Pony Tales [MLP Fanfic] Captain's Permission, Brother's Blessing (romance/comedy - Flash/Twilight)

Summary: One day in the Crystal Empire, Shining Armor is asked by both his fellow guard Flash Sentry and his sister Twilight Sparkle for love advice. Being the kind pony he is, he helps them both. After all, it can only be a coincidence. What are the odds of a connection between them asking for love advice on the same day?
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[@PurpleFire18]

Holy buck, I wrote this! I didn't think anyone would do something like this about one of my fics...Wow. Thanks for bringing my story to life in such a way!

[@Bubbs3312]

PurpleFire17 Nice fic you've wrote here

[@avoonis]

PurpleFire17 pretty good fic but why did you make flash a corplar way too big rank he should have been private there is no officer school in equstria. (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻ And flashes true rank is kyökki vääpeli and perunateatteri kenraali (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻ so kitchen second luetnant amd potatoeteather genral finnish army humor

[@PurpleFire18]

Anttum 24 Had you asked me that when I wrote it, I might have given you a good excuse, but it was so long ago that I forgot the reason behind certain details like that one. It might have been my editor's idea come to think of it.

[@avoonis]

PurpleFire17 it would have been hard bc i never seen you/ seen your profile but if you need an idea for fanfic do about flashes training when he was just private e-1 or when he gots promoted and his officer carreer starts going up.

[@DrecusXheng]

That was a good romance/slice of life fanfic, and I approve it XD . Will be adding this to my playlist.

[@kat_eternity2.0]

I hate how equestria girls totally threw flash on the back burner. He was in love with the original twilight and in legend of ever free, he was completely ignored by both sunset shimmer and the human twilight sparkle. It was like he was non existent. Im happy to find fanfics that focuses on this couple. Twiflash forever!

[@Flannel-Channel8837]

Yes

[@jeanetteshifflett7844]

FLASHLIGHT for life

[@ramarama8427]

Yeah true dat

[@ramarama8427]

Yeah maybe timber could have been with sunset and twilight with flash

[@minecraftweeeweeweeb8695]

FLASHLIGHT

[@matchi457]

Shining: *gives flash confidence* Also shining, when he realizes he accidentally gave flash permission to be in a relationship with his sister: wait *wHA-*

[@hellistheunderworld]

it was at that moment, he knew, he fucked up

[@peabody66]

I totally ship Twilight and Flash Sentry. The haters can shove it!

[@the.sketch.projekt8851]

peabody66 #flashlight

[@topsidesleet]

peabody66 Same, man

[@animalkeepermusic4120]

peabody66 yessz

[@Mistymorning614]

I say preach it my brother PREACH IT

[@SheffieldNo14Productions]

I totally agree! #Flashlight

[@sayadiva123]

This was hilarious 😂 Shining went from Captain mode to super angry big brother mode in 0.2 seconds. But he also gave them his blessing...so...even if he got mad, he couldn't really undo it

[@Briselance]

Luna Noire As if Twilight Sparkle needed her brother's blessing. ^^

[@miladmuhammadirfan6832]

Luna Noire

[@yujuswifebecauseshesveryfr9414]

Briseur De Lance 😂😂

[@angelcosby8831]

"Liquid pride" is that what we're calling crying new.

[@madelynanglin6242]

It was what shining armor called crying in one of the episodes

[@violetregnier5477]

Yeah we all are now

[@HSOP-OFFICIAL]

Probably do wonders for the male ego, lol. My males anyway.

[@womenlover800]

Madelyn Anglin yeah twilights coronation for becoming an alicorn and princess

[@jessdearing6216]

It’s been called liquid pride by many for a while now.

[@Luna-fn2nv]

Two fitting end quotes to this story could be "Now, go get her champ, and that, is an order." "Sir, yes sir!"

[@Luna-fn2nv]

"Pound him a 100 times per minute" this is a sentence. In a fan fiction about romance. Well played. Well, played, indeed.

[@spike6099]

shining: "who is the mare you love private?" brad: "it's your sister" Shining: ".......you fired" *turns and walks away*

[@Briselance]

Rainbows115 Dash Brad: "I'll sue you for abusive discharge!"

[@asiamcclain6001]

Oh Crap

[@ashleymedenilla1922]

you mean flash sentry

[@polarmisc9416]

r/wooosh. M-Mabye? Not sure, but still gonna wooosh it. @@ashleymedenilla1922

[@pascalgagne221]

Is Not Brad but Flash! Why many call him like this?

