Pony Tales [MLP - FiM Fanfic Readings] 'Treating Her Right' by Rated PonyStar (Romance - AppleDash)

[@hopefullyentertainment6029]

Some Fanfics Are Good Some Fanfics Are Bad This Fanfic..... Is Perfection

[@caitlynagafitei6145]

Hopefully Entertainment I agree this fanfic is perfect 😍

[@bat_spider616]

Indeed, this is one of the best fanfics I've ever heard, and I'm a sucker for good romance.

[@Digdiga]

It still is... perfect for December

[@kxp71]

people ask why I love Appledash, THIS IS WHY because every fanfiction I've seen is of this quality Scribbler you have an amazing voice =D

[@alanawright8818]

Yes someone with TASTE

[@hatchetninja5499]

i still laugh my ass off after hearing when rainbow dash pissed in the rude unicorn's popcorn that was priceless! 😆

[@tonkskids7449]

If I could laugh in double time, I would have. Two likes. One on the dock, one in my heart. P.S. I know its three years late, but hey, you still watch Harry Potter or some crap like that, right?

[@WingsOfFireAgain]

I just realized that...

[@esthermtonga1486]

That's it Scribbler- You've converted me to an AppleDash believer.

[@alanawright8818]

Welcome to the club

[@hellistheunderworld]

Hell yeah!

[@Emsieleonora]

"is dash my new sister-in-law?" OMG, i kinder giggled at that XD

[@kbeats5289]

I now believe, out of every Apple Dash fic I've heard. This one is my favorite!! It is simply incredible! Scribbler, you did such an incredible job bringing this story to life. The voice acting was spot on! And that music!!! Eeeeee!!! Oh my gosh. Just awesome!!

[@abbyharris7560]

"Here lays Rainbowdash, bored to death." Sounds like me.

[@studyfirstkids6744]

Ditto!

[@scarletlightning565]

57:00 Rainbow's line there when AJ is hugging her was PERFECT!

[@miahammonds525]

"Let's just say I buttered her popcorn a bit" - Rainbow Dash I'm weak😂😂😂😂😂😭😭😭😭

[@Anna-xe7mn]

oh. my. celestia. Am I the only one crying at the VERY END? being a friend of both of them, knowing them for a couple of years, and hanging around, no matter what, *sniff* omc. *cry*

[@abigailfite6383]

I was dying laughing when Twilight stuck a thermometer in Rainbows mouth.

[@waldenbeaudet736]

The best fanfic ever!!! Watched it at least three times. I wish real love could exist like this...

[@MLPSolarDash]

This is so adorable :D I was crying a bit at the end, a touching story with humorous moments. :D

[@SilverSpoonRiche]

I ship these two with a nice "BOOT TO THE HEAD!" 7:07 "AND ONE FOR JENNY AND THE WHIMP!"

[@danglingbananaman4887]

From the moment that rainbow walked in too pick up applejack for the date, I just couldn't stop smiling!

[@graciecat9694]

I COULD make a comment about how much I enjoyed this reading, or about how wonderful the voice acting and editing were, or about how incredibly sweet the story is, but... the other people seem to have that covered. (Though, I still heavily applaud all the above.) SO, instead, I'm going to make a comment about a very particular little detail that I particularly liked about this that I haven't seen anyone else comment about (though, admittedly, I didn't scroll TOO far down). I would just like to say, you made an EXCELLENT choice for the music for the kiss/confession scene. Yeah, I recognized it within the first few notes! "Make a Wish" from Pokemon Movie 06; my favorite lyrical song to come from the Pokemon franchise, I LOVE IT to death, and have always thought it would work perfectly in many other emotional scenes, like this one! This comment probably doesn't mean much to anyone, but that's fine. I'd just like to end off by saying you have great taste in music, and thank you for the wonderful video! :D

[@AlexandrieRose]

28:21 AppleJack Gave a Mischievous Smile (Uses RD Voice) . . . Error. But still, Good fic! . . . Wait.. What.. NOOOOO I'm Into AppleDash Now!!! Damn You!!!

[@Silence6969]

she used RD's voice cause the "you'll see..." WAS RD,lol :)

[@tonkskids7449]

My ships are AppleDash ButtonBelle Thunderloo GentleBloom Fluttercord CheesePie RariPants and SunStar. I can't really ship Twilight because she's immortal. Now you might be like," Well what about Fluttercord?" To which I answer,"I believe that Discord will snap if he doesn't have something to tether him to reality. Twilight is more set on the ground as the Princess of Friendship, but no doubt that being the Spirit of Chaos and Disharmony slowly corrodes the mind. And before you go,' Well, wouldn't Twilight go mad with the pain of losing her best friends?' No. She wouldn't. She has the other Princesses to hold her together, and the glory and joy of spreading Friendship. What does Discord have? A legacy of terror and a constant struggle to keep the naturally unnatural chaos from feasting on his sanity and friends. That was a rant.

