My bro took my gf and married her to live with our family. 3 years after I left home... [Manga]

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@KOkami03
@KOkami03 2 ай бұрын
I'm glad Shun reformed in the end. ...For Hikari's sake, not his own. Girl deserves at least one good parent.
@Shank40
@Shank40 2 ай бұрын
Those two didn't deserve such a wholesome and adorable daughter
@marckennethcabanero7467
@marckennethcabanero7467 2 ай бұрын
Despite the hurt the MC did not let himself go in slump but view it with positive outlook as dodging the bullet early on.
@NekoRirisu
@NekoRirisu 19 күн бұрын
the mc has a lot of friends that help him get over that depression
@Senbonzakura6
@Senbonzakura6 2 ай бұрын
I didn't expect Shun to get redemption based on how awful he is towards his brother and I was surprised Sakura is the only one who got punished in the end.
@SpongeBobSquarePants847
@SpongeBobSquarePants847 2 ай бұрын
Well he had a daughter and her daughter is the reason why he changed
@introverted-mc
@introverted-mc 2 ай бұрын
MC's brother is indeed a piece of shit that was driven by jealousy. But he changed for the better because of his daughter(if he didnt have a child, I bet he would get the worst punishment) MC's ex meanwhile(this might be exxagerating) is the devil incarnate. That skank screwed both brothers and still had the audacity to get angry at the whole family💀 Wished MC could have at least been honest about it, as even though he's been happy with the FMC and hanging out with his parents and niece, the fact that he had a very awkward relationship with the two assholes(which clearly didn't have karma yet) for three years and can only avoid them is horrible.
@Maninawig
@Maninawig 2 ай бұрын
I am pretty sure that the only reason the brother could shift his perspective is because of his daughter.
@LunaPPK
@LunaPPK 2 ай бұрын
nah piss off lol he is still trash just because he has a child does not change crap he should not be forgiven and thrown in the trash
@playerback7722
@playerback7722 2 ай бұрын
Yep
@wijayaxceed4929
@wijayaxceed4929 Ай бұрын
yeah. being kind is good, but being naive is a shi. and i think mc personality is little bit on naive side. if he continue with that kind of personality, someday a dude with dark skin and blond hair might be come to his life and cucked him. as i say before, being kind is good. but still, you ARE MAN, so you need and must be strong and had even a little bit of fierce personality. because in the end of the day, the true rule in this world is rule of the fittest. the strong will take all while the weak will be eaten up. so being only kind is not enough
@randomtrainerx.3424
@randomtrainerx.3424 2 ай бұрын
The rumor did spread like wildfire at work, but it was more so about how much of a horrible person your ex-girlfriend now sister-in-law, Sakura. Everyone was supportive towards Yuma.
@playerback7722
@playerback7722 2 ай бұрын
Yep
@jeremyyudiarta8757
@jeremyyudiarta8757 2 ай бұрын
I wish everyone in other stories were like that. They hear the rumors but also look at facts and they know Yuma's personality
@Dante999000
@Dante999000 2 ай бұрын
​@@jeremyyudiarta8757agree but unfortunately, more people would be stupid and go with the flow instead of looking at all the facts.
@ShutlessJob-in
@ShutlessJob-in 2 ай бұрын
Post story: Sakura got divorced from Yuma and lost Hikari custody, after get sentenced to pay alimony and lost the child's custody ahe started storming the court then she got arrested for disorder. Later her parents kicked Sakura out of the house and told her to never show her face again. Then she barged at Yuma's parents house and begged her now ex-husband to take her back because she got nowhere else to go much less have money enough to cover 2 alimony bills (the affair was a married man and his wife divorced him and sued both for damages, Sakura was up to neck in debts and to worsening things even more she's now homeless) Shun told her to get lost and never come back to his parents house again and besides if she had nowhere to go why she don't go to her lover's house then? Sakura said he broke up after Shun sued him for damages and his wife found it out and chased him out of the house. Yuma and his parents came in and told her she brought it upon herself then she have to act as an adult and figure out her own problems and slammed the door in her face. But she didn't leave and started banging the door and throwing rocks and other objects in the front of their house then, the police arrived again and Sakura got arrested twice. A restraining order was set against Sakura and next time she show up in front of them again she'll be fined for breaking the order trespassing or arrested for a month. Sakura then gave up and disappeared from their lives. Rumors about her whereabouts is that she headed to a town in the countryside knows well for his "red lights district" to work and earn money to cover the alimony bills in her backs. She probably won't get married anytime in the future 😂 "Do GOOD and GOOD will come back to you but do EVIL and then EVIL will return to you. Indeed it's KARMA." The End
@Noeh-Bocchi
@Noeh-Bocchi 2 ай бұрын
that's the result of being siblings, but not supporting each other. the jerk brother has gotten his karma, but he repented and regretted all his actions. that's good
@小奧-k8e
@小奧-k8e 2 ай бұрын
I think I would cut ties with Shun, even though he regret it.
