ONE PIECE Abridged Episode 1: He's Monkey D Luffy! The Pirate King Will Be Him!

This is episode 1 for the ONE PIECE Abridged series! Shout out to Crow_Baby for that amazing theme song, by the way! I hope y'all enjoy and please subscribe if you like it!
Credits
Created By: Takumi "KingofRoger" Sudo
Written By: Takumi "KingofRoger" Sudo
Edited By: Takumi "KingofRoger" Sudo
Theme Song Composer: Crow_Baby
Cast
GOD: Takumi "KingofRoger" Sudo
Narrator: Grim
Monkey D Luffy: Crow_Baby
Roronoa Zoro: Heaven
Nami: ToastedCrumpet
Usopp: Schroder
Sanji/Garp: Beerusburg
Coby: Kirb
Alvida: SmallWhisper509
Dadan: PolkaKing
Makino: Aira
WoopSlap: Boo
Earl: RaijinBaba
Misc. Characters
Dick Dickinson: Kraven
Mirror: Crow_Baby
Shit Shiitake: Crow_Baby
Dane: Crow_Baby
Pane: Crow_Baby
Kane: Crow_Baby
Blaine: Grim
Mahon: Grim
Pahret: Sasafrasslll
Songs From:
ONE PIECE
Konosuba
Spongebob Squarepants
Metal Gear Solid
Super Smash Bros
Austin Powers
Ultraman Ginga
Kaizoku Sentai Gokaiger
Kikai Sentai Zenkaiger
Ohsama Sentai Kingohger
Thank you for watching!
Any feedback and constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated! 👍🏽
Episode 2 will be coming soon!

[@TFEES]

Its nice to hear Luffy sound like a real dude

[@crowbaby81]

❤

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Yeah. From what I saw from other op abridged series, they made him have a really high pitched voice

[@Itshighc]

I went looking for an abridged version of OP the other day and could not get past his voice in any of them. I get it, being annoying is part of his personality but jeeeeeez. The voice here is 🤌🏽

[@palemeadows]

looks around. what does this mean lmfao? his high pitch voice is part of him

[@crowbaby81]

@@palemeadows All Natural :)

[@StrawHatNatsu]

LOVED that you used the 4kids OP rap as the opening !

[@MugiwaraDan24]

You can thank @crowbaby81 for that! 👍🏽

[@crowbaby81]

@@MugiwaraDan24 ❤

[@R33ma]

As the 2nd abridged One Piece I've seen (None Piece the 1st, and I don't count LittleKuriboh's april fools video, or Hellsing Abridged intro being bait) this is amazing especially if you are up to date. Relaxed writing or even keeping in improv is good for parody. Please keep this up and I'm glad I found you!!!

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Thank you so much, I can’t wait for the next 9 scripts to be made into episodes for y’all!

[@Metal-fish]

This is the real 4kids dub of one piece

[@grim3409]

Is that a good thing or a bad thing? lmao

[@Calamity25]

1:51 Makimama 🔥 Already hooked lmao

[@MugiwaraDan24]

@@Calamity25 Makimama: “You’re pushing it” 😂

[@eRuTAmMi_gNieB]

Subbed in an instant. Thanks for giving me a chance to re-watch this

[@TheChamp820]

Koby and Usopp sound like DBZA Trunks and Krillin

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Yep, they sure do 👍🏽

[@seanluna5956]

omg no shot bro this is hilarious keep it up we want more

[@classmst89]

Dude that intro was siiiick! Honestly the official anime could take notes on that 😂

[@rhiry297]

Wow… All I can say is wow… I had the pleasure of watching this video, with the voice of Luffy himself (Crowbaby is a close friend). And I will be fairly honest in saying, going in the video my expectations were fairly low. But, I'm happy to say and glad to say that I was thoroughly proven wrong. Not only was this production loved during the making, but many small details were also taken into account, hearing about all the behind-the-scenes and fun facts made my viewing far more enjoyable, and appreciative of the flexibility that went into changing and improving things. For a small content creator, this has the potential to be up there with greats such as Yu-Gi-Oh and DBZ, as one of the best abridged series in the history of the genre. And don't even get me started on that fire intro, the singing of the cast and the idea blew me away. It got me hyped up but also prepared for a good time, something that most abridged series don't do. And it still leaves me truly believing that the ones making this project, thought of a lot, discussed a lot, and loved the work they put into it. Also, the fact that Crow is on call right now, nonstop talking about it. Please keep up the good work, as one content creator to another, I wish you the best of luck and continue to improve your craft!😁

