Let's Fix the Deadly Six! (Sonic Lost World Rewritten)

I was inspired by a comment on the last Zeti video, so I tried something new!
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[@Garrulous64]

Let's Fix Infinite (Sonic Forces Rewritten): kzbin.info/www/bejne/eqeygIOhrpqJq68 Rewritten Games Playlist: kzbin.info/aero/PLAQMNgY15mjBfPNW1RHOHyhyn-C4NefCB

[@waifu_png_pl6854]

you are so good at this

[@jeffbezos1181]

Garrulous64 Could you possibly be able to re-write the villains in 06, it sounds like a challenge but they had cool ideas but just weren’t used right because, you know, Sonic 06

[@TheIllusiveMan11]

Do with Sonic '06. If you can! *Evil laugh*

[@e.ggrollg.uacamole4156]

@@TheIllusiveMan11 I would love to see how he can fix Silver and Mephilis especially how Silver and Blaze know eachother.

[@TheIllusiveMan11]

@@e.ggrollg.uacamole4156 Agreed, after that he can do Shadow the Hedgehog. If he manages to succeed in improving them both, then he deserves a Nobel prize in Literature!

[@redviolet5158]

"Not sure if I'm creative enough to do that" *_Fixes the story and makes it way better_* Yeah sure buddy.

[@panicsquad3023]

When people say they are bad at art and make a masterpiece.

[@sylviannamckendry6413]

@@panicsquad3023 "ohhh my art is really baddd" "here's a 10-minute sketch i didd" *goddamn mona lisa*

[@panicsquad3023]

@@sylviannamckendry6413 exactly

[@greenstarlover1]

Those are artists for you (And I know this from experience).

[@AntiVillain26845]

To quote one Star Wars Legends character, "Better [too modest] than too vainglorious."

[@Magekhight]

I actually really like this script. You could really see Zavok, a calm and manipulative leader turn into a bloodthirsty monster, slowly pushing away his own family.

[@Fighter_Builder]

My thoughts exactly. I would totally try to mod this story in if I had the knowledge, 3D animation skill, and voice acting skill to do so. (Though I could probably do okay Sonic and Zavok voices, but idk about the other characters)

[@Fighter_Builder]

Also, one thing I really do like about this script is that it gives Zavok a _reason_ to be a recurring villain in the first place. In his eyes, Sonic cost him *everything* he had, and he is just itching to finally get his revenge.

[@lpfan4491]

@@Fighter_Builder plus he realisticly survived to return in team sonic racing.in lost world,he kinda disappeared,so i guess we can call him dead lol

[@thebiolibrary5572]

Jaden Merced at first, he just thinks of Sonic as an easy target, but he goes to extreme measures just to prove he isn’t able to be beaten by a hedgehog.

[@treemeatthealmighty]

' \ '

[@100Darkspine]

You actually made the ending have a bit of emotional impact. Zavok, not valuing the family that was around him, ended up destroying it and having less than the nothing he thought he had.

[@Jakeneutron]

God I love this plot waayyyy better than then original. Feels more like a real story with arcs compared to some cutscenes loosely connecting levels that shows a hint of that. Zavok is such a cooler villain in this too, it feels like it’s been pretty rare to have a villain with this much character detail in most of the sonic games.

[@icel8828]

That’s probably because eggmans the villain in most games. So there’s not as much chance for a villain to have a good character

[@jordanzanerose81]

Frfr

[@oddgaun5790]

"I may not need anyone's help to stop you, but I wasn't about to forego the pleasure of seeing that broken look on your face when you realize what I did to your friend. I don't even care if he puts up a fight for you. I'll take pleasure in watching you have to go through him to get to me." Oh for god sake someone please hire this dude... I can't believe how good that line is!

[@Randomguy-sn1yz]

The line is so cold it makes popsicles, I love it!

[@redpineapplee700]

Woah, I could see this line coming from a villain in series I read- (ofc changing some pronouns but still.)

[@shockwavespider3942]

Chilling

[@chadpeterson5698]

This line should be used to headline this version of Zavok’s Pure Evil page

[@JulyTheNeon]

Ok this is now cannon to me. Nobody else can say otherwise.

[@chocov1233]

Neon Boy Best headcannon ever.

[@housinengi9512]

dont blame you for a long time i considered the comics cannon

[@youngelink4200]

otherwise.

[@hemIocked]

Canon with one n is the truth or something confirmed to be true. Cannon with two n's is a deadly siege weapon.