@dimasnaufaltangahu1457
@dimasnaufaltangahu1457 2 ай бұрын
You know Shun's name was from Yakuza games, right?
@Maninawig
@Maninawig 2 ай бұрын
I think I would have cut ties with him the moment he took Sakura. I would have then moved to an internet café when his mom said he's moving in.
@dalemorgan8263
@dalemorgan8263 2 ай бұрын
Eh, there's a certain satisfaction in seeing family grow beyond their past mistakes. Shun actually got a clue finally. Besides, they basically went low-contact when Yuma moved out.
@sharonjancovic4144
@sharonjancovic4144 2 ай бұрын
And as for Sakura she's grounded until she learns to get rid of her bad mouthing selfish reckless inexcusable personality of her's
@anandakencana8223
@anandakencana8223 2 ай бұрын
​@@dimasnaufaltangahu1457, Akiyama Shun, the manager of Sky Finance if I'm not mistaken.
@chicswag4657
@chicswag4657 2 ай бұрын
Afterstory: After Sakura’s true colors were exposed, she tried getting back together with Yuma after they broke up, but Yuma revenge dumped Sakura for what she did. She regretted dumping Yuma for his brother.
@Animelovedemon
@Animelovedemon 2 ай бұрын
I’m just surprised that the kid isn’t Yumas kid and is shuns after all she was dating both at the same time
@burningsinner1132
@burningsinner1132 2 ай бұрын
Honestly, whenever I read "Robbed my gf" I start to think about police. As in actual robbery. As in taking someone's material possessions by force.
@theperceptor9287
@theperceptor9287 Ай бұрын
Exactly the "stolen" girlfriend/wife decided to go with that person through lies, self-interest, or what ever. They choose to cheat or walk away from a good man. And often get what they deserve. 👍
@MoeunMaosweettreats1981
@MoeunMaosweettreats1981 2 ай бұрын
It’s a good thing that me and my brother get along and have never stolen anything or anyone from each other.
@rdzreborn2k7kt
@rdzreborn2k7kt 2 ай бұрын
That woman is unfit to be a mother it a good thing the brother was able to redeem himself
@rdzreborn2k7kt
@rdzreborn2k7kt 2 ай бұрын
Moral of the story: don't cheat if you're gonna be a mother.
@stenovhouse
@stenovhouse 2 ай бұрын
This episode is the true example of how KARMA stroke *at its full potential* the antagonists...and this also proves how the behavior in some cases isn't really DEFINITE by the parents. Also, the MC's brother should consider himself *LUCKY* that MC and the rest of the family didn't *cut ties with him* (and keeping his daughter with them)...because what he caused (along with the other *money-freak* ...) is something that can't be really forgiven that easily (and in fact, the same MC said to him "I won't forgive you entirely" ...and I challenge everyone here, to forgive someone like the brother...because in order to do so, you must be a SAINT).
@RagnarokAvatar
@RagnarokAvatar 2 ай бұрын
MC's brother may have turned over a new leaf, but he's still a piece of crap. His mental state would've been destroyed if Sakura told him that Hikari wasn't his daughter.
@lashonnakennybrew4847
@lashonnakennybrew4847 2 ай бұрын
Bro imagine your own siblings steals your girlfriend or wife and then he impregnate knocks her up and gets her pregnant and then have to go see your ex-girlfriend cheat on you what a broken heart but at least you got a new girlfriend❤❤❤❤
@reverseflash7095
@reverseflash7095 2 ай бұрын
12:46 so it was all on the stupid brother...at least their granddaughter will be a decent person like her uncle
@d.wbrown1154
@d.wbrown1154 2 ай бұрын
Wait, you didn't know she was that type of woman... Dude, she cheated on your brother with you. Lol
@jeremyyudiarta8757
@jeremyyudiarta8757 2 ай бұрын
4:56, this is the first time I see a rumor that doesn't antagonize the MC or damage his reputation. At least the colleagues are good people.
