IELTS writing task -1 ( Bar chart) with tips to achieve high score in writing section

IELTS writing task -1 ( Bar chart) with tips to achieve high score in writing section
In the video, it has been recorded how a candidate gets high score in IELTS writing task -1. A flow chart is also added in tip section so that a candidate easily comprehends style of writing task -1. Moreover, a bar chart sample answer has been added in the video. Here, the candidate has used outstanding vocabulary and excellent sentence structure in writing. The writing sample has touched all part of Bar chart ( increase, decrease, and unchanged). A wide range of contrast linking words has been added in the video.
It is a high quality writing sample.

[@jogaroopainter]

Today I had a task about business but I Could not solve that .Now after watching your video ,I have a high confidence level .Now that same bar chat I can solve in few minutes 😊 thanks for helping me 🌷❤

[@alpeshdesai3843]

Ur way is perfect I was so confusion because it has so many information and many countries or things so by your I understand first only write about the highest and lowest then use respectively and mix other all information together... thank you so much 🤗

[@farhanahasan7809]

This strategy helped me to get good scores in IELTS writing.

[@harcmransingh7994]

How much?

[@abassiso7819]

The bar graph depicts the percentages of five different Asian countries in terms of population growth in three periods of time, including projection for 2050. As it is clear from the graph that Japan has the lowest percentages of population growth, whereas Bangladesh has the highest among all five countries. It is also predicted that those two countries will remain in their position for the upcoming years with slight changes in other three regions. In 1960, the figure for Japan trend began at 12%, not far lower than the percentage of Thailand figure which stood at 15% in the same year. Speaking of percentages, the other three countries had percentages between 50 to 65. In the following half century, the growth of population almost doubled in all five zones. The biggest rises which the graph shows were in the trends of Japan,Thailand and India. Meanwhile, same rise can be seen in the other two countries but not as much as their counterparts. It is forecasted that, the growth of population will continue to increase in the next 50 years. Although, the rate of growth will not be that much as the trends witnessed in the past 90 years. This time Japan ranks first alongside Bangladesh to experience the highest percentages of growth compare to the other countries by 10%, both countries will have percentages of and 50 and 90, respectively.At the same time, there will be an increase by 5% in Thailand, India and Pakistan population by 2050.

[@RizzGoD.07.]

Epic

[@andyoshea5907]

amoungst

[@burak9656]

I just counted tne number of words that you used , it's 240. I don't think it's appropriate for task 1. I'd make 2 paragraphs after overview section instead of three. One of them would be for Japan and Thailand, and second one would be for the rest. But thanks for yor help though :)

[@TiniqoyBekqulova-q5q]

❤❤

[@omeryilmazz]

The graph shows the rise of the population in five dissimilar countries ( Japan, Thailand, Pakistan, India and Bangladesh ) in the years 1960, 2010 and 2050 respectively. Overall, proportion of population growth experienced an upward trend in between all countries throughout the period. In 1960, the growth of the population rate was the lowest 12% in Japan, while Bangladesh had the highest number of population with 65%. Pakistan took the place as the second highest population rise country among the other countries. India and Thailand followed it percentages of 40% and15% respectively. By 2010, Bangladesh still held the highest quantity of population and growth of by 15% from 1960 to 2010. India and Pakistan experienced a rapid surge to 75% and crossed same point in 2010. On the other hand, Thailand and Japan also showed a gradual increase 45% and 40% one by one. In 2050, Japan was hitting a low-point of population growth by 50%, while Bangladesh was reaching its top level population rise at 90%. The countries followed them in order of India 85%, Pakistan 80% and Thailand 55% at the end of the period.

[@xosiyatxamdamova340]

Sorry, you used past simple like experienced for both future time and past time in overall is it ok ? Answer please

[@vishwashah9022]

Fabulous Video and very easy to understand Thank you so much

[@suhagchowdhury5453]

Thanks.

[@ekremozaslan7250]

you wrote around but it is a certain number i have a little bit confusing

[@suhamsubo6097]

woww

[@ksxd104]

Amazing

[@aimy7679]

Thank you. It was helpful.

[@hafsahossaintoma]

Too helpful !!

[@sandanikaushalyapallehitta7824]

Nice 👍 great video

[@komalpreetkaur172]

Superb👍👍👍

[@kook6825]

Really helpful ❤️

[@MDHasan-zb3xe]

Nice video

[@rakhirani2148]

it's rly helpful 🤗

[@lakhwinderna3083]

Commendable

[@punjabnama165]

You deserve 3/3 6/6

[@priyankamehra9534]

Nice

[@sukjindrkaur2914]

It will be too long ... We should be careful about word limit also.. right?

[@ekremozaslan7250]

in the second para you used "but" beginning of the sentences, is it really true, i thought it should have been "however"

[@dhayageorge2880]

Yeag never use "but". Especially after a full stop instead use words like however ,whereas , while , in the case of , although, on the other hand.

[@kausarnadaf6921]

lucid

[@esmac1387]

hey, thnx. you used future tense in the last paragraph, are you sure it is how it should be ? of course it is right in terms of logic. but this is the first time that I've ever encountered different types of time in task 1

[@theblink6715]

2050 is future time that's why

[@azaazazazazaz7262]

@@theblink6715 I studied with IELTS professors and teachers, and they advised me to avoid using the future tense and instead use terms like forecast predict and expect.

[@ManpreetKaur-xf1zr]

Can we write 3 detail para?

[@manishvlogs3641]

There is mistakes in last paragraph

[@skrtamilpodiyan1508]

I need to learn diagram,pie chart plz🥺🙂

[@kapuroroyeazyyy3861]

difficult words used

[@kiran7318-i8e]

Word limit ....250 ho Gai ess task di ....te

[@arshkaur5722]

Is it 150 words 🙄

[@keval6638]

Why you not mention conclusion

[@ieltstutorial9883]

For task 1, conclusion is not necessary. It doesn't carry any extra point.

[@keval6638]

@@ieltstutorial9883 thanks for giving information please give me more example regarding it writing task 1

[@seemathapar4385]

Love you 😚😚

[@mathbala3143]

Boht bekar video ...not clearify the points from where she taken

[@arshdeepkaur9209]

Parcanage of increased population in the cities of five specific asian nations is being showed by a bar graph in three particular years. Is it ok???tell me plz

[@ieltstutorial9883]

Try to simplify the sentence. Sentence making in a very complex way reduces marks. Rather try to write simply but coherent way with meaningful vocabulary.

[@arshdeepkaur9209]

@@ieltstutorial9883 ok thnx a lot for suggestion👍👍👍

[@kavehrouzbahani7209]

Thanks a zillion for assistance🌹