[@itssnotsobad]

why is that a bad thing :(

[@AlexandrieRose]

@@itssnotsobad it isn't. I was trying to make a joke.

[@friendlyflygon7529]

I'm not much for shipping in fact I don't ship at all romantically for any character. I like seeing Applejack and Rainbow as just really good friends like Vinyl and Octavia. This one though, I can't help shake the feeling that this one just feels right, like it struck a chord in my heart. Is it because I can relate to Applejack on this? Perhaps, but this fiction just seems to flow to well that it makes me feel like this is what would actually happen if the two had an unforgettable night together. Kudos to the writer on the story. I thoroughly enjoyed closing my eyes and envisioning myself inside the story from their perspective. Great job reading it as well. I would love to hear more stories like this one.

[@DayDreamer-777]

I love this Fanfic so much that I watched five times over time of a week. When you mix My Little Pony characters, mostly Rainbow Dash and Apple Jack, and Romance... it makes me what to cry. I think I teared up when Rainbow Dash was complementing Apple Jack about her dress and personality in the restaurant, Apple Jack saying "Dashie" in her sleep, and when they were kissing and saying that they loved each other. "BEST STORY EVER!!!!" I wonder how Apple Jack's family will react to it when they both tell them? Kudos to you Rated PonyStar and Scribbler!!!

[@mil-2287]

I CAN'T WITH THIS FANFIC, IS FUCKING BEAUTIFUL OMG, THIS IS THE SECOND TIME I'M HEARING IT AND I'M SCREAMING LIKE A 4-YEAR OLD LITTLE GIRL!!!!!!!!!!! IS SO CUTE YET STILL IN THEIR CHARACTERS, I CAN'T EVEN DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I LOVE IT, AND YOUR ACTING, MUSIC AND SOUND EFFECTS WERE JUST PERFECT!!!! ♡♡♡ Now that I think about it, this is probably my favorite Appledash fanfic plus reading, is pure perfection!

[@MasterMarioLink]

still one of the best romance fics out there, and excellently voiced! kudos

[@12amocha]

I cannot tell you how much I loved the music choices, and the background noise/ambience. It did an amazing job capturing the atmosphere and it made everything so much easier to visualize. And the voice acting of course is as good as always. Telling you that you did an amazing job would be an understatement.

[@anthony6787]

Scribbler I don’t know how you do it but every single Appledash stories you’ve made have turned out awesome. Thank you

[@infernoreg1709]

I..... am so happy right now that my spelling is being effected. That story has put tears of joy in my eyes and ignited a flame in my heart. I am just beyond words at this point.

[@LoKoSFermincho]

Best. Fanfic. Ever. Perfectly read, awesome voice acting and wonderful background music. Not just your longest, your BEST work so far! You're awesome Scribbler! Thank you so much for every single work of yours. U ROCK! ;D

[@miahammonds525]

This had me in tears the whole time I was watching this. I mean, come on, Appledash is such a good ship. When you combine ponies like Rainbow Dash and Applejack and a little flavor of romance, that makes you want to be enjoy the whole thing. When I tell you that Rainbow Dash complimented Applejack on her dress and personality, Applejack saying Dashie in her sleep and that kissing part and saying how much they love each other, that made my day and it made my heart melt. Let there be a part 2.

[@camtheman9367]

I thought is was brilliant. I think the fanfic was excellently crafted and the story was read and told with a lot of heart. I also enjoyed how the relationship blossomed and thought it was a very appropriate way to show same sex relationships can be just as sweet as the opposite relationships.

[@battleaxe9145]

I had a good feeling about this fanfic reading when I heard blink 182 in the beginning. And that’s at the bottom of my favorite parts about it. Well done.

[@angelrain4783]

This is the best appledash fanfic I've ever read and it's one of my favourites too I absolutely love it I've watched this video all the way through about 6 times now. Normally with a long one like this i only watch it once because I won't have the same experience twice but with this I've had it 6 times so far and it's the only one that I've ever re watched or at least re watched the most.

[@deysianesilva2781]

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[@Bubbs3312]

This fanfic was the first ever thing to get me into tears, I never thought I could get so emotional in my whole life until now and I hope I'll never forget this beautiful fanfic for the rest of my days in this earth. Also this makes me feel so happy and helps me see that not everything is grim, nor is anything dull, beauty is in the eye of the beholder and it makes my heart feel good.

[@Tchernobog11]

I am now intensely jealous of Rated Ponystar. None of the readings I've had sound anywhere CLOSE to as good as this! :D

[@badb3876]

“Ok best! mEaL EVER!!!” 😂👌🏻 love it

[@FailedRanger]

one of my favorite fics ever. I still remember when scribbler first released it god its been so long. so much has happened but still one of the greatest

[@LaissezFairyWriter]

Oh my gosh, 9:03-9:50 hit really close to home for me.

