I like how the Grand priest almost sounds like Chris Griffin
@og_001911 ай бұрын
i thought the grand what ever wished for zeno to forget goku
@iwuchukwuik52978 ай бұрын
You are amazing and you are so cool
@iwuchukwuik52978 ай бұрын
On cool 😮😮❤❤❤❤❤
@gameingislife1538 Жыл бұрын
Bro needs way more recognition for this this is awsome
@colmastro4373 Жыл бұрын
Na man, this entire mess he got names wrong and mixed up characters and their lines. They did that in their own fan manga they wrote, this was a pathetic mess. you obviously weren't listening at all.
@Ara.Ara..11 ай бұрын
You know what I like he actually fucks up talking ...😂 🎉 The most real human interaction are were we fuck up talking ❤ W reader ❤ notight but love .. what can i say Just a DB fan here 🎉
@arfqEditz11 ай бұрын
Good vid bro😊
@Blanked57 Жыл бұрын
Nice grammer and great stories Ty appreciate it
@heritech11 ай бұрын
I'm currently about 25 minutes into this video and the story seems good so far but I want to give you some feedback. Slow down your narration and let the impact of the story settle on the listener. There's been a few parts so far that I feel were impactful to the plot and advancement of the story but you rushed through the script so fast it doesn't have time to settle in and create a sense of connection to the events. Also your character voicing is suffering for this as well, you're not adding any inflections or emotion to the spoken parts. Going a little slower and finding the emotion of the character and infusing that into your delivery will take this to that next level. Dragon Ball is heavily character development driven and losing the soul and uniqueness of each character really lower the engagement. Your creativity and passion in this is wonderful and I look forward to catching more of your videos!
@Jonas_skak11 ай бұрын
banger intro fr
@KamaleobaPreston10 ай бұрын
😮
@bronysaiyan5236 Жыл бұрын
Fr tho. Great stories and stuff but your extreme lack of grammar shows. If you need someone to proof read and correct your grammar just say something or let that new ai correction app do it for you after you write the story
@QLegend97 Жыл бұрын
We all need corrective criticism at times #Respect
@petergriffin4601 Жыл бұрын
Yup dope story but that Grammer got to get fixed.....nothing like the original but thats whats dope cause its a what if
@MoistToucan Жыл бұрын
For some reason, a lot of these what-if youtubers write abysmal as a large amount when it should be abysmal means small
@bronysaiyan5236 Жыл бұрын
@@MoistToucan lol yeah i noticed that
@dilligaf2063 Жыл бұрын
It's all Moro the Devourer or Words fault for the grammar.
@Randomuser-y1c Жыл бұрын
This is addicting keep up the good work
@jakejohnson4239 Жыл бұрын
Meris isn’t that corrupt he is more loyal to Zeno than the grand priest .
@kloyxz11 ай бұрын
The way he put Boros for protecting the vains
@NullTreeIsReal11 ай бұрын
This guy gets the most random stories and i love it
@QuadriShadare11 ай бұрын
I love our videos
@slavchoslavchev2889 Жыл бұрын
PERFECT WE NEED A PART 2 PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
@Bread_pack11 ай бұрын
This is the full movie
@jasonhanke14911 ай бұрын
Bro started the vid with some dragonballish you know
@CAP_NO_SIGMA Жыл бұрын
Day 30 of asking if u can do "what if universe 7 was betrayed and locked in the time chamber" plz pin❤
@Pufferfishjoe Жыл бұрын
19:23 stuttering goes hard
@petrabelitung91637 ай бұрын
Fr
@firegodgoku Жыл бұрын
Wee need the next chapter
@kennethkhriam5127 Жыл бұрын
We need next part bro
@johnhill484 Жыл бұрын
IT WOULD BE NICE TO SEE THE REST OF THIS STORY!!!!!!!
@Dantheman124511 ай бұрын
I know we need a part 2 or something
@endc3043 Жыл бұрын
Should make one of vegeta and frieza locked in a time chamber..lol..
