"पापा- किसे चुनूं मैं ?"

[@doctoberbabywrites2649]

A correction : The writing time is from 7:27 pm to 7:39pm and not 7:29pm. My mistake. I know you'd forgive me... Obviously because I'm cute😉

[@nitishmadheshiya3269]

It's all okkk....😅😅 Chill ...yo yo 😂

[@shanutiwari9676]

No 😂😂😂

[@cosmosrays1894]

Very nice written

[@BIO-G01]

heart touching for fathers too!

[@tanyasahu2607]

Heart touching, so soulful😊😊

[@tanyasahu2607]

Amazing absolutely amazing!!

[@epiphonicsoul4851]

Wow.... Seriously wow..

[@mihikasrivastava7178]

Soothing☺

[@homepc6685]

Kota ne aapko poetess bna diya.

[@doctoberbabywrites2649]

Arey nahi nahi🍁 always been a writer!

[@homepc6685]

Kota sbko kuch na kuch bna hi deta h isiliye socha ki khi aapko poetess bna diya ho.

[@amannahar2921]

Superb voice...+ lines is the best combination ever 💯 👌👌👌

[@SurajYadav-er6gr]

Ye poem tumhare dil ki tarha bahut pyari hai

[@manvigoyal641]

You are great at expressing di!! ❤️❤️!!!

[@missknown7414]

Taarif kru kya uski Jisne tujhe bnaya Bhut hi pyara likha h tumne

[@mukulnayak7917]

Wow miss poetess....this is just beyond appreciation.

[@susheelatripathi343]

Wowww didiiii 💕🌈 It's veryyyyy veryyyyy amazing 😘 nd ur voice is toooooo guuuuuuudddd✨🌈💓💓

[@vipulyadav7403]

Amazing.. Keep it up.. Buddy🔥🔥

[@niharikasingh3224]

Adorable dear❣️

[@homepc6685]

Really adorable ❤️

[@doctoberbabywrites2649]

Thank you so much ☺️

[@nitishmadheshiya3269]

Apne tute tukde jodu yaa.. Aapko tutne se bacha lu !! 💓 Vyakhya you are 💙 Best lines.... feelings... emotions..🤩🤩 the feelings which I can't express ...I always found in ur poems and u really wrote all very beautifully. And yes this poem helped me to share few words to my dad.☺️ Actually I was waiting for a video yesterday...par koi na I got this one 😃😃 Keep writing ... Someone always waits eagerly 😁

[@doctoberbabywrites2649]

😊🤗

[@shanutiwari9676]

Wow ! Thats amazing 😍❤ Lovet it Keep growing 💌

[@motivationalspeaker9642]

Best

[@faridaayyaz6838]

❣️🍀

[@ancyriya5409]

😍😍😍😍 amazing

[@epiphonicsoul4851]

You seriously developed my interest in poetry #EpiphonicSoul

[@srivalli41]

I want to also write poem for teachers but I have no idea how to start ? 😶

[@doctoberbabywrites2649]

My process included, writing about the phrases teachers would say in class , that the whole class was familiar with and then making rhymes with including those phrases. When it was done I would cut out the phrases that were already included, so nothing would be left out. Took a lot of time but I enjoyed. Hope this helps!!!

[@nandinipathak4889]

Felt connected for a moment ....and ur voice .....so comforting♥♥♥♥

[@manshipoddar9590]

Your voice has a magic and keep it up!!!!! Whenever you become a great poetess or anchor mujhe bhi yaad krna us din Ek mauka mujhe bhi dena to present something on screen

[@AmitKumar-dq8ob]

NYC di