mosquito season - an original

hi guys!!
i know i normally post softer music and stuff lol
and i think i went a bit heavy on harmonies sorry but i wanted to try smth new! but i think it would be so cool to get this song fully produced with like a band behind me and everythinggg. i've also been trying to post more on TikTok if you guys wanna check that out! short form content seems to do better these days but i still love my mini youtube community so much i don't think i'll ever stop posting on here.
thank u for 2.47k subscribers i love you all!!
-mina mei
lyrics:
It is mosquito season
I keep getting bit
and I can't help myself but keep scratching the itch
I’m left without a reason
Without a fix
I’ve got an open wound that needs someone to stitch
I know if you pound the door, crawl back in inch by inch
Or if you begged for more, I know I’d just let you in
Go ahead be greedy with me
Breathe into me
Seep into me
Go ahead it’s easy with me
Take all you need
Leave me to bleed
Think I’m allergic to you
You make my heart swell
Oh it grows and grows, god this won’t end well
Wish I could do anything
To change how I felt
But my eyes are blind to anybody else
I know if you pound the door, crawl back in inch by inch
Or if you begged for more, I know I’d just let you in
Go ahead be greedy with me
Breathe into me
Seep into me
Go ahead it’s easy with me
Take all you need
Leave me to bleed
Your effect
Gets me so damn stressed
Lead me leave me
With nothing left
You infect
Till I can’t get rest
Lead me leave me
With nothing left
I’m so obsessed
Go ahead be greedy with me
Breathe into me
Seep into me
Go ahead it’s easy with me
Take all you need

[@minaameii]

hii guys in ur honest opinion would u want mosquito season or solar eclipse released onto streaming platforms more? i love both but am trying to figure out which one put out first :’))

[@iheartcarrots1]

Both are so great but solar eclipse has a special place in my heart.

[@Thatguy-my4jq]

You have a gift of making people feel like it was written for them, this song is so amazing.

[@rhysgough6278]

Both are amazing, but personally I like Mosquito Season *slightly* more. I like the theme and the metaphor is perfect.

[@schmelingyt]

I'm thinking solar eclipse, cuz the melody is just so catchy! I love the sweet highs and lows in it iykwim Both songs are a safe pick regardless. Think of what feels right to you!

[@Gemmasedits_12]

I just found this channel tonight, but I wanted to say that your voice is captivating! I clicked on your Velvet Ring cover because of the grainy camera look, and now I can’t stop watching yours videos! They feel so warm and comforting! I hope you release music soon!

[@rebeccah1999]

I can’t remember how I found u but im rlly glad i did

[@minaameii]

💗

[@iheartcarrots1]

Omg I love your original songs, they're always so great. I hope you've been well!

[@minaameii]

ahh thank you, you too!!!

[@timothyhawken9266]

im really glad that I stumbled upon you from a beabadoobee cover but your music is really good. your voice is great and I think you are overthinking what you overdid. your voice worked really good so you should be proud. keep up the great work. subscribed.

[@minaameii]

awh that means a lot thank you so much for your kind words!!

[@fariziii8524]

i love your voice❤

[@user-snwflksnow]

your metaphors are so good!

[@byyebye.e]

I love this so much

[@hoodwiser7652]

Ok so two verses = really good, nice catchy lyrics and guitar compliments it a lot and they actually tell the story of the song. Bridge is ok but not so strong. Biggest issue is chorus - lyrically it’s not great, but biggest issue is cadence of guitar an vocals they kinda replicate and mimic the verse, so they doesn’t stand out or offer a resolution or got a hook or anything, and the song just really needs that. I think you have the making of something really good, but bridge and especially chorus definitely need improving in order to do so. On plus side your singing was pretty gold throughout although I’d maybe change how you sang/enunciated certain vocal lines, but they’re like minor details. Keep working at it.

[@najalein]

this is a BANGER

[@minaameii]

tyy let’s gooo

[@Cruzaflo]

:)

[@ulijohn1677]

süss und schlau.🧐