[@youngelink4200]

@@hemIocked i did not notice so now someone has to do this. www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=https%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FRSMglha.png&imgrefurl=https%3A%2F%2Fimgur.com%2Fgallery%2FRSMglha&docid=UMeicGmWt8Yt5M&tbnid=lwLNZS4ds_fGjM%3A&vet=10ahUKEwiPoLOPsaPgAhXk7YMKHfEpBr4QMwhBKAEwAQ..i&w=900&h=972&safe=active&bih=653&biw=1366&q=literal%20headcanon&ved=0ahUKEwiPoLOPsaPgAhXk7YMKHfEpBr4QMwhBKAEwAQ&iact=mrc&uact=8

[@mushroomdude123]

I loved this. These characters actually feel like they have _purpose,_ which they were sorely lacking before. Zavok really should have beenthe final boss considering how little impact Eggman had on the conflict.

[@jold3174]

(SORRY BEFORE HAND THIS WAS ALL DONE ON MY PHONE SO IT WILL HAVE MISTAKES SORRY) In my opinion infinite needs to be complety rewritten as a character so this might be fanficish but who cares The real Phantom Ruby need to change, have it overwrite reality not just illusions, but still keep the idea that people created from it when not at full power do not have heart or soul, but creations at full power do have both heart ans soul plus they can feel love joy ect (this will tie in with the new back story) I forgot that the phantom ruby copys do not exist in the world at all. We can be show this by after beating him after a fight we damage his mask but though a lot of stress and power it is fixed and is still fixed even when He is standing in front of sonic without any glow from the Ruby So infinite's backstory is terrible he need a proper goal and emotions so here we go lets start with his reason for helping Eggman, he does not like to help Eggman but he helps in order to collect the 7 Chaos Emeralds the reason for this is simple. he lost his family to a shockwave (sonic's sonic boom) so he will help Eggy in order to later use the Phantom Ruby at full power with the Emeraleds for that with all 7 he no longer need Eggman to power the Ruby. With the Emeralds and the Ruby he cane recreate his family (or ANYTHING else) for that his only goal is to be with his love ones and undo all the damage caused by Eggman and himself He wears the mask with the voice changer because it is a mask he is using it to hid his face so that no one will reconiz him after his goal is done and goes to live with his family in a normal home Now let me talk about when sonic tell Infinite when and wear he first when sonic boom mach 1.1 he snaps and loses it almost to the brink of insanity he is quite until you hear laughter first near silent than louder and louder until everyone is forzen in fear even Sonic. infinite than looks up to sonic and with out even moving flouts up and back and state "The hero will not kill the Villion who has cauesd millions of death alone The hero losses nothing not even a single friend or smile The hero born with with near endless power The hero without care or worry Yet will cause so much pain and destruction all in the name of freedom" BUT I the "bad guy" Who sacrifed everything Losses it all my home my soul my heart Born without gifts in a wasteland Fought the entire world and won For the smallest scrap of hope to right not only my wrong but everyone wrongs even yours For peace without pain or suffering For than everyone will have hope joy For my love my family MY WIFE MY DAUGHTER Where were you for them?"

[@babyninja1800]

@@jold3174 damn thats a good story

[@ProfessorHeavy1]

Zavok being alone at the end can be a really good way to reflect Sonic being alone when everyone was taken from him.

[@Shaze64]

As someone who really genuinely likes the deadly six, and lost world as a whole: This is actually much better

[@Garrulous64]

I'm honored to hear you say that!

[@Shaze64]

@@Garrulous64 I'd love to see you do the same thing with Forces, and make Infinite have a much larger role, and not be so... well... weak. And again. I like Infinite lol

[@lpfan4491]

I'M NOT WEAK

[@dededeletethis9940]

*_I'M nOT wEak_* *_i'M NoT WeaK_* *_I'm nOt weAK_*

[@bowie.1832]

I thought people who liked Sonic Lost World were just a myth... like Big Foot.

[@RidersDX]

I liked this a lot cause it didn't seem desperate to add more depth to Zavok, you were just concerned with giving the right amount that would elevate the story. Now why is it so hard for Sega to do the same? :D

[@Garrulous64]

Probably because their writers really like the Baldy McNosehair line and that's the overall tone of most of their stories :P And thanks dude!

[@jasonfleming1020]

How about you can try rewriting Infinite.

[@d.danger4335]

RidersDX I agree plus it could’ve made look like a non-red bowser clone

[@peteynutt4104]

Cause they didn't care to start with.

[@superplaceholder6537]

This game was directed by the writters of Happy Tree Friends, so what did you expect? I'm actually surprised there was no gore.