@introverted-mc
@introverted-mc 2 ай бұрын
As it should be. If the rumor was against the MC after he was screwed over(which basically happens most of the time), this story would have been a nightmare.
@reverseflash7095
@reverseflash7095 2 ай бұрын
Yeah being caring to your partner and doing what you can to make her happy really is a bummer
@reverseflash7095
@reverseflash7095 2 ай бұрын
What did the guy expected after snatching the girl from his brother
@theperceptor9287
@theperceptor9287 Ай бұрын
He honestly didn't "snatch" her. She wasn't really happy with the younger brother and she thought the older brother was a better option. In the end she just wanted an ATM and to sleep around.
@RebornSkyDXBurner
@RebornSkyDXBurner 2 ай бұрын
I sorry but if you are bragging about taking your little brother’s sloppy seconds, that just makes you a joke. Also, what rights do Shun and Sakura has in calling his brother a freeloader when he living with his parents with his wife. At least, Shun gets his act together and realize that he is awful for what he did to Yuma throughout their life. He is lucky that his family gives him a second chance.
@maulanaadrian9383
@maulanaadrian9383 2 ай бұрын
Fate of Sakura: *Her parents kicked her out and disowned her because they've had enough of her complained and breaking stuff in their house. But Sakura keep complaining and ranting about it's not her fault while wandering the streets and she even breaking and throw things in people's store and she was arrested for vandalism and property damage by the police and serving long sentence in solitary confinement.* Fate of her affair partner: *Same fate like Sakura only difference is he's living in rundown apartment while working multiple part time jobs to make ends meet.*
@zaaratheblack2835
@zaaratheblack2835 2 ай бұрын
8:48 the fact that she looks like Kushina here is criminal. 15:30 go DAD GO!!
@joelcatubay9479
@joelcatubay9479 2 ай бұрын
The literal ONLY good Sakura did was help the brothers grow closer and bringing the adorable Hikari into the world. Is a bonus.
@TheQuiet_Noise
@TheQuiet_Noise Ай бұрын
imo even tho the brother regrets everything, i wouldn't trust his ass at all... you can't just break bad habits considering he's been a jerk from childhood to adulthood.. ppl don't change that easily irl
@huh5950
@huh5950 2 ай бұрын
The parents are kinda lame but that's often the case, and of course the bastard brother just gets a doover because he said "sorry, I cried once"
@MynameisNobody90
@MynameisNobody90 2 ай бұрын
“Well they’re not brothers for nothing!” (they both have a crush on the same woman/who it was obvious (after what she did) that she is not going to stay with the same guy) 😅
@CJHandsGameVideos
@CJHandsGameVideos 2 ай бұрын
Glad Shun realized he faults and changed for the better and his daughter ( I'm sure he'll get custody since Sakura always left Hikari with her in-laws) now Yuma can enjoy life with Satsuki.
@Creature8087
@Creature8087 2 ай бұрын
"Sakura! You're cheating on me?! I didn't think you were like this!" My brother in manga, she was literally cheating on your brother with you, and you didn't think she was a cheater? That's a wild thought process.
@smartboy201
@smartboy201 2 ай бұрын
ngl, the research-bit really hit hard. Once you're hit with cold, hard facts, that's the moment despair hits you. His daughter is the one thing he has that means something in his life, and now, research essentially tells him he's _going_ to lose her. Maybe it _was_ karma, maybe not, but I'm glad the true antagonist, Sakura, didn't just take custody of Hikari and leave.
@LunaPPK
@LunaPPK 2 ай бұрын
Also i am sorry his brother should not have been able to get or be allowed to sue for damages and alimony since he was a cheater himself doing that should cut you off for ever being able to do that
@Dynasty0612
@Dynasty0612 2 ай бұрын
Sorry if I come off as rude but, where was it mentioned that the brother cheated on his wife? I must’ve missed that.
@LunaPPK
@LunaPPK 2 ай бұрын
@@Dynasty0612 he had a affair with the MC's woman lol doesn't matter it still counts as cheating buddy
@seanchow806
@seanchow806 2 ай бұрын
@@LunaPPKWhat do you mean?🙁
@jafarjamil6911
@jafarjamil6911 2 ай бұрын
IF the Mc and sakura were engaged then that will be called cheating,they just only dating at that time.
