I respect everyone's opinion but that doesn't mean anyone should say anything without thinking. I had made some one-shots before which I made with a perfect ending but some people didn't agree with that too, they wanted a sad story with a happy ending so I made it for them. Thank you all for your feedback.
@kimtaeshi3442 ай бұрын
@@Aestheticfictionworld no you are best unnie don't say like that you are the best author 💜💜🤗💜💜
@Priyanka-o2v4j2 ай бұрын
@@Aestheticfictionworld no your story is amazing and most of people want happy ending
@Priyanka-o2v4j2 ай бұрын
@@Aestheticfictionworld so dont think about them
@JJJaheera2 ай бұрын
wdym we said something without thinking XDDD this video is 26 minutes long literally half an hour i wasted on this video. Maybe because you're young you do not understand the depth of the relationships but bro if ur husband INSULTS YOU ANS SLAPS you inFRONT of everybody that does not get justified by a single sorry like hello!!?? here he treated yn like trash and u expect her to get back to him. This is the fault in ur story, you wrote everything perfectly but can u tell me what made you think the female should get together with the male lead even after all this? What makes you think it justifies his behavior? Nobody is mad at u it is just that dont ever accept a stupid worthless man who treats you like shit and trash just because he is pretty and rich. :)
@Abcdef4273 ай бұрын
Disappointed.. Yn should leave him, she deserves better !!!!He slapped and insulted her in front of everyone but she forgives him , unbelievable!!! She is so weak and pathetic. I don't like this!!!
@mounikareddy962373 ай бұрын
Not satisfied How can she forgive him that easily I hate it
@PPreetika3 ай бұрын
What dude you insult her,slap her infront of everyone but ask sorry just inside four walls seriously like what bro 🙄 it's not new my ears are bleeding to hear his same lemme excuse 😪😪 i understand he don't know about her disease that 's not his fault but after married her he should know about her everything it's definitely his fault bro if atleast behave like human in his house maybe y/n will open up with him but sir is ultra Pro Max be professional 24 hours sir never behave like human then how can i expect him behave like a husband y/n should not forgive him like that when he asks her you can insult me slap me infront of everyone she should done that no need to behave like mother Teresa 😒 Author you should make this story whole 30 minutes show us how jk genuinely make it up to her how he apologize to her infront of everyone y/n should give him silent treatment how he put efforts in their marriage life why every time we woman need to understand our husband tolerate everything 🤨🤨⁉️⁉️ i wish you make bones part ending not fully satisfied
@gurmeetkaur97033 ай бұрын
Again pathetic yn.😂
@samridhijindal41033 ай бұрын
I agree with you. I am in favour of love but there is something called self respect too.
@CS-PriyankaC3 ай бұрын
Not satisfied with all because it's also same like those ff same excuse,same one so called sorry nothing different But i don't know why but this story remember me my school life 😩😩how much insult, humiliation 😬 this nothing what we faced i mean me she just received one slap hear me and our class total doomed they won't raise their hands but beat the shit out of us , stell scale, wooden scale,1 m long and thick stick 🥶🥶 kneel down 👇 outside of class etc Lamo 💀💀 my school and college memories are scary 👽👽 compare to mine y/n insult is nothing 😴😴🤡 remember those days my whole body us paining 🙂😭 especially my palms 🤲🤲 how they beat me 🤕🤕
@kimtaeshi3443 ай бұрын
Not satisfied ending unnie 😔 please upload age gap ff soon I'm patiently waiting for the next part💜💜🫶
@Superstar-uh4tx3 ай бұрын
I felt y/n pain not saying she should not forgive him but she tolerated a lot and it was due to guilty he did this but once what if she did not have this condition it does not excuse the way he treated her and scolded her and even did not once feel guilty before the slap.
@snehasingh6333 ай бұрын
26:1 wasted
@purpleworld_bts73 ай бұрын
Why
@manujimkook66892 ай бұрын
Right👍
@amandapalmieri12712 ай бұрын
He doesn't distance himself from her. He treats her like shit. If you love or have some feeling for someone, you don't regret marrying her or slap her in front of everyone.
@armyakshu70473 ай бұрын
Not satisfied story..
@nikitasikka59403 ай бұрын
How she's forgive him so easily 😢 not satisfied ending 💔
@mo.arshtiljiwalastd3crolln3173 ай бұрын
Thanks for I'm not vesting my time
@BTS_girlbongo2 ай бұрын
He treated her like a shit I'm little disappointed he didn't suffer after making suffer that pure soul
@SoniyaC-ys7ki3 ай бұрын
Maybe it will look good if you show us jk apologize infront of everyone y/n give him punishment leave him for some days he continuously put efforts to get her forgiveness and trust without any one help y/n get good marks i understand he don't have any idea about her disease but atleast did he even try to understand her ?? Or behave like husband in their home no he is also behave like stranger like always our mother Teresa y/n put efforts in their relationship he didn't even give f**k about her i don't know which woman fall for a rude guy who disrespect you in every way maybe our broom 🧹 stick girl y/n 🤷🤷
@adirahara27582 ай бұрын
Yooo.. I agree with you he should have some punishment too
@manujimkook66892 ай бұрын
Very bad story 💀 yn is🤡
@HanaAddams2 ай бұрын
like always bye bye self respect
@Bangtan_Army2663 ай бұрын
You made me cry girl 😭😭 can you make bonus part plsssss
@yashi_03 ай бұрын
Just one request include "happy ending " to your thumbnail whenever it is happy ending according to you just so that we specially i can use my time fairly.
