JJK Oneshot||When a mafia train you for a revenge while being obsessed with you...

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arvshi ff's

arvshi ff's

Күн бұрын

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@arvshiffs1030
@arvshiffs1030 Жыл бұрын
If there is someone who is intersted in watching taehyung chapter... Than here we have another channel... youtube.com/@arvshiworld Claim Chapter... If someone interested than you can watch...
@just-say_dance-in_black
@just-say_dance-in_black Жыл бұрын
Pls bonus plssssss
@Eley602
@Eley602 Жыл бұрын
The part where y/n was telling Jungkook about her past and what Kai did to her sister......My chest hurts after that scene......I was crying badly.......But This is the best ff like how neatly you choose this topic and showed the Woman's Power........But the ending lines made my heart soft.....I hope every girl find JUNGKOOK in their lives........
@ireadbooks17
@ireadbooks17 Жыл бұрын
YYYEEESSS
@majumderoindrila66
@majumderoindrila66 Жыл бұрын
I'm totally speechless author....just outstanding ❤
@lakshita_.r
@lakshita_.r Жыл бұрын
Yes but one day he has to break billions of hearts , but i and "we" will all be happy for him because we know that we can't have him and we should all love the girl he gets even it's a celebrity or even if she is a normal girl or evenn if she is I U . We will love him no matter what . ~love u Jeon Jungkook
@jungsookyo9078
@jungsookyo9078 Жыл бұрын
You know in my life I got to know that it ring not all men are monsters But most men just want a women for her body I know it really well😢
@jungsookyo9078
@jungsookyo9078 Жыл бұрын
And about having a man like him is difficult I just wish who ever gets jungkook , takes good care of him cause she will be holding my person Even if I am not his person He was ,is ,and will be my person
@sougaatishah606
@sougaatishah606 Жыл бұрын
Mannnnnnn the way Y/n starting talking to Kai after beating his minions mercilessly and the background music started "she's a beast I call her karma" that was the best part of this ff 😫😫😫😫😫😫😫. Loved this ff author 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
@trisha7480
@trisha7480 Жыл бұрын
This was a literal masterpiece. The story the chills during fight and the pain. You made me feel all emotions just by your words.❤
@sakshijadhav6809
@sakshijadhav6809 Жыл бұрын
I'm a silent viewer, I generally never comment but this forcefully made me comment ..... Such a beautiful piece u have written , each and every line made me feel shivers on my body.. The language complimented the scene with full of emotions .. Never seen such a beautifull thing and probably never gonna see...👍👍
@aditisharma8899
@aditisharma8899 Жыл бұрын
This ff needs more attention. Not to mention from the beginning your story was interesting and deep. It was dark but went more darker for me when I heard of that night. I too am an elder sister and i can feel the burning inside me. When y/n was taking revenge I want her to give him death in the most painful way.. I can feel the every emotion she was feeling. I also remembered the way I used to break the bones of boys who even stare at my sister. And from the beginning the way jk treated her and went hard on her during the training period just to make the best of her and enough strong to break anyone around her. I felt it so good. Love the way you conveyed the message. AMAZING WORK!! But i will still say don't wait for any fucking single soul to protect you when you are suffering, get yourself up and fight back. Remember it you came alone and will have to complete that path alone people around you can support you but you have to win your battle alone!!
@goldenhour613
@goldenhour613 Жыл бұрын
Well is it only me or this ff actually reminds about the k-drama MY NAME? Well the whole plot is different and unique but Y/N's flame of revenge ignites the same spark as the drama's main female protagonist😌🍻
@paulastjohn1165
@paulastjohn1165 Жыл бұрын
O.M.G! I thought I had read a couple of amazing stories before! This has got to be the BEST EVER! It was so emotional but also heart warming, the plot from start to finish was well written, no fluff but in the background of all the heartache and trauma was a love story! I'm saving it lol, thank you for this 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
@Amultifan
@Amultifan Жыл бұрын
This is the type of story i ALWAYS wanted u can’t imagine how this affect me ohhh gaadd I literally got goosebumps at his little nicknames like “my lil warrior” “my wild kitten” uffffffff y/n’s characterrrr wass all i needed it was line i can see the fire in her eyes for revenge literally this story had everything i needed Plz make more ffs like thiss ot was heart touching yet heart breaking story U did great author, uh deserve more~
@ms.mikaelson5155
@ms.mikaelson5155 Жыл бұрын
This was genuinely one of the BEST FF i have seen.. y/n is strong it's emotional, it's everything... Thanks dear author😊❤
@muzhgan.
