How to PLAN PERSUASIVE Writing for TOP GRADES (the secrets you aren't being taught)

[@t___939]

after monday... i will never touch english again. Its been a good journey, thanks to you, Mr Salles.

[@hi12235]

Innit spanish here we go

[@shuncho7844]

FR i cant wait to stop english

[@Georgina_d]

I’m doing it for a level so I’ll have to do it even more 😭 I like it though

[@kostavlogz3288]

Unless I speak it lol

[@shuncho7844]

@@Georgina_d if u like it then thats fine bcuz ur doing something u like 🙂

[@Happyhogan]

Mr Salles changed my life I literally want to be like him.💀 Your enthusiasm is unrivalled and exciting. Your lessons are engaging where others could never. For both Lit and Lang you have helped me so much to attempt to reach top grades. Thanks Mr Salles :)

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

This is very generous praise. Thank you very much. Good luck on the exam.

[@kaizen4939]

Thank you Mr salles you have helped me massively in both literature and language

[@megafoxgaming123cool4]

thanks so much Mr salles your videos are so easy to follow. I went from a 4 in English lit to an 8 in my mock so I'm confident i got around that in my gcse. Hopefully I can replicate it in English language. Thanks so much sir!

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

I hope so too. Well done!

[@Gabriel-zd8iy]

Thank you so much Mr Salles. I found your channel a similar time last year and thought it was a hidden gem. You helped me think outside the box in english and now im getting 7s and 8s (i was on 5s and 6s before) thank you for everything 🙏

[@malharvarpe6666]

Thank you sir, because i used to be a grade 6/7 student in English and now after watching your videos I'm feeling confident both my lang and lit grades will be 8s and 9s

[@AmritjotSingh-vn4ct]

What did u get

[@leokhan691]

Thank you Mr Salles for this very convincing and compelling video which has helped me lots in the short run up to paper 2 on Monday.

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Glad it was helpful! Love your use of language!

[@rorevishion618]

cheeky alleteration

[@shafinbepary2000]

using the words from the marking scheme hahah

[@Clipstoday241]

@@rorevishion618 *alliteration

[@ismetren7973]

0:18 Made me laugh so much. Took me by surprise. I loved it!

[@hi12235]

This settles it. Forget homework, forget revision, I’m a life-a-Holic not a workaholic

[@axishx8115]

ty mr salles i went from a grade 2 to a 5 in my mock hoping I get a 6 in my gcses

[@decisive_battle3565]

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[@shuncho7844]

i can smell the hyena's vomit👍

[@ayarofgnihcraes]

exactly

[@shafinbepary2000]

lol

[@freighter-8456]

Lmao

[@brokenoob3797]

great video i always got stuck on this but now its much more easier thanks to you

[@abia321]

Can you post a video on forms for Q5 (etc. letters and articles)?

[@olig9581]

thanks i like the little music breaks imbetween sections very classy 👌

[@ciatwist3910]

Final video before the exam ❤ i will miss mr salles

[@noahpalmer6653]

Already doing well in english but I must say these videos give me a touch more direction and settle the nerves.

[@Kappa_M]

Same, it’s always nerve wracking when you don’t know how well you did in very open-ended exams like English

[@noahpalmer6653]

@@Kappa_M completely agree. Maths and science I walk in knowing I will do well. English I have no clue

[@eveyxp]

@@noahpalmer6653 exactly, even as someone who finds English fairly easy and natural, I’m always scared I could get extracts and questions that completely throw me off. Hope tomorrow is kind

[@toopeep27]

Thank you so much!! This video and your q5 book saved me in the exams and many people I know

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Glad I could help!

[@Jordiib09]

My OCD is wanting me to come over and iron your white board.

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Yes, I’m going to buy a real one

[@ThomasMeeson]

If we dislike the amazing video then perhaps it gets recommended to less people therefore less people witness this plentiful information therefore lower grade boundaries...

[@rurzee]

Hi Mr Salles, are you going to post an updated question 4 video to go alongside all the new paper 2 ones?

[@ragdahmed6031]

He just did!

