Our Real Father Part 1 || MHA x y/n || y/n x Bakugou || MHA text story

[@drizzle._]

Me: **seeing Aizawa is my father before even reading all of it** Them:You have a twin brother named- Me: his name is Shinsou

[@downdstairs6561]

*Casually scrolling through yt* *Sees video and title* Me: YES A NEW YN AND MHA SERIES!! *Cough* totally haven't been looking through KZbin trynna find one *cough cough*

[@katherinelugo6281]

Nezu: If u have any problems with this then deal with it. Me: Dang he is bad ass!! 😆😆

[@oonadeguzman]

*Eri is that one sis and Present Mic is the uncle u want istg 😭*

[@m4ddyiskool]

i love this "If you have any problems with this deal with it" - Nezu 2021

[@pannimenich5611]

UvU

[@itsmecrazy5562]

All Might not even caring about their situation 👁👄👁

[@_an.idi0t.called.lala_900]

no one: literally no one: principal Nezu: "if you have a problem with it, then deal with it" me: **crying cause i want a teacher like Nezu**

[@katsukibakugou4602]

I love this series already!! looking forward for the next part

[@bokutossimp4633]

I’m glad you love it. Thanks for watching 😁

[@katsukibakugou4602]

@@bokutossimp4633 No prob!

[@ana_al1122]

I'M FIRST THIS IS THE FRIST TIME OF MY WHOLE LIFE I'M FIRST 😭😭😭💕 AND IT'S FOR AN AMAZING PERSON OMG WAKE ME UP 😩🖐🏻

[@bokutossimp4633]

Congratulations 🍾🎈🎉🎊

[@ana_al1122]

@@bokutossimp4633 Thank you 😭🎉✨ btw this episode was REALLY good and I'm sure the next episode will be ✨fabulous✨

[@bokutossimp4633]

Thank you so much. I’m glad you like it 😊

[@tamibmarshall653]

I don't know how I reach here but I'm grateful😌

[@bokutossimp4633]

I’m grateful that your here. I do hope you enjoyed. 😁

[@kayla2513]

Me no cliffhanger pls Video sorry hun Me dies. Jk luv this btw cant wait for part 2

[@Im_a_ghost_one]

I love the part where nezu says I you have a problem with it then deal with it like bro geez I live that line now

[@zombi6362]

OMM I need more this is great I rarely find stuff like this!!

[@bokutossimp4633]

I’m really glad that you like it the next part should be coming out soon 😁

[@julianalutau6730]

the cliff hanger* :,D why...... also love it

[@cloudy_yuri4798]

0:57 so y/n's fox quirk is similar to Naruto but 10 tails nice!

[@MacyRayMarie]

I love it thus far! Great intro, wonderful visualization choices and appropriately timed inserts. I only share my thoughts if I believe the creator shows real care in what they put together and seem open to growth. I minored in creative writing and have pretty decent knowledge regarding comp tech and editing, etc. (I’m actually considering trying this out myself! But I like finding quality uploads to learn from, but more importantly binge follow like I do anime and manga, and enjoy lol) I see where you used some wonderful time adapted writing techniques. Timing a bit quick and I think may have cut off a bit of dialogue but otherwise great on that! Don’t really care much about spelling errors as long as I get what you mean lol misplaced letters if anything gives the brain a little exercise if anything ha! (But like your writing is wonderful so…) Not many errors tbh, though maybe give typing out loud a shot. It makes a world of difference when you hear what you are explaining (if you don’t already). There were few things I didn’t like or just wasn’t super fond of. Like the 5 max seemingly max powered quirks thing. Idk characters at max power from the get go takes away a lot from what you can put into a story. Of course ways of thinking that grow and change but otherwise they might as well take over UA if they’re like that powerful. I think top 15 pro level is pretty ideal because they can still have minor weaknesses without having to describe a defeat by something conveniently in their control normally. Though if it’s a loss to being outsmarted, it can be super great when well written! I’m fond of the added trauma aspect, maybe a little heavy on the present time inner flashback. Responses to consider if you so choose to; fetal position, gradual increased mumbling to yelling, stumble falling, freezing (with like maybe sudden quirk malfunction defense) panic attacks or the cover ears close eyes/hide face. For this one in particular something like *Twin/N(or you) stiffened as their head flooded with vivid flashbacks. Twin/N) gained control when out the corner of their eye they see (bro/sis/you) crouched to the ground shielding their head with unfocused eyes flowing with tears silently pleading with the past. Stumbling to their side and pulling them in you try calming them still trembling* not all that at once maybe? Perhaps mixed in with the slowly but surely deteriorating conversation being had at the time about whoever. Just ideas! Also I still imagined Monoma as psychotic and also his calm psychotic angry side. I. An see that dude becoming a villain tbh… You totally can just ignore me! I’m no one to judge another, I just really like what you’ve put together and thought I’d leave some food for thought! Just like other creators here that specify their opinions on requests or ideas, it’s your choice and I’m just appreciative for those of you who really put in effort to make enjoyable content!! ✨Thank you!! ✨🥰

