اختبر قدراتك: اكتب قصة قصيرة بالانجليزية باستعمال 10 كلمات التالية

بعد عدد لا بأس به من فيديوهات تدريب على الاستماع والكتابة والتعبير من خلال فييوهات القصص، اليوم هو موعد الامتحان لتختبر مستواك، هل تستطيع كتابة قصة قصيرة باستعمال الكلمات العشرة التالية؟ يلا شاركونا
اختبر قدراتك: اكتب قصة قصيرة بالانجليزية باستعمال 10 كلمات التالية
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[@EnglishwithSbeata1]

انا منتظر أشوف القصص الي حتكتب بالتعليقات علشان اختار واحد منهم لتكون قصة الفيديو القادم، يلا يلا

[@hanaasmeehsafy236]

يسعد كل اوقاتك استاذ سبيتا ان شاءالله تكون قصتي تنال اعجاجبك 🤗🤗 I hope that my story exciting and I hope you like it .😍😍😍😍🤗🤗😇😇 thanks allot sbeata for this idea 😎😎

[@monamohamedali592]

حلوه اوي الفكره دي

[@haneensaleh8277]

Muna a young girl loves horses and she dream of being a hero in a horse competition. She once heard that there will be a huge competition for horses in the city, she did not hesitate to participate. She began to train with her horse, practice and work hard. Every day she take a training lesson in the garden. The moment of the first announcement of results she was the winner of the first place, her dad feels love, happy and proud of his daughter who has been able to realize her dreem. **اول مرة اكتب قصة بحياتي 🙄😊

[@monamohamedali592]

This is My story.. the story name (Ambition of the young girl) Once upon a time, there was a young girl, this a young girl loved horses so much, she has a white horse, and she loved this horse, it was very beautiful, and every day she went with her dad to look after of her horse. one day she was sitting a garden of her house and she thought to participate in the competition of horses in her city. she was has a dream to win the horses competition. She was determined to achieve her dream and win this a competition, so she was doing many practices and exercises every day, so she was accompanying her horse and she was a lot of practice and was really working hard to improve her level. And the day of the competition she made an amazing show and very beautiful as if she was dancing with her horse, it was a view beautiful and wonderful. The happy surprise for her that after her hard work she won first place and her dad was happy and very proud of her. After receiving the cup, she decided to celebrate with her horse. she rode a horse and still running on all over her city until she went to the sea and hugged her horse and said, "We won together, Me and you are won"

[@raneemalsedawi8253]

In one of beautiful cities, there was a young girl living with her dad in a big palace and she had a white horse. She loved her horse very much and looked after it . She was walking with her dad in a palace garden and practicing horseback riding. In March , The city announced a horseback riding competition and the girl decided to praticipate in this competition. The girl worked hard in order to win first place. At the end of the competition. It was a surprise. The girl was very happy because she able to achieve her dream in the win and her dad was proud of her.. ⭐If you want to success .. you have to work hard⭐

[@ti3rh]

A young girl who dreamed of participating in horse racing competition, then participated and practiced hard work and won and won the first place in the city and her dad was proud of her and pleased to achieve the dream ☹️💔 / طبعاً اول مرة أتابع فيديوهاتك وصراحة أسلوبك كلش حلو اني طالبة خامس احيائي اتمنىٰ أكون وفقت بالقصة ، سلامي #عراقية🙂

[@EnglishwithSbeata1]

مہۧہقہۧدسہۣۗـِٰة ہ ٰ bravo! ممتاز كتير استمري 7/10

[@ti3rh]

English with Sbeata شككـ⁽😻🙊₎⇣ـــٰٰٰ͟ــرا، أستاذ

[@anwarjafar1155]

A young girl lived in small city with her parents. They have a beautiful house with a big garden. She loved horses. Her dad bought her a horse because she had a dream to participate in a horse competition. She worked hard and practice well to realize her dream. Her dad was happy and proud to help her. One day she participated and won first place.

[@فلسطينيهوافتخر-ص7ش]

👏👏👏💕

[@malakmimi9466]

اللهم اني اسالك لهذا الاستاذ ان تجعله من الهم والحزن بعيد و من الرحمة قريب وأن تحقق له كل ما يريد

[@بنتسوريا-ف2ل]

أمين يارب للعالمين

[@zahraaalzaidy9425]

إمييين يحفظهة من كل شر ومكروه 🌷🌹

[@expensivesweet450]

امين

[@suzikhawaja8508]

انا اسفة لاني تاخرت في التعليق بس معلش علي امتحانات.لاني لسا صف سادس . على العموم بتمنى الإجابة😅 "Once upon a time,there was a young girl cald Sereen,lives with her dad in a small house in a city. And there was a competition of horse racing.🐎 Sereen was very happy to hear that, and she said this to her friend (Asmaa). They wanted to participate in the race Sereen's dad bought two small horses for them, and they loved the horses. And they practice hard work to win the competition. They were training in there garden. They were dreaming win the competition. Finally they won the competition. Sereen was the first one, and Asmaa was the second one. And Sereen's dad was very proud of her.⁦⁦⁦⁦⁦👏🏿⁩😝😜 عنجد اول مرة بستعمل المفردات يلي عندي و بركب جمل😅حاسس حالي سرت شخص آخر . و مش عارفة ليش واثقة من حالي أني راح انجح😌 بتمنى استاذ تردلي جواب 🤓وتنال اعجابكم إن شاء الله 😻

[@ahmadzayoon3958]

ممكن تترجمي لي كتبتي بليز

[@suzikhawaja8508]

ييه ما اقدم التعليق 😅 انا هلا بس قراته كمان مرة شفت في كتير اخطاء

[@ahmadzayoon3958]

@@suzikhawaja8508 😂

[@arwa4323]

"لا بأس، يومًا بعد يَوم ستُصبح أشدّ قُوّة و أكثر لا مُبالاة."🌪🌿 "It s okay, day after day it will become more powerful and more indifferent."