[@volphinaserafina]

When twilight had a panic attack she sounded like pinkie-pie

[@xbellaxrose6119]

Volphina Ladybug same

[@nellyshishiny1906]

ya

[@Remember_Bubblebutt]

Omg. This should be an episode.

[@ChibiWerewolfPrince]

Remember Bubblebutt DUDE YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@Nightingale7819]

Yesssssss someone make this a animation

[@emramariebenedicto6869]

I agree

[@shinko8387]

if it was a episode it whould be my favorite

[@stellacormier5096]

Agree

[@cyberflight3079]

I love this!!!!! He was sweet for twilight, but for flash, he's gonna make sure flash stays loyal

[@mohammedfayyaz2465]

💎❤️⚡️ That means Twilight and flash

[@chadyways8750]

"You know you want tooo" Mixed feelings in that tone scribbler, mixed feelings.

[@cube5337]

Chady Ways mixed feelings indeed

[@wolfiegamingprenteria3402]

Twilight "we're do you think your going?" Flash"maybe another nation." XD

[@siraran2077]

I'm having a feeling that Shining Armor is going to go overprotective sibling on Flash's ass. I hate overprotective siblings because it looks like that they are trying to take away their younger sibling's love life.

[@siraran2077]

Never mind, he's not.

[@lyramoon7481]

I loved the ending where shining armor would hurt flash before putting him to work it was funny

[@Umbrox-57]

The 'Friends' reference is strong with this one. Great work, as always, Scribs

[@zeraothunderstruck3446]

I was expecting the "GET OFF MY SISTAAARRR!!!!" line to come, that would've made this absolutely hilarious!

[@ChibiWerewolfPrince]

Whoever made this fanfic should be rewarded everyday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@Shreena.glitter8734]

Yap !!

[@randycheow5311]

Your voice sounds like princess Luna

[@i.2n.8]

Randy Cheow now that I think of it... WOAH MY GOD

[@sorinafeehan7851]

Randy Cheow Ye I only realised!!

[@edi.-]

Randy Cheow Luna?!

[@watermelonsplays1655]

Randy Cheow wow now that you say hmm.. nah.. YEAH WOW HER VOICE IS SO KEWL!

[@hagos9939]

Woona

[@DocDoesMinecraft11]

Captain's permission to enter from the rear hatchway Granted

[@silentknight2522]

Me thinks ur name b a lie "not a porn account" lol

[@edi.-]

I keep coming back, Shining’s reaction when he sees Twilight and Flash though ;-;

[@Briselance]

Ella Henderson Aye. Shining Armor is a jerk here. Period.

[@edi.-]

Yup, I don't like this ship anymore tho ;-;, but Discolight would have been a whole other story, this is how I imagine it, Flash stood at the edge of the Everfree forest, happy to finally see his Twilight again, as he returned to the castle, he saw a most dreadful sight, a draqoneques, with Twilight in the Library, "TWILIGHT!" He demanded, broken hearted, and confused, "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!" "Flash?!" Twilight said, shocked "Oh, you really want to ask why Discord is here? Why, because you kept going into the Everfree, and getting mad, because most of your children are female unicorn, but before you left, you were gonna have a Pegasus son!" "No! It was a unicorn girl!" "Look!" Twilight shouted she pulled a Pegasus colt from next to Discord "SEE?!" "Ugh! It's over Twi!" "Meh." "Uhhhhhhhhhh. Yes!" Discord muttered

[@Briselance]

Stormy Rain Pegasus colt, eh? Dissie or Twi' might as well have casted a spell. That, they both can do.

[@edi.-]

Briseur De Lance yep, twilights last kid before she broke up with flash, but he wasn’t called anything like flash or twi’s name, he was sent to live with a full Pegasus family, flutter shy and Thunders (it’s a real ship ;-;) twi ended up having idk how many pc kids, Pandora, Hijinx and Chaos

[@edi.-]

idk how pc came into the conversation, meant to be oc

[@wadedossantos4833]

At the beginning, Shining Armor sure did stepped in it!

