The most horrifying part, is it could happen to anyone.
@l1nus0nl1neproductions93 жыл бұрын
Yup 😐
@autumbreeze11293 жыл бұрын
Disturbingly true
@iceluvndiva213 жыл бұрын
I've never had that problem. I usually keep to myself. Let's just hope it stays that way.
@angel-nv7jk3 жыл бұрын
I appreciate the realism in this fic. It's an important conversation to have right now I feel
@alexpolonoe3 жыл бұрын
"Generous... Does not mean stupid" Best line ಥ‿ಥ
@jasonkok99053 жыл бұрын
I absolutely love this fic for a number of reasons. It portrays reality and the society we live in, higher position = power. It also explains about corruption and how one bad apple can affect a community.
@JesusChrist-gv5mi3 жыл бұрын
He got what he fucking deserved. What a fabulous reading i fucking loved it scribbler.
@Paul777863 жыл бұрын
Damn jesus
@reggieblack16723 жыл бұрын
This is exactly what I thought
@TheCommenterDragon3 жыл бұрын
I swear Scribbler, i just can't get over how adorable that new intro is!...and this reading was so fabulously narrated as always guys, keep it up!!!
@awesome7613 жыл бұрын
i agree its so cute!
@Bostonterrierslol3 жыл бұрын
Just a shame it had to be for such a horrible story
@peterbutler12323 жыл бұрын
Can we all just agree that that was a 200 IQ play made by rarity?
@Dashie_1243 жыл бұрын
right
@OtherFlames3 жыл бұрын
Yes and for the people who sadly find themselves in this situation, I hope they also can escape with a 200 in play 😔
@Jerimy_Senpai953 жыл бұрын
This one really hits home for me. Coming from a police family. I know that there’s good police and bad police, and believe me whenever my cousin (the current captain) dealt with any officers like that, he makes sure that they got what they deserved. Especially since Rarity is my 2nd favorite character (Twilight being my first) and she did handle it better than most people did. This was a very well respected story. Thank you Scribbler
@ScienceMan3143 жыл бұрын
Who is 3rd best pony?
@Jerimy_Senpai953 жыл бұрын
@@ScienceMan314 well out of the main 6 it’s 1. Twilight (Because I relate to her most) 2. Rarity (Because she doesn’t get nearly enough love and she reminds me of my little sister) 3. Applejack (I have a weakness for the tomboy types) 4. Rainbow Dash (She’s a bit cocky but I do like that she’s loyal to those she loves) 5. Pinkie (Because she’s insane and I love it) 6. Fluttershy (She’s sweet, but I sometimes wish she would stay assertive)
@ScienceMan3143 жыл бұрын
@@Jerimy_Senpai95 It’s funny how both of our lists are similar lol.
@laurengaming10373 жыл бұрын
I love how everyone was like: This thumbnails kinda sus. When in reality it was clean.
@awesome7613 жыл бұрын
Yes she changed the intro great job!
@darkblastoise91993 жыл бұрын
Wow that is so horrifying 😳 This should be a Grimdark it is scary because it can actually happen to anyone heck it probably has 😨 amazing Scribbler you know how to send a chill down our spines XD
@tudoraragornofgreyscot84823 жыл бұрын
Nah, if it was Grimdark, Cropski would’ve r@ped Rarity, killed her, and dumped her body in a river and more or less gotten away with it.
@DragonFury42503 жыл бұрын
@@tudoraragornofgreyscot8482 I seriously thought it was gonna happen tbh.
@fablecaster16433 жыл бұрын
I'll admit, I was a little apprehensive about listening to this at first. A story tagged as a sadfic, with that background image (at a quick glance it almost looks like there's blood on the ground...) AND themes of police abusing their power? I was worried this was going to go into some very, very bad places (no, not like THAT, ya weirdos!) I'm glad I ended up listening anyways, despite my initial apprehensions. This was a good story and, as usual, the VA cast did an excellent job. MuseScript especially did a fan-TASTIC job as Rarity.
@leonthezombie7053 жыл бұрын
that corrupted cop and Rarity was super well written. this is something that sometimes happens. cops have and can use certain interrogating tactics or talk in a way that will build a narrative in there favor, and can later be used as your confession in court basically. Rarity made a huge mistake in telling him about the random $10 on the ground, those are the details that can he turn against you. the only reason Rarity barley got out was because of her silver tongue being very clever and stubborn, which is super true to her character. but i don't know nothing about law i recommend researching this kind of stuff, if you do find yourself in this situation get an attorney before speaking further.