@muzhgan. Жыл бұрын
Amazing , it was very good the way this story showed the real of a man and showing that how their bad doings destroyed a woman is too good, and the way jk never left y/n side was perfect i hope every men respect girls and don't play with their feelings and i love how y/n take her revenge and become a strong women , you did a perfect job by writing this masterpiece story author❤❤❤.
@pausalisamajdar3470
@pausalisamajdar3470 Жыл бұрын
Unnie....you made me feel the most powerful person...u just provoke inner beast to wake up...hat's off to you unnie
@duvikasharma7170
@duvikasharma7170 Жыл бұрын
This is the best ff I've ever EVER seen
@LoveStance
@LoveStance Жыл бұрын
Arvshi! When a writer catches my attention, I'll take the time to share with them my thoughts on their skills and the reason their work touched me. Generally, writers hold a different perspective than readers, as we are always planning and organizing in our minds our current story, and sometimes our next three all at once. I often say that writers are artists painting a picture with words. Some might think that's easy, but there is 'painting picture,' and then there is painting it with realistic colours, and visual ambiance without giving too much, or not enough away. It's a fine line. FF allows you 'some' visual stimulation, but that too is an art. Collecting THE right props to back up the world you've created. All these things, you've done well with this story. Also, you've added music to set a mood - there is yet another element to be handled carefully - respectful to your written work. So many things...write... right? LOL The next thing which is hard as hell these days - especially with FF, is finding a niche for creativity when most topics have been re-written a million different ways, so it can be difficult to make your world stand out from others. This is generally only accomplished by adding some rare 'shock value.' in just the right place in your story. if the whole drama with Yn's poor sister wasn't that - I don't know what is. Not only did you grab your inciting incident by the throat and give it the full respect and wings it deserved, but you also touched on two VERY sensitive subjects for many people. The murder of a loved one, and violent sexual assault. To think about just how damaged her sister was that she ultimately dies in Yn's arms...without being over explicit, 'blood and bruises' you've told the reader all they needed to know. But this is not such an easy task. The trick with this is providing just enough information to ensure the reader is fully pulled into the story, but as well to not give TOO much information that you leave the reader with nightmares for weeks, because the writer was TOO explicit, and then there is also the very likely situation where the writer really fears or lacks understanding of the sensitive subject they are touching upon and the reader knows this because the writing comes off as tentative, or indifferent and the full impact of the inciting incident is not experienced by the reader... (General readers will just know they like a piece but not necessarily what makes the difference between a bad, decent, good, and fantastic piece of writing, whereas a serious writer understands just how darn tricky this is.) I could have just said you did a great job - because you did, but you did more than that. Your world also.... explored discussion on many other important ideals. suicide stalking self-esteem overcoming one set of mental values and replacing them with another. trust, lack of it, and learning to believe in it. morality issues within the framework of a mafia lifestyle. Because even mafia have a code they live by. The emotional damage of revenge, and the purge that can come from exacting it. Love, on a different - unique POV came from your work. How they explored their relationship is not a classical...cliche journey. When your story was complete, there was not one reader who didn't believe that Yn EARNED her right to be JK's Mafia Queen, and in your world, all JK's followers knew it too. First, she came in under his wing, but they were left with no doubts by the time they all left that warehouse that JK had just doubled his power base and that she was a force to be feared in her own right. Yet... You allowed her to admit she had a need...vulnerabilities - you gave her a hero, but one who empowered her to take control on her