It's a good video, but it really lacks a sense of direction. Most edits don't add anything to the video, and you're not giving the characters any context of what's happening on screen, and just pop random edits that don't provide anything. A good way to fix this would be showing something along: First, Nobara's death, then Sukuna taking over Megumi's body, Gojo's loss against Sukuna, Itadori's perfomance against Sukuna, maybe the deaths that happen, Yuta taking over Gojo's body to fight Sukuna, Itadori's domain expansion, Nobara's return, and finally, Sukuna's death.