No More Souls to Play with/with Lyrics/Remake

[@CrystalCaotixnotcontentcreator]

Alright to prevent what happened last time, do not send your sister after me. Im trying to be honest. While i do think the lyrics are creative, the bit you added between sections was um. Not the best. Now im gonna say i like the art, i like the concept, i like the lyrics, the voice. It's good in a few parts but is majorly out of tune [i get you, singings hard, hell i cannot sing either] from a lyricist to another. I just want to talk like civil humans. 1. I have no complaints other then the singing, it really sounds like you are trying but you're failing, while the last time it had effects that slightly blocked it out, i can admit to some people what i say can have no filter, i was not trying to attack you i was stating on how i felt at that moment. 2. When singing do multiple takes, if they sound bad , keep trying, even if it means it takes awhile to get perfect to your standards. [Have fun with it, a video im realsing for christmas has an awful BF voice, but im not used to making BF'S voice, it takes time] 3, you need to be able to take it when people are critisizing you, if they're saying they mainly like the video but they dont like one thing about it. They're sharing their opinoins. You may as well just disable comments if you hate seeing people not liking stuff but. People like different things. And lastly, please tell your sister to not bring up old drama, and im not trying to either, i feel like with practice you will get better. While left your channel alone for awhile to make sure i wasn't accused of bringing up stuff thst should honestly be in the past. So, take this however you want to, i have no control over other people, so im gonna stop typing and please. If you are gonna get anyone to respond just, try to respond yourself. I want to hear your thoughts on this.

[@ggp2186]

Hello Crystal, thank you for the criticism, it is very helpful. I never sent my sister after you, that was her complete own will. In fact I debated deleting those comments as they have nothing to do in with the video and arguing in the comments is stupid. I will try to work on the videos.

[@CrystalCaotixnotcontentcreator]

@ggp2186 glad to know that you at least never sent her :). I hope to see you become better at this stuff one day. I'm looking forward to seeing you improve 😊