terms, and gave her the tools to be able to stand on her own in the toughest of circumstances, so he could be her wingman, and not take over the whole show. AND while he had his fair share of ego - it was never directed toward her, and he was never threatened by the power he encouraged her to wield. Like dam girl - you let us clearly see that JK believed in her - saw the warrior in her from the very beginning, and cherished that spirit in her enough to be able to teach her to fight her own battles, and you did ALL these things very well. So, when I say you've created a fine work of art.... you know I am not just giving you lip service, because we've discussed just what it takes to WRITE a priceless work of art! Thanks for a fantastic piece of art. Thank you for painting such a beautiful, colourful piece that will stand the tests of time. Thanks for all the hard work you committed into the props that backed it up. Cheers! - St@nce
@arvshiffs1030
@arvshiffs1030 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much... For making us believe that the thing we're going doing is all good... Thank you once again cause you deserve to be thanked... Cause girl you literally give alot of positive energy through your words... We really are grateful that there is someone who is not only reading it for enjoyment... There is still someone who is seeing that how much efforts you have putted into it... The way you notice every single detail in our story... You litreally touch my heart... Love you...
@Doobiegyu
@Doobiegyu Жыл бұрын
Every girl should have a guy like jungkook who can make you strong , respect you and your concent and loving you not your body ❤ it was a masterpiece indeed
@Elysianamorifc.4805
@Elysianamorifc.4805 Жыл бұрын
Damn, I'm so so amazed after reading it, author I swear you're literally such a great writer. I didn't regret wasting my whole 1 hour just on reading a ff, this is such a masterpiece, fabulous. I mean I literally don't have words to describe how much I'm adoring and still gonna adore this story forever. I'm also a ff writer so I know how much efforts and hardwork we have to put in each story when we're determined to make it perfect and beautifully written and the way you described each and every emotion they way you showed the actual girls power what we're capable of if we put our mind on something through a story was incredible I felt like I was watching such a wonderful movie. I'm your sincere fan from now onwards. Thank you so so much for this masterpiece and all the hardwork and love you've putted in it. I love all the stories you write but this one hold special place in my heart. This story stole my heart. Just know that I adore you and your stories. Last but not the least I thought good authors who legit have meaningfull stories to write doesn't exist anymore but you proved me wrong. You got a new admirer and I will never ever hesitate to appreciate each one of your work. Love love💜💌
@avantikamehta1693
@avantikamehta1693 Жыл бұрын
I was having the urge to like the video from start so just after some minutes I liked it but bro in the warehouse scene when jungkook entered like he own the place I SERIOUSLY BROKED MY MOUSE JUST TO GIVE THIS VIDEO A MILLION LIKE I mean its a freaking best entry ever
@mehra.Anjali
@mehra.Anjali Жыл бұрын
Goosebumps! You write so beautifully author 💕 Keep doing good work ;)
@all.iceee_
@all.iceee_ Жыл бұрын
This fan fiction is similar to the k-drama "My Name" Loved the plot and the fan fic and author u owned a subscriber 💫
@Nehabellamkonda
@Nehabellamkonda Жыл бұрын
Wow absolutely amazing, i can see the efforts that you've put in to make this, i appreciate it. Keep going ❤
@turtlelazy879
@turtlelazy879 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for adding this much detail in every page . Love your story u did excellent job😃👍
@shrutishreejena3365
@shrutishreejena3365 Жыл бұрын
Omg ! You're awesome. I really loved the way you described y/n state and jk feelings. I am loss of words
@aanyagoran3215
@aanyagoran3215 Жыл бұрын
I can’t describe how happy and sad I felt at few situations in this ff. I appreciate your hard work you made a very good story which shows women’s power . I love your content so much . Love you ❤
@user-kali1017
@user-kali1017 Жыл бұрын
That's so beautiful , a masterpiece 😭💜
@evanjalimol
@evanjalimol 10 ай бұрын