[@BethIsEpicness]

OMG! OMG! OMG! THAT WAS AMAZING! HAD ME SMIRKING THE WHOLE WAY THROUGH! I LOVED IT! THE MUSIC WAS PUT IN JUST AT THE RIGHT MOMENTS AND THE VOICES WERE JUST... BRAVO! BRAVO!

[@caitlynagafitei6145]

Bethany Brindley I agree best fanfic ever I’ve never seen a more romantic amazing beautiful awesome fanfic with my favourite ship in it before I watched this like 4 times omg love it 😍

[@sleepdeprivedartist]

Ok his has to be one of my favourite apple dash fanfics ever the voices the story omggggggg I couldn’t help but clap and hold back a lil scream like a fan girl at the end-

[@theonzeylott]

XD apple bloom 'is dash my new sister in law' 1:09:31 XD

[@caitlynagafitei6145]

omg i heard that XDXD

[@dizzydores4815]

paiges pontlessposts oh GOD I heard it HAHAHA

[@tonkskids7449]

Yes, Apple Bloom, meet your new sister-in-law. Don't expect Scoots to be willing to share.

[@abigailfite6383]

She said that omg that’s. Amazing

[@itssnotsobad]

I LOVE THAT BRUHH IMMA CRY

[@rodriguezrafael3068]

that was honestly an amazing story PERFECT! job

[@cursedshotty3931]

I dont really like this kind of stuff but this just warmed my heart so quick

[@rainbowdashie2257]

PLEASE TELL THE THE GUY WHO MAKE IT TO MAKE A PART 2

[@billymccrary2246]

Maybe about their marriage and/or them on the challenge of parenthood with them as mothers to their baby child.

[@absentheroestm4305]

OMG I wouldn't usually stay up a whole hour listening to one of these but man... This was WORTH IT. I literally just couldn't breathe at the end it was so cute ♡♡

[@taylorhamilton3277]

This is the best story I have ever heard.

[@fangmoney678]

That was the BEST fanfic I have EVER heard!!!

[@Marisol1722]

This story made me laugh, scream with joy and cry with happiness

[@lazarus6663]

O...My.. gosh.. wow that was amazing! Super duper cute story with your fantastic reading!

[@zenertia]

I've always been a fan of PinkieDash, but AppleDash seems to always be written with a slow, realistic pace. This fic in particular feels so personal and believable. Your readings are amazing, Scribbler! Even if this IS from 2013, some things are timeless ♥

[@rosaperegrine4556]

Forget TwiDash... OMG I WUB APPLEDASH! SO GODANM CUTE!

[@stevenvinson5455]

That was wow *sniffles* most amazing AD fanfic yet😂

[@emarkus]

my heart exploded a million times thank you

[@fridawarnemyr6025]

A-maze-ing! :D LOVE the voices for the different ponies- er and Spike!- :)

[@wilyserpent]

I can’t believe that people have been shipping Rainbow Dash and Applejack for quite a few years now. I always thought it was right after the MLP: FIM’s final episode haha and this was a lovely listen

[@AceFurryTrash]

Cause and effect they dated in the show because it's the main ship

[@dasturdash6930]

I’ve listened to this at least 12 times and yet I still find it amazing, I don’t think I’ll ever get over it! You did great scribbler!

[@DianeHeartbeat]

I just wanted to say that this is the greatest reading I have ever listened too and think that you did an amazing job with the voices, background sounds, music, the story was so beautiful. I loved it, Thank you so much for reading this to us *Hugs*

[@deriksesio1414]

That was so Good. The sound effects helped alot.

[@cypress2539]

Best fanfic I've ever heard in my life...until I find another one

[@toni-onisavage3374]

This will forever be my best MLP fanfic fairytale ever told by Scribbler! ❤

[@kingkraken5740]

Oh wow crap. I thought my readings were pretty decent, but... just... HOW DO YOU PRODUCE THIS AMAZINGNESS

[@NorthernRoo]

I have been meaning to request this from you for a month now and you went a did it already. You are brilliant! I love this fic and this pairing. Thank you.

[@anaouckamana8834]

This story is so touching

[@nessaplier1330]

Omg applejack is my fave but I ship them so damn hard!!

[@wattsink2009]

I’ve found a new favorite shipping story! That was beautiful!

[@haramberoth117]

Can we all appreciate…..Bucky ….cash….. “I ate some hay….today….to see if it tasted good…if you could eat it all …lined up on the ground ..it will make you full ….it will make you hurt”

[@deborahtreibs2303]

I watch this every year and it never gets old :) except when im hungry...…… then I focus on food and not this xD

[@carlosplancarte2667]

beautiful just beautiful😭👌 only if all fanfics are this good!😭👍

[@Runescythe9852]

This was a priceless level of sweet. Kinda sad that I joined this series at the end rather than enjoying the ride all way through.

