'Logline & Treatment Workshop' by Shahari Moore

[@youssefsebti3144]

oh my that was so informative and fun ! Teaching should be like this ! Thank you ma'am for your spontaneity and clarity !

[@IronVirus]

Timestamps: 00:00 Intro 00:21 Difference between *treatment* and *synopsis* 2:55 Quick Background of the Speaker 4:30 Goals of the Workshop 6:33 Logline Definition 10:46 Logline Examples 17:14 Anatomy of a Logline 22:13 Exercise: Logline for Your Life 23:00 Treatment Definition + Components 31:06 Techniques for Making Your Writing More Visual 32:07 Goals of Your Treatment 37:25 Theme 40:43 Homework - Getting Into Character 41:16 Homework - 3 Act Structure 43:36 Fade In 45:23 Resources and Links

[@shaharimoore]

Thank you for watching! For more about Shahari Moore check out: kzbin.info/www/bejne/hmHLiKV7rdCtkKc

[@jacksonalmeida1201]

God bless you

[@Ramesh_Muthusamy]

That was one of the best lectures I have attended. Such pure genius

[@ScipioIsBack]

this young lady is awesome!! thank you for this!

[@shaharimoore5909]

Thank you!

[@shaharimoore5909]

I couldn't help the ah's and um's and the smacking of my lips :) I felt like I was talking to my family. And…I was.

[@karenpatillo9]

Shahari Moore Thanks so much. It was very helpful information for a beginner.

[@bheeshmachouhan949]

Thank you very much for this video. God bless you. Looking forward to see your mainstream movie soon. Love from India

[@RELLISHPICTURES]

Excellent presentation! Thank you Shahari!

[@beardgangtabernacle5795]

Dxpe presentation sistah👑🇲🇦🕋🕌

[@Athirdofthem]

Brilliant

[@MariMay_o]

she's sooooo great, love this workshop and the way the lecturer explains everything ♥♥♥

[@diabloakland]

Thank you so much for this. It’s been awhile for me and I’m getting back into it after almost dying, clinically dying, medical recovery, and mental health suffering bc of all that. I’m going to make my movie finally.

[@shaharimoore]

Thank you for watching! For more about Shahari Moore check out: kzbin.info/www/bejne/hmHLiKV7rdCtkKc

[@dr.earnest.ujaama]

Thank you, Dr. Moore, for sharing this very valuable workshop and video on Logline & Treatment. I think you are awesome! Much respect, love and appreciation.

[@s.azpillaga4320]

Shahari Moore and Reel Black Filmmakers, thank you for posting this logline and treatment class. I'm a romance writer and needed a boost. This sure helped!

[@leesenfordArts]

Amazing class. Learning from Zambia Africa. This just came at a write time and it has greatly helped me work on my pitch deck. Thanks alot.

[@shaharimoore5401]

C'Mon Zambia!

[@ikidd06]

Awesome presentation! The measure of greatness is taking complex elements and conveying them with simplicity. She made it exponentially easier for anyone to jumpstart taking action in this space. Fantastic job!

[@shaharimoore]

Thank you for watching! For more about Shahari Moore check out: kzbin.info/www/bejne/hmHLiKV7rdCtkKc

[@joanlewis5125]

Thank you SO much for taking your talent for teaching a tough subject to a clear and precise video. Very impressive. You are succinct and broke down a difficult subject into a comprehensible bible. Again, I thank you.

[@marytammie5525]

This is absolutely the best lecture I have seen on this. Thank you!

[@shaharimoore]

Thank you for watching! For more about Shahari Moore check out: kzbin.info/www/bejne/hmHLiKV7rdCtkKc

[@TheSchulz21]

Fantastic lecture, thank you so much. Explained so clearly and with such kindness.

[@Andresitogoffcial_]

THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL! Super helpful. Thank you and God bless ya. Now go make your movie!

[@shaharimoore]

Thank you for watching! For more about Shahari Moore check out: kzbin.info/www/bejne/hmHLiKV7rdCtkKc

[@kafkollectif525]

I just finished watching and this is a really great video for anyone working on writing treatments or even just interested in the film making process!

[@antoniosilva-iq5jc]

Hey! Looking for this since a few day...

[@deannasparks5064]

I found this extremely informative. Thank you so much!

[@naturalbornfool73]

Correctly working on a treatment for a tv pilot, one 55 min episode, so it is about one page.. Very well explained, great content.

[@surreptitiouslyBoring]

Very clear and precise information for your basic understanding! It's an easy press the subscribe button for more content!!! Thank you, Shahari!

[@jasonlight8813]

This is some fantastic teaching. I've thoroughly enjoyed watching this and have learnt so much. The passion and knowledge shared is really inspiring

[@shaharimoore]

Thank you for watching! For more about Shahari Moore check out: kzbin.info/www/bejne/hmHLiKV7rdCtkKc

[@bakhshishsingh2711]

great guidance downloaded this video.Thanks

[@seyoumeigziabeher9348]

This was really good. Very professional and very informative

[@kafkollectif525]

This is a great lecture. She’s great in front of a class too

[@shaharimoore]

Thank you for watching! For more about Shahari Moore check out: kzbin.info/www/bejne/hmHLiKV7rdCtkKc

[@tezzag818]

That was so helpful, thank you from Australia

[@dijonstreak]

I love it when reality spekas reality !!