Wow amazing it was the best one.I love it thank you for this Masterpiece.you are the best one. Keep it up. You got a new subscriber💜💜
@arvshiffs1030
@arvshiffs1030 10 ай бұрын
I have changed my channel if u want than u can follow me there😊
@archaprem6636
@archaprem6636 Жыл бұрын
You are saying thanku for watching like literally??? Thanku for writing like this .. Master piece is far behind this its something called perfection love you 💜💜💜💜💜
@user-anilsingh864
@user-anilsingh864 Жыл бұрын
This is so good it is not like other ffs I have read so many ffs but damn this one is bestest
@fihapatel
@fihapatel Жыл бұрын
Woh your way of thinking the lines and emit it into an ff is mind-blowing i loved it 💜💜
@excuseme2478
@excuseme2478 Жыл бұрын
Damn...it's soooo good ❤❤❤ i literally felt goosebumps while reading this ff and it touched my heart 💖💖💖💖 Saranghe💜💜
@Christmaslove137
@Christmaslove137 4 ай бұрын
Ohh god!!! I cried alot when yn talk bout her sister 😭this story is so heart touching, I love it from the bottom of my heart💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
@memtombisingh1679
@memtombisingh1679 Жыл бұрын
Omo this is a masterpiece for sure💖the line,the theme,the story,the character,every single thing was on point and goosebumps for sure goshhhhh✨it's amazing author nim keep it up make more stories 💜
@dishashah4197
@dishashah4197 Жыл бұрын
It was more than awesome 👌 Words will not be enough to describe what you have made and what you have done to me Literally cried when she was explaining what happened to her sister😭🥺 And felt the power that a woman holds She became a warrior from normal girl for justice for her loved one He was himself enough to fight with Kai and finish these but he made his woman strong enough to take her revenge herself Let her fight for justice And make the world see how much power and strength a woman can hold It is beyond words 👏👏👏
@ViankaRobledo-cc6lw
@ViankaRobledo-cc6lw Жыл бұрын
This is giving me My Name vibes when she gets revenge for her dad
@BCANIMATOR4222
@BCANIMATOR4222 Жыл бұрын
I was silently enjoying ur ff they are so good but at the point where she was telling about her past i broke there i was not able to control my tears. It is really amazing and u really showed everything in a perfect way that how can a girl can fight for her self how they don't need to fear them from any one. At last i want to say that it was a masterpiece and I really love this. ❤
@Garimarao22
@Garimarao22 Жыл бұрын
I very nice.. i cry in part when yn say her past to jungkook it very emotional 😢😢😢 but what yn did i am proud of that every girl have a her jungkook in her life not only for love but also protecting her ❤❤❤❤ i really love your ff my whole life is the best ff i even read 😊😊😊😊 it a masterpiece ❤❤❤❤
@hamdamoideen5949
@hamdamoideen5949 Жыл бұрын
wooahh...... this is so good . I could feel goosebumps myself yk. Definitely a masterpiece.🥵❤
@shraddhakharwar2191
@shraddhakharwar2191 Жыл бұрын
Great respect have made place in my soul for your this work. It's soo beautifully written and every single point is like infinite time up to the mark. Great great respect and love for it. It teached me alot ✨✨❤❤❤
@hinashahbaz3514
@hinashahbaz3514 Жыл бұрын
It was a complete masterpiece, superb, mind blowing ,and tooo emotional i myself don't know how many time i cried in this. This is the best ff i have ever seen or read
@azizahmadsharifee2189
@azizahmadsharifee2189 3 ай бұрын
To Author, You made a masterpiece ... The concept is so unique and different from others.. The way you described every single emotion was fantastic. No words, but you just SLAYED .... 🔥 Respect to you, dude 👏
@avantikamehta1693
@avantikamehta1693 Жыл бұрын
The OST of MY NAME drama used in this ff .......... your ff makes my obsession over this drama uncontrollably strong
@anasoni7554
@anasoni7554 Жыл бұрын
I couldn't stop my self from clicking the subscribe button after watching this masterpiece. ... You have really made me your fan . Keep it up you are really a great story writer the way you described every single detail mind blowing 👏👏👏
@jeonsneha_
@jeonsneha_ Жыл бұрын
Whole FF was sooo awesome 😭💜just one thing is missing those magic words "i love you" 😭💍✨
@arvshiffs1030
@arvshiffs1030 Жыл бұрын
Sometimes words are not enough to describe the feeling... Eye's are enough to describe all the emotions from your heart...Why need words... When you can confirm it throw there actions... Love words can be lied but eye's can never...
