文法は間違っていません。Link word が単調なだけ その反面Kroniiはちゃんとした英作文教育をうけたようです
@FrankToasty3 жыл бұрын
Sort of. Grammar is very tricky even for native English speakers. In this case Fauna didn't make any mistakes but it could be improved. Using another conjunctive adverb would be preferable but there's some grammar rules again regarding that. English is a pain.