La muerte de ti - Dejaune (original composition)

Soooo...first of all, Spanish is not my first or second language, but I really do love it, and I am learning it in my spare time.
I have been really, really stuck lately trying to write, and I keep spilling out just nothingness, so I followed some good old fashioned internet advice and attempted to write a song in a different language.
Now, I am relatively sure that the lyrics are an accurate representation of what I am trying to convey here, but please forgive me if I made a few mistakes. Please let me know in the comments if you actually speak Spanish and picked up on some errors, I would love have some input! Also, I am sorry about my pronunciation, some words are still a bit tough (haha).
Now that that's done, I hope you like this one...
Sending love and warm hugs!
Dee
xox
Here is a rough translation of the lyrics:
When the silence becomes your home
And the music becomes the storm
When you have no song to sing
When what you love most becomes
The death of who you are
The death of you
When the pencil becomes your fear
When my piano doesn’t want to listen.
When what you love most becomes
The death of who you are
The death of you
Music becomes the death of me
Social Links: linktr.ee/Dejaune
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[@adgamj]

Oh Dios adoro esta canción!

[@stephansnow7777]

🎶🎵❤️

[@DidarAnwar]

Absolutely beautiful 🥰😍

[@NM-gk3tv]

Hola Dejauné, Te quedó bella la canción! Dios te bendiga y te proteja siempre. xo

[@bkj3845]

Me gusta esto, es tan conmovedor

[@Hamster8267]

Omg YES QUEEN.

[@Ellojnr]

Don't know what you're saying but your voice is amazing ❤️

🤣 🤣 Thank you, I really appreciate you checking out an original. It means a lot!!

[@faannel2786]

No words….

[@duanejennings3221]

Will that be Spanish words... Or just in general :)