@jeonsneha_
@jeonsneha_ Жыл бұрын
@@arvshiffs1030 i know but 🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧i really want to listen those words from their mouth it's ok I'm not forcing 💜i respect your opinion 🥰
@arvshiffs1030
@arvshiffs1030 Жыл бұрын
💕
@samiyamullick7931
@samiyamullick7931 Жыл бұрын
Ok we need to give a award to this author RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!! LIKE GOD THIS IS MY FIRST FF THIS LONG AND MY TIME DIDN'T GO TO VAIN!!!!
@jayalakshmis8282
@jayalakshmis8282 Жыл бұрын
This master piece is the BEST and it's definitely worth reading it for 1 hour......the songs add more beauty to it😍😚😘 I love this.....this touched my heart
@zarahansary
@zarahansary Жыл бұрын
Aishhh! I feel so good after watching it ❤ aishh! Unnie u deserve more views,....... And this ff is like k drama and unnie i really like the way u describe everything is soooooo good.. I really i appreciated ur hard work, i am proud of you Author nim and best of luck ❤,keep going 👍
@issapretty9052
@issapretty9052 Жыл бұрын
OMG 🔥 🔥 I literally feel good after watching this. The way you portrait y/n was amazing 👏❤️❤️best ff ever🙌❤️💖
@taehyungsslipperwhichhehat6762
@taehyungsslipperwhichhehat6762 Жыл бұрын
I rarely ever like or comment on an ff but yours was totally different and I had to do it and I can proudly say that your the first writer that I have given my like . I dont usually read lengthy ff cause it gets boring in the middle but yours just kept me hooked and I loved the way you potrayed all the characters. Usually in jk fictions or any other fiction the main character is usually the member and not yn I like how u gave yn the importance well as jk .(which I think gave me a break from the usual same kind of fictions ) I am thinking of becoming a writer and your fictions could definitely boost up my writing skills as well as how to write the plot cause I'm literally struggling to know how to write a good story . Will definitely check out your other stories to help me out . Thanks for this wonderful ff ❤
@ankitapriyadarshini9411
@ankitapriyadarshini9411 Жыл бұрын
You are tha best story writer unnie 🥺🥺🥺❤❤❤❤ love u ❤
@khushikaushik3090
@khushikaushik3090 Жыл бұрын
Wahhhhhhhhhhh best edit everrrrrrrr the power of y/n oohhhh mmyyy godddddd so coolllll 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
@_kcnecqo_
@_kcnecqo_ Жыл бұрын
The name he gave her "My lil warrior"😭💓
@ridasheikharmy7035
@ridasheikharmy7035 Жыл бұрын
Your last quote is so good let's find our own jungkook in our lives 💜💜💜💜💜 it's touch my heart ✨
@Bangtanboyzworld
@Bangtanboyzworld Жыл бұрын
I'm speechless ❤ The master piece in my eyes i really have no words to tell u how beautiful it is❤❤❤
@AbdulHadi-fk3mz
@AbdulHadi-fk3mz Жыл бұрын
I can't describe my feelings about this ff OMG!!!!! This is the best ff ❤❤❤❤
@daydream2598
@daydream2598 Жыл бұрын
This is a master piece......your imagination is amazing......hey author you are good keep going..🤗🤗💜
@couchyypotato
@couchyypotato Жыл бұрын
I am truly amazed I never cried or laughed watching any ffs but this made me cry so hard this ff was the best one I have read till now you are really an amazing writer
@arpitha22
@arpitha22 Жыл бұрын
This is the most meaningful story I have EVER read, I have no words just amazed by ur master piece this should be on #1 list 🙂u r doing great dear keep going ❤️im proud of u 👏
@magicshop-w3n
@magicshop-w3n Жыл бұрын