[@Average_Life04]

Hello Mr Salles , I started to watch your videos and its really helping me understand what are the top tips that will help me ... Can you please also make a vdeo on all yhe characters that are in inspector calls refereing from the stage directions that Priestley has given .. For example, how they were at the start , how they were in the middle of the story and how they were at the end. Wd have our mocks soon so these are really nessesary.. thank you

[@Blaze-hq9jk]

he already has a video on that

[@toopeep27]

Thank you so much!! We really appreciate all your hard work, I'll miss English

[@SreshanRajan]

Is it just me or does it hurt to see bubbles on the makeshift board?

[@lunalingo4461]

oh ye the air bubbles nah not really

[@niamh2398]

thank you so much sir :) what form to you recon we will be asked to write?

[@reload2832]

doesn't make much of a difference tbh other than changing the formality slightly

[@oriereprincesyd]

do you need to include strctural devices and launguage into paper 5

[@tulipzy]

Language yes. Structural features kind of. If you are aiming for high grades yes. If not then no

[@jscanlan_media]

Apologies Mr Salles but it seems you have missed question 4?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Making it right now!

[@hamnaali4977]

@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Waiting for your video sir, but at the same time, I'm practicing this question using your guide! :)

[@jscanlan_media]

@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Just watched it. Thank you it has made the question a lot clearer and now hopefully I can get the higher grades🤞.

[@katherinefrost5486]

Omg god thanks that has relieved some of my stress for question 5

[@aminah9141]

0:18 nice music!

[@tommillard5873]

Big ups salles!

[@Lucas-zp6dx]

Can we make up surveys and stats which are reasonable and are realistic?

[@sealblubb3374]

Yes! I’m pretty sure you even get some marks for adding statistics in the mark scheme so defiantly add them :))

[@Lucas-zp6dx]

@@sealblubb3374 thank you for your help

[@milomcanallen1099]

can i make up facts if i have little knowledge about a topic.

[@kostavlogz3288]

Yh I’m pretty sure you can. If you use like fake statistics and numbers yes, and make up fake names for influencers make sure you put professor at the start of there names and say they are from harvard

[@lucy-tf1ur]

Hi, for the arguments opposing your point of view, can you say why you think those are wrong and why you still overall agree or disagree with the statement?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Exactly

[@jacksloman3438]

Guys i reacon Q5 could be on vegetarianism as everyone knows what it is and paper 1 was also on animals

[@idontgetthejoke4393]

no

[@ken-cb4no]

im in yr10 and i have an englang p2 mock. This is so useful!

[@shuncho7844]

well done for your very early revision.Keep it going✊

[@dandelily9224]

Would you say that this might lead you to get a bit off topic at times here? My teacher often chides me for ranting slightly and going off topic into politics. Is it really gonna work to talk about the Congo in a debate on homework?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

It is called the slippery slope argument - a leads to b, leads to c, and so on.

[@Luver2196]

Thank you so much sir!! Can we know what are the 11 topics question 5 can be about exactly? please

[@daon4132]

I think the 11 topics are just topics he thinks are likely to come up, not guaranteed.

[@Bee_7699]

Could you say there are other reasons for peoples success? Such as psychopathy, rich parents etc

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

There will be dozens of reasons, so yes

[@ojasshanbhag2314]

Is it a good idea to argue both sides if you are meant to be convincing?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Only if you show why one is better than the other

[@vikavoltix5440]

yip yip yip yip yip

[@catherinewilliams9932]

Any predictions for 2024?

[@oliviatomato3512]

he said social media

[@noobydegoat]

What about the form of question 5 whether it’s an article or diary or letter

[@robinsghost1250]

So you know with cultural capital, can i just make up stuff? Thank you for the vid btw.

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Did I make up any? I don’t think I did

[@robinsghost1250]

@Mr Salles Teaches English NO you didn't, sir.

[@shorgz4693]

should you write 3 for paragraphs followed by 3 against paragraphs or a for-against-for-against structure?

[@kexinguo9810]

no, you need to be biased and have a strong argument for one point of view. Adding a contrasting view will contradict yourself but you can use counterarguments to strengthen your own view

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Both work

[@redditgalaxy1457]

No, a main point (which is what he was planning), should contain 3 points for or 3 points against, you will have a counter argument further on

[@SuccessfulYouth.]