@Thatoneguy-v7w11 ай бұрын
Brother,how did Goku become ozaru when he doesnt have a tail
@Xaninho99911 ай бұрын
would be nice not use characters from other animes
@chesschamp6411 ай бұрын
That was Boros from one ounch man as the guardian of the dimension
@BillyEclipze11 ай бұрын
bro stuttered at 19:20
@oyunerdenesumya6143 Жыл бұрын
Lol i thought whis is name was spelled whisp for some reason
@priyanshumassey7427 Жыл бұрын
It is soo good stories
@BtwSach111 ай бұрын
I don't get it. Didn't grand priest remove zeno's memory about goku?🙃
@Ceajayyss Жыл бұрын
Tbh i think it would be cool if u make what if vados wished that goku was born in her universe
@sabresaiyan4524 Жыл бұрын
Lmao she would use him as a sex toy all his adult life lol
@mikehancho675611 ай бұрын
That would be fireee
@Ceajayyss9 ай бұрын
@@mikehancho6756yeah I know
@Shad-b3j Жыл бұрын
Not gonna lie l MOSTLY see goku stories
@taheerahbethea3045 Жыл бұрын
at 13:35 it siad combot
@Just_A_Red_Guy Жыл бұрын
Literally what if angles were like zamasu
@Johnheath-u7s Жыл бұрын
Did u really put boros in here
@LedionZogaj Жыл бұрын
Hello.......
@Zeno_Tempest11 ай бұрын
Angels can't be in combat if you remember in moro arc
@MobolajiAbiodun Жыл бұрын
😂😅😂😅😅😂😅😂😅😂😂😅😂😅😂😅😂😅😂😅😅😂😂😅😅😂😅😂😅😂😅😂😅😂
@EliHolbrook11 ай бұрын
Ay yes daishinkhan beerus and beerus
@nidadatahan2007 Жыл бұрын
How did zeno remember Goku because daishinkon made a wish to not remember goku
@gameingislife1538 Жыл бұрын
Zeno is stronger than Zalama so he was only slightly affected is my theory
@w2cky400 Жыл бұрын
@@gameingislife1538 No, zeno is not stronger than zalama.
@esabuu1.04611 ай бұрын
@@w2cky400Yes he is! just because Zalama can bring back the universe Zeno erased doesn’t mean he is stronger. Coof coof King Piccolo one shot shenlong for example! The closest thing to surpass omnj king may be Daishikan. Since in the manga is been stated he is the strongest
@CasualGogeta11 ай бұрын
Moro the destroyer of words 💀💀💀
@SUDHARSHANP-s1g Жыл бұрын
part 2 please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@damanithomas1529 Жыл бұрын
More!
@CasualGogeta11 ай бұрын
Daishaken 💀💀💀
@HandleManFace Жыл бұрын
Funny thing is we don't know the true power of Beerus and Gogeta from fusion reborn moive has the title of "The angel born in hell"
@conradsimon3537 Жыл бұрын
First
@stefanocastelli4030 Жыл бұрын
His videos have exactly the same plot
@TownSend-er1lk Жыл бұрын
We need a new chapter
@10l94bucko11 ай бұрын
But bro why always G is a danger to the universe
@Lonewolf_12111 ай бұрын
Why do I see so many stories about goku being locked in the time chamber? Canonically it's not that hard to break out of, goten and trunks could do it
@SassyCheetah-HRATB Жыл бұрын
22:31 BOROS FROM ONE PUNCH MAN!!!!
@Mike_Tyson1985 Жыл бұрын
the energy seal guy is just boros from One Punch Man
@nintenbroendi Жыл бұрын
And the zero universe demons are just other anime characters lol
@summerpanther6969 Жыл бұрын
i like the stories. just a little note. got to stop stumbling while telling the story.