@Dynasty0612
@Dynasty0612 2 ай бұрын
@@jafarjamil6911 even in the dating stage it counts as cheating
@ByndOrdnry
@ByndOrdnry 2 ай бұрын
14:31 When the parents fight, a child will be affected, if that child sees it.
@Sg190th
@Sg190th 2 ай бұрын
13:55 funny enough, she has a point.
@DanzelFlores-m3g
@DanzelFlores-m3g 2 ай бұрын
Seriously 700k!? is not that Much?! She didn't even care that they have a child now. They can't even buy clothes and supplies on their child what kind a parents are they?
@SpongeBobSquarePants847
@SpongeBobSquarePants847 2 ай бұрын
I am very mad at his brother for what he did but ever since he got a daughter he had changed and I want him to stay that way for her daughter's sake
@tetsuryuu01
@tetsuryuu01 2 ай бұрын
Well Shun embracing fatherhood was able to redeem himself properly so for him it is good and mc found a good girl
@CashMNey
@CashMNey 2 ай бұрын
Nah I’m not satisfied the mc needed to cut ties with no amount of redemption could make me forgive none be a good dad away from me
@doublem3585
@doublem3585 2 ай бұрын
​@@CashMNeyi agree with you: years of harassment, washed away with just a single apology? No way
@SpongeBobSquarePants847
@SpongeBobSquarePants847 2 ай бұрын
I know what he did was awful and wrong but if he cut ties with him then the daughter will be very upset that she will never see his uncle again and he apologized to him for all these years but is your opinion not mine but I'm just telling the truth
@venomslair137
@venomslair137 2 ай бұрын
Sakura is the most VILE of all gold diggers if not *THE MOST...* Snubbing barely 4.5K dollars per adventure... And it's a good thing Shun redeemed himself. «I accept your apology, but still I can't pardon you at all and I won't forget whatever thing you've done to me». Interesting take from Yuma.
@acemeister1624
@acemeister1624 2 ай бұрын
Well, Shun, this your instant regret for being naive and manipulative for stealing Sakura away from Yuma, for not realizing that she's cheating on you, but I'm glad that you learn your error of your ways As for Sakura, it's too bad that she's just nothing but a waste of garbage, total disgrace she is
@TannerWilliams-l3b
@TannerWilliams-l3b 2 ай бұрын
This Mc has the same first name of the 4th yu-gi-oh protagonist
@warhawkplane9564
@warhawkplane9564 Ай бұрын
Yeah! I’m glad that Yuma x Satsuki had become a beautiful happy couple🖤🧡 with marriage in mind💍 after exposing his brother Shun ex-wife Sakura affair💔😡 and spending habits💸.
@KimPossibleShockwave
@KimPossibleShockwave Ай бұрын
We really need an MC that actually turns nasty towards betraying family. "Oh, you'll cover for me and help with the baby, right?" "Fxck no, I'm going to laugh as you flounder and squirm. Good luck with my brother: He sticks his wick into anything that moves, and you know what they say when a mistress graduates to being a girlfriend..."
@davidchung3923
@davidchung3923 2 ай бұрын
Lol, his brother is named "Shun Akiyama"? 🤣🤣🤣 Anyone who has played the "Yakuza/Like a Dragon" games will know why I laughed at hearing that name
@dimasnaufaltangahu1457
@dimasnaufaltangahu1457 2 ай бұрын
I posted the comment about him, wanna check?
@triplen9804
@triplen9804 26 күн бұрын
I'm happy he made up with his brother And brother became a better person through parent hood
@mangamaniaciam
@mangamaniaciam Ай бұрын
Is it just me or does the V.A. for the MC sound really aggressive??
@doublem3585
@doublem3585 2 ай бұрын
Shun, you married a cheater, you knew it, and now you are complaining that she cheated on you too? What did you expect? Anyway, today i don't like the ending. I don't like when the mc forgives the antagonist so easily; forgiveness must be earned. A single apology doesn't wash away all those years of harassment
@davidchung3923
@davidchung3923 2 ай бұрын
It's the voice actor with the goofy laugh for today's video 🤣
@blayze9136
@blayze9136 2 ай бұрын
At least he's better than some other VA in this channel
@davidchung3923
@davidchung3923 2 ай бұрын
@@blayze9136 like who? Yesterday's male VA? 🤣 I do notice a lot of people dislike the guy from yesterday
@blayze9136
@blayze9136 2 ай бұрын
@@davidchung3923 yeah? Well guess what, I'm also one of the people
@reverseflash7095
@reverseflash7095 2 ай бұрын
Yeah being nice equal being stupid
@thewillybshow2000
@thewillybshow2000 2 ай бұрын
Yuma’s is better than me to give his brother Shun a second chance after everything he did to him. I couldn’t do it.
