"My Mother-in-Law Forced Me to Sleep in the Basement at Christmas-She Had No Idea I Owned the...

[@eleanorturner4651]

your husband truly allowed his mother to put you in a cold dink damp basement!!calling you or texting you baby I'm sorry you want me to come down there he should have manned up and said no right then and then even if you had to leave instead of the hotel!!

[@flionafogarty]

Why change the names in the story? It would have been a good story but for this.

[@fepepay1684]

😂😂😢😮😂😂😂😂😂

[@jacquismith3277]

And the poor sentence formation. Also I couldn't work out what "silly" was supposed to mean. This word appeared twice. Yep. It could have been a good story . . .

[@gabriellafne4218]

Op a mese közben elvált és titokban újra házasodott ? A mese elején Mark volt a férje, a végén pedig már Sebastian. Gratulálok Op-nek, ügyes volt ! :D

[@NedraSampson-bs4cx]

I might have enjoyed it but, I like to read what it's about first.

[@ZXLMaster]

@AlisterBrodie It has finally come to your attention that the narrative's content is entirely fictional. How much longer will it take to realize that your engagement with it is entirely optional?

[@jacquismith3277]

Of course it's fiction but a proofreader would have made it make sense!

[@BuilderofRat]

All of these stories are fiction!!! They always have been, but, they are getting much better. I agree that a proof reader would be much appreciated. I like plot twists, and some of these stories are doing that quite well. The thing that I really like is the this story did not last for 40 minutes. I do not even click on those looooooong stories.

[@ZXLMaster]

The veracity of photographic and written materials is increasingly questionable. A brief illustration follows. A test story: Write a story about two rats, in deep love, and their best friend, a flying squirrel. Identify characters. The resulting output: Remy and Emile, two highly dedicated rat companions, shared an exceptionally strong bond, as profound as the urban environment they inhabited. Their connection, solidified through shared resources and daring exploits, was immutable. During an afternoon excursion in a neglected park, they encountered Pip, a charismatic flying squirrel with a spirited personality. Pip's impressive aerial maneuvers and jovial demeanor immediately captivated the rat duo. A remarkable friendship developed among the three, significantly enriching Remy and Emile's lives. They collaboratively explored concealed areas, shared aspirations, and confronted challenges with unwavering allegiance. Their unconventional trio demonstrated that friendship transcends limitations of species and circumstance. The urban landscape offered limitless opportunities for these affectionate rats and their airborne companion. Remy, an elegant brown rat, was deeply enamored with the spirited gray rat, Emile. Their romance blossomed in the bustling urban underbelly, a hidden realm of companionship and shared sustenance. Emile, ever pragmatic, harbored concerns about their tenuous circumstances, whereas Remy, a visionary, envisioned a life of plentiful cheese. Their close companion, Pip, a courageous flying squirrel, frequently delivered news from the world beyond their alley. Pip's elevated vantage point provided insights into park picnics and overflowing refuse containers, thus inspiring Remy's ambitious aspirations. One starlit night, Pip recounted a legend of a renowned cheese shop, igniting an adventure that would test their friendship and affection. The city watched with bated breath as this unlikely trio embarked on their mission. Their expedition demonstrated that even the smallest of creatures can aspire to greatness and discover love in the most unforeseen locations. … ✨️ These were but two offerings of what is possible. 😎 ZXLMaster Publishing Unlimited O81b

[@Valor_73737]

Writers of these stories can sure be amateurish! MIL starts off as Sylvia and becomes Vivian! And husband Mark become Sebastian! Jeeez!