Hello Mesruh! I still keep the comments as last time, but now I can get a much clearer sense of your orchestration choices--which are all expertly done, both in character and variation in instrument family type. Your textures are especially clean, and that truly helps with hearing the separation in the various layers of music as they travel over one another at different times (starting around 3:04). Those open textures also the listener to isolate all of those revolving structural M7th chords as they repeat like bullworks over and over again. I also appreciate the added time you allow for your transitions, and not simply moving from one section to the next in a rapid and rhapsodic manner. This is a very interesting work, and goes starkly beyond all the modern music I have heard, both in intelect, and use of very solid and sturdy technique. Your music really does have something important to say in a highly unique way! The solid performance you have here really helps display all of the above, and just shows how lacking a software presentation always is. Even more so to appreciate an advanced level of technique. One thing I will add, though; write more vigorous harp parts! haha But, actually I mean that for real. There are a lot of places in the slower portions of your music (around 3:16) were you could add a tinkle and forward your ambiance. The addition of a celesta would also be a wise choice. (Think very last strain in the final song from Mahler's "Songs of the Earth"). Last thing: your video subject is really well chosen!
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@@callmeBe Thanks for your sincere and helpful comments.