@evansnethen1846
@evansnethen1846 2 ай бұрын
I'm sorry, but why are some of the male VAs voices so exasperated? It makes everything sound very dramatic when it shouldn't be in some places. It also makes it hard to maintain interest in watching.
@locusxe1411
@locusxe1411 2 ай бұрын
Ehh. That’s your opinion. I don’t feel that way or care personally.
@d.wbrown1154
@d.wbrown1154 2 ай бұрын
I agree. There are moments he's overly dramatic. Here, it works because this story is more drama filled.
@inazuma149
@inazuma149 2 ай бұрын
​@@locusxe1411its not an opinon lol. What he is stating is factually correct, what your stating just now is an opinon. The MCs voice is intense in every moment. And it doesent change whether he is happy or angry or sad. Could have gotten an AI voiceover that would have been better.
@ryuakatsuki5235
@ryuakatsuki5235 Ай бұрын
Agreed
@protomanusward-sanichitedake
@protomanusward-sanichitedake 2 ай бұрын
Shun blames himself for stealing his ex-girlfriend and marrying her with a blind eye for money. Then reap you sow, Sakura. She is not fit to be a wife and mother.
@amkashiy3684
@amkashiy3684 29 күн бұрын
Yeaaaaah i mean right the brother did change not for his sake but his daughter but you can’t ever trust him again after all these years
@Sg190th
@Sg190th 2 ай бұрын
I think he should have cut ties with his brother
@matthewbrown3194
@matthewbrown3194 2 ай бұрын
No mercy for Sakura
@Dragonroar
@Dragonroar 14 күн бұрын
So, Shun was blinded by jealousy and he's being punished by karma, but it's not too late to fix his mistakes. He's now going to a path of redemption.
@peechitmanuel6663
@peechitmanuel6663 2 ай бұрын
Deception for Sakura Amano
@ricshaffer4009
@ricshaffer4009 2 ай бұрын
Dude was a wimp , let people bully him then accept a pitiful apology instead telling his bro to get bent...weak
@Martin144gamlng
@Martin144gamlng 2 ай бұрын
4/10 stars lovekoi, after what the brother did he dont deserve happy end a simple sorry is not enough to make things right
@introverted-mc
@introverted-mc 2 ай бұрын
Oh my god this story's scenario's a nightmare, MC's brother and ex were sociopaths💀
@dimasnaufaltangahu1457
@dimasnaufaltangahu1457 2 ай бұрын
You what's even more funny? Yuma's brother's name is from Yakuza games.
@seanchow806
@seanchow806 2 ай бұрын
Maybe so for Yuma’s brother being a sociopath, but the daughter will give him some common sense to end that.😅
@joshuaamadeusishak1887
@joshuaamadeusishak1887 2 ай бұрын
Not if you have an evidence that gives the court a good reason not to give child custody to the mother. If you gather evidences of Sakura neglecting her duty as a mother to have an affair, game over to the adulterous vixen. I don't like you and I don't think I'll ever forgive you. But, I won't let the little girl to be taken away by an irresponsible woman who won't take good care of the girl if I were Yuma.
@rbermea
@rbermea 2 ай бұрын
I am upset with who they named the antagonist of Yuma Akiyama's brother. You can't name him after a character from the Yakuza series.
@MrRocklover18
@MrRocklover18 Ай бұрын
Right there at the cafe i would’ve openly declared that the two of us are no longer brothers and that they were both dead to me then left blocked them on everything Just total cut outa life move
@joestargaming47
@joestargaming47 2 ай бұрын
Did the MC brother did a DNA test to see if his daughter is actually his and not his ex wifes affair lover??? 🤔 otherwise this feels like unresolved
@TheVinod210596
@TheVinod210596 2 ай бұрын
What happened to the lifeline of kamurocho?
@unnameable57
@unnameable57 Ай бұрын
His brother is still a jackass for stealing his girlfriend but it turns out a blessing in disguise for him. At least he finally realised that he’s attitude is fked up and trying to change for his daughter. The woman is worse cause she’s already married and has a child and she cheated on them with another man.
@kevinnezukojk8870
@kevinnezukojk8870 2 ай бұрын
No nephew, disappointed. Nephew needs more screen time.
