⌲oneshot : ❝Mischievous Rival❞ 〈EN‒ LEE HEESEUNG〉

[@jnovels2425]

definitely one of the well-written fanfics i've watched here in youtube 🥺💕

[@_mhsoo]

this took me so long, thank you for being patient!>< (correction: white does the first move before black//in chess// sorry i forgot to recheck and change it)

[@lykaflores8173]

It's always worth the wait~♡😉

[@-liazahirah-5171]

The best ffs are made with care OwO

[@braincellswhatsthat6137]

Your welcome❤︎

[@choi2713]

IT'S SO WORTH IT !! 🤧💗

[@piaquidato1518]

WAHHHHHHH!!!!!!! this is what I'm waiting for! 😭✨

[@jungwonismm]

7:46 "If you plan to hit on pretty girls, first you need to be handsome." LMAOOO

[@vanessasparrow2644]

Such a cute story authornim! I liked that this had a cute ending unlike the other one. Sad stuff isn't for me🥺 I guess kdramas made me emotional hehe.. anyway good one authornim! hwaiting! saranghae,💜💜💜💜💜

[@_mhsoo]

thank uu, glad u appreciate the work😭💗

[@shennyy]

This is literally so cute😭 again love your stories, they always bring some excitement into my day!

[@_mhsoo]

off topic but i'm glad to see u in the comments again🏃🏻‍♀️

[@shennyy]

@@_mhsoo I’m glad to know that you still remember me for some reason😅

[@_mhsoo]

@@shennyy your name and icon profile is enough to make me remember u🤸🏻‍♀️🕳

[@shennyy]

@@_mhsoo well lucky for you, I’m never gonna change any of them✨

[@petracancar5848]

How can you do this to me. It's LITTERLY PERFECT 😭😭😭

[@choi2713]

THIS IS SO CUTE 🤧💗 and the way my heart flutters at the ending 😭💓

[@_mhsoo]

thank uu for watchinggg💗

[@mystiquenoodleedits3485]

THIS IS SO WELL WRITTEN.

[@kwnn-L]

Can you make a part 2 or bonus part pleasee~🙏😭😍 I really love it

[@kawaii7541]

Are u kidding me!? Ah! This is a masterpiece u r my fav. From now on💜

[@dhandique8526]

I love this so much please, idk why but I excepted the proposal for his wish and I kid you not I paused the vdo, squeaked my lungs out and then played the vdo again ready even tho it be y/n getting ask out 😭✋ but anyways loved it 😩✋

[@_mhsoo]

luv how detailed you wrote your experience lmao😭😭

[@dhandique8526]

@@_mhsoo we gotta make it very detailed 😩✋

[@sank2811]

OMG, i should stop eating caterpillars! I'm getting butterflies in my stomach 🤣

[@BlakCouncil]

Smooth like butter

[@dahlia3175]

EARLY OMG I JUST KNOW THIS IS GONNA BE SO GOOD ILYSM

[@_mhsoo]

thank youu for coming hereㅠㅠ ilytt

[@lilac6688]

when i heard the 'weightlifting fairy' song i immediately knew this was gonna be legendary

[@genevieveathenamiguel6916]

Heeseung aced her heart, but she aced Heeseung's since the beginning HAHAHA Very well-written💓💓

[@iahsetlucho9662]

AUTHOR-NIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay so first of all that was SO CUTE, AND SMOOTH LIKE BUTTER😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 IM TOTALLY GETTIN WHIPPED FOR THIS STORY😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 IM LOVIN IT! I LOVE HOW THE STORY WENT AND ENDED AS WELL😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 THIS IS ONE OF THE BESTEST STORY THAT IVE EVER READ😭😭😭😭😭😭💖💖💖💖💖💖 IM NOT CRYING--- 😭😭😭😭😭

[@lexi._.czennie5653]

This was one of the best heeseung ff ever I loved it Thank you sm author-nim

[@jjongwiki]

Shyeeet this is now my favorite oneshot Hope you'll make more enha ff's

[@cbg01]

happy 1st anniversary to this masterpiece

[@waeng4129]

this is so cutee!

[@stargazezz]

AHH! MY HEARTUUU! 🥺 This is soooo cutee and sweettt AHHHH!!! I'm suffocating 😂 this is definitelyyy my favvv ff everrr! 🤍 thankss authorrr! Have a great dayy peopleee!

