1. You need more stylistic variation between sections. 林冲夜奔 is "themed" - each section expresses a message. e.g. the intro needs more grandeur & the fast part needs more energy. 2. Too stiff. Relax your body and wrists; "open up" more. You look very restrained and your gestures/台风 seem forced and artificial. 3. PRACTISE! The chromatic runs weren't well-prepared! Throughout the piece, you were focusing more on hitting the right notes, rather than immersing yourself MUSICALLY - hence point 1.
@leecaryn21987 жыл бұрын
totally agree with you
@chainleigh30255 жыл бұрын
You are absolutely right. Why don't you use Chinese to leave your advice to her?