[@ultrafox4005]

I always thought the The Deadly Six was representing the Seven Deadly Sins. Zavok (Wrath)- The most aggressive and hotheaded of the group. Tends to be the most confrontational and easiest to anger. Zomom (Gluttony)- The slowest and fattest of the group. Constantly associating others to food. Zazz (Envy And Greed)- Being typically the weakest he has a hunger for power and is constantly tired of being looked down on. Zeena (Lust)- Being the only girl, she typically seen as the prettiest of the group and she uses her looks to her advantage by manipulating others. Zor (Sloth)- He’s the most pessimistic of the group and doesn’t want to do work knowing that his work usually goes to waste. Zik (Pride)- The original founder of Zeti and typically the calmest. He’s holds the honor of Zeti above all else and is usually the glue keeping the team together.

[@liamphibia]

So Zazz is kind of like Starscream from Transformers...

[@NIGHTBLOODUSAGI]

tbh i thought that their name was just a pun on it and thought only a few of them were actually based off the sins

[@ghhn4505]

Honestly this makes them slightly more interesting at least. I accept this headcanon.

[@taytoflame2314]

That'd be interesting.

[@elisibethjames7488]

I like how you changed the moral from a really unclear “Listen To Your Friends because Occasionally They Know What They’re Talking About” into a very clear “Take Care of those you Care About” (I only found the first moral of the story after a month or so of staring off into space during my free time. That’s how unclear it was. I still don’t know for certain that’s what I was intended to take away from that storyline.)

[@SpartanS3M]

Please for the love of god do this with infinite and sonic forces, this is sooooo good and i loved how you rebooted lost world

[@supra0026]

I would definitely watch that

[@bedazzlebub967]

I think I got a few ideas -make infinite have a family that he just can’t remember due to eggmans brainwashing -Actually show sonic being tortured and make his character more serious (he’d still crack jokes) -ORIGINAL LEVELS THAT ARENT GREEN HILL OR CHEMICAL PLANT -Make classic sonic a and tails come back, so classic sonic could have dialogue and basically be a fill-in of standard sonic -Make eggmans metropolitan base a ruse, and give him a giant base in the null zone where we find out more about eggmans plans (something fucked up, considering the rest of the tones I’ve got going on) -Make chaos come back and maybe other characters for villains (fang is re-introduced into cannon maybe?)

[@shupasopni]

@@bedazzlebub967 Eggman brainwashing Infinite removes one of the best things about him. He is the only non robotic thing that willing serves Eggman in game canon and he does this because he was already messed up to begin with.

[@crackheadspeedway6788]

YES! please do infinite

[@foreverokami16]

@@bedazzlebub967 More like actually make sonic being tortured actually happen since it was just something added in the english version for some reason.

[@callumsparrow4379]

This is how I would fix The Deadly Six: 1. Take The Deadly Six. 2. Put them in oven. 3. ??? 4. Profit.

[@TechBlade9000]

I get it

[@lordkaijux5262]

@@daleanmonster4218 Ow...

[@Camphreneas]

Callum Sparrow 3. *_EAT THEIR CURSED BLACK HEARTS_*

[@seldomstudios6351]

i like step 3

[@Temzy]

Thats how Callum Sparrow works

[@h2flowz]

I loved how you improved the Deadly Six and Zavok himself! It gives the group purpose and their own individual personalities outside of their cookie cutter personalities; not only that, it shows how much of a threat Zavok would be if more thought was put into the Deadly Six. I would prefer Lost World to be like this but the end result is the end result. I would love for you to tackle Infinite and link his inferiority complex to his lust for power. Great video all around!

[@itachisusanoo3689]

Totally agree on infinite!! Pleaaaaase!!

[@gamingv1nce7]

I think your suggestion for infinite is better then mine.

[@White_Recluse]

I’m mad now, how did Sega not come up with this?? You made me actually like the concept of these characters, and gave them some depth and purpose in the game

[@franciscolantigua577]

This is way better than the original story

[@Sonic12Lexi]

Ken Pontac and Warren Graff should have played The Sonic Games before.

[@jeremiahevans6403]

What story

[@kieranstark7213]

The people that defend the story of Sonic Lost World (all the haters of AntDude’s review of ALW like Timothy Roehm) are the hypocritical haters.

[@GMast_]

I am clapping and smiling so much... You have done the unthinkable.. You have my thanks

[@shockwavespider3942]

Yay

[@numbug1234]

Plus having Zavok as the first boss also displays how much of an impact the machine would have, since it goes from the tough leader of the group unceremoniously being taken out to becoming final boss material

[@chadpeterson5698]

I have news, this version of Zavok you made is actually being proposed for the Pure Evil wiki which I honestly find to be a massive accomplishment, it means that your fan made content was good enough to be seen as worth putting on an official wiki platform, and who knows, maybe Mephiles, Eggman, and Infinite are the next characters that you modified that will get a turn And your Mephiles was also approved as Pure Evil.

[@GANONdork123]

The story you came up with is so much better than the stories of any of the last 4 Modern Sonic games. Like, if the stories were more like this, I probably wouldn't have as much problem with the current writing staff.