[@shaharimoore]

Thank you for watching! For more about Shahari Moore check out: kzbin.info/www/bejne/hmHLiKV7rdCtkKc

[@karthikeyan-kc2py]

Thanks for your efforts and collection of Good informations

[@RoeLuv1]

Appreciate all the information 🙏🏽

[@WriteOnBroham]

Wonderful job @Shahari ! Thank you!

[@brucekolinski5401]

Well worth the time. Ms. Moore is an instinctive instructor capable of speaking to a broad cross section of students.

[@shaharimoore5909]

Thank you, Bruce!

[@joyceowens1]

Wow...sending this to my son in LA...

[@za.jeanpaul]

Great presentation of these key concepts Shahari!

[@shaharimoore]

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[@onyxsetholin]

Excellent lecture.

[@shaharimoore]

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[@mariaguzman9407]

So good! Thank you!

[@shubhamthapafilms]

Thank you so much 🙌

[@GOGDRAMTV]

This is enlightening!🔥❤️

[@michaltaylor8926]

really good, I learned so much, thank you

[@johnlindsaygreen8547]

Thanks so much Queen.

[@shaharimoore5909]

You're welcome!

[@antoniosilva-iq5jc]

Hey! Thanks good content

[@theresakennedy7339]

27:00 he's right. song writers are story tellers, scribes. its an ancient art. poets and script..the written word.

[@HarryJoiner]

8:23 / 10:08 / 44:05 - 🔥GOLD🔥

[@baltimorefilmmakerscollect3685]

Amazing presentation - Thank you

[@tirahuks1]

Wait. Did you say Bill Cosby?

[@Zachary_Peace]

Enlightening thank you!!!

[@shaharimoore]

Thank you for watching! For more about Shahari Moore check out: kzbin.info/www/bejne/hmHLiKV7rdCtkKc

[@hassanmburia8825]

Thank you

[@AniThings]

Such a beautiful presentation, thank you so much ma'am for the information

[@shaharimoore]

Thank you for watching! For more about Shahari Moore check out: kzbin.info/www/bejne/hmHLiKV7rdCtkKc

[@rickmclaren2620]

Awesome! Cheers.

[@hetalmetha3006]

You gave example of log lion.please also share treatment/story example .so new student learn in better way.hanks.

[@visionaryventures12]

You can be visual in your treatment by utilizing the scenery as props in the action.

[@gloriamitchell3518]

This was very helpful.

[@rondoray1169]

You are good.

[@shaharimoore5909]

Thanks!

[@archangelismg]

This is sooo helpful

[@ikemchude]

My film school was a waste until I come across this video

[@gordonadam7051]

Brilliant

[@shaharimoore5909]

Thank you!

[@seairagoosby9715]

thanks a lot this was very helpful

[@shaharimoore5909]

I'm glad!

[@MaxAbramson3]

40-44 scenes per movie. Write 40-44 scene headings and 1-2 sentences about what happens in each scene. Then you can just write out each scene into your screenplay.

[@asht2058]

16:25 I didn't catch the name of the movie

[@shaharimoore5909]

Which film? If you give me the time code, I can clarify the film.

[@joanlewis5125]

Hoop Dream(s?)

[@asht2058]

@@joanlewis5125 Thanks, that one

[@abhishekbiswas2267]

What about Plot? Should we write it before treatment or after it?

[@shaharimoore5909]

The treatment is essentially an outline of the story. The plot gets fleshed out in the writing.

[@diabloakland]

@@shaharimoore5909 thank you!

[@torrapergerson7047]

Help please 🙏🏾

[@bakhshishsingh2711]

LOGLINE: A 70 year old black gentleman[PG] from India moving to South Afrika by saling[conflict] in a solar-motor-boat[setting] to [meet a KZbinr Lady] for learning to write a Screenplay [GOAL].

[@road2redemption259]

It's hard to identify in a meaningful way with a goal-driven protagonist in a world where most people spend their time and energy focused on things that are not directly related to their goals. As John Lennon famously said, " Life is what happens when you are busy making other plans". This goal-driven protagonist is partly why Hollywood films have little or no bearing on life as actually lived. Most of them are infantile fantasies, and that's not a bad thing. We need to escape from reality from time to time. But as black people films can also be a powerful tool to educate ourselves and to do this they neeed to be closer to our everyday reality. So, let's not forget to write protagonists who are victims struggling to free themselves from the clutches of a powerful antagonist.

[@rpprevost]

The logline suggests she went alone when we know she went with her dog.

[@rpprevost]

OMG! If she says "logline" one more time without showing what the fuck a logline is, I'm going to scream.