[@محمدالسيابي-ب2ت]

لخص دور العمانيين في الملاحة البحرية أصبحت الموانئ العمانية المركز رئيسي الساحل الغربي وموقعها الجغرافي تقع على مفترق الطريق البحريني بالصين والهند في الشرق وبلاد فارس والعراق في الشمال والشمال الغربي والبحر الأحمر وشرق أفريقيا الجنوب وبسبب أنها مطلع ع البحار تطور الملاحة والتجار هو اكساب العمانية خبره سيطرة العمانية ع سواحل أفريقيا الشرقية ازدهار التجارة العمانية مع الصين في القرن الثالث الهجري الأماكن التي كانت السفن العمانية تصل إليها هي البصره سيراف والهند تدخل الصين بمختلف أنواع الامانه والبضائع. واستخدام العمانية خشب الخارجية والسماح لصناعة السفن .

[@خلودالجماعي-خ7ث]

Our neighbor has a youing girl who loves horses so much. I saw her always practice with her horse in the garden to participate in the horse competition in Jeddah city. She dreams of winning first place. The work was hard, but her dad is very proud of her and happy with her victory.

[@teacher.2415]

كلمات جديدة 1-competition منافسه 2- participateيشارك 3- winيفوز 4-practicيمارس 5-proudفخور Think you teacher 💝

[@hamsosa2048]

In the past, I wanted to be strong, and when I was young, my mother told me to play sports, because I was happy with this word, and I exercise because training leads to mastery. And I had a competitive spirit, so I'm still proud of myself

[@محمدناجي-ر7و]

جزاك الله خير الجزاء ❤

[@marysy2514]

Once upon atime.There was ayoung girl.she loved her dad so much and she had abeautiful horse.the young girl used to ride it.she decided to participate in the horse race.she was working hard to win the race.alreaday she went to the city and she participated in the race.she won first place.her dad was proud of her.she was very happy.because she has achieved her dream.she stoped in garden and look at the sky and said thank you.God.because you helped me achieve my dream. لاول مرة بعمري بكتب موضوع بالانكليزي بمساعدة بسيطة من المترجم بتمنى كون انجزت الاختبارياريت استاذ تعطيني علامة للموضوع يعطيك العافية استاذ

[@EnglishwithSbeata1]

Mary sy برافو عليكي! اذا كانت هاي اول مرة تحسن مبير ومع التمرين والممارسة رح تصيري احسن واحسن برافو عليكي

[@marysy2514]

@@EnglishwithSbeata1 شكرا استاذ ان شاء الله

[@hawraabasim9343]

there was a young girl setting in garden and look to stars,then overcome sleepiness,she see a dream that she participate in horse competition that is happen in her city.she win the race and get the first.herdad was very happy and proud at her daughter,when she wake up decided to make the dream truth and decided practice horse riding and hard work to be heroine فكره جميله استاذ نتمنى تكثر هل شي لان كلش مفيد النه حتى لو عندي اخطاء بلقصه المهم اني تعلمت اربط كلمات واسوي قصه شكراااااااااا الك

[@hawraabasim9343]

او نسيت استخدم كلمه love She love her dream

[@حكمتفرج-ب2س]

Hello ' How are you? I hope you have time Blessed day.. There was a young girl very excited to participale for competition of a horse . One fine day the compeleition set up a garden of city . A young giral fulfill her dream . She has win by first rank . A young giral was very happy . Her dad is very proad and love because his daughter is hard wark. She practiced every day for long time. Thank you😍

[@wedyanalobeidi959]

Once upon time there was a young girl, she was smart and she loves her dad. One day there was ahorse riding competition She decided participate becouse she had a dream to win then she went to a graden every day for practice hard work then she did it She won in the city She got first one and her dad was proud also she is proud her slfe

[@rawankamal6980]

There was a young girl called masa who had a dream to win the competition in her love hobby "horse racing". First, masa practiced a lot in her dad's garden and did a hard work to participate in this competition. After five months of hard working, masa joined the competition of horse racing which is held in her city, she won that competition, she was happy and her dad was proud of her .

[@EnglishwithSbeata1]

Rawan Kamal bravo!! 7/10

[@sajadwanas6310]

شكرا ع هذا التدريب ربي يوفقك

[@Sjgfgj]

There was a young girl, she had a dream which was to ride horses, there was a horse park next to her house, she used to go every day to practice this sport, one autumn night Emily received an invitation to participate in a horse riding competition in Dubai, Emily went with her ded to the city of Dubai, despite the difficulty of work she won first place in the competition and her ded was happy and proud of her هذه قصتي اتمنى ان تنيل اعجابك

[@khadijabrreda8180]

It was a young girl who has a dream to participe in horse compétition. one day, while her dad was in the garden she went to him and she asked him to practice riding. Because she loved horses,and she want to be the first winner in the compétition city. Her father was happy, proud of her and he wish to her hard work ans good luck.

[@tassnimetassnime9145]

Once Upon a time, there was a young girl who her dad was died. She lived with her mother in a small city, she often stay home alone be cause her mum works late, than her mother boughts to her a horse to keep her company..The girl was so happy with her horse and she love him..They enjoyed in the garden of house..More and more the girl dreams to participate with a sport compétitions and to be first in her city..But she realized that she have to practice more and more and she need a hard work to win..one day she awoked by a loudly sound .When she open the door of her cupboard ,she found her small horse hanging upside down and his neck cut..😦😱 ♡Thank You a lot mr.Ahmad I proud of the arabics men like you...

[@الزهرةالسوداء-ح4ص]

Once upon a time ,There was a young girl called Aana she lived in palace with her dad. she has a horse and love it . Every morning she take the horse to the garden, she heard there is a horses competition. she was a dream to participate in the competition . she told her dad about the competition,and he accepted. She was very happy ,she prepared to the competition and she doing a hard work before the competition, In the competition day she was very excited and she was very good in the race. She win in the competition and take a first place. Her dad and her city was very happy and proud her and loved when she take a first place .