[@Garrulous64]

Thanks dude! I had no idea how people were going to respond to this so i'm glad people are finding some enjoyment here!

[@BroeyBroe]

Completely agree. The new writers are fucking horrible.

[@sonicrunn3r895]

I mean, Unleashed's story was pretty good in my opinion

[@BroeyBroe]

@@sonicrunn3r895 well that's cause unleashed story wasn't written by pontac and graff lmao 😂. I will agree saying it has a good story though, definitely one of the most consistent sonic stories with little plot holes.

[@spencercox7931]

I'm only a few minutes in, and already the characters are an improvement

[@LachieLN]

I’m just gonna pretend this is how Zavok is

[@theblizzard8735]

Imma pretend all of them are like this

[@Wildcatt1999]

Same here

[@chaoguardian8971]

This was an excellent rewrite of the Deadly Six, I love that Zavok has more of a presence and how he's way more of a threat than he was before, if Zavok was like this I wouldn't even mind if he popped up as side or main villain in future games.

[@ChazetheChat]

Jesus man, I never thought I'd like the Deadly Six. Wish this was what we really got!

[@fuzzie6299]

someone make a comic out of this

[@dnacious238]

Why didn’t sega come up with this. It’s 10 times better than what they presented

[@MegaTrafficCone]

This is legitimately impressive man! Talk about putting money where your mouth is regarding character development. Seems like Sega could have benefitted with you in the writing room. More content like this, please!

[@Garrulous64]

Thanks Jack! Heck, i thought people were gonna hate this, i'm so glad i'm getting so much positive feedback!

[@AuthorUndertheVoid]

I think what I would change about the Sonic, Tails, and Eggman cutscenes is have Tails not come across as whiny. Like have Sonic and Tails acknowledge that they've worked with Eggman in the past, but also be a bit weary of him as well since he can be a bit unpredictable at times.

[@choosbehguy]

I wish I had a time machine so I could go back to Lost World's development and tell SEGA this masterpiece!

[@hannahpense9973]

I didn't like the conflict between Tails and Sonic myself, it felt forced to me. But I could forgive it if the Deadly Six were written this way. I was especially annoyed with Zeena's character -- or lack thereof (seriously, I thought in this century of strong female characters that we were past this trope). I like that while you didn't detract too much from their original personalities, you still underscored them with personal motivations and defined where they all fit as a group. You also found ways to push them to their limits, especially Zavok, to truly test how far they would go in their goal for world destruction. I feel like the conflict between Sonic and Tails as it was could work if Tails did actually fight Sonic a little at the end, at least until Sonic apologized to his face for being too impulsive and reckless. Great job on the rewrite, dude! You're the reason why Sega should hire the fans to write their games!

[@michaellennerman7844]

I love the idea that Zavok accompanied the boss fights because he doesn't trust any of them to do it right except for Zik where he joined in to protect him. A 3 dimensional character can really make or break a few and the changes you made to lost world here would have made the game incredibly fun and more interesting. They should hire you or even fans to help create the stories for modern sonic games.

[@megasoniczx6960]

Already personally liked Zavok, but damn this so so much better for all of them.

[@zylorixx810]

Same

[@LunaAlex64]

You wrote a better story for a Sonic game in half an hour than Pontac & Graff have in a decade

[@Garrulous64]

Eyyy thanks man! Means a lot coming from you with all those awesome re-writes you've shown me!

[@LunaAlex64]

@@Garrulous64 Heck yeah, and thank you so much too dude!!

[@melonslice6566]

I would like to see this kind of video for multiple series/ other games. You should call this series games/ characters rewritten

[@Garrulous64]

I'll think about that!

[@RyanDaly]

Garrulous64 Sonic 06 and Sonic Forces rewritten please

[@Spacejazz6]

You should make fixing characters a series, you clearly have the writing skills and the creativity to do so

[@galacticglitchTV]

Let's fix sonic forces and after this you really were good no joke I believe in you spisificly fix infinite

[@tycoonckoscap1576]

Agreed

[@bluewind4329]

Umm.... I started a fire didn't I? 😅

[@bladewolfdarknight1605]

They should all come from different timelines where they won. Shadow from the Dark Story finale of Sonic Adventure 2 or even Shadow The Hedgehog, Metal Sonic from the Bad Future of Sonic CD, where he did beat Sonic in the race, Zavok from a bad ending of Lost World, and Chaos before the events of Sonic Adventure, in the period of time related to Pacahamac and Tikal, making sure that Tikal herself couldn't get in the way, somehow.