Hello sir I did a similar plan on the homework question, could you please help me improve this benevolent piece of writing to mesmerizing. NO VALUE paragraph 1 = -homework causes students to stress - Homework is an evil work that will isolate your happiness paragraph 2 = Is it really worth it? -Homework is timetaking and it makes you feel : lackadaisical,indignant and sometimes abhorrent. - about 60% of people have emotional health issues -they are emotionally ill! paragraph 3 = - it is as if the sky stopped to tear rain from itself -homework gulped all the euphoric, mesmersizing ; relaxing rain('GULP',GULP,GULP) -Dr Walter White, One of the greatest psychologist stated in an interview that ("Homework is a unworthy, pointless and an inactive way of learning) - He stated homework should be taught to make you feel euphoric rather than putting pressure upon your body. paragraph 4 = -tiring to relax? -who would do such an abhorrent thing -homework is a true invader between work -makes you feel indignant and melancholy -demolishes your interest and creativity and the exploding ideas through your mesmerizing brain... I have used mr everything english's technique in the structure but im not sure if im missing something that would affect my lilkeliness of getting good marks, please help| -Truly Homework is annoyingly amazing hahah

[@Amelia-uw7nw]

What is going on with paragraph 3 😭

[@SuccessfulYouth.]

@@Amelia-uw7nw 😭😭 is it that badd???

[@idontgetthejoke4393]

@@SuccessfulYouth. its good if you want a grade 2

[@Amelia-uw7nw]

@@SuccessfulYouth. why did it start saying gulp - "it is as if the sky stopped to tear rain from itself -homework gulped all the euphoric, mesmersizing ; relaxing rain('GULP',GULP,GULP)"

[@SuccessfulYouth.]

@@Amelia-uw7nw haha idk just trying to make it creative...

[@melw6201]

Can you tell us any more of the topics they could ask as about?

[@InsightfulInspirations]

thank you soo much sir

[@HollyLygo]

Hi sir please can u make a video on leaflets

[@kostavlogz3288]

Thanks g

[@supasayajinsongoku4464]

what was the piece playing in the backgroud?

[@nwarrier2338]

For persuasive writing in Q5, are you expected to provide opposing arguments or can you just argue one side? For example, do you have to mention points for both for and against? Thanks for the video, Mr Salles

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

It is a good idea to prove the counterargument wrong, but not essential

[@nwarrier2338]

@@MrSallesTeachesEnglish Thanks, so you'd still end on your main POV? As in, not sitting on the fence, per say?

[@boarbot7829]

@@nwarrier2338 your are writing a ONE SIDED argument, so the only reason you would express the other side of the argument would be to say why it is so wrong.

[@nwarrier2338]

@@boarbot7829 Alright cheers mate

[@dylanmorton9999]

@@boarbot7829 does it matter if I agree or disagree ?

[@imisiee]

Mr salles how many marks roughly do you need on q5 if we are aiming for a 6?

[@nxtleader276]

are we supposed to argue both sides or just one as some teachers are saying more markers are given for single sided answers

[@dapo7930]

Both but strongly on one side

[@villan7h]

oh boy, if homework came up past 2020 I would have some... stronger language and structural techniques for them

[@proudchristian9873]

what is the layout for a speech?

[@fazejustice69]

hey mr sales I'm a bit slow, are we meant to write a plan like this in the exam? also thank you for the help

[@Regeor]

Write a rough draft/ plan on Q5.

[@andreamcmahon30]

brilliant

[@Merrily-in1mq]

MR salles rate english on a scale of 1-10

[@_altrax]

Hi sir, should i consider both views and come to a conclusion? Because that's what I do and I think it works

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Sure thing

[@eggmaster1233]

You should never hang on the fence since examiners HATE it. Go extreme on one way or the other way, even if you disagree with the opinion you are portraying in your writing.

[@Ghost-fh3lg]

@@eggmaster1233 me everything English ?

[@laraspencer7342]

i found the best thing to do is write a paragraph or 2 near the end stating arguments from the other views and disproving them / showing how your arguments are more significant

[@_altrax]

@@laraspencer7342 yeah that makes the most sense it's a balance of Mr Salles and Mreverythingenglish so thanks 👍

[@hanaaa8849]

any predictions?

[@anniegeorgee]

Do you give the opposite argument at all?