[@feriel8621]

This exercice is amazing thank you very much. My short story: As a young girl living in a city, dreaming about having a horse and participating in competitions to win the first place, and make her dad proud. This dream only comes with hard work, having the passion and love for this hobby, and of course a lot of practice till perfection. So at the end of the day I can watch the sunset in my garden with my lovely horse and just feeling happy with the small things that we acheive.

[@EnglishwithSbeata1]

Fer iel wow! Bravo bravo! One of the best! I vote!

[@feriel8621]

@@EnglishwithSbeata1 Thank you very much. I am just following your lessons and advice 😁😁

[@nadianadia-em1us]

إختيار جميل قصة جد رائعة عجبتني أنا أيضا

[@feriel8621]

@@nadianadia-em1us شكرا جزيلا 😊

[@nadianadia-em1us]

@@feriel8621 لا شكر على واجب

[@ghaithharbaoui7624]

A young girl loves a horse, practice hard work for her dream. one day in garden of her city participated in compétition of horses win first place,So her dad proud and he Was very happy .

[@rajaabdou12]

Ayla is a young girl live with her dad in a small house have a great garden, Ayla have a white horse who is her friend, Ayla practice equestrian, she have a big dream to participate a competition, for this, she decided to travel to the city with her dad to participate in an equestrian contest, Ayla win first rank because she is a hard working, her dad is so happy and proud of his girl, and he love she so much.

[@tabark382]

On one day there is a young girl stayed in a garden with her dad, she loves to practice a horse ride,so she said to her dad to participate in a competition which is in acity for wins and becomes the first. She played her hobby and win, she became happy and her dad proud for her and said (this adream is a hard work but you can)

[@najetbou3182]

A young girl inherited the love of riding horses from her dad.She had a lot of horses dolls which she played by it in the house's garden in her childhood. One day, the young girl hreard that there was a competition in the city. So she went rapidly to her father who told her that it was her chance to participate and achieve her dream to be the best rider of horses at all. The hard work started and the young girl practiced riding every day until the competition begun. She rided her horses and the race started. All of horses run quikly but her horses was the fastest. In the end, she won and obtained the first ranked. Her father was soo happy and proud of her.

[@EnglishwithSbeata1]

Nadjet Bouledjebah bravo!! Very very good 8/10 I vote

[@najetbou3182]

استاذ وضعت العلامة ولم تشر الى الاخطاء!

[@AFRAHAA]

In a small village near a big city lives a young girl named Yara. Yara lived with her parents in a big house and they have a beautiful garden. At that time her father horse breeder , and one day the king announced a horse contest. Yara decided to participate in this race so she asked her father to help and train her on horseback riding. Yara worked hard to competeition in the race, and when the race day came, Yara fulfilled her dream and win the first place, and when everyone applauded for her, she heard a voice saying I am very happy and proud of you, my daughter, Yara turned to find her dad’s voice and said to him and I too, Dad, you are a wonderful father. I love you so much and will forever practice this hobby because you love it ❤️

[@titonet5417]

there a young girl live in a city with her dad she was play with her horse on garden but she was her dream she intervention a competition so she was hard work and she was participate in competition for her win in the competition and she was happy interventionto enter her but her dad was proud of her

[@hatoonnouri9348]

أستاذ سبيد.... شكراً على الفقرة الجميلة دي... أنا لي سنين طويلة ما فكرت اكتب حاجة او تعبير بالإنجليزي انت شجعتني على الحاجة دي شكراً جزيلاً....... ومن بعد إذنك انا دوبي جديدة في القناة.... فشفت الفيديو ده قبل ساعة وهو اصلا ليه سنة.... فمعليش انا شاركت في الكتابة ممكن تقيم الكلام اللي كتبته اكون ممنونة جداً لك... 🙏❤️❤️

[@nanoudublin7110]

In small city in the nourth of Ireland 🇮🇪, there was a young girl called denielle. She love riding horses🐎🐎. She had one in their farm, she loved him so much and she used to played with him,until they love each other. One day denielle heard there is a competition for the best riding horses 🐴, she wanted to participate.every day she took ritchy the horse for more practice. She worked very hard to be a winer. Her dad stand for her until the day of the competition. Denielle participate and she got the first place, and her dream become reality . She was very happy 😊 and her dad was proud of her,

[@EnglishwithSbeata1]

Nabila kacemi dublin wow! Bravooo! 9,5/10 I vote!

[@nanoudublin7110]

Thank you that's because you help us and you give us most of your time.

[@nidaanaji536]

A young girl living in a city her dad has a lot of horses a gardan and her dream was being knight in the future and to the win in horses competition so she warks hard on herself first she decided to participate in this competition before ond day of competition she practice a ride of hours and the next day come the competition and she is the first winner of competiton she is very happy after alot of dreams so her dad say to her l'm so proud becauce l have daughter like you

[@abdelazimelhalawany3524]

Ance apon atime, there was ayong girl awas leaving with her dad in a smol house . We have a smol garden and a horse . The yong girl had a dream to participate in compatition horses racing in the city . She kept practicing and practice horse riding and hard working. Then she participated in the competition and win the competition and become the first. Her dad was loved ,happy and proud of her

[@نرجسالسوداني-ي5ع]

A young girl participate the competition and the competition Ride A horse she was very love her dad and participate the competition Because for check Adream dad and Make it Happy and proud in girl it was a competition in the garden City The girl was doing hard work to win but his salary was First and make dad proud This has been achieved Because will and determination

[@محمودالشهومي-س8د]