[@Kokomi_Lover]

Ima new sub! Cant wait for part three.

[@KazPlumkin]

oo I have an idea for a different name how about.............true family....or if its not that good its fine:) I love the story!!!

[@bokutossimp4633]

That sounds good. Thank you for your idea. Have a good day. Thanks for watching 😁

[@KazPlumkin]

@@bokutossimp4633 np 😃

[@jadenwise6344]

Six word, all might is our old dad

[@littleelf5050]

just seeing the titile I know this was going to be good I love it can't wait for part 2 ❤❤❤😊😊😊

[@bokutossimp4633]

Thanks for watching. I’m working on part 2 right now. Love you ❤️😁

[@-greeneggsandham-9173]

9:15 AM I A TODOROKI?

[@nobodyimportant1788]

Heheheheh aizawa Secret love Child

[@Whootfasked]

Low-key a fox with 10 tails isn’t that a kitsune lol 😂?

[@justme-eb9rd]

im almost done..... and im wondering who could be the real father....... and im thinking its AFO. It came into mah head. Like y/n said that they ran away because they disagreed their father's opinion so im guessing its a bad opinion? Then they also said that their father trained them to beat All Might. Soooooo im guessing their father want to use them to beat All Might. I cant help it. It came right into mah head😅

[@wimmysul]

A Haikyuu fan/Bokuto Simp and a MHA fan, we could get along don't you think? Video: And you have the ability to be as sly as a fox. Me: *Thinks of swiper the fox from Dora The Explorer*

[@zion2442]

shit is about to go down

[@mizukihikaru6745]

It think it might be a pro hero idk which one

[@real_name_hidden1543]

Please tell me your gonna continue this series 🙏😭

[@bokutossimp4633]

I will be continuing this series. I just want to see if you guys would like it. Thank you for watching. Love you ❤️😁

[@real_name_hidden1543]

@@bokutossimp4633 ok bc this is amazing lyt❤️🙂👍

[@KitsuUchiha]

hey sorry to ask this but can u make this agin but for the ship can it be shoto x y/n please thank u

[@Hitchii]

Lmao Isn't a Kitsune/fox portrayed to have 1 or 9 tails in myths

[@prashantdubey315]

Hey author were did you get y/n hero outfit . I searched that photo every were but couldn't find it . so can you please give the link to that photo

[@bokutossimp4633]

I get all my pictures from Pinterest. Here’s the link to the picture pin.it/6T2nl49

[@prashantdubey315]

@@bokutossimp4633 Arigato Author-san

[@zoieapolinar-agas1699]

Umm can you like portrait it bc sometimes my phone got blurry and i can't read it plsssss🥺🥺 can you??

[@bokutossimp4633]

I’ll see what I can do. Thank you for watching and telling me 😁

[@zoieapolinar-agas1699]

@@bokutossimp4633 uhh no worry's it's just annoys me when it get blured

[@zivaxd-f5i]

why does katsuki call people extras? he ain't even the main character

[@twotailedtang]

What app

[@bokutossimp4633]

Wit

[@twotailedtang]

@@bokutossimp4633 what app did you use

[@anime_weeb8147]

@@twotailedtang It called wit

[@may-lin1604]

is all for one their dad?????