[@Pricey0770]

Hi sir, do we need to create headline or does it not matter?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Nooooooooooo

[@nitricacidd7548]

Average Mr Salles W

[@James-fz6jr]

What type of questions will they ask. Eg like an article

[@Ehsan4536]

Letter, blog, articles and speech

[@user-sg9br8bb9k]

Would i write both for and against in my piece of writing or just mainly focus on one and then maybe one paragraph on the other like mainly focus on for and then one paragraph for against?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Always argue for one, and cite the other only to dismiss it

[@aliceredfern9390]

Thanks you mr salles how can i improve my cultural capital quickly?

[@HighMaintainanceMachine]

I'm not Mr Salles, but I'd recommend watching TedED videos and listening to podcasts about stuff

[@musniazi7003]

Hi what order should we do paper 2 language in

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

I’ll release a video tomorrow on this

[@ZainKhan-lc7fi]

Hello is it possible if anyone could help , i am a year 12 student resitting since i got a 5 and uni's / apprenticeships dont want anything under a 6 . Im aiming for a 7 hopefully . heres my para thank you Homework: is it really worth it? Today's subject is homework , a task asked by teachers for students. Many if not all will argue "YO HOMEWORK IS RUBBISH!" , I would argue it isn't. Expanding minds and helping not just the students but teachers to understand how they think ; we all know basic boring homework can take a lot of time but this practice can result in perfection. Tens of thousand of teachers would agree that the students that do their homework aren't just prepared for exams but reach the top band grades , A's and A stars. Not only does this help with your college applications but also your university applications , with millions of students globally fighting for the best university's with the best courses. Doctors , dentists and even software engineers all needing the crème de le crème of students willing to show determination , hard work and most of all time. Not only will you be respected but the salary mirrors the dedication put in to reaching these major milestones. "But siirr how will homework mirror our grades?" I totally disagree that only homework and extreme "7 hour revision sessions" will result in high grades. There are a number of things that are just as important as homework : sleep , social life , mental and physical health , are all just as important as homework. Do you really think Einstein became the most famous scientist to date with no sleep? Do you really think Elon musk became the richest man alive (2022) with poor physical and mental health? Do you really think Bill gates was able to build Microsoft from the ground on his own? The answer to everyone one of those questions is ... no. Elon Musk recently went on a podcast with Joe Rogan stating not only did he sleep a minimum of 8hours a day but he went to the gym 5 days a week to separate his work life to his outside life. Einstein created his world renowned findings and work with a good nights sleep and daily chats with associates to not overload himself. China , india and asia as a whole, with just under 5 billion people ,have more a chance producing a gargantuan number of geniuses not just due to the vast number of people but their ethics . China have recently installed programs for students underachieving causing them not just to do more homework but more 1 to 1 learning with their teachers emphasising how far they are willing to take their education , while students in the Uk and Us are slacking off their homework with no effort . Why slack in a pivotal point of your life . Opening the brown envelope disgustingly disappointed wishing you put in more effort , it isnt worth the despair , depression and dejection. Therefore , i believe homework isn't just a "lame task" set by teachers but practice for your future creating nothing but joy and bliss in the long run.

[@shaunlobo7134]

do we know that we are getting persuasive writing

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Yes, it is persuasive every year

[@olivermerritt701]

New camera for Mr Salles?

[@MrSallesTeachesEnglish]

Yes, 4K all the way!

[@rorevishion618]

Have you done a video like this on climate change? I think it always relates or comes up.

[@N12311]

How many marks can I get on paper 2 if I only wrote one paragraph for question 4?

[@crazyfriend50]

Depends how good it is lmao But ur defo limited to only 12

[@N12311]

I thought it would be like 2 marks

[@ventilisationsystem2266]

i cant believe tomorrow will be my last english exam...

[@azzykara8559]

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[@BroSefat06]

I like how most of those famous figures dropped out of higher education

[@PandaGurus]

So in that case if I’m really stuck in the exam, I can say Mr Salles told over 40k people that doing homework is good and it will be able to change the world? 😂😂😂

[@normalthing3229]

The saddest thing is, this will be the last time I’ll be watching a video from you.. truly a shame

[@articstudios4226]

Idk if you know but Bill Gates dropped out of high school so I’m not sure you could say he did loads of homework if he wasn’t even at school to receive it

[@pigofthefeather1161]

🗜️

[@richardthompson6698]

People who don’t know what a hyena is , has never watched The Lion King.