Amaziiiiing 😍 Just 2 little things : "là-bas" is more for something which is far away, so we don't need it here (if you want to put a word here, then "ici" is better) Second, the rest is correct, but the tense for the first sentence is a bit wrong : "Je ne t'avais pas vue" is much better ^^ But you're very talented, in edit, in meme, and... just in all ! You're the best ❤ (sorry for my english or if i'm not understandable 😭)