@seans5696 Жыл бұрын
The stuttering not being edited out is crazy 😭
@RandomSkull420 Жыл бұрын
Fr💀
@Voidtanjiro__ Жыл бұрын
Fr☠️
@AjmalMashegu Жыл бұрын
Didn't they erase any memory of goku in zeno sama
@aadityasisodiya855111 ай бұрын
Ssj4 power level can dominate ultra insticnt.💀💀💀💀💀
@mcduddummythic616311 ай бұрын
No it can’t 💀
@donaldbulver5300 Жыл бұрын
What will happen next, the world will never know
@shinchannohara3136 Жыл бұрын
Es k baad ka ep chaiye
@mcsalty69759 ай бұрын
Would be nice if some kind of new content would be made. You personally are killing the idea of locked in a time chamber. What's next, bulma and chi-chi locked in the time chamber? Getting old
@BATMAN-hj2lr Жыл бұрын
WILL NEVER KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!?
@bamstinson6230 Жыл бұрын
smh😅😂
@kakarotto4275 Жыл бұрын
Soon on the channel my bro
@joeyvincent4904 Жыл бұрын
How long does it take to do one of these?
@jaspercromer6772 Жыл бұрын
probably a long time
@jaspercromer6772 Жыл бұрын
@@joeyvincent4904probably a long time
@AméricainBoy-p5q Жыл бұрын
is the best
@CasualGogeta11 ай бұрын
I thought it was daishinkan
@10l94bucko11 ай бұрын
Be real how much u making cuz ur not gona do this for free but I like ur story’s
@Maheswar-r9d Жыл бұрын
Bro's gramer is that if a 3 year old
@B̸l̸e̸s̸s̸i̸n̸g̸t̸o̸o̸ Жыл бұрын
Third
@Sperzz_gt Жыл бұрын
Bro imagine that frieze black said the n word💀
@aadityasisodiya855111 ай бұрын
😂😂😂
@tairblx Жыл бұрын
boros from opm 😰😰😰😰
@vytautaszygelis1106 Жыл бұрын
All I can say is... too much ''amazing power'. 🙄 God....
@CaptainLongbeardTuds11 ай бұрын
Fun fan fiction, but most characters are out of character.
@Chaotheone Жыл бұрын
Why vados sound like that 😂
@Ceajayyss Жыл бұрын
Ik right
@goldcloud7913 Жыл бұрын
that grammar tho
@jessicatighe816 Жыл бұрын
ngl weerus looks goofy as hell
@taheerahbethea3045 Жыл бұрын
said
@megajam5286 Жыл бұрын
The writing sucks but this will suffice until we can watch Dragon Ball Daima
@theWhiteshadow_69 Жыл бұрын
Then why u watching
@kakavireinnocenthia Жыл бұрын
were is the last chapter just End it at this point we are waiting for the end . and the vid was not fun
@tanjirokamado5388 Жыл бұрын
goku acting like vegtea
@mysticalvb11 ай бұрын
you talk funny
@ammielgray7008 Жыл бұрын
Second
@Woowis11 ай бұрын
this dialogue is horrible
@ismailkilani1285 Жыл бұрын
Fourth
@ERNEST-u1g Жыл бұрын
What is the link to the next chapter?
@AppleSauceVR. Жыл бұрын
Until 2024
@atonedsins4617 Жыл бұрын
is this a bot reading or did you skip english class? genuine question.
@f.e.e.e.542711 ай бұрын
Too much stutter
@williamcollins2557 Жыл бұрын
Yeah if you ever bring it out I will
@JujuRAMOS321 Жыл бұрын
Bro nobody doesn't know who is goku and whis what about broly did broly go get the milk??? And goku did not have a tail☠️☠️☠️
@Michaellennon2938 Жыл бұрын
69th coment
@stress5197 Жыл бұрын
Bro needs better writing he can just inf zenkai
@AméricainBoy-p5q Жыл бұрын
Santa😂😂😂😂😂 is the best
@Wtfisaslowbro Жыл бұрын
HEY KID SANTA IS FAKE HIS NAME IS Saint nicholas and he died 10k years ago