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Wow, this really means a lot. Thank you! I definitely wouldn’t have been able to do this without every voice actor who participated in making this episode. Crow had been a staple member especially in making that fire theme song. 🔥 I hope you’ll stay hyped cuz believe it or not, this episode’s script was my least favorite out of the 10 I wrote so far! 👍🏽

[@Nekomamushi0]

3:44 HE SOUNDS LIKE SANJI IM CRYING.

[@Beerusberg]

Just wait until later when you'll hear me play him fully!

[@Nekomamushi0]

@@Beerusberg”daddies cooking for the one piece king” that’s what I heard 😂

[@crowbaby81]

@@Nekomamushi0daddy do be cooking for the would be king 😋

[@Nekomamushi0]

@@crowbaby81 HELP UR SO RIGHT

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Lol, yeah! The VA’s also been helping me with line direction as well for the other voice actors. Been super helpful! 👍🏽

[@GSMnocap-memesdaily-]

Intro is peak

[@timothywilcox1539]

So of the abridged series's that I have seen that are working to tackle one piece, this is the first one that has really involved me! It goes beyond simply using humor that'll age poorly and dated memes that we all know and love, but also the characters feel believably themselves while still being exaggerated! Alvida being related to Kaido, Luffy being a little more stupid, and everyone's fearful reactions to Luffy leaving the island are all fantastic gags, and I am hopeful that this simplistic quality will continue as you go on! Consider me a subscriber! I look forward to seeing this interpretation of the journey to find the one piss!

[@MugiwaraDan24]

@@timothywilcox1539 Hey, thank you so much for the feedback! When I wrote these scripts back in September, I tried to think outside the box when it came to the jokes. I’m glad you enjoyed the episode! 👍🏽

[@miyamotomusashi6450]

So none piece wasn't for you?

[@desertdragoncomp]

Tokusatsu soundtracks AND references??? I LIKE THAT

[@MugiwaraDan24]

@@desertdragoncomp I know, there’s some amazing soundtracks honestly especially in Donbrothers

[@kullundee]

HOLY SHIT WHO IS THIS LUFFY VOICE ACTOR???? HE'S SO GOOD!

[@crowbaby81]

Hi :)

[@dominicgarcia7584]

Dam this peak btw your underrated as hell i hope this blows up

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Thank you!

[@SZRmp3]

This is amazing and i love one piece id absolutely love to join the team and probably help voice along side you guys

[@acidicperidot]

i cant believe monkey d luffy dropped his dinner :C

[@crowbaby81]

NOT MY DINNER 😭😭

[@drippinjoe4433]

LOVE THIS!! I love the rap💖🤣

[@MugiwaraDan24]

@@drippinjoe4433 Gotta thank ma’ man, @crowbaby81

[@JJd6089]

Epic

[@Bigal-rs4jw]

I can't believe Monkey D. Luffy is a dinner dropper :(

[@crowbaby81]

I WILL SIT ON YOUR LAP AND TELL YOU WHAT I WANT FOR CHRISTMAS!!!

[@thehamyton4700]

This gives me early abridging vibes that I like

[@beastlife9676]

This is amazing so far

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Thank you! Episode 2 coming soon

[@beastlife9676]

@@MugiwaraDan24 Can't wait for it, and hey if you totally need another voice actor I do literally nothing all day

[@demnuts8392]

Yes instant sub I've been waiting for a fire One Piece abridged I hope you keep going instantly hooked lol.

[@hamham4904]

I’m so grateful to have caught this in the early stages, i have the sense that this series is going to go far. Best of luck to u and all the VAs! (I would audition but im too young, busy and shy, maybe if this is still ongoing in a few years lol)

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Yeah, thank you so much! We’ll probably be around for at least a couple of years lol

[@hamham4904]

@@MugiwaraDan24 well, if it’s around in about 2 1/2 years then I’ll be able to join up.

