies shows I think it is wrong and correct statement is Studies show or Study shows

[@parastaneja9946]

hey sir please tell me one thing that how do you teach us ielts speaking and interviews for the paid batch. Please let me know

[@vedantkhandagale7416]

Thank you sir, your video is helpful for my upcoming IELTS exam. Iam not good at writing but I hope so your videos can guide me to crack exam.

[@Aehelp]

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[@SiddharthRay-c6q]

If we write over the world limit will we be losing points?

[@brethensakhova]

Hello there! I'm currently practicing for my IELTS exam and would greatly appreciate any suggestions for free resources that could assist me in my studies🥰. Would you kindly consider sharing your recommendations with me? Your help would be most appreciated. Thank you!

[@brethensakhova]

Try ewriter it provides model essays on almost any topic. It will help you a lot in improving your vocabulary and help you to find new sentence patterns.

[@wateenmansur8256]

Chopefully with these suggestions i will score high in next month❤

[@Aehelp]

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[@اطلبالحقوالرحمة]

19:48 How come the band is 5? The average indicators you score is clearly more than 5. (8 + 6 + 7 + 5 divide by 4 which is 6.5)

[@nyematasnim4451]

I think the second body para's first sentence is still wrong even after the correction, it is written "A second major problem to keeping a balanced diet and healthy weight is by doing some exercise to improve physical fitness," here improving physical fitness can not be the second major problem. Instead it can be "A second major problem is to maintain a balanced diet and a healthy weight, which can be achieved by doing some exercise to improve physical fitness,"

[@Nothing-cg8jd]

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[@graciousogbonna9539]

Thank you for the wonderful teaching. You've gained a new subscriber. Sir, I want to ask in the aspect of writing with the voices. I didn't fully understand the third person voices. Is it something like, "This essay will"?

[@vahorauzair]

this is very helpful to me, and thank you so mutch for the advanced content ;

[@Aehelp]

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[@HarshPatiTripathi-z5b]

Can part 2 of the writing test go beyond 500 words? I understand the more words, mean more chance of mistakes. But writing an introduction, two explanatory paragraphs, and a conclusion takes around 500 to 600 words.

[@anonymousexistence4304]

At 22:06 I think the word many is not needed. It can be written as "Studies show that the high numbers of obesity are caused by people consuming junk food and not doing proper exercise." Or is it needed?

[@rifatahmed77610]

Thank you so much sir for sharing outstanding tips...i'll focus those tips in my exam..i will give my exam on next February..plz pray for me everyone

[@Aehelp]

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[@Enoch.OT_101]

Thank you for the video, it is very understandable. However, in the second option, you left the writing at a second major problem instead of a second major solution. Thank you, sir.

[@Gurwinder_Sran]

But using "People" may be used to give an example of the people and "I" can be used for giving personal example or in both views when they say "Discuss both views and give your opinion" which technically means we have to discuss ideas of the third person's and give or own opinion hence "people and I"

[@galaxy9258]

what?😦 this video makes my life much easier, THANKS A BUNCH!!

[@Aehelp]

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[@DMJ-Creation]

My favourite teacher and Channel

[@RustamBazarbaev]

The video helped me! Thank you!

[@Aehelp]

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[@hrithik7784]

a second major problem to keeping a balanced diet and healthy weight is by doing some exercises. how is it a problem?

[@freelanceonfingers]

Sir, I used to write essays with templates, but now I do it without any templates. Wish me good luck, tomorrow starts my IELTS exam

[@Aehelp]

Good luck on your exam!

[@vietnormie9790]

3 more weeks and I will be taking my exam. My currently band is 6, hoping it to be at least 7.5 after the test.

[@Aehelp]

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[@emmachelimo272]

It was great participating in the session

[@Aehelp]

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[@abirsonet925]

thank you!' it was really helpful for me.

[@MandeepKaur-xc5uv]

Wish me luck sir 🤞🏼 for getting high band scores ✨

[@sumerae]

I was always good at writing but now I feel like I have forgotten how to write a good essay. 😔 I feel sad but will improve by following the steps mentioned in the video 🤍

[@Aehelp]

Best of luck!

[@nimana2295]

3:00 it is persuasive, not pursuasive, but he is apparently supposed to teach us how to write.

[@YuuY-pz7px]

In this video, our teacher looks excited! Thanks for the information. Still, I’ve got two questions here. First, is using affirmative words different from hedging languages and making less generalized ideas? The second one is that the official book of Cambridge Guide to IELTS mentions one way to express a personal view by using modals such as might or could, on page 127, 3.B. Thanks again, and please don’t blame me for having too many questions, I’m just one inquisitive 14-year-old kid. 😅

[@Aehelp]

Affirmative language is confident - yes, it is slighly different. --- Cambridge books give some advice that does not lead to high scores.

[@hosata]

Without using the precise advanced vocabulary and collocations, it's literally impossible to get a 9. However, if you believe that promoting the idea of not needing an advanced range of vocabulary to achieve a band score of 9 can increase your views, then you are absolutely right.

[@AbdulAziz-cj4hg]

on 15:22 why use singular “exercise”? i thought exercises is the correct plural form, the subject there could do any kind of exercise, or even doing more than one exercise?

[@RachelZhang-g7b]

It's "Unnecessary articles" not "unnecesary articles"

[@BunnyStatuLS]

Sir, I have heard that introduction is a 2.5 band is it true ? Please reply.

[@ijj1188]

Sir i want some writing sample and formal and informal word's information please help me because my exam is next month

[@judybash9393]

Thanks fam. I got a 7

[@zsu8498]

The last sentence includes 'a person' and 'they must do this'. Isn't it a grammatical error to have both singular and plural within a sentence?

[@Rabia.Fatima]

Really,very impressive and helpful 👏

[@kaptainjack5491]

Will the absence of example in this case affect band score?

[@manishhh80]

My exam is on 7th Sep and i m not getting 6 band at all 😢😢 i m really scared

[@tuankietnguyen8760]

On some ielts website, they assume that we dont need the hook in our introduction paragraph

[@alibal3781]

I promise I will get a band 9

[@sriutaminotes9235]

Aaamiiiin

[@MohamedAlthaf-i5q]

did you get that

[@bhupendra1581]

sir please make more videos on writing module, this was amazing i have learn something new from others it help me a lot thank u so much

[@Aehelp]

Ok. Thanks