@Maninawig
@Maninawig 2 ай бұрын
True. But in this case, I think the protective nature of a father over his daughter is what was needed for Shun to change.
@seanchow806
@seanchow806 2 ай бұрын
Be patient with the male only thing. The baby boy is on the way, once the MC getting married.😅
@AlejandroGonzalez-bl1zl
@AlejandroGonzalez-bl1zl 2 ай бұрын
Shun Akiyama? Yakuza 4 Is cannon
@NeoAstronus
@NeoAstronus 2 ай бұрын
Afterstory : Mc's ex gf cheating partner aka mc's antagonist brother turn into shit . Even there daughter hate him and his parents disowned him . After fired and disowned he turned into homeless . His ex gf another cheating partner parents disowned him and he lose his job . Some how mc's trash antagonist brother find him and there attacking each other of course those two killed by truck because they fighting in the main road . MC's ex gf life turn into dark because her parents when heard about she cheating with mc with his brother and then cheating with him another one . Her parents disowned her and company fired her . Entire japanese office company and matchmaking party ban her . She goes to mc house again but she shock beacuse mc married fmc aka her former office colluge and of course fmc not ntr disgusting cheating with mc aka daughter 's boyfriend , husband , nephew and any others man . MC's ex gf daughter also hater her and said you are not my mother you trash . After hearing this she defeated and left the house and mc's life forever . She more shocked when she found out mc's trash antagonist brother and her other cheating partner fired form office , disowned , fighting each other and killed by truck . She realized her life is finished and left tokyo . Few days later , mc and fmc saw a tv news but shocked and happy because mc's ex gf murder by yandere girl's beacuse she distrub her crush . That yandere not kill mc's ex gf but burn her entire body . That entire murder turn into legendary nightmare and of course when people found out her trash ntr disgusting shit everyone hating her even after her death . Of course mc and fmc adopt his ex gf and antagonist jerk brother daughter with there wholesome happy ending .
@cheese1009
@cheese1009 2 ай бұрын
VA needs to work on his character. Keichinis timid yet his optimistic tone just ruins the vibe.
@SapphireKnight675
@SapphireKnight675 2 ай бұрын
just sayin', MC should've made his parents choose and deal with whatever happens next, bro forfeited his right as his family after pulling thar
@glassesguy900
@glassesguy900 Ай бұрын
Cheaters are always going to cheat
@PotatoSenpai_
@PotatoSenpai_ Ай бұрын
anybody know what the name of the music is at 9:40?
@LODintheshadows
@LODintheshadows 27 күн бұрын
Grow a blooming backbone. The minute they say help out financially and look after baby, just say, not on your life. And if you even try to make me once, when they baby gets older I'm going to tell them they are an affair baby as her mum slused to sleep with me. Don't mess with me
@dustymiller8752
@dustymiller8752 2 ай бұрын
So chuckle nuts is surprised that she cheated on him when she cheated on his brother with him? Huh.
@bbqsmokergame3917
@bbqsmokergame3917 Ай бұрын
How was wrong end not wife too bro
@jerryhuerta6499
@jerryhuerta6499 21 күн бұрын
Personally I think it is the parents fault for letting the brother live there with his wife
@LunaPPK
@LunaPPK 18 күн бұрын
ya if my parents had did that knowing the whole back story which they did i would flat out disown them
@labluegypsy
@labluegypsy 2 ай бұрын
❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
@trschaos
@trschaos 2 ай бұрын
But……. is she Shun daughter!
@cuttermasterson
@cuttermasterson 2 ай бұрын
The MC/ narrator is pretty bad. It’s to much emotion expressed. Even when it’s something normal. Here’s a tip. When it’s high emotions all the way through. It looses some of its impact when the actual tragic moments happen. You need to have build up. Start slow or normal. Than when things start to happen start expressing more emotion. Than when the tragic moments happen raise your voice. Than have split second of silence to make the moment even more impactful. Than start bring it back to normal. To bring the story full circle with a fulfilling closure moment of calm. Than maybe a joyful end where you leave the audience contented. Just a thought
@jedhartwellnepomuceno6060
@jedhartwellnepomuceno6060 2 ай бұрын
even if he repented i wouldn't even forgive him
@Yedpedful
@Yedpedful 2 ай бұрын
100% that's not his son.
@doublem3585
@doublem3585 2 ай бұрын
Daughter
@mynameisfrancis4986
@mynameisfrancis4986 Ай бұрын
MC voie acting sound so forced.
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