MY STANFORD ESSAYS + Advice!

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Dyllen at Next Gen Admit

Dyllen at Next Gen Admit

Күн бұрын

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@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 2 жыл бұрын
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@KatyaVasilivna
@KatyaVasilivna 5 жыл бұрын
I rarely feel any sort of way about these videos, but your common app essay was so heartfelt that I couldn't help but to leave a comment. Not only are you both beautiful and intelligent but you have a kind heart, charisma, and have already done so much in your years of existence. Thank you for the advice and for being the genuine person you are. Wishing you the best in all aspects of life.
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 5 жыл бұрын
Wow thank you so much. This is really sweet of you to say. I really appreciate it!!
@frozboomify
@frozboomify 4 жыл бұрын
Hey! im in Sophomore year at a university in Pakistan, and the only thing im wishing right is if you had made this video 2 years ago. This video feels like a conversation with someone who is not only a ridiculosuly talented individual, but whose heart is in the right place. I am currently helping my sister with her applications and we are so so grateful to you for this advice. In being who you are, you give others the courage of purusing their true selves as well. May you achieve so so much more. Hope youre safe and healthy amidst the Corona pandemic. Lots of love and wishes! MHK
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 4 жыл бұрын
Aw thank you so much! This means so much to me. It makes me so happy that I'm able to help others through these videos. Wishing you both the best!
@0819orbt
@0819orbt Жыл бұрын
thank you so much for sharing! i read your essays around november of last year and having an example of an accepted essay helped me write my own, and eventually get a full ride to stanford! tysmm!!
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis Жыл бұрын
CONGRATULATIONS!!! 🎉🎊🎈 this is wonderful news!!
@starkamuala
@starkamuala 3 жыл бұрын
I love how you combined design and geomerty, so creative!
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@esmeraldasaucedo6471
@esmeraldasaucedo6471 5 жыл бұрын
This helps so so much thank you for taking time out of ur day to make videos like these!
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 5 жыл бұрын
Of course! Thank you!!
@abrahamalhamdani1097
@abrahamalhamdani1097 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! I was having trouble with the intellectual vitality essay. I wanted to talk about Math or Neuroscience, but I was afraid that wasn’t the right move. I decided to talk about the sounds and rhythms I hear everyday and occasionally connect it back to math or neuroscience. I did the essay about what is meaningful to you about a series of events that led me to pursue neuroscience.
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 5 жыл бұрын
I love that idea for your intellectual vitality essay! sounds great
@pravinjay1675
@pravinjay1675 4 жыл бұрын
how did it go?
@starrpocketzz6506
@starrpocketzz6506 5 жыл бұрын
omg did you really say EPIC SHIT in the essay sjfjdjsj
@DiamondReacts978
@DiamondReacts978 Жыл бұрын
OMG!!!!! Dyllen your essay was the best thing I ever heard... If it were to be me I would of put something original, but you inspired me to put better things in my essay that will gain attention!!! Thank you so much!!!!!!!!! 💞💞😊😊
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis Жыл бұрын
thank you so much!
@sunshinegirlypop
@sunshinegirlypop 5 жыл бұрын
Wow! It appears you have diverse interests - particularly art, comp. sci etc. My question for you is: did your main passions in highschool relate to your chosen major? I enjoy French and English; however, my plan is to double major in French and Biomeducal engineering. Great video!
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 5 жыл бұрын
Yes on my application I put CS+Humanities (and I wanted the humanities to be art). I think your plan is great. Honestly though, what you put on your application for your major for STANFORD doesn’t really matter. They are flexible and encourage students to try out multiple things.
@sunshinegirlypop
@sunshinegirlypop 5 жыл бұрын
Dyllen Nellis Thank you so much for your response I appreciate your feedback and time! Have a great day. 🙂
@k999ford
@k999ford 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you SO MUCH for the timestamps!
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 4 жыл бұрын
Of course!
@anonymousb1224
@anonymousb1224 5 жыл бұрын
I wish you could do all my literature essay! UR SO AMAZING!
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@jackyhuang1333
@jackyhuang1333 5 жыл бұрын
UGH THANK YOU SO MUCHHH
@syedmuhammadameerhamzabukh9191
@syedmuhammadameerhamzabukh9191 4 жыл бұрын
Woaw!!! These are so helpful ill be apply to stanford this year.
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 4 жыл бұрын
Awesome! Good luck!
@RETVRNAVGVSTVS
@RETVRNAVGVSTVS 5 жыл бұрын
I just finished wrapping up all my essays :) Thanks for the inspiration
@aisuluzhurginbai5331
@aisuluzhurginbai5331 3 жыл бұрын
did u get in¿
@alliehuang9574
@alliehuang9574 4 жыл бұрын
You are an inspiration girl! And that blend of your eyeshadow! Oof! You a queeen