[@Mario60bore]

Well read the Japanese script

[@lpfan4491]

i can really imagine shadow working for them just to screw them up in a vital situration because he was always a good guy

[@milkyfugitive14]

Thank you for my new canon 🙏

[@averagerobloxenjoyer6783]

IF ONLY THE STORY WAS THIS GOOD! Wonderful job rewriting it, dude! Makes me really wish Lost World was like this. The whole tense moment between Zavok and Zick made me think of that one scene between Shifu and Tai Lung, haha! Your rewrites are always more interesting~

[@azuredragon8388]

Now this is how you write a Sonic storyline! Well done! Think you could do the same with Sonic Forces and Infinite? I just want that damn Phantom Ruby to warp reality instead of making “real illusions” as Tails describes it as. I know Forces is a fan service-y mess so if it’s too much, I’d just focus on Infinite, but yeah I’d like to hear your thoughts

[@shupasopni]

I like that his power is illusions. It fits considering he's actually just a bully that uses a power that isn't his to compensate for not being able to beat Shadow.

[@azuredragon8388]

shupasopni it’s not so much whether or not that his power is illusions as much as it is why it wasn’t clearly explained

[@lpfan4491]

the problem is that its just not interessting and zavok speaks,so the rules arent even consistant.a good story needs to have a ground to stand on

[@thebiolibrary5572]

Robert Wimms Infinite’s only motivation is the world was dead, and he’s such a baby he had a tantrum about being insulted by Shadow just calling him weak.

[@lpfan4491]

infinite:my team is dead.but who cares? my motivation is that that guy called me weak"

[@funnyman8161]

This is REALLY good yo. You've really improved this story a whole bunch. And subsequently given new material to draw.

[@Garrulous64]

Please let me know if you do draw anything from this! Tag me on twitter, instagram, wherever!

[@funnyman8161]

@@Garrulous64 We do occupy the same discord server after all. The Sonic Heroes 2 one

[@DonathanConathan]

"YOU'RE GOING HOME IN A BOX" BEST LINE IN THE GAME

[@Ryboflavin]

Gosh dang man, you really did fix the six. Loved your ideas. Only thing I’d change is towards the end. I think an actual fight with Tails would really up the ante. The fight could end with Sonic successfully snapping Tails out of it, and the story proceeds as normal.

[@Garrulous64]

Thanks man! Yeah I didn't want to mess around with that too much since I already shook up the bosses, but it was also because I wanted to give Zavok that extra little "you failed AGAIN" push right when he clearly didn't need anything else to be angry about.

[@Ryboflavin]

Ah, that's a good point.

[@galacticglitchTV]

Would love a tails fight.... But still the writers Wish they were This good

[@hwtvi3466]

I agree! Better, after the fight, Zavok would tell Tails to destroy Sonic after overpowering him, and then he does the big "Never!", and shoots back at him. This would then be the final straw for Zavok, pushing his insanity from 100% to 110%!

[@hwtvi3466]

As one of the few people who genuinely liked the Deadly Six, especially Zavok, I must say thank you. You gave them the writing they needed to flesh them out more. Someone needs to write a fanfiction off of this.

[@hwtvi3466]

Also, your story plays perfectly into Team Sonic Racing, as it explains why Zavok no longer has any ties with the Deadly Six!

[@teesi2920]

Woah, I saw a Sonic Forces Re-write video a while ago, and I thought it was gonna be that same guy (despite this one actually being in my sub feed ;oP) I was pleasantly surprised, since your voice is a whole heckuva lot more enjoyable to listen to for longer amounts of time

[@Garrulous64]

Thank you!

[@99sonicrocks]

You know, you really gave it that nice slightly dark feel that early Modern Sonic games had. You even had it to where Eggman once again puts aside his hatred of Sonic to show his slight good side. Overall a nice change to the story and the Deadly Six, that has actual character development!

[@HistoryMonarch1999]

i love how you just build off their genereic prosperity or trope and add depth to it. It could be a good advice for writing characters, starting with very generic or general traits and build from there.

[@shockwavespider3942]

Why don’t more franchises do that more often

[@Terumimi]

Honestly, this is actually great! I'd love to see you do more things like this, like one for Forces or Secret Rings!

[@kieranstark7213]

And Sonic Chronicles!!! And Sonic Free Riders!!!! And Sonic '06!!! And more blatantly disappointing Sonic games!!!!

[@rim6695]

The real deadly six 1. T-series 2.fortnite 3.Big chungus 4.people who stretch there videos to 10 minuets for more money 5.KZbin rewind 6.Demonitisation

[@galacticglitchTV]

T-series: oh shit he is onto us😳

[@galacticglitchTV]

BTW replace Ugandan knuckles with big chungus it just seems more fitting

[@akumademon2879]

I read this as actual descriptions of the deadly six for a minute and hffgfhg

[@becdoesyoutube]

My real Deadly Six: 1. Logan Paul 2. KZbin Rewind 3. Article 13 4. Chris Chan 5. Ken Penders 6. Barney the Dinosaur

[@HarbingerYT]

I'd've added a part where you fight Tails because he really wants Zavok to believe that the Roboticization worked. At the end, Tails overpowers Sonic and is given orders to destroy him. This is when he shouts "NEVER!" and blasts him.

