Lego Green Arrow

[@FrostByteFilms]

Nice! This is a big step up from your previous work dude. One thing I’d suggest for next time is to make the music more intense at the ending and add more sfx for the fight. Awesome new entree to the saga! I really like the reverse we did and the irony in the fact that the robinhood figure is protecting the rich. It’s an interesting concept I’d be down to explore further.

[@bAsicJoker]

Thx I rlly appreciate it!

[@legoladstudios3690]

@ninjago lego bruh

[@HenSalSMS]

That's really good man! I can't wait for more!

[@kingkaiden26sempire17]

Amazing job! I am a HUGE fan of green arrow-in fact I was rewatching the series right before I watched this lol. You did such an amazing job telling a great story in such a short time...Inspirational. Really enjoyed the fight scene in this...you used Oliver’s archery skills very well-and true to the character. Wish I could do this kind of stuff on my channel. Well done. Keep up the good work

[@bAsicJoker]

Thx I rlly appreciate it!

[@RealGLP]

A huge step-up man, the editing and sound design especially. Great work!

[@mateoproductions2741]

This is really great keep it up

[@jjackkkkkksonnnn]

FiRsT lol amazing stop motion you deserve much more then 200 subscribers!!

[@ghstudios5087]

Brilliant!! Fantastic storytelling, and fantastic animation! Keep it up!

[@Jadewhitelego]

GREAT WORK! The light flicker needs a little work but i have that prob also so i shouldn't be the one to criticize. I'm excited for ep 2!

[@ToonBros]

The animation is really smooth throughout the whole episode. I like this interaction at 3:33. I think pacing is something that’s needs to be improved. A lot of the scenes went by way too quick. I look forward to see how the rest of the series turns out.

[@imveritasproductions]

The animation is great and I like Oliver's character arc so far. The set design is fantastic. Story seems to be good. All in all great work here, EDIT: This has inspired me to do more set design

[@kypgoldenflier]

Awesome! Great job

[@Adamations_]

Nice job! The story is there and I really like Oliver's character

[@Jason_jdn]

Woah, cant believe how far you've come In everything. From alfred to something like this! This was so good! Cant wait to see the next episode

[@bricksnflicks1125]

Nice job! Im a bit late but this is nice!

[@Webflex5718]

Dude this is awesome!!! The animation was simply amazing!!!! And the story was really good, this was just an epic epic awesome epic film, can’t wait for episode 2

[@MoonbrickStudios]

this is so good man!

[@Nainoaa_]

DAMN GOOD THE CINEMATOGRAPHY IS AMAZING 10/10 GOOD JOB

[@finleytoth5981]

Awesome job 👍

[@jayslegostudio7279]

Nice

[@itsobesplanet]

Yo, this was amazing

[@DynamiczStudios]

This is sick man, I’m making an Flash Series, and a Green Arrow one!

[@allredfilms1593]

Wow! That was awesome! Your animation is really improving. The voice acting wasn't bad either. Some of the music choices were a bit off, but other then that, Fantastic! 8.5/10. Keep up the good work! Oh, and Merry Christmas!

[@bAsicJoker]

Thanks man. Merry Christmas

[@cardboardclips5036]

This is sooo good! But one thing that kinda distracted me from the mood, was the lack of music in some scenes. But it’s still good either way, and I can’t wait for the next episode.

[@Scoutron]

Forgot about the video, but finally watched it. It's superiorly better then most if not all of my films I made. The dialogue to clever especially with the news reporter and the second in command. What I think you need to improve on is music choice. There is little to no music and considering this is 6 minutes long I feel you need to spice up the film with some music and sound effects. Although the music you did choose was fantastic!

[@imveritasproductions]

Just wanted to say, thanks to this brickfilm im finally making a dc series. Its for a more obscure character but I wanted to say thanks for the inspiration

[@bAsicJoker]

Thanks! It means a lot that this gave you inspiration

[@imveritasproductions]

Np. I thought it was cool you did a brickfilm of a obscure dc character. (Green arrow is kind of obscure if you dont count the show). So I decided to start working on a lego static shock series. Btw when is episode 2 coming out?

[@bAsicJoker]

@@imveritasproductions Agreed, also idk when Episode 2 is coming out yet

[@imveritasproductions]

Ok. Just finished filming static and the inspiration helped. Its my most cinematic brickfilm yet.

[@bAsicJoker]

@@imveritasproductions great to hear 😊

[@RoboFin]

Epic +1 sub

[@leolizard3152]

I forgot I made jazz type music for this lol

[@Superlegomatt240]

Splendid work ma man. Can’t wait for the next episode.

[@Jason_jdn]

2:23 lmao, wasp's voice cracked

[@waspstudios.]

shut up you bully

[@Scoutron]

@@waspstudios. haha your voice craked

[@thycrazylegoman]

It's Here!

[@Scoutron]

I already know this will bring lots of traction do your channel, once I finish watching it I'll give a review.

[@probablyjosh]

I really think this a super interesting story you’re working with here. There’s so much room to make this a super profound series. This episode was a huge step in the right direction for you but I feel like there’s definitely somethings you could improve on. The animation is good but I’d try to make the editing better. There’s some awkward pauses between lines and some lines are just delivered poorly by the cast. The episode ends pretty abruptly but despite that I really think you have something to work with here and I’m eager to see how this show pans out.

[@joshreed16]

Been waiting a month for this let’s go

[@legoladstudios3690]

Agghhhh sorry I'm late. I didn't get a notification for some reason

[@bAsicJoker]

Lol it’s fine

[@justinlegoproductions8449]

Finally it's here 🙂

[@qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm428]

This is good! Does take place in like the 60s?

[@bAsicJoker]

Thanks and Yeah, most of the dcbs takes place In the 60s

[@Mark-yd8qc]

This was awesome. Way better than trash israel animations. I mean unlike him your stories are good and so is the animation

[@bAsicJoker]

Thanks but I don’t wanna be involved between you and Israel’s drama

[@Mark-yd8qc]

Its kind of one sided. Israel doesn't know me irl. I dont him either. But I dislike him. I think ive been going too far though. Im done trolling him. Hope you have a good day

[@Mark-yd8qc]

@@bAsicJoker But basically I hate him. But he doesnt seem to mind the hate for some reason! Its weird. He should be crying!

[@Jimbo893]

So this was pretty good. You have some good shots and cinematography as well as animation. Although, I feel like the animation was lacking weight and momentum, particularly in the fight scenes. Some background props moved around during animation so I recommend masking them or securing them with tac or clay. The voice acting was pretty good; whoever VAed Oliver's father was pretty bad ngl. I'd say the editing is the weakest part. There weren't enough sfx, music didn't fit the mood, ended too abruptly, or wasn't there at all. It could also be confusing to those who didn't know the story going in, especially with how you edited the flashbacks which feel kinda pointless. The ending was way too abrupt imo as well. I'd give it a 6.5-7/10. It's not the greatest, but the good thing is you're improving.

[@bAsicJoker]

Thanks for the feedback!

[@Jimbo893]

Np