One day, in a small village there was a little girl. She had a beautiful horse in her garden. And she wanted to participate in the contest and win because this thing; It was her dream and she asked her father to allow her to participate in the competition that would be held in the city, and her father told her “of course you can” and she became very happy. Then she started working hard and riding horses, and it became difficult for her, but she did not forget her dream. When she started on the first day of the week, she went to the competition and won first place and her father became very happy, proud and loving to his daughter. The story is over, I hope you enjoyed it, and in conclusion I advise everyone who reads this story "Don't forget that you dream and every day work hard to find it"

[@souhanebn9554]

The ambitious girl Once upon time in small Canadian village she lived a young girl her name is "Elena" she had a horse called "Scarlett" she was loveing her strongly because it was the only souvenir from her mother which she died before a few years ago , in those days the city organized a great competition of the horses racing , when Elena heard the news she decided to participate in it , in order to pleasure her dad who was very sad since the death of his wife , every morning she wake up earlier with scarlett to practice her hobby in the garden of the home with perseverance and a hard work, in the latter she could to win on the competitors with the first class and this made her dad very happy and he was proud of his daughter and he could to forget his sadness and the girl achieved her dream.

[@EnglishwithSbeata1]

Souhane Bn bravo! 9/10 I vote

[@souhanebn9554]

@@EnglishwithSbeata1 a big thanks to you teacher I'm happy for that , the next time I will write a beautiful story than this

[@arwa4323]

الإرادة هي الفكرة ، و العزيمة هي الروح .- آرثر شوبنهاور 💪😇

[@صوفيعدنان-س6د]

once upon a time there was a young girl who loved her dad she was about to participate in a competion about a horse racing. she always dream to take the first place and win so they have thia small garden back in her house around the city. she did a hsrd work to be first and she fainly win the race her dad was so proud of her and happy for her the end

[@twinsyaseen2158]

Pam is a young girl. She had a beautiful horse. She love him so much. Everyday Pam wake up early because she have a dream to win in the competition in your city. She go to the garden and speak with your horse bout his a dream and practice to ride his horse to become a professional. One day her dad said to her :take a rest because you did hard work for practicing. Pam said :l participate d in the competition in our city and want to win. Her dad said :l proud of you and l hope you get the first place in the competition. Pam hugged her dad after hearing that and she was very happy.

[@shahdabuzaid1953]

نايس 😂👍🏻

[@ibrahimmoukdad3404]

once upon time there was a young girl who live with her father in a city . she had nice horse that she was enjoying with practice of riding a horse in her garden .that her dream was winning in any competition for riding horses. one day she read important news that a responsible party organized competition for riding horses ,so she decided to participate in it .whatever the case she was careful to do a hard work . when the competition began a lot of competitors sat off in their horses . the competition was tough and tough , but it ended up with winning a young girl ,the responsible party advertised that she had the fist level in the competition , so her dad organized nice party for her .he presented her beautiful gift ,she was very happy . I love and proud of you my lovely: he said.

[@سلامسلام-ق5د]

انت مافي داعي اتابع القناة اذا حسنت تكتب كل هالكلام من عقلك

[@EnglishwithSbeata1]

ibrahim moukdad bravo! Very good Ibrahim! 7/10

[@ibrahimmoukdad3404]

@@EnglishwithSbeata1 where is problem in (grammar or ....etc) thanks for all

[@baraahdoudi7997]

Once upon time , There was a young girl.she 19 years old. She loves horses so she participated in a competition for horses.she works hard to win in the competition. Also she practice more. When she wins in the competition she felt happy because she achieved her dream . In addition, her dad became a proud . Furthermore , the first thing she did after she win. She went with her dad to an interesting garden in her city to celebrate winning.

[@ابواحمدالمهدي-و9ي]

In a small and beautiful garden there was a young girl that lived with her dad in a happiness. They had many animals but she preferred a horse . One day she heard about a horses competition in the city in next month. She wanted to participate with her horse and win . Her dad agreed because he love her . They made a hard work in training the horse to get the first place. The father was proud of his daughter. Every night she was dreaming of winning , and with insistence she achieve that dream and back with success . Om Ahmad 🌷

[@nouha9940]

Very good Or excellent You can also write a good history I encourage you Keep going 👏👏👍

[@arwa4323]

الله يسعدكك ع اهتمامك لنا 🌸🌿

[@nadalablande7248]

Once upon a time ayoung girl called Sarah,she lived in a big house located in a beautiful garden, it was her dream participate of compitation to hourses racing. Sarah was working hard and loved her city. She participate in the competition held in her city. She won in the competition. She was the first in the competition. Her dad was very happy and proud of her. 😊

[@hanaasmeehsafy236]

Once upon time their was a happy young girl ,that her dream was to participate in the horse Riding Competition in her city , wher she live; her dad love his daughter very much and he always trying to see her daughter happy all time; so he accepted to his daughter in participating in the competition and because of that he advises his daughter to do a hard working in practicing at their own garden, so as to be proud of her if she being the first winner in their lovely city.

[@EnglishwithSbeata1]

Strawberry Country bravo!!! Very good! 8/10 I vote

[@hanaasmeehsafy236]

Thanks allot for your time to us thanks sbeata 😇😇😇😇😍😍😍😍🙆🙆🙆

[@boualleguebouthaina1224]

Once upon time .a young grill bouthiana hiking and her dad in a garden she told him a dream a participte in a horse competition . The father laughed and she said you need practice and hard work She said i will win a first place She said father i'm proud of you tomorrow we'll go a city to participate a training center She said i love you dad i'm very happy

[@nazimderrer5692]

One upons a day they was a cute young girl she had a beautiful horse than she practiced horse riding in their large garden , in first time . Day by day she was growing than become a strong girl and beauty . Her dad was proud to her and he practiced a very hard work all the time . But he never forget the first dream's daughter ,her dream is to participate in the competition in the new city because she lived in the country . By the way , in present day she win in all the competition and nominate member one in horse riding in the world than her dad is very happy with her. Finally I love this lesson and your teaching .