[@ayajimenez503]

FLASHLIGHT!!! RULES!!!😘😘

[@ho1y_9uacamo1e]

That’s how the flashlight was created XD

[@graciecat9691]

I've ALWAYS liked Flash, and thought every moment between him and Twilight was adorable! I'm glad that, despite the amount of dislike this pairing has, there ARE a good number of people who think otherwise. :3 Off-topic: I REALLY want a fanfic or comic of some kind exploring Shining Armor and Cadence's pre-marital relationship. :D

[@lpssinglove9431]

Lol he just gave him permission to be with his sister

[@Briselance]

Lps Singlove I know, right? As if FS would need any kind of permission to do so from SA. :-)

[@nellyshishiny1906]

ya

[@Raeishere4u]

I dont love falsh when he lives twilight if i see it uwill🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

[@Raeishere4u]

Yes

[@ocomegashadowstacking5886]

So awesome Fanfic Scribbler I love it Because Twilight sparkle and Flash Sentry are in love

[@SquidyOfficial]

13:35 why did shining armor yelled like goku

[@soulsearcher9620]

I know XD

[@watermelonsplays1655]

Lol he left

[@3annoying_siblings]

You must me a big fan of dragon ball z like me😜

[@robcoopz2444]

Flash!!! Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

[@stellacormier5096]

XD WHAT THE HAY XD

[@iceluvndiva21]

XD oh no.. Bad enough he was talking to his boss who is also a prince, but HIS CRUSH'S OLDER BROTHER!

[@pascalgagne221]

Discord: Oh Shining Armor , You'are reaction is be so Priceless! Shining Armor: Shut Discord, Not now i most deal with this! Twilight&Flash: Really Discord? Discord: I will go tell the girls by start to tell fluttershy! Twilight: Wait Discord! Discord:? Twilight: Can You wait befor to tell them? i want my parents know it first, please? after Cadance , Ok? in change i let you go some chaos in every forest but away of Zecora home and castle of the two sister and the tree of harmony for one month! Discord: Oh Ok ,but we need to tell Celestia for this, you know she dont like be in the dark and mostly her sister! hmm? Twilight: Oh dont worry i will tell them, plus fluttershy want it this for you, the 2 week for chaos for your sake and for you feel relax, but i give you 2 more! Discord: Oh so this why you say one month, Thanks Twilight, Hmm but i need to make sure to not Hurt the animals of this forest of course of fluttershy will not happy, I think i will ask a little help for this befor is start, were you are ready to tell your...I mean Our Friends Let me Know! Twilight: Yes thanks but can You give This to my Mother? she need to know! Shining: Yeah Knowing her? make her in the dark of her daugther got a coal friend? She will be mad! Discord: yeah, I go bye! Velvat: My mother sense tell me Twilight got a colt friend! Night light: honey, this is impossible you know this and...!?(Discord show up) Discord: Sorry but i have letter for You ma'am form you daugther, Bye! Velvat: Hmm what twilight..?!(he husbend take the letter away from her) Night light: Honey, this is clearly a prank of Discord and i will not let you be victime of him?!(the letter teleport back to velvat) Discord: Sir, I am REFORM, R.E.F.O.R.M, Reform and Your Daugther Princess Twilight want it this letter be set to you as soon as possible, ok now ma'am read it.(Discord not happy) Velvat read the letter and start to jump of joy. Velvat: I know it, Twilight got a Colf freind and he menber of royal guard! Night Light: For real? she most be fall in love with a unicorn guard..(Discord do big WORNG) Discord: She fall in love with a Pegasus and his name Flash sentry! Night Light: A Pegasus?! But our family line is only Unicorn for night of time! Discord: well Twilight is a Alicord and the same for Cadance and not forget flurry heart , oh and Spike is a Dragon! Night light: Farther will not happy for this if be still alive! Velvat: WHO CARE! the most importent is the happyness of our little Princess! Tell Discord are goin to tell her friends too? Discord: No, Twilight want tell her self but i will tell Celestia and Luna for this bye! in the castle of centelot, Celestia and luna surprise to see Discord. Discord: Hi your highness, i got a new form twilight for you two! Celestia: Oh? Luna: And what is it? Is better not one of you prank! Discord: Oh if want prank, watch your tea cup! Luna: eh? GAa, DISCORD(he a put a fake spider) Discord: ha ha ha this word all time ha ha ha, well back of the letter, Hmm Princess Twilight got a colt friend! Celestia&Luna: WHAT?! Celestia: she finally fond love?! Luna: Hmm wait, so the stallion i see in her dream, most be her love?! Discord: he look like this?(he show a Picture of Twilight kiss flash) Luna: Yes is the stallion i see in! Celestia:...........first she open her eyes on friendship and Now she finally fond love! I..I..I am so happy and proud of her!(she cry of happy) Luna: We all know Sister we all know, she be like a daugther for you, Thanks Discord to tell us! Discord: You are welcome, Oh is something Twilight and Fluttershy want to talk with you two but i will tell you deal with it, bye! Luna: what Twilight and Fluttershy want to talk with us?! Celestia: We will fond out soon or later but first let go to the crystal empire! Luna: Discord, why not you go take her friends two, all them need to know! Discord: Ok, but first i will tell twilight! after all the mane 6 plus Starlight and Trixie, the Parents of Twilight ad Shining armor, Celestia and luna and Finally Spike. is become a big party to celebride Twilight and Flash love! for plan of Twilight let Discord do his Chaos for one month, a first be a shock for the two sisters but after a little think, both say yes. The end!