Its not just a fiction its a masterpiece i swear i never read this type of fanfiction its mind blowing i really appreciate with your hardwork unnie my 1 hour does not waste of reading this masterpiece. Yn each line give goosebumps and heartbroken feelings. Really you put every girls feelings in this story ❤️ you nice keep going 🙆💓
@KASHVIBOBADE-lx5jq
@KASHVIBOBADE-lx5jq Жыл бұрын
loved it masterpiece I am basically a cold person who does not cry that often but this made me cry love u author
@Anna_2000
@Anna_2000 Жыл бұрын
This was so well written 💜💟💗 Mind blowing author 💯
@전베리
@전베리 Жыл бұрын
Bro it's heart warming ❤
@soniabatoolawan894
@soniabatoolawan894 Жыл бұрын
istg its a complete masterpiece love you so much for writing such an amazing ffffff
@FloweryJhope
@FloweryJhope Жыл бұрын
This is the best story I have ever red❤❤❤❤ plz keep it up😁😊👍🏽
@tasniarahman5623
@tasniarahman5623 Жыл бұрын
Oh dear I was really crying like a mess when I came to knw abt jia I literally feel her pain I was crazily crying that moment. It’s not just a story it’s the reality of cruel world.. (No hate of any idol) ❤❤❤
@nightappleispoisenapple3000
@nightappleispoisenapple3000 Жыл бұрын
Damn this was an amazing ff author you nice keep going
@ynaesthetics
@ynaesthetics Жыл бұрын
This is literally the best ff I've ever read on KZbin, damn bro. 😉👏✨
@mrkookiejk
@mrkookiejk Жыл бұрын
Just one word and it's a MASTERPIECE 😍🫶🏻👏💜
@jiniichuzii
@jiniichuzii Жыл бұрын
Wow unnieee this was the best one can u make This type of ffs more plzz ❤❤❤❤
@priyankaroy6128
@priyankaroy6128 Жыл бұрын
One of the best ffs. Its a real masterpiece!!
@MUSIC-hk7hz
@MUSIC-hk7hz Жыл бұрын
Beautiful story ...these type of monster deserve to die. Just because they have power does not give them anyright to do such thing... I can really feel the pain Jia (y/n's sister) must have felt that time... I have been through the same. When my brother was in 11th a girl proposed him but he rejected her...telling her that he has to focus on his studies. That time I was in 8th and was also there listening to their conversation. That girl just nodded and left. The next day, my brother didn't come to school so in lunch i was sitting on a bench alone when suddenly a boy dragged me from backto our school's basement where no one come... I couldn't recognize him as i didn't see his face and became Hella scared that time... he turned me around and i recognized him, he was my senior, was a college boy and also was brother of the girl my brother rejected. He said " now i'll make you suffer for what your brother did to my sister "He slapped me hard, tore my t-shirt and started touching me and leaving bruises everywhere on my body... having no option I kicked him down there and started running to my boy best friend. After seeing my condition my bestie came running to me and covered me then pulled me in his embracing...I was trembling in fear and lost my conscious. I woke up after few hours and saw I'm in hospital. We filded a police complain but no one took action as they were rich but he payed for his deads as after few years he suffered from aids and eventually died. It's been 5 years and I have erotophobia and nyctophbia, I had suffered from depression for 2 years but now I am fine and dating my best friend who is very protective for me... I just shared this story of mine to tell you all that end of the day you will not find your jungkook who will teach you how to fight, who will teach you how to face the world... It might be difficult but you have to stand for yourself, love yourself❤. Don't hate yourself because someone did miserable to you... I LOVE YOU ALL💜💜💜 & TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF
@arvshiffs1030
@arvshiffs1030 Жыл бұрын
You have got huge respect from me... You're such a strong girl I really appreciate that how you handle yourself... And about the one who did this with you already pay for his deeds... You're such a strong girl.. Take care love... And the thing you mention that you will not find your jungkook at the end of the day... Not every jungkook only teach you to fight... Some gave you reason to live... Some teach you how to love... And some told that you deserve to be loved... Just like your bestfried who proved that not every man is bad... He is your jungkook who always stay by your side... And always will... Such a nice man he is... And yeah you yourself is so strong to set yourself strong enough to live and love... But also he is the one for you in the end... Your Jungkook💜
@shaharataslim7222
@shaharataslim7222 Жыл бұрын
it's really a masterpiece..yah if there someone to break then there must be someone to heal
@shinebright7619
@shinebright7619 Жыл бұрын
That was so incredibly good I loved it
@yadlalavanya8274
@yadlalavanya8274 Жыл бұрын
OMG this was Oscar winning fanfic 💜
@sarasaini1738
@sarasaini1738 Жыл бұрын
IN THIS 1 HOUR. YOU HAVE SHOWN ARE ALL THE EMOTIONS……..ITS A MASTERPIECE ❤❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉🎉
@zaina5114
@zaina5114 Жыл бұрын
Im speechless 😲😲😲 bcz this was a master piece😚 words r not enough to explain the work u(author)have put in this☺☺☺☺i support u😊❤
@Nenelynn
@Nenelynn Жыл бұрын
I’m support for you n I’m here for you ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
@chim_chim_6088
@chim_chim_6088 Жыл бұрын
OMG THAT WAS SO COOL!! I NEED MORE OF THIS.
@jaswantkardam9433
@jaswantkardam9433 Жыл бұрын
Oooo God , author this ff worth,and deserve to be published world wide , I can say my 1 hour 10 min and 53 sec was worth it , I lovedddddd it
@prachirathore_6055
@prachirathore_6055 Жыл бұрын
Damn your words background music story line are soo good In one word "masterpiece" So good ......................♥️❣️
@purpleyou9540
@purpleyou9540 Жыл бұрын
I will again watch “My Name" Kdrama.
@trianyu9398
@trianyu9398 Жыл бұрын
You are fantastic writer.. I regret that i read it very late... But its healing my wound and it gives an fuel for inner fire...
@nadiahossain218
@nadiahossain218 Жыл бұрын
I'm really satisfy with this ff... Like i can feel the ff and feel like the girl is me... I can feel the emotion in this ff.... Such a wonderful ff... it’s stolen my heart ❤️🥀
@Niharikasahu30
@Niharikasahu30 Жыл бұрын
I can't find any words to praise this .. i wish there can be any better word than amazing.....it touched by heart..... little warrior took her revenge....and also get a men who loves and respects her....💜.... happy ending 😊
@4colours245
@4colours245 Жыл бұрын
Honestly I was hoping that yn would stab him in the stomach and you literally added that. I was so satisfied with that scene i was smiling like a psycho. I don't care what others think but i was disgusted with that kai so i was happy
@tigerlilykook.07
@tigerlilykook.07 Жыл бұрын
Oh my god its such a good massage to everyone about girl/women you earn a huge respect from me!! If you are capable please make these type of ff more! I Appreciate your hard work! 👏🏻 well written!