[@mohamadfawwaz98]

All my prayer for you my teacher Fingers crossed 🤞🏻

[@ahmedmahtali8402]

once upon a time; A young girl , loved a horses and her dream was to participate at a horse compétition in the city. she practice a lot in the garden and she had hard works . the day of the competition , she participated with love, she was ranked first, she was the winner of the competition and she was very happy ;her father was very proud of her.

[@nooral-deenal-sheikh5438]

Once upon time,there was a young girl from Bethlehem city who has a horse, and her dad decided to participate with she a horse driving and they become practice this training everyday to make his daughter get well in horse driving,she think that is hard work to her,but at the same time this is her love and a dream, so that made she happy and proud to become good in horse driving, after she became good horse driver, her dad surprised her to make competition, in this competition she has to drive the horse alone at first time, she start the competition at a garden and at first, she was afraid but she passed this work fine and win in this competition.

[@وشاحعلي]

One day, a young girl from the village came to the city to realize her dream and to take part in the horse race, which was held in the garden and was the winner of the first and her Dad was proud and happy with her success and hard work and loved everyone.

[@ليلىمليحي]

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[@Maybe_blitz-]

Once upon a time,a yong girl named sara live in a city near from garden.This one decided to acheive her dream about 'win in horse competition' because she loves this dream. So she practices many excersises and hard working to the competition.when the competition day arrived the young girl participate in competition and she got the first place so she is so happy. Finally she really have achieved her dream and her dad was so proud for she and say: my daughter remember never give up for anything !!

[@narjeskarim5715]

ان شاء تكون جيدة يلا يا ولاد اسمعوا القصة One night a young girl she was sleeping she imagined in her dream she is in a city and this city a competition is held and she went to participate to this competition but she didn't believe she can win , but when she was a child her dad taught her horseback riding and befor to join she practice with her dad and she did hard work in that day befor she go to the compitition her dad told her girl don't worry ? she replied how come daddy ? and l don't believe of my self ! he replied at her my girl our God don't create anything in this life in obscure . only believe of your self you can do it you will do it go head , and she felt in rest assured and when she went to the competition felt in weak and surrenders but she remembered speach his dad and continued even she won and she was a first win her dad he was happy so much when she saw his girl a first win and told her l 'm proud of you my love ! l believed of you you will win , his daughter replied him : because of you l won my dad . and now l knew you was alright as you said to me nothing created obscure , and after they finished the competition they wanted to make a party for her in garden of city . moral of the story you can do any thing you want it only don't give up .✋

[@شاهيناز84شاهيناز]

I will want ask do you spik English for halpp me

[@EnglishwithSbeata1]

Narjes Karim bravo! Very good! Need some corrections! Not far from 8/10

[@lameesolayan6485]

Its once of the time its was ayong girl she had ablack horse it was moody and was the big challenge to participated in the city competition as she dream she loves her horse so she determination to practice the horse hardly and every day before the competition start she was practiced her horse in garden when the competition start she was ready and in the moment the whistile is fired she go like arrow and passed all barriers she had arrived first and she won the cup and her dad so proud and happy the moral is the hard work reach to the goal

[@hibaalareqi592]

My short story : In the city there were a young and her father . She has a horse in their garden.The young girl is love to practice sport exercises was dreaming that she participated in competition. She was very happy and broud herself because she won in this competition. Her father was love his daughter and he is farmer that is hard working. .... Thank you teacher ....

[@سيدةنفسي-ر8ز]

There was a young girl loves a horse so much where she practices to ride it every day in her a garden in the morning's she did hard work to improve her skills to get her dream she was very talented,she was very happy when she has got to approval to allow her participate in city's competition while she was ridding her horse she remembered how she did hard work to arrive in this place so she can do it and get to win ,her dad was very proud of her coz she has got the first she was very happy and everyone there shared her joy the end😉😉

[@Ines-qm2cv]

Once upon a time there was a young girl lived with her dad in the big city this girl had a dream to participated in horse competition and she wanted to be the first winner in it so she started to practice all the exercise with her horse in her big garden finally and after a hard work she win the competition and achieved her goal, her father was very happy and proud for his daughter who he loves a lot.

[@demawalid8235]

One day , a young girl heard for competition in their city about ridding horses and her dream to participated for that competition . so she going to the garden horses to practiced and hard working . after that she told her dad for that competition and would to participated , her dad answered for all love yes . so she won and get the first and her dad proud for her girl and feeling happy

[@mariotannous7114]

Once upon a time, there was a young girl who loves to practice the horse riding. Everyday she make a many hours of training in the garden of they house with her dad. Someday there is a competition of horse riding in the city, the young girl decide to participate in this competition to make her dream come true. The young girl after a hard work she win and take the first place between all the other participants in the race. Her dad was very happy and very proud of his young girl.

[@saindeen743]

سلام عليكم وجمعه مباركه وهذه قصتي. yesterday after ahard work's I went to the garden in city because there was a competition in horse racing participate for all ages.but i was shocked or I think it's a dream when l see a young girl win it was first in racing .also her dad was happy and proud. Really l love that.

[@mohammed0125333036]

هلا وغلا احلى تحية لك من مدينة جدة دايما مبدع ومتميز

[@redaetlolo]

Near our city there was a beautiful garden called Dream Park where competitions are usually organized in the sport of the Persians. One day she attended a young girl riding her horse with her dad and she seemed to be practiced. On the day of the competition, the girl won the race as a result of her hard work and was very happed to make her father proud of her and he was loved him

[@اسيرالحزان-خ7ط]

معليش ترجمينو بل عربي😢

[@souadhafid5871]

كانت قصتي ستكون بعنوان dream of winning لكن اجد صعوبة في كتابة شكراا استاذ و بالتوفيق للجميع و لن أمل من محاولة إلى أن اتعلم

[@aseelodeh3413]

Once upon time was youbg girl lived in a big city, she always thinking in a dream to become the first winner in her city in a horse competition, she has a strong horse and dad always give her the love and the support, after do hard work of practice and training, she finally decided to participate in her school compettion, it will happen in a garden in her city. The competition was very hard but the girl show amazing competition, and finally she is win, and her dad very happy and proud of his strong girl.

