A powerful story of betrayal and the emergence of an unexpected strength, It tells the story of Sarah as she reinvents herself and goes on to bring down the corporate monolith that hade brought her down to almost nothing, only to rise again and bring down the very organisation that had taken almost everything from her. To the Author I would say, you have produced a powerful narrative with all the twist and turns required to make a good story. ❤❤
@TheMaskedBondss7 сағат бұрын
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@allanbutcher19992 күн бұрын
Unfortunately there are too many repeated phrases which dragged the story out for too long could've been a bit more concise cutting at least 15 mins shorter. When you going to make a film?
@TheMaskedBondss2 күн бұрын
I hear you! Repeated phrases can definitely stretch things out, and cutting them down could really tighten up the pacing. Thanks for the feedback-it’s always helpful to know what could be improved!
@deandrajohnson62092 күн бұрын
@@TheMaskedBondssI'd love a few more pictures to go with the story.
@joyceneal6169Күн бұрын
Frustrated playwright? Read too much Dickens, who was paid by the word, and hoping to hit the motherlode?
@naomivantonder1161Күн бұрын
I loved the story
@rosemarymoncrieffe5923 күн бұрын
Weird story. All of this over 80,000.00? If this family is so rich, why why did they have a.son just barely getting by? Why would they need that pittance?
@sylvianacpil55402 күн бұрын
Weird story, why does the son earning little not hired by the company besides, $80,000.00 will make them bankrupt?
@karlajensen3708Күн бұрын
I loved this story. Great plot and seeing her get back at the those who thought they were so smart. One constructive critique is the moving back ground is distracting and kind of headache/sea sick inducing. If you could stop animating the background that would be great. My one complaint about Sarah is that in her quest to destroy their business, it doesn't occur to her that she will put a lot of innocent people out of work just for revenge. That kind of makes her a lot like those she's trying to destroy which is the dark side of revenge
@TheMaskedBondssКүн бұрын
Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback! 😊 I’m so glad you enjoyed the story and the plot-it’s always great when a character gets the chance to turn the tables! You bring up a really important point about the consequences of revenge. It’s true that sometimes, in the heat of seeking justice, the collateral damage can be overlooked. It adds an extra layer of complexity to Sarah’s character and makes her journey even more thought-provoking. Your perspective is really insightful! I also appreciate your feedback on the animated background. I totally understand how it could be distracting, and I’ll keep that in mind moving forward. Thanks again for sharing your thoughts! 🙏❤️
@naomivantonder1161Күн бұрын
Loved this story
@TheMaskedBondssКүн бұрын
I’m so happy you loved it! 😊 Your feedback means a lot. Thanks for taking the time to enjoy the story! ❤️
@br_dr2 күн бұрын
You were stupid enough to sell your grandma's jewellery to help your inlaws. You betrayed yourself, not they.
@felybahan93553 күн бұрын
I subscribed because I like d narrator the way he talk n pronounce
@TheMaskedBondss3 күн бұрын
By the way narrator is a woman 😁
@mj8629Күн бұрын
The story is like it took more than a decade to get her revenge. Took too much from her not worth 80k I believe she spend more than 80k to get her revenge. 😂 NONSENSE!!
@joaniecloete2529Күн бұрын
I enjoyed the story BUT too many repeat phrases.
@TheMaskedBondssКүн бұрын
I’m really glad you enjoyed the story overall, but I totally get what you mean about the repeated phrases. Thanks for pointing that out-it’s something I’ll keep in mind to make the storytelling smoother and more engaging next time! Appreciate your feedback! 😊
@halaibrahim62953 күн бұрын
pieces of the story are repetetive. but good overall.
@janejdough2230Күн бұрын
AI created
@MurrayCorbett-m1t3 күн бұрын
Watching from "Moose Jaw" Saskatchewan. Canada
@VedPrakash-cd8hn2 күн бұрын
Too long.. But deceivers deserve to be caught Hope women become soo smart that they do not believe Their husbands eyes closed .. Do not give away your assets You do not know what is going to happen in the future Not all husbands are like this one Not all families and business families are like this family You did good You exposed them
@fiona6smith3912 күн бұрын
Wow 😢
@TheMaskedBondssКүн бұрын
I can feel that! Sometimes a story just hits deep. 😢 Thank you for listening and connecting with it. It means a lot! ❤️
@WOODYWOULD-i2b2 күн бұрын
Story makes no sense. She helped wealthy in-laws pay off their drowning debt of $80,000. While they live in a mansion. Either she was really stupid or the writer is. I'm going with the latter. I'll always wonder how the story ended.
@TheMaskedBondss5 күн бұрын
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@mj8629Күн бұрын
Dubai
@TheMaskedBondssКүн бұрын
That's awesome! 😊 Dubai is such a vibrant and exciting place. Thanks for being part of the conversation from there! How’s everything going in Dubai these days?
@allanbutcher19992 күн бұрын
The background video looks at though they are standing on a boat which is rocking on water enough to give one vertigo
@TheMaskedBondss2 күн бұрын
Haha, I totally get that! It can definitely mess with your sense of balance when the background looks that unstable. Sometimes those effects can make you feel like you’re right there on the water. Did it make the experience a bit too dizzying, or did it add to the vibe for you?
@jeansmith28212 күн бұрын
I didn't notice this until you pointed it out. Now making me dizzy!😂
@dangcoppock7362Күн бұрын
Thank you guys, from reading your comments I stop listening to this boring story..!
@piscesmaiden60582 күн бұрын
I did enjoy the story line. There was the obvious printed 'words' on the screen could have been better without them. Also the story could have been told in less time, there was too much redundancy at times.
@Rx-Needles4 сағат бұрын
AI story So not different from any others on this site
@Wairimu-y6v4 күн бұрын
254🇰🇪
@supenskylesko11 минут бұрын
This story reminds me of the words of Romans 12:17-19 which say: "Never pay back evil with more evil. Do things in such a way that everyone can see you are honorable. Do all that you can to live in peace with everyone. Dear friends, never take revenge. Leave that to the righteous anger of God. For the Scriptures say, 'I will take revenge; I will pay them back, says the Lord.'" Because of my academic background, revenge done well seems sweet. But in recent years, I have found that I need to heed these verses in Romans 12. They have "righteous power" which our own actions could never have.
@davidneville17122 күн бұрын
Yep, another bot fest, AI voice reading another AI novel, same old tired phrases they all use, listen a few of these and you'll recognise the giveaways.
@deandrajohnson62092 күн бұрын
Yes!!! I'm really tired of "something snapped inside me"😂😂😂