Kyrol: New Horizon - Chapter 5

[@Sarah_2244]

Really great on the character development here! Personally that’s one of my favorite parts of writing chapters. It adds such a big layer and inside depth of the characters as a whole. Really looking forward to seeing what you cook up next!

[@SkywalkerAcademy-oi4fb]

@@Sarah_2244 I'm so happy you loved the character development. It's honestly my favorite part about writing this so far. Yeah the action and adventure is great but the characters are were the heart of a story is for me.

[@TheSamEffect7]

The narration is a great. Great voices

[@SkywalkerAcademy-oi4fb]

@@TheSamEffect7 thank you so much. Glad you liked it.

[@SimplyREKT]

All caught up with the story now and loved the narration 🔥Keep up the great work as always my brother!

[@SkywalkerAcademy-oi4fb]

@@SimplyREKT glad you love it

[@THELASTGAMER-sc1ky]

Ok, i can see why this chapter was one of your favorites to write. This chapter was amazing, no action just character development and I'm all for it. I get Liam's the mission leader and everything but he was definitely a bit out of line. Man, Dasha really did have a horrible upbringing. I know we learned a bit before but now i see the full picture. Due to Tosa(i think thats how you spell it) she was mentally held back until she met Kyrol and Liam. I swear if Kyrol and Dasha don't get together, I'm gonna riot. Really liked the music from 6:45 - 7:51 and at 8:45. What's the names of the music if you remember? Also is half-breed like a racial slur of something? Keep these coming bro, they're awesome.

[@SkywalkerAcademy-oi4fb]

@@THELASTGAMER-sc1ky I'm glad you liked this chapter. The music you heard at 6:45 is called Surgery by Oakvale of Albion and the other peice is a secret for now. Yep, half-breed can be taken as a racial slur considering she's half human and half Arkanian.