[@Tuqa-mb6fr]

Short Story One day,a young girl had a very beautiful horse.She always used to have a nice time with it .Her dream was riding that horse in a big competition to show the world what it was. One day when she was giving the horse it's food in the garden,Her dad was coming from the city and surprised her that there was a big horse race and he told her that she can participate in that race just for her dream.Her dad told her that he would be proud of her evry time even if she did not win. These werds where enough to make her hard work with the horse by practice the riding every day .With love of her father and good work she was the first in the horse race and seriously in the life race.She was happy for every time she had with that great and lovely father.

[@mohammadalkhafagy5745]

There was a young girl sitting in the garden with horse next to her and she was thinking a bout completing her dream and participating in the horse race and when I went to the race it was her dream to take first place in her city then what she wanted happened she win the race and she spoke of the hard work she had done and the work of horseback riding and after practice and work her father was very proud of her and she loved what she did and she was proud of herself the and .thank you very very much you are best theatre 😊

[@issahamdan2049]

Once upon a time there was a young girl, she was love riding a horse and she was dream to be a good horsewoman.and to chieve this dream she was practice with her dad in the garden every time to be ready to participate of the competition which held in the city every year. After three months of practice and hard work she became agood horse women and she participate in that's competition and she won first place . she was very happy and her dad was so proud of her.

[@upscalemorally4321]

Molly was a young girl , her dad had a large garden with lots of horses. Molly dreams of being a famous knight in the future because she loved the horses. After many years ,she started practiced the riding ,and after the hard work she was skillful knight . One time ,her city organized a rice competition for horses, Molly decided to participate in this competion . She prepared well, therefore, she was the first one in the race, then won the first gift. Since that day ,her dad was proud of his daughter, and she was very happy because she could achieve the dream and her dream became true to be skillful knight as well.

[@imfadedimfaded6055]

عنوان القصه The story girl and horse A young girl named life was to go with her dad every day to the city watching on competition the horses one day participate after that hard working her win first and was herdad proud at daughter

[@nazliinalo9237]

صباح الخير استاذي والله يعطيك العافية يارب There was a young girl living with her dad . An a small farm, and she had asmall dream that she would participat in the horse competition . So she went to her dad to tell him , she loved to take part in the competition. The father a greed and went to the City and rigistered the name of his daughter in the competition , and then returned home. He decided to train his daughter himself. Every day trained his daughter in the town garden. It was hard work for. Both of them ,but the girl learned very quickly. Because she would love to compete for first place and practice every day until the race. During the racr she made all her efforts and won the race ,and won the first place . The father was surprised by his daughter , and was very proud and happy of his daughter. بتمنى انو يعجبك القصة ويكون ماشي الحال هي اول مرة بكتب فيها قصة والله يطول بعمرك يارب ويرزقك ويوفقك بحياتك يا أستاذ 👍👍👍❤❤❤

[@EnglishwithSbeata1]

Nazli Inalo جميل جميل برافو! محتاجين شوية تعديلات وتصبح جميلة ضروري تتابع كورس الكتابة

[@nazliinalo9237]

@@EnglishwithSbeata1 مساء الخير استاذي وشكرا كتير لمجهودك وهاد شي وسام بالنسبة لالي وانا بأمرك راح أتابع كل كورسات القصص👍👍👍❤❤❤❤❤

[@shathaabussa3414]

Sandra a young girl, she was participated in all competitions a horse riding in the school. She love horse riding,and feel happy,comfort. On the day of the days set up school a competition at the city level,she decided to participate because her dream wins in this competition. Where she started practiced a horse riding and hard work intensifying the time of training in a garden her home to be the first at the city level. To make her Dad proud of more and more.

[@asalx7678]

A young girl has golden hair her name is ala. Lives in garden has a hors and loved it.sameday went to city and saw competition advertise to horses.ala participted.and started to hard work and practice for her dream and finally she is win to first 🏆.her dad has proud and happy to ala.

[@asalx7678]

🌹🌹🌹🌹

[@آمنةالأمين-ط5ظ]

Horse racing is an old practice practiced since ancient times Where there was a young girl wanting to participate in the horse race to compete with her colleague in the city inside the garden and when the race began the young girl worked hard until the race ended and completed the joy of winning her father was proud of her victory and success to her friend and wished her all life happy and full of love💖💖💖😍 بتمنى استاذ تشفلي هالقصة هلق لفضيت اكتبها .وبتمنى كون كاتبة شي صح ومستخدمة جميع الكلمات بتشكرك كتييير استاذ وبتمنالك حياة مليئة بالسعاده والرضا 💖💖🌺🌺🌺 وان شاء الله ماعم نقصر معك بالدعاء بالتوفيق والسعاده 💖😍😍😍😍😍😍

[@ilhambechi7735]

One day there was a young girl Named ilham has a horse and she Loved it very much, rid on it Everyday and go to the garden, and this girl dreamed of participating in a horse competition ,suddenly one Day she knew that her city Organizing a horse competition, so She decided to work hard for to win This competition, after days of Practice the day of the competition Came and ilham she was able to win And be the first in the race, this Made her dad proud of her and she Was very happy. Thanks my teacher sbeata all love and espect of you ❤😍

[@enasmelhem1642]

الحمدلله صرت جيدة جدا باللغة الإنجليزية بفضلك استاذ ❤

[@zahersad801]

بفضل الله اولا

[@houriah815]

In small village theire was a young girl, who like the horses so much, she often dream to own one some day.One day her dad offer her a white horse as a birth day present, she was so happy she loved him and treated him as a frind of her she always tolk and played with him. One day when they play in the garden she heard about horses competition in the city she wanted so much to participate but she know that they have a hard work to do if they want to win .for that they practice every day .Finily they can maked and win the thord place and made her dad proud of her. 😇

[@hebaahmed8087]

once upon time there was a young girl. she has a dream. she saw her dad proud of her beacuse she win in ahorse competition .so she sit in her garden and thought a bout her a dream and she wished to be win.she tell her dad and he was happy and he encourage her daughter she first start do practice and hard work for her participate. finally after she hard work she win her city competition and her dad was very happy and proud for her young girl.