@thirumaransivaraman311
@thirumaransivaraman311 Жыл бұрын
WOW........wow....... WOW......this is soooooooooo good....your doing the best ✨✨✨❤️
@amj7755
@amj7755 Жыл бұрын
I did not want yn to kill Kai at one go I wish it could be better if they loch him up in a basement and torture him for some more time and making him revered about Jia I feel like that would be better than this just my opinion great ff btw it has been a long time since I have been waiting for something like this
@dishayadav3351
@dishayadav3351 Жыл бұрын
Damn!!! Author, this ff was so good , like the story line, the music everything was perfect, it gave me chills while reading few parts!! Great work ❤ i loved it :)
@dishayadav3351
@dishayadav3351 Жыл бұрын
Ah sorry but i forgot to add before... This literally made my day, your work is great , i appreciate it with my whole heart , i saved your name in the channel list of my fav author's. Now I'm gonna explore your channel and watch each one of them . Thanks for making such good ff's...
@arvshiffs1030
@arvshiffs1030 Жыл бұрын
So great of you...💞Thank you...
@dishayadav3351
@dishayadav3351 Жыл бұрын
@@arvshiffs1030 your welcome authorshii💗✨
@chitragirijavallabhan574
@chitragirijavallabhan574 Жыл бұрын
Soo good ❤❤❤❤❤ You deserve an award i loved this ff unnie
@alexwealm856
@alexwealm856 Жыл бұрын
It was just awesome the way you wrote it so beautifully its just amazing. Keep it up😊❤
@Mikado.15
@Mikado.15 Жыл бұрын
I'm glad that you used the Suzume theme song at 36:43 ❤💕
@TDeeshitaNorthlandss
@TDeeshitaNorthlandss Жыл бұрын
This story is the best ff I have ever read. This story made me sad, happy and anger at some bastards that take advantage of innocent girls. Finally, a story where Y/N is a strong and independent woman. And, I love the way Jungkook protects and help Y/N in her revenge and cherishes her wholeheartedly. Author, keep up with the good work! I felt extremely emotional during some parts of the story and it made me tear up. Thank you for showing the dignity and power of women.
@FatimaFatima-hs4zr
@FatimaFatima-hs4zr Жыл бұрын
This is best ff i have ever seen❤❤ the sound editing and words this is soo awesome✌ you want a oscar bro❤❤super
@akshithareddy2198
@akshithareddy2198 Жыл бұрын
1:10:47 Those lines!!🥺💕💕💕💕
@jaiminishah5837
@jaiminishah5837 Жыл бұрын
It's a master piece ,loved it❤❤
@thissaak6630
@thissaak6630 Жыл бұрын
Unnie Bonus part please 🥺 I'm so fucking obsessed with your stories...
@ishrashaikh686
@ishrashaikh686 Жыл бұрын
The Oscar fir best FFgies to.............YOU Seriously it's the best FF I've read 😊Everything is so good and perfect 🥰 💞 KEEP IT UP👍👍
@Itzlovely.
@Itzlovely. Жыл бұрын
You ff TOTALLY GIVE ME SHIVER OMG LOVING IT
@narnianash7229
@narnianash7229 Жыл бұрын
Damn that was amazing❤❤ this gives us many lessons to our life though❤ love this ff❤
@JulianLippert-m9l
@JulianLippert-m9l 10 ай бұрын
Is it just me or is this giving Kdrama vibes from "My Name"
@aashisahu5978
@aashisahu5978 Жыл бұрын
Hey honestly I was not going to see this ff because it's of 1 big hour and i usually just read ffs of 12-14 min. But the caption got my eye and this was like i always wished to read a ff like this So i just thought to read it by skipping a bit but your writing skills didn't let me skip a sentence I just didn't wanted to disappoint myself after reading for an hour but you made me feel right of my decision This was the best fanfiction i read (I usually don't support fanfictions but to divert my mind i read normally once in a month so please don't feel bad if i didn't used a really appreciation words but this was the best i have ever read) There's a small request- Please make some short oneshots because these are so long that i had to sleep late 😂
@saanvisridhar521
@saanvisridhar521 7 ай бұрын
This is the best ff I have ever read it's really nice and ireallyhope we all find our jungkooks The last when y/n was tell her sister and her story literally broke my heart but it was overall really nice
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