A Better Place (This is Our World)

A hundred years ago I went to a Bar Mitzvah of a distant relative. A boy about 13. It was a beautiful ceremony but one thing that stayed with me was near the end where the speaker admonished the boy to make sure he left the world a better place. That's it, just do that. My lyrics, SUNO V4 singers.
Lyrics:
Ooooh oooh ahh, please testify
We know this children Ohh Ohhh
verse
Some come to this world and want to own it all
And hold all the riches, behind their wall
More than they need as much as they can take
And leave a wasteland for the hearts they break
[Chorus]
But this is our world, where we were born
(This IS our world, our world)
Yes this is our world, where we have grown
If you love this world you are not alone
(stand together and you're never alone)
Life is not easy but this is our time
(this is our time, ohhh, oh)
And this is our world, our world and our time.
Some come to this world and want it all
They do not care how far they fall
Some will stop and some will learn
Others will take until they watch it burn
We can watch and we can grieve
(do not watch and grieve)
Or tend to the mess they always leave.
This is our world (our world) for what its worth
This is our world from our day of birth
We can stay until the very last day
(we will stay until that last day)
And save our land, we will find a way.
(oh save the land, don't give it away)
Don't give it away.
The fields of green and gold
The sun that shines on the young and old
Our world is deep, our world is wide
Our work is better - side by side
(we work side by side and hand in hand)
This is our world to glorify
To do what we can before we die
And not just leave without a trace
(not without a trace)
We must leave the world a better place
(a better place)
This is our world , let's set it right
A world where we don't have to fight
We do not leave it without a trace
We will leave this world a better place
ohhh ohhh ohhh
We do not leave it without a trace
But make this world a better place
(ohh ohhh ohhh, a better place)
Please leave this world a better place.
(a better place ohhh, ohh, a better place)
A better place

[@Nordmendus]

Hello Sam, congratulations on your wonderful video, A Better Place (This is Our World)! The heartfelt message and beautifully crafted lyrics really resonate deeply. The story behind the inspiration, from that poignant moment at the Bar Mitzvah, adds a touching layer of meaning to the song. Your lyrics, combined with the soulful delivery by the SUNO V4 singers, create an uplifting anthem that encourages us all to reflect on our impact and strive to leave the world better than we found it. The chorus is particularly powerful, reminding us of our collective responsibility and the strength we have when we stand together. Amazing work, Sam! You've created something truly great! Have a great week, dear friend! With my friendship, Eric

[@Sam_Utah]

Thank you, my friend. I was thinking about this and making notes for a week or so but last night it sort of came together. Once again, SUNO did many things I like and a couple I would change. I wanted it to be a bit shorter but could not find a place to stop that was not abrupt or like falling off a cliff. So I kept this one using the pareto ratio of 80/20, 80% is what I wanted. These are pretty good performances but a bit dramatic in the end. Still it got my message across pretty well and I thought it was a listenable performance. Thanks again for the listen and notes. I always look forward to your commentary. All the best, Sam

[@Nordmendus]

@@Sam_Utah Hello dear Sam, how are you? Thank you for sharing with me your thoughtful process! It’s great how your ideas came together so naturally last night. The balance you struck with SUNO’s performance really efficacious, and even if there were a couple of things you'd tweak, the result is compelling, I think that really. The 80/20 approach worked wonderfully here, and the dramatic touch towards the end added a realistic conclusion. I always enjoy your work, your masterpieces, and appreciate the thoughtfulness behind it. Your creative endeavors are wonderful! All the best, my friend! Eric