[@alexmoreno2606]

I ship it Twisentry

[@pockystickmuncher7406]

Flash light sentarkle

[@edi.-]

Alex Moreno Flashlight (Twilight x Flash) and because of reasons Sparklimber (Twilight x Timber as seen in Legend Of Everfree)

[@Moonarale]

Alex Moreno || *I ship them twilash* 😂

[@user-kn8qj2kn4i]

actually.... it's Flashlight

[@ashleymedenilla1922]

twisentry/flashlight

[@SwordTamerOfficial]

welp this shocked even me with that performance. im truly impressed with this Pony Tale reading

[@dominatorprime4705]

oh dang he's tick XD 12:52

[@juanadominguez7902]

Dominator Prime he was so loud 😂😂

[@dominatorprime4705]

luna gaming well he didn't expect his sister dating with one of his guards

[@juanadominguez7902]

Dominator Prime my earphones were about to break

[@dominatorprime4705]

luna gaming funny I keep my's low for loud noise

[@watermelonsplays1655]

Goku lol

[@naenaewhite8119]

I think pictures would've made it more alive

[@lillyexists]

Video: Hey u yes u watching this video! Do u want to own a piece of scribbler? Me: .... No! XD

[@edi.-]

Lilly_WolfMC yes

[@losedorerd]

Lilly_WolfMC thats not funny dumass

[@gumshoess7841]

you should animate it it would be Evan moreeeee amazzzing and this is pretty good fan fic

[@MaxKongo]

10:40 Oohhh its THAT kind of story hehehehe (dodges tomatoes being thrown at me)

[@thewingedmeep2664]

Oh..

[@potahtwah9591]

Max Kongo XD

[@fuffofox]

Max Kongo oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhohohohohoho MY GOD!!! XD

[@CVBarba]

Srsly Max Kongo

[@princess-luna5618]

holy crap..your voice kinda sounds like Luna XD

[@schmackeyjunior666]

all hail

[@Valesteria1783]

:O

[@mooncakes1035]

Omg princess Luna

[@solararabagoinfante2131]

It scared me😅😅😅😲😲😲

[@amiraagape2779]

ALL HAIL PRINCESS LUNA (ᴗ ͜ʖ ᴗ)

[@moonlightfrost3588]

My favourite part is from 0:00 to 18:45

[@bigdogfinest]

Moonlight Frost haha not bad sir not bad

[@cube5337]

Moonlight Frost wow

[@Bubbs3312]

Moonlight Frost Good Taste

[@avoonis]

Moonlight Frost my favorit part 0:00 - 0:24

[@user-wo9np6uz4o]

Moonlight Frost mine too

[@sevastiansoso9566]

WATCHED IT, LIKED IT, LOVE IT

[@WesleyRobersonVA]

I love this fanfic dear it looks beautiful

[@dorkfish1275]

go to 0:00 for a jumpscare

[@cube5337]

Canadaball wow

[@elaina2806]

Canadaball

[@napne]

I saw it and it made me shiver for some reason 😂

[@hopetown2797]

Canadaball Jesus it's terrifying

[@shadowrocks2852]

Omg that moment when twilight turned into pinkie pie XD

[@marygamingyt4628]

Omg its funny how Shining Armor doesn't realize yet they're in love lol XD

[@rogelioayus]

0:40 why is she looking at the left? I'm over here!

[@edi.-]

Rogelio Ayus ~stares~

[@hopetown2797]

I like her British accent

[@pantyosashu8137]

I dont :3

[@JasmineAndCaty]

Shining armor: *unknowingly gives permission to date each other* Later Also Shining: *charges at flash* THATS MY SISTER!!!

[@starryskies9655]

Man, why is Shining always the slow one? Regardless, this was a very entertaining reading.

[@Shreena.glitter8734]

Idk !!! Always the clueless 😹

[@Twinklethefox9022]

Well he's not the prince of love now is he?

