A few comments if I may. From start to the first chorus should have less movements and slower tempo. Then build it up at the second verse when the song is upbeat. I like the bridge part. Makes you want to join in. Lastly.. the roar should have a more emotional movement that depicts the strength that comes from the roar of a lion. You want the roar to be imprinted in the minds of your audience so one intensified simple movement is enough. I hope this helps. Well done though. Better than a lot others I have seen. God bless you.