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 4 жыл бұрын
aw thank you!!
@lolaibrahim2402
@lolaibrahim2402 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this
@c3po612
@c3po612 5 жыл бұрын
Thank u so much for your vid! I’m often worried about how sincere my essays might seem to the AOs. I wrote an extremely personal essay for my common app, but I’m worried they might perceive it as a just a sob story.
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 5 жыл бұрын
It depends how you right it. Make sure to not just focus on the challenges but emphasize the steps you took to address it and how it influenced your values as a person!
@c3po612
@c3po612 5 жыл бұрын
Dyllen Nellis thank you so much!💞
@lakshmiprasadbodireddy6421
@lakshmiprasadbodireddy6421 Жыл бұрын
Have you made anything on LOR and SOP,...
@sarai5400
@sarai5400 4 жыл бұрын
an amazing video! you’re absolutely beautiful and thank you for sharing your essays. you are awesome and i hope you’re safe!
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 4 жыл бұрын
Aw thank you so much!! 😊
@kayak8190
@kayak8190 4 жыл бұрын
thank you so so so much for helping me with this!!!!
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 4 жыл бұрын
of course!
@kayak8190
@kayak8190 4 жыл бұрын
Dyllen Nellis i’m so grateful! i’m in 11th but this is going to make applications so much easier, and for that i thank you x
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 4 жыл бұрын
That's great! It's good to get a head start. :)
@kayak8190
@kayak8190 4 жыл бұрын
Dyllen Nellis :))
@sallyxue6494
@sallyxue6494 4 жыл бұрын
Hi Dyllen! For the "Last two Summer" essay, would you recommend saying the specific name of the program you take? (My counselor recommends to do so but I think that would be exactly the same as my activity list) Thanks a lot!
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 4 жыл бұрын
Hey! I think it is much more creative to say what you were doing within the program in a fun and new way rather than restating the name of the program!! I totally agree that otherwise it's just the same as your activity list :)
@pamelafrutos2341
@pamelafrutos2341 5 жыл бұрын
I have so many questions i would like to ask☹️ Stanford is my dream school but don’t know where to start,I’ve already taken a year off and debating if i should give it a try this year or go to CC first🥺
@prithvikota8704
@prithvikota8704 5 жыл бұрын
Stanford is your dream school and not trying is basically throwing your hard work in the trash. It is worth a try to apply as anything is possible. Good Luck
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 5 жыл бұрын
Everyone's situation is different. If you want you can ask me some more specific questions either through KZbin or Instagram!
@pamelafrutos2341
@pamelafrutos2341 5 жыл бұрын
Dyllen Nellis Omg that would be great,thank you❤️ I don’t really use IG anymore so KZbin or email? Thanks😭❤️
@Izzi912
@Izzi912 5 жыл бұрын
You kind of look like Hayley Atwell. Great video and super helpful!
@anto-iz8kk
@anto-iz8kk 3 жыл бұрын
WHAT!?!!? why did you say EPIC SHIT in the essay?! HAHHAHAH that's epic for real XD
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 3 жыл бұрын
Hahaha yup!!
@PrinceAlonzoTV
@PrinceAlonzoTV 5 жыл бұрын
So now that I watched what you submitted for your art portfolio, what would you recommend using for that ? I’m not really the greatest artist lol. Please and thank you
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 5 жыл бұрын
Can you clarify what you mean? Do you mean what medium to do the art in? Or..?
@NYUTisch
@NYUTisch 4 жыл бұрын
Very natural narrative
@NYUTisch
@NYUTisch 4 жыл бұрын
Mi 1/2 Chinese grew up in Taiwan attended UCLA in 1981. Now trying to get a little grant to go to Berkeley extension 👏
@calmingaesthetics7630
@calmingaesthetics7630 3 жыл бұрын
Such amazing essays! I'm an international student looking forward to apply to Stanford this year. Would you be able to review my essays? Thankyou!
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you and yes! My team and I review essays, you can learn more here: collegeessayadvice.com/editing/
@tuanhha9610
@tuanhha9610 4 жыл бұрын
thank u so much
@ilostmyearpodsbtwiamhannah815
@ilostmyearpodsbtwiamhannah815 11 ай бұрын
that essay was AMAZING but are u sure that was only 650 words??? It felt SO long
@nayracristina2474
@nayracristina2474 5 жыл бұрын
Você é incrível!!
@deborahmbay6516
@deborahmbay6516 5 жыл бұрын
ayyye i just learned about the aging baby boomer generation in ap gov this week
@rishabhanand1281
@rishabhanand1281 5 жыл бұрын
Hey there!!! Love your content! I was hoping if you help applicants with their essays. Would love any guidance! Keep up the good work :)
@DyllenNellis
@DyllenNellis 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you! Unfortunately I am really busy and won’t be able to review any essays. Wish you luck :)
@rishabhanand1281
@rishabhanand1281 5 жыл бұрын
@@DyllenNellis that's alright! Good luck at Stanford!!!!
@anonymousb1224
@anonymousb1224 5 жыл бұрын
Make that 617 subscribers!
@MikeFuller-ok6ok
@MikeFuller-ok6ok 10 ай бұрын
I just don't think I'm at Stanford University intelligence level. Ah well. Everyone's different.
@maryfursa5290
@maryfursa5290 3 жыл бұрын
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