[@CaseyDplays]

Really well-done Scribbler and crew. I enjoyed that quite a lot. The story was good and the delivery was great. You've grown a lot with your readings and really full on radio plays here on youtube.

[@midnightgrdina4494]

Shinnings reaction is priceless

[@cube5337]

Shadow The Moonlight Nightmare Reaper noice spelling bud

[@pascalgagne221]

Discord: Oh Shining Armor , You'are reaction is be so Priceless! Shining Armor: Shut Discord, Not now i most deal with this! Twilight&Flash: Really Discord? Discord: I will go tell the girls by start to tell fluttershy! Twilight: Wait Discord! Discord:? Twilight: Can You wait befor to tell them? i want my parents know it first, please? after Cadance , Ok? in change i let you go some chaos in every forest but away of Zecora home and castle of the two sister and the tree of harmory for one month! Discord: Oh Ok ,but we need to tell Celestia for this, you know she dont like be in the dark and mostly her sister! hmm? Twilight: Oh dont worry i will tell them, plus fluttershy want it this for you, the 2 week for chaos for your sake and for you feel relax, but i give you 2 more! Discord: Oh so this why you say one month, Thanks Twilight, Hmm but i need to make sure to not Hurt the animals of this forest of course of fluttershy will not happy, I think i will ask a little help for this he for is start, were you are read to tell your...I mean Our Friends Let me Know! Twilight: Yes thanks but can You give This to my Mother? she need to know! Shining: Yeah Knowing her? make her in the dark of her daugther got a coal friend? She will be mad! Discord: yeah, I go bye!

[@live_fuze_funn3889]

Yess who agree this could be a ship twilight × flash

[@Sapphire_North]

We seriously need this turned into a comic..

[@mariusconstantin6057]

With the exception of that misunderstanding from the beginning I could see this as an actual episode of My Little Pony Friendship is Magic!!! 😀🥰🤩😘🙂

[@coffeekatco4647]

Great reading, I never really enjoy readings but this one is amazing. Also, why does it kinda look like Twilight is trying to smell Flash’s rear. 😂

[@silverwinterwolf2064]

ok so Celestia is the Princes of The Sun Luna is The Princess of The Moon Cadance is The Princess of Love and Twlight is The Princess of Friednship if Starlight were to become a Princess it would be mikely be the Princess of Magic

[@irisunicxrn7894]

Neonlight The Doomhog I thought that too

[@mistymoonbow8715]

But isn’t Twilight technically the princess of magic? Friendship = Magic

[@horsehorsehorsehorse8500]

And if Trixie became a princess she would be the princess of FAKERY!

[@madelynanglin6242]

But friendship is magic so wouldn’t twilight also be princess of magic. Plus twilight represents the element of magic so it would fit her more

[@dragondeathlight2216]

Twilight represents the Element of Magic, so shes probably the Princess of Magic too. At least in my Opinion!

[@nayro7552]

Aw, it's sad to hear about suki. Hope she rests well!!!

[@mirzaramishbaig8980]

I knew shinning armor was not going to have a positive reaction when find out😂 but i'm glad it turned out well

[@francey7859]

Pony: hey you yes you

[@leoflores8174]

I ship it.

[@seanhorace925]

Don't you just love romantic comedy?

[@richaricha9706]

Love yah miss Scribbler!!

[@cakurt]

Why did the pony from the start have to come close...DOES SHE WANTS TO KISS ME?!

[@gachadj306]

This is nice but no pictures why

[@gachadj306]

Love this

[@kittyrainbowcat5934]

I have idea for next comedy vid : Twilight is looking at the glasses of water to see which water is more clear . Then she a glass of rainbow water . She drinks it . And there is a copy of twilight . Then Twilight asks her name in a :O face . AND THE COPY SAYS : “ hello I am Twinkle Sprinkle . U must be Tempest Shadow . Are u ok ? . * copy twilight changes to storm guy * . I zappity zappity zappity zap u. Dialogue : Twi : Lets see which one is more clear . Twi : OMG a rainbow water ?! Sooo cool ! Drinks it * Storm Guy : Hello I am Twinkle Sprinkle . Want hay ? Twi : what the hay ?! StormGuy : Turns * I zappity zappity zappity zappity zap... Door opens and a guard comes in * Guard : Um O_o what the hay ?! Stormguy : Oh no ( runs away * DEAD END ( the end tho XD ) *

[@edi.-]

Kitty and Owll Pinky blue lool Tempest: I zap you Storm Guy: I zappity zappity zappity you. Me: Lol too much

[@avoonis]

I wonder why shining armor is only a captain so who is general when captain only leads one comppany

[@Briselance]

Anttum 24 Maybe he's the commander of some special company. Or the whole Guard Captain is more an honorary title.