[@KaylinMajestic]

Deadly Fix

[@ditto6533]

Haven't even finished watching the video, and yet the character personalities you described are more memorable than the ones in the actual game lol. Keep up the good work.

[@DaNintendude]

I feel like Tails still needs work... The fact that he was never brainwashed always felt like so much of a cop-out. However, your additions to the story revolving that plot point make it work a whole lot better. Your changes with the final stretch and ending were the parts I liked the most. Zavok going completely insane, and Zazz, the craziest of all the Zeti, turning away from him... That was pretty good. I also enjoy how you removed the eggman final boss. It made no sense for him to survive and then immediately just turn his back on Sonic and fight him. Despite Zavok taking the spotlight in your version, it actually really helps characterize the other Zeti, and I especially love what you did with them.

[@Garrulous64]

Thanks man! I'm glad it came across like I envisioned it!

[@rainpooper7088]

Da Nintendude A guy named MeltingMan made an alternate ending to Lost World where Tails is an actual boss and Eggman helps remove the roboticized parts in the end.

[@jackalkin6757]

@@Garrulous64 It makes me wonder... how did Eggman come back? Shouldn't he have stayed in the realm with no time, as of generations' post-credit scene?

[@Garrulous64]

In my personal canon, Eggman never gets trapped there. My rewrites are all canon to eachother, so I don't need to worry about that bit.

[@helpcryinggato5987]

YOOOO I love the deadly six, listening to your version this story got me so excited lol, I love it! It's so much better than what we got in the game ahaha

[@sherlockhomeless4928]

This is actually what I wanted from them. Zavok being the delusional leader while the others are being less vocal towards him

[@comicfan1324]

Character development: I’d like it!

[@StarBird06]

Huh. This sounds interesting.

[@Yellowsander]

Missed opportunity to call this "The Deadly Fixed"

[@webbers2236]

I love this, I'm one of the few people who actually like the six, it's more design wise and I do wish that they were written better, it's nice seeing the six actually having a good written story and giving characters a reason to act the way they do, like Zor being depressed all the time

[@randomguyontheinternet3483]

Garolous, i think you should just re tell all of the games after unleashed! I loved this!

[@protol5683]

I REALLY love what you did here, but if you ever do it again may I suggest doing it a bit... slower? You were talking so quick at points it got a little har to keep up.

[@Garrulous64]

I'll keep that in mind, though I've come to enjoy the quick delivery. I feel like it might just be kind of my style. Are there any specific parts you can point out that you had that problem with? I'll look into making it easier to understand for next time.

[@fawkesthefox912]

This rewrite makes a lot more sense. It probably would've saved the game if it was that good! -or not- Mind if I use elements of this rewrite in a comic adaptation of the canon I'm working on? I'll be absolutely sure to give credit!

[@Garrulous64]

Sure. Let me know when you post it too!

[@irregular_breadstick]

I'd love to see a comic based off this. I hope you finish it.

[@Fighter_Builder]

I'd totally read that!

[@nicholasali3566]

Fawful117 Chortles I’d read that.

[@akumademon2879]

You absolutely have to post that! I'd love to read it

[@turbobist2889]

Heres some extra changes: -Remove the scene where Tails acts like a dickhead. -Have Robo Tails be a boss fight featuring an epic orchestrated remix of the boss theme from Sonic 2. It starts off in a 2D section where Tails shoots bullets at you and tries to spin attack you, and he can charge at you when he turns his cannon into a spike ball. After you deal enough hits, he uses the powers of the Wisps and drills the floor to break it and Sonic falls on a 3d arena where Tails tries to use many wisp related attacks. He can summon asteroids to attack Sonic, he can use eagles to home in on the hedgehog, he can drill into the ground and use rockets to come out and attack, until he comes out with a powerful dig out, he can charge up a laser to attack the blue blur or move at light speed, he can launch fire blasts to explode Sonic or he could burn him, he could use the hover power as telekenis so that he can throw junk at him, he could try to impale the hedgehog with spikes, and he could use frenzys to try to eat Sonic. However, it is possible to counter some attacks(Asteroid: Some can be bounced back. Eagle: Ride it and aim for Tails as he tries to shoot you down. Drill and Rocket: Try to hit certain parts of the ground to get Tails out or to get the rockets to hit him which gets him out. Burst: Try to lure one fire blast to a glowing spot so that it could spawn a rock that you could send to Tails. Hover: Lock on the junk so that you could go to him and hit him. Frenzy: Lure one frenzy to another so that they get knocked out and you send one to Tails. Others: you have to wait for him to lower down) and have him be grounded and a bit weak, so you have to try to hit him a couple more times. After you beat him, there is a cutscene where he is about to charge his cannon, but he regains his concience and shoots Zavok. -His robo form is permanent. I know people will be angry at this, but it would be cool.

