Thanks for opening yourself up to commentary! I don't intend to make you regret it, but I tend to be harsh at times. Also, I don't speak the language it's in, so I can't comment on the lyrics. First off, this is probably my second favorite post-Liz Kmnz song, the first being Lunatic Beast! My favorite parts are the transitions between sections. For example, at 0:40, the intro to the faster drumbeat and the way you fell off the beat beforehand really made me feel the change at the perfect time. And, you were still able to fit the mood for the oncoming section! This also occurs at 2:55 when the beat empties and it changes from drums with a decent reverb to more of a stringy instrument. Also, I appreciate the way you had Lita's voice on the higher and lighter side while Nero's was lower and gruffer in each individual section while on the combined section everybody used the same voice to mix indiscernably. It really helped me feel that there were 3 different singers instead of just assuming line distribution! (I may be tripping on the extent of the difference a fair bit, but I'm looking at 2:55-3:14 in case you're wondering what I'm hearing) I also wanted to ask about the main beat: I feel that at parts you use it for more of a consistent tone, while the reverb is a bigger deal at other parts. Specifically between the intro and the section where Lita comes in, you drop the volume, but I feel like you use it for the reverb in the intro and the constant tone when under Lita. Did you consider using different tones-one with more reverb; one smoother-to express the different uses? Obviously, it works well for both and you divided the sections well, but I can't help but wonder if that would've been a useful tool to employ. The opening and ending are also strong, which is always important. Anyway, I think you did a really good job here! Good luck in your future works if they come into fruition!