I enjoyed the story and had a great message about family. Thank you.
@ABTop1235 ай бұрын
I really enjoyed the story, and it conveyed a wonderful message about family. Thank you!
@JohnLicht-j3w5 ай бұрын
SOP for firms is have current Contingency Plans for senior staff departures. Vendors, Clients and Financial Institutes demand it. Good story yet unrealistic.
@margueritedavis71725 ай бұрын
The story was good even with bad punctuations. At least to me.
@lindak86645 ай бұрын
Just FYI “tear” pronounced t-air (as you pronounce it) means to rip something eg: I’m going to tear that paper in half. Pronounced t-ear it is the drop of liquid leaking from your eye.
@MerciditaCapacillo-go5it4 ай бұрын
Its your fault for neglecting the legacy of your father.you didn't value it.
@Michael_Brock2 ай бұрын
Plagiarism. Ie this was posted elsewhere on another channel. Edit correction this is a different spin, and possibly the original.
@billb.58875 ай бұрын
At this time of posting this comment, I find there were only 327 views not sure if my viewing was counted as part of the 327. I was compelled to write this but not sure if I even should as I was appalled by the LACK of the usage of grammar and showing almost NO punctuation anywhere through the visible text as the story was be payed out. The person responsible for this narrative would be best suited to acquire a professional computer program that is up to date with all of the English grammar, punctuation, spelling and sentence composition for a more professional appearance and sounding post. This would make the reader/viewer enjoy the story and fully understand what the author was conveying.
@axionth27sharonannKendel-jk6ot5 ай бұрын
Your not the only one commenting on this appalling misuse of the English grammar and diction,it's prevalent among all this type of stuff
@ClarityDetermination5 ай бұрын
It is possible that English is this writer's 2nd or third language. How many languages do you write in?
@bryzcrochet5 ай бұрын
I do understand the differences between native speaker or not however would an English translation of Dante be acceptable as incorrect simply because the language was not original. Never! If you translate something then check for accuracy.
@charlescouncill5 ай бұрын
And your point?
@marthaclark72274 ай бұрын
I was an English teacher for 43 years…but I would be happy to see correct spelling… “I put the truck in beer. “ Good heavens… 😵💫
@RubyVideoFan5 ай бұрын
Who's Jack is this a little mixed up?
@RubyVideoFan5 ай бұрын
Nice story. Please proofread the subtitles before uploading the story.
@bernieozzie74805 ай бұрын
Poor flow in narration. Real human voice needed to really give the emotion to produce an enjoyable story. AI is awful.