[@hannahhudgin9219]

good ideas yours is canon in my eyes.

[@platypaul1676]

This was amazing, you actually managed to make the story and characters interesting

[@MagcargoMan]

I'm not a Sonic fan and the only Sonic game that I've played (properly) is Generations, but I saw this video in my recommended and decided to give it watch and I have to say... this is very well done! I'm not a fan of ensemble villains since they usually tend to be one-note and have gimmicks rather than personalities but you really managed to take a rather generic villain group and fleshed (most of) them out. Zavok and Zik especially feel like actual characters now, and I really like how you made Zik consider the group his family and feel disheartened by Zavok's actions. He may be evil, but by making him care about the others it really makes him have so much more dimension, instead of being a simple "wise master" stereotype. It makes him more compelling. You've shown here just how easy it is to give a character even the slightest of depth, and yet giving characters any real substance seems to be the beyond the capabilities of many game devs these days.

[@amalga-ghost3553]

To be honest you've made the whole story better, and outs a bit more story behind the antagonists (and definitely the main antagonist). It's really cool

[@mikester8171]

I like this. How would rewrite Forces’ story?

[@plushxtreme9381]

Loved this. Just wish Zeena had A BIT more to do in this version of the story, but that would be it

[@k.k3859]

This is actually a really good script, it allows the characters to have a meaning in the game, especially Zavok since you don't get to know much about him during the game and cutscenes. I was hoping to know more about Zavok when I had first started playing the game, so I totally agree with your thinking!

[@Jesterclown17]

I think you just redeemed Sonic Lost World in my eyes. I seriously would love to see these ideas evolve into a fan comic or something.

[@JezElectro13]

overall, quite good but here's ideas for personalities for Zeti expanded even more. Zomon: he looks and sounds dumb, but he's actually very smart. Origin of idea: first of all, he outsmarted Sonic's "word" of advice (those WERE 3 words) and second of all, why not. Zeena: she would talk stuff like wondering if Eggman, as a Human, tastes good, or should she pick Sonic or Tails for her new scarf. she would also be implied to feel something for Zavok until Zavok is gone from being himself. Origin: literally none. Zor: you've expanded him enough, but i would add that he actually sees purpose in honest life instead of Deadly Six member, and if he survived, he would help Sonic. Origin: none but he is Most forgettable so making him into an Ally later would maybe make him more memorable. Zik: you've expanded him enough, but maybe he would look for new students after Zavok's lost. Zazz: add signs of him being professional psychopath and make him stronger then he looks and it's enough. Zavok: you've expanded him enough.

[@georgiypoluyanov2575]

Wow, honestly you did an amazing job. I especially liked how you wrote Zazz and the interactions between Zavok and Zick. Man, I wish the Zavok we got was as developed as your version.

[@zerplergon]

thiswasa well done video,I like how you put it together plus your edits to the yetis story made me sense and it seemed better

[@greenstarlover1]

Great rewrite! Love what you did with the character dynamics between the zetis, good job! ;)

[@vvlaze]

If you do one on Infinite, I’d have something in there about him being insecure about his mask, and Sonic knocking it off before or during their final showdown, showing how Sonic is finally getting to him.

[@c_x_3]

You should rewrite Sonic Forces too. I personally like the game, but I’m sure you could make it even better!

[@blehbleh46]

I already liked the deadly six but I like there rewritten version a lot more now. You’ve earned a subscriber! Noice video dude

[@tessbolick6605]

This is so much better than the original story! I love how all of the Deadly Six feel like characters, partly because I'm a personal fan of villainous teams that care about each other, at least to an extent. I also really like how Eggman isn't the secret final villain, which was a dumb twist that ruins the interactions that the heroes had earlier.

[@bluewind4329]

Heh heh, I knew you can do it. Congrats on the video! 🙂

[@Garrulous64]

Thanks for the confidence before!

[@bluewind4329]

Garrulous64 Aw, no problem.

[@metaridleyakathecunninggod1006]

Dillian can do anything!

[@MegaTrafficCone]

Haha you’re internet famous now!

[@bluewind4329]

Meta Ridley, aka The Cunning God Of Death Indeed. 😃

[@SliverSceptile]

Hey sega, you seeing this??