[@فاطمهفاطمه-ح3ض7ك]

One day was Yong girl live with her dad in a beautiful City and beautiful house and wonderful garden. She has a horse. She is lovely a horse. She always dream participate in Competition race horse. One day she decided participate in the race. She is practice a hard work. In last the race She is win. She became the first and her dad become proud of her. He is very happy.

[@nadaas6833]

One day, the big city announced a horseback riding competition and Whoever wins will receive a big prize money. A poor young girl saw this announcement in a garden and she excited to participate in this competition. And she thought if she won she would help her father throw this money. So she started to achieve this dream by riding the horse and practice many times for many days. She worked hard to be ready to compete. On the day of the competition, the girl passed all the contestants and won first place and won the prize. She made her dad happy and proud of her. This is short story about real love , when people make achievements for others ❤️

[@مريمطلالناصرحمدانالتوبي]

Once upon a long time ago There was a little girl with a beautiful white horse living in the stable in the garden. The girl heard about a competition in which there was a horse race competition. A girl decided to participate in the competition. To fulfill her dream of winning. So the little girl started working hard, after 5 days of training. The girl went to City, after an interesting race, she fulfilled her dream and won first place. The girl was so happy that she needed to win, and her father was very proud after a hard work of training. And they live in love and bliss.

[@سجادنعيم-ق8و]

On the day a young girl came to her dad who was practicing hard work "I would like to run arace with you " She said. Her dad was love the race on the horse so he agree .A young girl required if I won first ,you will take me to london city for games . Her dad agree too to participate the race .They started competition in a garden. It was a tough competition. The youn girl was awonder ful and she won ,she was very happy in order to go to london city . Her dad was proud of her . "Finally my dream achieved " She said.

[@amal-mb6mz]

The girl and the horse In a beautiful garden a young girl was taking of her horse, to participate in horse racing competition, her dream was to win first place, she worked hard and practiced horseback and take care of it.the race come in the city and her dad attended and the girl won the first place and her dad felt happy and said to her with all love, I am proud of you my daughter 😊

[@amal-mb6mz]

استاذنا الفاضل اتمنى ترد علي اذا كانت قصتي صحيحة او لا

[@mosahama5803]

Once upon a time there was a young girl .She was ride a horse evry day and practice that. She was participate with all the competition and won with it .She was take her horse to the garden always. The city that was lived in it wonderful. Work on her self for was the first and make her dad happy . She want seeing her dad proud with it,so her work was very hard beacuse her dream strikebound on that. Finally she winning now. And her love don't idles. She was love what to do.

[@aliallami1349]

Yesterday I went on horseback to the nearby city to look for my lost dreams with pride للمشاركة فقط امس ذهبت على ظهر حصاني الى المدينة المجاوره ابحث عن أحلامي الضائعة بكل فخر !!

[@feefiotmaan2800]

There was ayoung girl named lillian,living with her father alexander in the city of liverpool in their spacious green garden home,he loved her so much and was proud of her becouse she was ambitious and distinguished. She had adream to participate in the distinct girl competition and actually become her first becouse she competed with love so she overcome hard work with pleasure,which made her father guide her abeautiful horse to express his happiness with her. حقيقة ماحرصت على إنك تلقيها قد ما حرصت على إستخدام الكلمات المساعدة ولا كان ركزت شوي بالمضمون بس لازلت أشوف إنها the best in shaa alah رغم إني كتبتها على عجله

[@مريمعبدالله-ث2ط]

Ayoung gril was happy.she live city with her dad.sheloveto porticate and her adram to win and became first,becaus she wasproud of practic to hard work to addation she love lnterest of agarden ندعوا من الله ان يحفظك يا استاذ اسبيته

[@رفقابالقوارير-ظ2ص]

The white city announced a horse race competition international among the partipants a young girl love horse riding and she decided to participate.When she was a baby girl her dad gaved her a little pony she was very happy, they were running together in the garden all the time,and from then she bacame to practice riding, it's a hard work for her age. She has a dream to win in a competition of this high level.The race was not easy, but the girl impressed everyone and everyone encouraged her.Yes, yes she did it she is the first finaly the dream is real, sure her father would he proud of her. كتابة القصة لم يكن سهلا😥😥 ، ولكن أكيد استفدت كثيييييرا 😊👍

[@tarqran5315]

والله يااستاذي بدك تعذرني 😥 اسا ماني مهيأ لكتابة قصه انكليزيه صعبه لأنو بس انا بدروسك عمتحسن كتير كتير وألف شكر الك ان شاء الله الامتحان الجايه رح عوض ☺

[@arwaalkahli8299]

Once upon a time there was a young girl his ambition and loves horse riding On the day she heard about his race who is better than riding horses she wanted to enter the competition she went every day to the Garden to practice more and more so participate in the competition When the time come for the race she prepared well and went with her dad hard work and perseverance the win was her ally and realize her dream everyone proud of it so participate in the competition 👋🏼💋

[@manelm6767]

Once upon a Time there was a young girl who has a horse and they love each other so much. She used to practise riding her horse in her garden. One day she wanted to participate in a competition wich is a race between diffrent horses in the city. And guess what she and her horse win and they take the first rank in the city .her dad was so happy and she was so proud of her horse because he did a hard work and she finaly has achieved her dream.

