What If Naruto Awakens Rinnegan At The Valley Of The End || Part-1 ||

[@jamesboone8520]

fanfic link pls

[@VoltLuke1]

First 10 minutes were fine and then it turned bad quick also for fic writers if you dont know the Japanese term how about use the american term Blood line limit cause even reading it he spells it wrong

[@anchorsaway9500]

What’s the name of this story

[@anthonyhuffman1692]

This is just my personal preference and a critique. I say no reason to bring in original characters to hook up with the main character. When there are in the stories and this isn't just Naruto, there are plenty of unattached girls in the stories. Why do officers feel they need to bring in a wild card? That has never been mentioned in the sto. Make it overly compeludes the personal development of the main character. And a kind of water down. The plot lines already ended stories. Because you're bringing in something that wasn't there before. And it really had nothing to do with the story written about these 2 characters. I know they're not truly original. I've heard of these characters. I just can't place them at the moment, but they're not Naruto. And don't really understand why Philly need to bring in twin girls to hook up with Naruto. Then to feel his own personal preference. In fetish, is it just my opinion again? I'm not asking the story to be changed or criticized in the way. It's going. I just don't understand why so many fan fiction authors do this and to me. They kind of fall into a trap. Because you avoid speed plot lines that would have already developed in the Naruto cannon instead of altering them. And to me with Naruto 80% of the fan fictions of avoid hooking up Naruto with his actual love interest from cannon. Don't give me wrong. There are good stories where hanata and Naruto hook up, but a lot of them that exist or smut. And he hooks up with older women and his own mother and sister. In these stories, more than he hooks up with Hinata. A lot of people. Say on KZbin I don't just read or listen to Stories on KZbin. I actually go to the notepad ano. The story websites Anne really Naruto. Hooking up with hanata doesn't happen nowhere near as much as people. Think if you just go by the sampling that's on KZbin. In a lot. Times they turn for twelve-year-old Shah hanata into a stalker which doesn't make sense. She's 12 years old and she's to make her into something perverted. And Deviant and I miss grant, she's none of these above. It's just true admiration. Is the one true love story from the Naruto stuff that you see developed from the beginning? Sorry for the rant and again this is just my personal preference.