IELTS Writing task 1: introduction

Learn how to write a band-9 introduction for any IELTS Writing task 1.
In this lesson:
- ideal introduction formula
- 2 worked out examples
- step-by-step explanations
- list of useful synonyms for IELTS Writing task 1
- paraphrasing vocabulary & techniques
You can read the text lesson here: ielts-up.com/writing/academic...

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