[@safaeelfadely8884]

she was a young girl lived with her dad in the city , she don't had a friends , her friend is a horse. one day when she's in the garden of the city,she saw a publicity for a horse competition, she decide to participate for make her dad happy and proud of her. "oh! i have juste 7 days, i should make a hard work for win this competition". She said.she practised every day with love for realize her dream .her dad don't knew, he think she's just enjoying with horse,she wanted to be a surprise for him.the day of a competition, she tell him to accompany her because she have a surprise for him.when he saw his daughter in a horse compitition, he was very surprised and his eyes it was flar. Finally she couldn't to get the first place, she was very sad but her dad was proud of her ."you'r the winr in my eyes and it's a happy day of my life" he said to her .

[@zainabalyassen3138]

There was a young girl she was sitting in the garden of her home and thinking always want to participate in competition ( the first winer horses in the city) . this is was a dream of her dad when she was a littel . now she is happy to start it to be her dad proud she . She started hardwork to reach that dream to make her father pleased with her success♥♥♥

[@ranemramadan324]

الف شكر الك استاذنا شو حلوة عالطريقة حتى لو في اخطاء بس بننبسط واحنا عم نمحي ونصلح ونعيد ونركز كأن عن جد امتحان

[@JyBo]

I do thank you for your efforts🌹. I never wrote a story, but I will try because I love your channel..the story( Merry Bros, a young girl lives with her father in a small house with a garden in a village far from the city 10km.She has a horse and dog. Merry loves her horse and takes care of him, she cleans and feeds him as her job. Merry used to go around the village on her horse, that she considered her best friend, every day. One day she saw an announcement of horses race which was a section of annual event has other shows and sections in the city centre. She decided to participate in the competition that was her dream . She knew many people going to join to the competition and she has to work very hard and practice her horse well every day. On the day of the competition like everyone shared in the race was waiting there, she was pretty excited because it was her first time. The beautiful girl rode her horse and got down the racetrack to find herself among strong horses some of had raced in last years, but at that moment Merry had to focus on her goal and nothing else. She bent over her horse and whispered to him "We can do it, we did what we should. So let's do our best and enjoy it". The referee sounded the whistle to start the competition, the only thing Merry saw was her dream to win that came true when she passed all barriers with highest scores. She was extremely happy and her dad was proud of his beloved daughter. I think all those who climb mountains keep their eyes on the top.)

[@rusulkareem7114]

This young girl was practicing hors riding every day in the garden ahard work . it was with her dad which is her loves her a lot and her dream was to participate it the competition horse riding and her share mass and the competitors were in the city is many but she is win in the center first in the city and was her dad is proud her and is very happy successfully his daughter and the (will come perseverance and effort and achieve objectives)😊🌹

[@salahhosny2017]

A young girl was playing with her horse in the garden. She knew that there is a competition in the city. She went and told her father that she want to be in this competition and that her dream is to win this competition. He told her that dream come true with hard work. He told her that if you participate in the competition you should practice to win. In the competition she won and came the first. She was very happy and her dad told her "i love you and l am very happy and proud that you are my daughter"......You should work hard to be the best

[@dalilayousfu2984]

Once upon time a young girl living and her dad had a guardin she dreaming to have a horse and participate in competition Her dad love your daughter he Buy a horse for your daughter Young girl and her lovely horse practice hard work for participate a competition in your city she win the first she was very happy and her dad was proud

[@whispersoul1874]

يا ريت كانت عندي حماستك يا استاد يا متميز كنت تعلمت أكثر من لغة ولاكن عندنا الدكاء ينقصنا العزيمة والحماس ، ادعوا الله يا استاد ان يرزقك العافية و الهناء وظل متحمس و نشيط و معطاء وسعيد 😘😁

[@rawanabdulrahman6928]

once up on atime there was abig farm in acity where a young girl and her dad lived .the young girl has abeautiful horse she love him and fun with him. she was practice alot because she had adream she wanted to participate in the horse race which done one time every year in agarden of her city .finaly the time of the race was come and the girl participate in this competition and she is win in the first grade she was so happy and her dad was proud of her .the moral of the story we should have ahard work to achieve to our dreams.

[@medmedhen2285]

One day,a young girl was participate in a competition horse racing founded in her city, this competition was a dream for her When this competition finished she was the first, she was happy When she looked at her dad who was proud she remembered that her dad always said to her "with hard work you will win" She said to him I love you my dad that because of you.

[@AichaAicha-fc8df]

Once upon a time, a young girl named Sarah lived in a house with a big garden. When she was 6 years old, her dad offered her a pony. Since then, she has always practiced horse riding, she worked hard to improve what she loved doing. One day, there was a riding competition in the city, she was very happy to participate in it. Finally, Sarah won a first price and made her father proud of her.

[@مريمعبدالسلامسكرحسان]

A girl dream Once upon a time in the small city was a young girl. she has a horse in their garden. In day of days she went to market and saw announcement for competition by horses. She love that participate and run to her dad to told his in that and he felt in happy. He writed her name in the competition. She started hard work in practice ride the horse. In morning she went with her dad to the competition .Finally she win the first and her dad proud in her

[@mss9597]

dream a young girl it was dream a young girl to participate in the city zoo (horse) competition , she always died practincing horseback riding after great hard work , she can to win the competition in the first place , her dad loved her very mush and was happy and proud of his daughter's victory . i love you my teacher Ahmed

[@EnglishwithSbeata1]

لارا سلامي Lara salami bravo! Try harder 5,5%

[@mss9597]

thank you my teacher

[@aborajak1154]

Once upon time in a small city, they were live ayoung girl with her dad in a small house with a garden and a horse, and her dad love her so much. They heard about a competition in the city and everyone can participate in it and the winner will recieve 1000$. The girl was so happy when she hear that because they always had a dream to inter a competition and win. So, she decided to inter the competition. First she practice alot with a very hard work along the day then at the end she won the price and she was very happy and her dad so proud of her Sorry for my bad writting because its my first time i try to write a story hope you will love it thank you my teacher