[@harryratcliffe8882]

Apparently the rank of captain in this world puts you charge of a entire guard. But it is a honorary title with the actual rank being either general or commander. Not certain. Memory is kind of fuzzy in that regard.

[@jessicapedley4082]

This was a amazing fanfiction :)

[@megaprecorp1773]

Great fic reading Scribbler the ending though😹😹😹😹👌👌👌👌

[@9123498765]

Anyone ever notice that in that starting add Scribbler sounds like Snuggly the Crow?

[@ghostlysammyy8299]

The first part he is so mad at flash Sentry and his happy for both I was confused there

[@gumdropw2366]

I love it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much

[@noxy4519]

Cheesecake ._.

[@lordpkbrong2699]

Robot Cookie Carrotcake._.

[@the_leo873]

Lies And Deception Momcake..! WAIT...WHAT?

[@RenTran1]

Mooncake

[@tori4770]

17:39 Uhh ..sir ..I thought you weren't into stall- LMAO FLASH

[@napne]

Lol sweet story and I SHIP IT! great...you got me in weirdo fanfic mode Edit: now I’m gonna start dreaming about this ship DARN IT I THOUGHT I COULD STOP BUT I CANT welp ship dreams

[@HeroTron727]

Hi Scribbler just want to say that was a sweet story you read and it got a little funny when Shinning Armor had no idea when Twilight was talking about Flash and Flash was talking about Twilight

[@AdellaDratianos]

This made a great story for my birthday. Thanks, PurpleFire17, Scribbler and the crew. I hope that my fanfic would make it this far. Probably not, but you never know!

[@RandomVideos66]

A lot of references from Friends in this. From the episode where Ross finds out about Chandler and Monica. But overall this is a great story. 10 out of 10.

[@BoRaiChoWins]

Shinning armor is going to get a rude awakening when it comes full circle

[@rei.6874]

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH MY SISTER!?" that shocked me

[@TheRareware64]

Funny, when I casted who should play the mare versions of Shining Armor and Flash Sentry, I casted female Shining to be played by Nicole Sullivan (Shego) and female Flash to be played by Christy Carlson Romano (Kim Possible). Imagine those two playing those roles with David Kaufman (Danny Phantom) as male Twilight Sparkle.

[@miwamad7115]

Scribbler should make more of these twilight Sparkle and Flash Sentry stories aka Flashlight Stories

[@joshgifford7974]

Like your videos And you're a good narrator

[@elaina2806]

Jazz shining calm the he'll down

[@lunalyn890]

This is so how the sitch would go. So many good details!!

[@edi.-]

I can’t find any better, this was awesome!

[@gachadj306]

I love this but why no pictures

[@kittycat-re4ep]

When the video stared she said: you yes you. i was like what what did i do

[@ace_of_cups4096]

I don't think I've laughed so hard in months xD

[@Twinklethefox9022]

Yes, the perfect mix of shipping and humour!

[@pascalgagne221]

wow, i am surprise to see my little story be selected!

[@GachaFan-xj4zo]

Scribbler: I shall now stop talking in third person Me: um, you’re talking in second...

[@enolp]

Omg, evidence to prove she’s in love XD The most Twilight thing EVER

[@thegoldenharp7700]

Brad better not mess with the corn dog Kings little sister

[@edi.-]

the golden harp corn dog king?

[@deloriswilson3308]

the golden harp Uhhhh... What?

[@deanangell3839]

Flash gets far too much hate in my opinion, I think he’s a nice lad personally

[@shygamergirl7468]

Omg this was brilliant there should be a pt. 2 to this 😂

[@twentyonecrybabiesatbrendo3094]

HI this is amazing work you placed into it, such as the voice actors sound like the charaters! I love your videos, honest!

[@swarmking55]

shining armor is just dumb not to see how it is first

[@Cherryblossom-ink]

I still want to see them get together in the show

[@americanenginegaming2107]

@Scribbler Products can you do the a mlp fimfaction call transformers fall of equestria

[@avisharamdhanie23]

I love this

[@terjeaasheim3651]

This felt like it could have been an actull episode

[@haleylutz3446]

This was hilarious! I loved it!