@jordanjonescelestialwaffle16983 жыл бұрын
This is amazing scribbler! That stupid officer got what he hella deserved! I never thought I would really listen through a whole hour of this. I'm not that into sadfics myself, but this one? i gotta give it a 10/10. Thank You! As horrifying, sad, and realistic measuring's these fanfics bring, it really brings a light to my soul.
@ccatacclysmicc96633 жыл бұрын
This was amazing! Great job to the voice actors, and to the author who touched on some real-world issues
@darkstorm04333 жыл бұрын
Wow, I am early this time. Also, wow, classism and racism is real in Equestria!
@pinkiegoof3 жыл бұрын
from the "stomach on the ground" bit, I immediately did not trust this guy, and then his badge all scuffed so you can't even see his name or number? i would be fuckin outie, even if it was in a police station
@rhazien25023 жыл бұрын
this new intro is really cool, nice reading of the fic
@Idontrunntoofast3 жыл бұрын
Awesome job Scribbler! Sadly far too much law enforcement exactly like this.
@autumbreeze11293 жыл бұрын
The realism is what pulls you in with this one. Even if one is aware, this can still happen to anyone
@iceluvndiva213 жыл бұрын
XD Luna to the rescue! Side thought, am I the only one who would happily watch a before and after video by rarity of this "emergency surgery" in a series called "what not to do: quality vs brand names"? cuz I think that would be educational on SO many levels. Also, calling it now: that badge number was a fake. mad props to rarity to actually use reason and rational to figure out who was to blame, if at all. Maybe it's just me but I've noticed the fanfic versions of rarity tend to be more balanced of feminine and well educated. Compared to the show anyway. and it's not just her: Aj is more willing to let go of her pride, twilight more introspective, and pinkie either crazy with a method behind it or less crazy when dealing with things like pregnancy or loss. Fluttershy still her kind but firm self. However I don't really read much of rd fics. What little I have aren't exactly helping my own feelings towards her. Though this police pony kinda reminds me of the tangled series "legal system". Seriously, do ALL legal systems in fantasy media that deals with Royalty/nobles or kingdoms suck? (RWBY, MLP, Tangled series, and Disney princesses in general)
@LIZARDONFIRE3 жыл бұрын
Oh my god realism is so strong here and I love it.
@ericb31573 жыл бұрын
oh, i've actually read this one! ALL of Estee's stories are quite good, although some (like this one) can get quite disturbing. BUT i highly recommend starting with "Tryptich", since most of the world-building is in that one, so many of them won't make sense if you're not familiar with that one. it's rather long and complicated, but really interesting.
@hrrproductions5533 жыл бұрын
Rarity, no! you keep away from her, theif!!!
@torntokoroa3 жыл бұрын
This is why i stay inside. Less chance for this kind of stuff to happen to me. Leas police i interact with the better.
@crimsonshade54413 жыл бұрын
This was amazing Confusing at first but still amazing Truly an entertaining tale Especially when a new side of Luna was given light to Definatly going in my faves playlist thanks for another wonderful use of my time scribbler
@sebastiansaman3 жыл бұрын
Good story but sad at the same time, poor Rarity ☹
@HorrorLover98 Жыл бұрын
"Nothing good happens under the moon." I was just thinking that Luna wouldn't like that comment when she said "Truly?" Lol
@jacksonortez85583 жыл бұрын
Amazing work scribbler
@noxiouschocolate96443 жыл бұрын
Well this was painful
@AJponyAPschannel3 жыл бұрын
Oh I love the stallion and muses rarity for this 💜
@americaalicorn65643 жыл бұрын
That was a pretty nice story in the voice acting was just phenomenal
@kingemo78063 жыл бұрын
This got recommended to me cause I write horror stories just as dark as this was and this was good
@princesscrystalofthejewelw91783 жыл бұрын
This would have made a good episode in the actual series if it wasn't so long
@xxflawlesgear3 жыл бұрын
The voice, I can only think.. Octavia!!
@1992KCWolf3 жыл бұрын
Just taking a bit and moving on? Wouldn’t Rarity have left it with someone? The cashier?
@OtherFlames3 жыл бұрын
Yes and as revealed at the end, if not claimed, then it would go to the donations she gathered for Luna
@ace_of_cups40963 жыл бұрын
If you found a penny on the ground would you have really taken the time to give it to a cashier?