@Aestheticfictionworld2 ай бұрын
Noted!
@Priyanka-o2v4j3 ай бұрын
I love your story Somewhere it's my life story but last jungkook love her and care her and in my case we get separate he don't want burden on him
@Aestheticfictionworld2 ай бұрын
I will pray for you that you live a good life without him and that you find a good partner.
@Priyanka-o2v4j2 ай бұрын
@@Aestheticfictionworld thank you dear 😊😊 But you know I am happy in my life without him and i also know God thinking good for me🙂🙂
@adirahara27582 ай бұрын
Love your ff... I love it when someone gives a second chance to people plus there's a first time for everything right?? You did your best... ❤❤
@Aestheticfictionworld2 ай бұрын
THANKS ❤️❤️❤️❤️
@sharonram20002 ай бұрын
I understand that in arranged marriage, people need time to get comfortable and understand each other. However, that being jk should show her some respect and patience as him being the older one in the marriage. Jk parent are at fault for not telling jk about yn conditions, seeing how serious it they should have told him beforehand, and all these problems would not have occurred. Jk should not have slapped yn, and probably if she had said something to him about her sickness, he would have behaved in a better way . I am in no way justifying his rude and disrespectful behavior to his wife, but he didn't know about it, which cause the problem in the first place .also yn being sick does not stop her from standing up for herself, from the very first time he spoke to her she should put a stop to it . Yn sickness should not stop her from knowing her worth. Also jk should help her with the cooking and chores as she is not a maid Communications is very important in a marriage, and because it was lacking in their marriage, which leads to misunderstanding. He regrets it, and he apologized therefore i dont see any reason for not giving him a second chance . I would have made him put in some effort before truly forgiving him for slapping and the insults, but as he is not 100% at faults, the ending was not bad . Anyhow, this is just my humble opinion, and i dont mean any disrespect to the author ❤
@Aestheticfictionworld2 ай бұрын
❤️
@Linaelinaeya3 ай бұрын
Age gap love is not finished yrt?
@AsifaNaznin3 ай бұрын
No
@RituMahaman3 ай бұрын
Good 👍
@Aestheticfictionworld2 ай бұрын
Thanks
@arzikahazarika57102 ай бұрын
I love your story Author ❤❤
@Aestheticfictionworld2 ай бұрын
❤️❤️
@Craftergirlshorts2 ай бұрын
People have their opinion but that is your choice you listen to people or your heart amazing ff unnie you did great job 👏🏻 just let people tell their opinion every one has different opinion so do what makes you happy 😊 ( no hate to anyone)
@nisha31612 ай бұрын
It was good author. I'm little disappointed by Jungkook that he slapped y/n and also insulted her. He wasn't at fault Because he didn't knew about y/n's condition. Thanks for this ff of yours. 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
@Aestheticfictionworld2 ай бұрын
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@human314bu6 күн бұрын
Jungkook.was definitely at fault!!! You don't get the licence to insult anybody or raise your hand at them just because you're angry. Whether a person has any Disability/condition or not, everyone has the right to respect and safety.
@atiyaateeq7862 ай бұрын
Bonus part please
@adirahara27582 ай бұрын
Bruh i'm reading the comments and i don't like what i read... 😢😢 Why do you guys hate yn for forgiving jk?? Dude yn litterly have no friends to support her and she has been arrange married with jk without any love experience and even jk is a cold person he slapped her because he was mad and he realized his mistakes that's good enough.... Stop saying she is weak some people out there experience this types of things for the first time yn has no one on her side how can she not forgive him?? And yn is showing kindness by giving him a second chance... I know woman have self respect too but she can't even fight with her sickness now you wnat her to handle her marriage relationship?? Dude she needs someone by her side to take care of her not everyone can stand alone for long... She needs jk's love nad support and see jk litterly got worried for her... I know she should like waited for a few day to think about for giving him but that's gonna make the ff longger and an spent her time writing this ff so that you talk about how band it is?? Why don't you guys fund something positive is a negative situation for once?? ❤❤
@Aestheticfictionworld2 ай бұрын
Finally someone understands this
@human314bu6 күн бұрын
@adirahara2758 Firstly,Yn had her parents to back her up(AS THEY SHOULD,) coz they knew her value.It was mentioned in the ff . Second,jungkook didn't even apologize properly. I mean he slapped and humiliated her publicly,but apologized in private within four walls. how the hell is that fair. Third,Her being sick shouldn't undermine her self-worth.I don't feel she needs someone who would raise their hand on her just because they couldn't control their anger. Fourth, such ff's also cater to a younger audience and such an ending undermines the severity of such situations happening in real life to real people.
@lotusquotes21443 ай бұрын
Actually i was really expecting more romantic. Sorry good story