[@KakashiHatake-qr9xe]

Oh My Gosh! This, this, this was the best one I have ever heard. This was pure perfection. And I relate to Apple Jack and Rainbow Dash the most. Everything that Apple Jack has dreamed of or was thinking/saying is also "me". And every detail, action, thought process, attitude of Rainbow Dash in this story was "me" as well. My oc pony is similar to Rainbow Dash because I relate to her the most. A Tom Boy who wants a colt to treat her as she should be treated. My Dreams are still out there and hoping one day it will happen. And I would do what Rainbow Dash would do....help a friend to fulfill their dreams even if it means putting mine aside. I would wear a suit than a dress anytime, anywhere! Cause suits are 20% Cooler!

[@UhrwerkKlockwerx]

Brought tears of happiness to my eyes 100/100 I’m an AppleDash supporter through and through

[@anthony6787]

I don’t know how you do it scribbler but this was one of the best appledash love stories I have ever heard

[@reverb2516]

i did very much :) i'm a major sucker for romance stories

[@sienguo69]

This is my best fanfic experience ever. Such touching music and such witty sound effects just make this read...unparalleled

[@nightcoregirl9527]

omg I almost cried I love appledash

[@caitlynagafitei6145]

nightcore girl me too 😍👌🏻

[@tipxxxxxxx]

i love scribblers readings i really do :')

[@rosaperegrine4556]

Eyup

[@hatchetninja5499]

the song at the end is called " make a wish " ( forgot who sang it though but oh well ) a song that was from a movie I seen called "poke`mon jirachi wish maker " ( I might have butchered the title a bit ) nonetheless its a beautiful song I recognized right away as it started playing.

[@MelodySnowflakeVA]

I'm not an Appledash shipper, but oh man... this was beautiful, and so very sweet!

[@savsabds]

At first, I kinda iffy on appledash... but this... this was perfect... it was just beautiful!

[@flutterarts2527]

That was so cute!!! And your vioce matches perfectly with the stories Keep making them and well done 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

[@reverb2516]

that was so beautiful, it might be my very favourite of your readings, which is REALLY saying something :)

[@SilverSpoonRiche]

Wow, Dashie made Rarity's dream come true in the process of fulfilling AJ's fantasy! ;D

[@sawyerpatton2932]

You're amazing voice acting did this wonderful fanfic justice. I admire your talent and I am glad I stumbled onto your channel. Thank you for sharing your talent and uploading so much wonderful content.

[@helious5056]

When I heard those first few beats from ring of fire I couldn't help but to start singing. I fell into a burning ring fire. I fell down down down and the flames went higher and it burns burns burns that ring of fire, that ring of fire

[@richardking1725]

So many years later this is still my fav

[@ify.i3039]

"....... being one of does mares in romance books that fluttershy is always talking about. " Wait, something doesn't seem right

[@rebelpuppie]

Oh my god! After months of searching for something from my childhood, I found it, and it is still as good as ever.

[@Silence6969]

that wolf howl was my ringtone :3

[@Twilightmidnight1987]

This was so adorable I love appledash

[@cultivatormanhwa]

i love appledash fanfics the most if you could i would like you to read some more:P

[@tfrankrathkey4146]

i almost started to cry it was beautiful :')

[@ShiitakeWarrior]

Over 600 subscribers when this reading was uploaded. And now you have well over 26,000 subbers! WTG Scribbler! =D

[@williammoore3371]

Ok I take that back about rainbow dash that made me cry god that was so sweet and I'm usually a twidash fan if only they had a part 2

[@delayedhome]

That was adorable. Very well written fic

[@Voingous]

Woah, getting to the ending where you said you had 600 subscribers and then checking your current subscriber count was crazy. I'm so glad you're doing well, your readings are great!

[@josegar30]

Perfect, I couple story that I don't mind. I didn't cry, but my heart fill like a rainbow (no pond intended)

[@zjork]

i'v had this on repeat for the last 4 hours now! i love it! i love it so much!!! this is truly amazing! thank you so much for doing this reading! :) it makes me happy on sad days!

[@pomflinx7756]

Since it's official now this is even more cute!!!!!

[@TheAncientdragon1]

That was a beautiful reading of the story! You did an amazing job at it. I look forward to reading your own story, once I can.

[@mrbishp33]

i've listened to alot of dubings by people but your the best by far ive listen to. looking forward to more

[@rezredstripe2774]

Love this reading, also the story your writing. Cant wait for more of your story

[@ummhallelujah6889]

This fan fic is proof that not all fan fics are awful! I don't know why some people say they are...

[@MartinThomas]

A kiss to seal the deal

[@KalikaStorm]

I'm crying it's so beautiful