I like it, I would have added a little more piano or a light instrument to kind of take us through from the verse to the chorus. Also to just build it a little more as the song goes like you started doing at 1:17. A crescendo for when the song climaxes and then you play us out. It's such a "storytelling beat", I like it a lot. Just needs a little more....complexity.
@SodyyBEATS8 күн бұрын
DURO PAPITO
@Jeggyleggy3 күн бұрын
Glad she is happy but what happened to Bj
@chixo8634 күн бұрын
Is my music tuff or nah ?
@SoundShaperbeats7 күн бұрын
Nice who want colab
@ohlucyroe10 күн бұрын
srry for the annoying comment but thoughts on my music? im jus tryna improve 🖤🤲
@Playfulcritic9 күн бұрын
Fire. Keep goin!
@rashainn48103 күн бұрын
God bless
@NastelBeat7 күн бұрын
Is my Beat Trash? Please be honest
@Mothyone10 күн бұрын
Sitting in the dark with the lights on feeling kinda down guess my hearts gone cut it out my chest with the fast lane livin crime spree gettin I done hit the wall and crashed with how I have been existin
@Mothyone9 күн бұрын
I love this beat it's perfect 👌
@Mothyone9 күн бұрын
I'm working on becoming a better artist thank you for sharing this I'm just learning so I'll get back to you if I come up with any tips I'm just supporting if I comment something you like use it especially if it helps you eat! But don't get your hopes up I'm probably not a great rapper 😂
You’re weird. You need to reevaluate yourself. And you sound dumb. People click on type beat videos and just take the beat and listen. And don’t even subscribe. They just be worried about making music with the beat.