[@dhritigoyal06]

This was so good, right up my alley! ❤️

[@lykaflores8173]

Wahhh it's here now

[@_mhsoo]

thank u for waitingㅠㅠ

[@ginamarcos4058]

So far this one shot story really get me thrilled and make heart flutter, the storyline is great and the choice of music fit the story specially the last part because the beat of the song. I hope you make more good story. So cutee~ 💗♥️💖

[@kavvyb3268]

insanely cute i must say

[@k-popnoodles8433]

WOW 😳 AWSOME. hearteu touching story

[@Im_frying_jay05]

This fanfic was the best one i read today thank you so much author nim

[@priyanshimali8164]

Should I say I blushed the whole video or I laughed the whole video?? I am so confused! Like wow A/n!!!!!!😩😩 How can you write this good?!!😭 Whaaa, I may say I love all of your ffs!! And it is full with all the things which is needed in a ff!! Also, the line at 4:31, they way Y/N cursed hee, It is just really!!🤣😂 And idk why but at 5:25, when there was a discription about that man with his neon shirt and slacks, It made me remind of JYP in switch to me performance with RAIN having orange shirt😭😭 I was imagining him during that part 😭😂 And at last!! Imma ready to marry him!! I am coming!~🏃🏼‍♀️🏃🏼‍♀️ This actually made my day😖 Love you~🥰❤️💜

[@_mhsoo]

lmaoo the jyp though😭🤚🏻 oh and thank u for appreciating this✨

[@priyanshimali8164]

@@_mhsoo ikr, no problem 😖

[@loe12345hsksjeiekwkw]

This deserved a part 2 plsss Author~nimm😭❤️

[@braincellswhatsthat6137]

I just finished watching and it was really awesome Author nim!❤️

[@_mhsoo]

tysmm😭💗

[@braincellswhatsthat6137]

@@_mhsoo Mention not❤️

[@akirashin5995]

Another Masterpiece 💖💖💖💖

[@_mhsoo]

🥺💗

[@leeminhology]

I love this so much please- 😭💕

[@_mhsoo]

thank uu>

[@nicolezhang674]

It´s so cute XD

[@_mhsoo]

thank uu, sorry i forgot the need of existing in yt💀 i'll try my best to be active!

[@nicolezhang674]

@@_mhsoo You remember my comment!!!

[@user-ix5gs2lh4t]

IM LATE? NVM IDC.. as long as im here

[@_mhsoo]

yeah as long as u came😭💗

[@pvlynhm460]

it's always a wish when you're playing a game 😂🤣 lol sorry Thiss is probably the sweetest and cutest One Shot/FF I've ever watched💗💗

[@-liazahirah-5171]

OwO the title makes me excited-

[@adelouwfs]

Ye,ye i found you once again-

[@_mhsoo]

i can see that, you're the first one to commentㅠㅠ

[@choiheemin2239]

For fun~ Remembering the way he said in aussie with jake And his reaction is priceless 🤣 My favourite moment of ramyeonz🥰

[@TheNamelessNarrator-d1z]

Ok but this is so cute 😁😁🥰🥰💜💜❤️❤️💙💙

[@_mhsoo]

thank youu:)))

[@hafudzhilmi]

I'm crying cause this so.freaking.cute.😍♥️👍 do you know the boyz ? I really wish you could make a ff for any of the boyz members ♥️

[@_mhsoo]

i haven't stanned the group yet,, though im planning to i just need time😭😭

[@hafudzhilmi]

@@_mhsoo it's okay tho I'm not forcing you 😉♥️

[@maecailasilagan8383]

Wahh a co-deobi... Hi👋👋😍

[@hafudzhilmi]

@@maecailasilagan8383 hi 👋😊

[@erindizon4994]

Ang cute , i want more❤❤

[@129zzz]

this is so cute ughhhhhh

[@dearestyuii]

Omfg this is so cute😭, WTF👹

[@dalia4825]

This type of man🍀

[@alishareeves2945]

NOOOOOOOO!!!! I JIMIN TODAY!!!!

[@_mhsoo]

that's finee~!

[@alishareeves2945]

@@_mhsoo u the best a/n!

[@cbg01]

wow 😭💓

[@beomadancart]

This made me feel so kilig😆

[@_mhsoo]

the conyo though😭😭

[@beomadancart]

@@_mhsoo I know right😭🤣🤣🤣

[@sadakathosen2556]

Congratulation You officially lost your key It was too funny!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@Suesue06-g8z]

Nice 👍

[@TheNamelessNarrator-d1z]

White moves first tho-

[@_mhsoo]

my brother corrected me too i forgot to change it-🙂🔪

[@TheNamelessNarrator-d1z]

@@_mhsoo hehe lol 😂