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Fantastic! 👍🏽

[@RajSunwar-b3q]

I like this dub version🤣👍👍❤️

[@Vergilofsparta12421]

So this is where it starts

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Technically the start is the pilot but yeah!

[@O.Reagano]

Lmao love this

[@O.Reagano]

3:44 Daddy’s cooking

[@Beerusberg]

@@O.ReaganoI sure am 😊

[@Mysteryghost-qy9ry]

This is good. KEEP IT UP!

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Thank you!

[@Author-Box]

Yay, when I was watching the episode 0, it kinda felt like it was filled with too much jokes, but now it feels really well balanced now. I give this episode a 8/10

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Thanks, believe it or not. The script of these were written in the same day 😂

[@Aussie-guy_4077.]

3:44 ayo what da hell

[@mohamedzoulali5755]

Absolute peak, keep cooking

[@sonicshadow5221]

4kids rap was amazing and you even changed it to not have chopper in it. No more spoilers (zoro, nami, usoup, sanji get spoiled)

[@sonicshadow5221]

Also can I just say Konosuba songs actually fit in this well.

[@MugiwaraDan24]

@@sonicshadow5221 Lol, it really does. One of the songs are even comedically depressing which fits a lot of the scenes in the upcoming episodes

[@sonicshadow5221]

@@MugiwaraDan24 yo did you create the first One Piece abridged if so go man you can't let others beat you to the finish (take your time tho)

[@tobylee7291]

I think you should do multiple parts of this it'll be very funny to the newest season of One Piece

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Oh don’t worry, there’s still 8 more scripts that need to be turned into episodes

[@ChronixW]

This is awesome!!

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Thank you!

[@MetalPyro-r7m]

PLEASE tell me there are role openings for future characters!

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Yeah, we’re doing auditions for characters. There’s a link to casting call club in the community post 👍🏽

[@PILLOW192]

Only 700 subs? This deserves 10k at least

[@MugiwaraDan24]

@@PILLOW192 Thank you, we’re slowly working our way towards it tho

[@Neko-fx1cx]

This is great

[@MugiwaraDan24]

@@Neko-fx1cx There’s gonna be plenty more episodes 👍🏽

[@Neko-fx1cx]

@@MugiwaraDan24 that’s good can’t wait to watch them when they come out

[@experimentalmenace]

its this the real 4kids dub? just like blox fruits? im on the 32th sea and have the wuba fruit.

[@xenox5408]

Anyone else hear krillin’s voice?

[@MicahMG999]

Mhm

[@bradonbyrd8061]

Oh my goodness wow really

[@tobbbyxd3737]

was that king-ohger theme at 12:38

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Yep

[@Aramaki_fraudbull]

Makimama 😂

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Makino: “Y’all are pushing it.” 🤣

[@pitchershadow]

Pt 2?

[@Beerusberg]

It’s comin 😉

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Yep, just uploaded a sneak peak for it

[@chrisbennett113]

This isn't bad but I honestly think you've got a way to go before it could be called good. You've got plenty of time to come it your own though. A couple of pointers: you need to learn when to use jokes, a lot of it just feels like you're reeling off one joke after another and the majority unfortunately fall flat. You can't copy TFS. In the couple of episodes you've done so far I've noticed the several jokes that you've used that are almost identical. Don't do it. I don't want this to come across the wrong way but you're not them so you shouldn't try to be them, be yourselves.

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Hey, thanks for the feedback! There’s always ways to improve although I wouldn’t say I’m trying to copy TFS. I know I put in one or two references to them in these episodes but most of the jokes were inspired more by South Park and ghost stories honestly. Still, thanks for the feedback! 🙏

[@gilbertotabares8196]

Meh. Without the Sean Connery accent it's just not the same.

[@joshuamccormack9240]

Oh you're doing it linearly and not flash back wise that's feels much more natural

[@MugiwaraDan24]

@@joshuamccormack9240 Yeah, I thought it’d be unique to start off the episode like that

[@kranich9077]

no

[@grim3409]

Wdym by no

[@crowbaby81]

9

[@MugiwaraDan24]

Kaiju no 9?