My cheating wife froze when she saw me enter the hotel where she was staying with her lover...

[@GlennMartin-o8c]

Why would a husband stand there and pour out his heart in front of the man. All of that emotion. The husband has to understand what he is probably going to face and be ready. I wish the writer would shut up that damn ticking clock that is in every story,,,,

[@robertgilbert7941]

He or Him = Male She or her = Female, over & over in these stories you get this wrong and it's very confusing for the reader!

[@kinleyclemmons1607]

It was a man brother and when they get that 1 worked out. The names would be a nice one to work on too. I mean, sometimes you know, one character will be called 23 different names and it gets confusing.

[@scottjarvis1974]

Whose father is it fir eff sakes .