@OtherFlames3 жыл бұрын
@@ace_of_cups4096 some people are like that
@poptheartist3 жыл бұрын
so this is what it feels like being early hmm? Also even though I might not like most of these kinds of voice-overs I would say that's fine, too long for my taste.
@awesome7613 жыл бұрын
yes
@anthonyrausch57087 ай бұрын
47:57 - Cropsky - Nothing “GOOD” happens under “THE MOON” Luna - So you have chosen “BANISHMENT” then; my little pony….. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
@thecowboyofoklahoma58663 жыл бұрын
That's exactly what I was waiting for.
@magicdawn19733 жыл бұрын
well this is relevant as hell. ACAB
@betsybee91763 жыл бұрын
Wait sooo… sorry I’m confused here 😂 Did He go out and try to unfairly arrest someone again and Rarity knew he’d do that? Then did he get fired? That’s what I got at the end. If I’m wrong can someone please clear it up for me?
@pinkiegoof3 жыл бұрын
yeah you got it pretty much spot on! the wording is a bit confusing for sure, but that's pretty much what happened :)
@betsybee91763 жыл бұрын
@@pinkiegoof oh ok thanks!
@OtherFlames3 жыл бұрын
Sometimes, some people don’t truly learn their lesson nor acknowledge when they are given a second chance
@youngmasterzhi2 жыл бұрын
There are only two types of lawbringers: bullies and people who were bullied
@kittythefox84503 жыл бұрын
Really great scribble i love it
@l1nus0nl1neproductions93 жыл бұрын
That so calld officer are Amung the same type of people How consider it a crime to ”steal” food out of the dumpster 😤 which is just BS because you discarded the food there for you don't want it anymore and considering how much fresh food we all throw away why not donate it instead or put into bioenergi-plant. Or Maby Even sell it at a lower price
@quintonjones26993 жыл бұрын
Fantastic work
@hawkfeather68023 жыл бұрын
I'm 15 minutes in and the only two things I keep wondering is, is Rarity being arrested? And what did she do? Or what do they think she did? Ok, so they think she stole stuff. I don't think he's a real cop. Wow that was great! I was worried Rarity would go to jail!
@RadiantBleu3 жыл бұрын
I have never wanted to punch a horse so badly, I do not like him
@Tequila4Days3 жыл бұрын
Intro is so cute
@WolfX11203 жыл бұрын
Great one,,, /)
@awesome7613 жыл бұрын
4th technically
@futabanarugonzalez33993 жыл бұрын
Rarity was framed
@sunnymadman3 жыл бұрын
👀
@Nyxedmisfit3 жыл бұрын
Give back my name t-t
@punkfluff33954 ай бұрын
This also kinda feels like a darkfic, too.
@derianimp3 жыл бұрын
Amazing!
@tyty3343512 ай бұрын
Are we sure that wasn't a fake cop? Seems like it.
@RanchHog3 жыл бұрын
I liked the old intro
@caleyyouhavtyuiopiy3 жыл бұрын
Why you would be a great app and make a good
@zacharyalanjones11453 жыл бұрын
Hi love your vidoes
@morningplane10 ай бұрын
I would pick up a quarter no shame 😭
@Dragonlove33 жыл бұрын
Amazing 😂😂
@GodofFreedom Жыл бұрын
Wen Blessing
@glodibisimwa29963 жыл бұрын
Wow
@gn4rpz-the-c4t11 ай бұрын
this fic sounds like its trying to be based in reality, but rarity's rebuttals would've 100% gotten her arrested irl. "you lose your rights when you don't know them" ok. why isnt she talking to a lawyer. why does she keep talking to him.
Are we meant to feel bad for Rarity here? Stealing from fountains and tables is a crime.
@tinab29923 жыл бұрын
She didn’t steal from any fountains or tables though?
@25_Hour_Productions3 жыл бұрын
@@tinab2992 Then how did she get all those coins/bits?
@tinab29923 жыл бұрын
@@25_Hour_Productions It says that she got found then on the ground, wedged in between cracks and crevasses where people would think to look, and half buried under the dirt. She never stole she simply found them on the ground and when she witnessed people dropping or loosing them she would give them back to their rightful owner
@ut-fanperson.72333 жыл бұрын
What is this. Only 14k views? Only 700 likes? s h e e s h. v