[@e-meds557]

This was really well done and thought out. You created better characters, better dialogue, and better boss fights. I'm really impressed

[@ippy5487]

Oh my god... You're making me like these characters! Awesome work, m8! This is writing I really aspire to achieve!

[@zekehowell1797]

Great job, you have a knack for character development. I hope to see this series in the future, even in a non Sonic game

[@Wizard_Lizard_]

When the fanfiction is infinitely better than the canon.

[@birthdayfruitecake8158]

I like how you foreshadowed a lot of it. Nothing was left to be pulled out of nowhere and I really like that. I especially like the build-up and the motivation.

[@Or3oarts]

This. Was. GREAT!!! I loved it! Good job man!

[@titaniumvortex8901]

This is awesome you should make the story for sonic games

[@galacticglitchTV]

Wow if only you where the writter of sonic lost world btw great video

[@Garrulous64]

I wouldn't want to be in charge tbh. It's fun to muse about it though!

[@johnmendez9525]

Garrulous64 do you an animation site that you can use on mobile because I want to make a animated version of this video

[@galacticglitchTV]

@@Garrulous64 well in that case can you make a video about fixing infinite

[@grimlockthetyrant4521]

You sir, have a bright future in story telling! I really wanted to like the six, but aside from dialogue that made me laugh from time to time, they were so one note. You made these characters likable for me again! Sega needs to take notes from people like you!

[@willropa4226]

"Ahem. Just because you're not smart enough to comprehend my genius doesn't mean you can dismiss it as 'shotty'." -Dr. Eggman That really HAS to be one of the most Eggman quotes I've ever heard.

[@shadowofthesilver]

"I don't know if I could make it better." This is ten million times better than the actual version, man.

[@wizardsebastian5384]

Or if they return, they get new teammates with there own personalities and how they are treated by the other zix. (Here's what they would be.) Zludge: A big and lanky black zeti who dose not care on what he dose. Ztinger: A white zeti with a scorpion tail and was trained by Master Zik and cares for him. Zap: A yellow zeti who is quick and fast, even making fun of how fast Zazz is. Zymphony: A pink zeti who has a beautiful singing voice but Zenna despises her a lot. Zcorch: A fiery smooth talking dark red zeti he cares about the ladies more than his teammates. Zero: A grey zeti who dose not speak through out Sonic's Adventure.

[@InternetFanatic]

The idea that there’s more Zeti could have been a good idea

[@FunkyAnimations]

Dude I just wanna congratulate you for all of the attempts you’ve made at new content. I love your mod reviews and the review, the no points run, and now this, really make me excited for your new experiments. You’re incredibly talented at this stuff and if you find it fun, go for it. Can’t wait to see where you go from here man! Congrats

[@Garrulous64]

Thank you so much :D

[@TiStardust]

Man, this was great! Fantastic work, and I hope you keep doing what you want because you really do well with this sorta stuff!

[@tearlach47]

We need more character dynamics in Sonic games...

[@sJonneY]

This video is SO GOOD. The ideas shown in this videos are very original and are a good take on the story. I guess Mania mods have actually been holding you back huh. One thing though: was it intentional that you didn’t talk about the random disappearance of Tails’ robot suit? It was one of the weirdest thing in the entire game so I thought you would change it. Also also can you do Sonic Forces next? I’ve been thinking of some ways to remake the story and I think you would have some great ideas too!

[@Garrulous64]

I didn't really think of the robot thing. If I actually had the ability to make new visual content for this, I would have left the enhancements on him until the credits rolled. He'd be back to normal in the next game of course.

[@Renigade68]

If there's one thing I'd add it would be an actual boss fight with tails to make all that build-up not feel wasted, they could either play it straight where you hit him in his gizmos and that snaps him out of it or they could do something emotional like Sonic refuses to attack Tails and all you can is dodge for awhile until he snaps out of it on his own cause he doesn't wanna hurt Sonic, it would also Parallel what happened with Zavoc, Zavoc belittled and struck his family for the lightest of reasons, but even with potential death and the end of the world on the line Sonic would not strike Tails, something something friendship speeches... Really though I thoroughly enjoyed this, if Sega was still willing to be ambitious with their Sonic games then maybe we would've gotten a Deadly Six more like how you described, ah well, assuming they don't show up in any more mainline games I'm just gonna run with this interpretation as Cannon :p

[@sJonneY]

Renigade68 that’s a really good idea too. It’s sad that Sega didn’t make a good story in this game, because there’s a lot of potential here...

[@Nimta]

I feel like this edit is pretty solid. Nice!

[@thebeyblademan2463]

Dude this story is soooo much better than what we got. Making Zavok more involved and his character arc was really well done.