Very good. I agree, there should be part 2 or an update.
@Bazz24697 Жыл бұрын
Great story love this one ❤️
@PaulGibson-v3f9 ай бұрын
Can we please have a second part as this is one was great
@hinoakel3830 Жыл бұрын
this was a good story but could have used about another 5 - 10 mins at the end on the reaction that he did not change back and what both his daughter would have said when she found him changed and what his friend s excuse would be that he did not change back from the spell she used
@williamhinkle8113 Жыл бұрын
In these stories the women use Magik. For their own selfish desire.
@williambaker5127 Жыл бұрын
There needs to be more parts to it
@r.e.stephens1344 Жыл бұрын
Beep, Beep, Beep. Sound's as though their may be a continuance into a part 2. That may be a lot of fun for Joan / John.
@sphyleffay82627 ай бұрын
Do more of the twisted series please :D also yes this def has more to it i wants to know what happens next please
@stevebruyere3302 Жыл бұрын
This is a great story will there a part two
@braaaplife557 Жыл бұрын
Please do a part 2
@distemic Жыл бұрын
Missing the rest of the story
@cobberjoy Жыл бұрын
will the two girls now live together with two moms carry on part2 or will joan like men
@travismcvay-b5z7 ай бұрын
Part 2
@barbaraanneneale367411 ай бұрын
I could write you a much better story than this. Honestly