Post Apocalyptic Short Film - The Last Whimper

[@TheSkete]

The BIG clue was she said she hadn't eaten in four days, yet she wasn't trying to rip that can apart. "Damsel in distress" is one of the oldest tricks in the book.

[@brock3426]

And that's why you don't trust no one. Unless they your loved ones

[@peezhead]

Sometimes your loved ones are not to be trusted...

[@theexisting1197]

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[@tarniikoltoroc8068]

A reocurring theme of such movies: helping others leads to an unfavorable result. Are humans really that bad?

[@markward3981]

Good film . I saw the ending coming. She was too clean , and asked too many questions. His first instinct was not to go. Follow your first instinct . It is often best .

[@Clancy_Amanda-pk4te]

I cant hear any of what he says and i have the sound all the way up. It might be my hearing and the level of his voice but Ive never been deaf before ... js

[@STEJTHEGREATEST]

Just buy decent headphones. I can hear some of what they say, even at 2% volume.

[@donjorge8329]

Trust no one.

[@TheVintress]

Wow, didn't expect that twist at the end. Well done, the acting is really goood.

[@STEJTHEGREATEST]

8:29 Hitchhiker's guide to the galaxy!!!! Somehow I always imagined that book being thicker!!!!

[@SabbathSchoolNow]

Matthew 7:24-29 "Every one then who hears these words of mine and does them will be like a wise man who built his house upon the rock; (26) And every one who hears these words of mine and does not do them will be like a foolish man who built his house upon the sand; (27) and the rain fell, and the floods came, and the winds blew and beat against that house, and it fell; and great was the fall of it." (28) And when Jesus finished these sayings, the crowds were astonished at his teaching

[@ashe_skylar]

That was so sad and so powerful and beautiful and her eyes… wow. I was totally not expecting that ending and I’m about to cry. Well done guys, well done.

[@tuiteru888]

すけべ心が命取り。

[@dandaman2753]

a really great job from all your actors and everyone who made this happen. Thank you! I'm going to suggest because of other comments And the fact I watch videos with captions, in your case they are only auto-generated, that you take the time to caption this the way the script is written. That would make the people who can't hear the actors happy and you would also have your movie make more sense than the auto generated nonsense that is being printed on the screen currently. That's just my opinion man. Again I thank you for a great video and I hope you're making sequels to this ASAP.

[@STEJTHEGREATEST]

The auto captions for this video are actually good enough that you can get a strong grasp of what's being said.

[@XcomPanther]

Excellent film, hate to say but deadly games will be played on the trusting and kind. Sort of like now, but maybe death isn't the end result. Kudos AD E!

[@doveandiamond]

Really good acting. Sad cause it would be desperate like that. Those two would have made a could couple.

[@lisaslay-z8342]

Omg she grimey! He was preserving memories. Apocalyptic times best to travel light though. Good film!💗

[@jimanderson9768]

I thought it was a good story but I had a hard time hearing the actors. Not sure but I think it needs to be recorded a little louder next time. Other than that, good job and good story. Keep up the good work. Thumbs up

[@wandataylor2500]

Wow, that was really Low-Down. Lower than a Snakes belly. 😫☹️

[@STEJTHEGREATEST]

When I play fallout: new vegas, I always rescue teddy bears that I find in scary places, too!!!!!! :D

[@fgcbrooklyn]

I am so glad I could not understand a single line of "dialogue."

[@misleadspax]

Now all i could pay attention to while watching, was her eye lashes

[@gregot5567]

Good lesson!!

[@FACup-eu2dt]

I've heard of professional jealousy, but why wasn't the teddy bear in the cast list?

[@reme001]

Great video. Good plot. Good acting. And yes she did have beautiful eyes. The ending was not expected- but realistic due to the situation. Di anither soon!!

[@AaronEason]

Normal lashes, something we missed during makeup. Very embarrassing, but hey, make-up would still have existed so it is not entirely unbelievable.

[@stevenmartin3920]

That's how it would be

[@danmccarthy2754]

how about doing an independent film with sound ?

[@jennifergreco1403]

Great acting. So depressing.

[@fatyafatya2633]

Yes, her eyes are remembered in fact) a woman who can not wash her face, but paints her eyes in the days of the apocalypse is a real hero))

[@ThingsChangeButLove5]

'wow' !!

[@jimmyrivera1816]

This is what happens when you trust people 2 much. Especially women

[@garyacker7388]

With her eyes she sure makes good bait for some poor slob. He completely let his guard down for a woman. Typical for us guys.

[@wandataylor2500]

What a ruse...Low Down 😪

[@dianevitale1214]

VERY good, however, very sad as it was meant to be.

[@jypsih8522]

Awesome!

[@PineBoxPremonition]

Nice job! You deserve more likes for sure.

[@tomsmith2587]

Excellent but diminished by poor sound quality.

[@doctorartphd6463]

Cannot hear a thing.....bad audio.

[@bigjd421]

I was afraid it was a set up from the begining. That girl was beautiful, was hoping those 2 would hook up.

[@MrWeezo21]

I dont understand.. I know about inventory divided among a group, but like wouldn't one more person added to their team make it easier and safer for them to travel? Why can't most people be mindful that maybe more people is better as in firepower and backup? Survival is survival, its prolly dog eat dog, but dogs also need friends. They run in groups, and so should we if it came to this point. Only people who are bad is those raiders who kill mercilessly.

[@temolito]

Nice job. Very erie ending.

[@realisrealite5554]

only the strong survive.

[@STEJTHEGREATEST]

Hope your bags didn't get shoved out of your hands by bullies in the street, the last time you left the house, keyboard warrior!!!!!

[@bearbear5169]

Nice vid :D

[@steveoxendine7123]

Such a cheeezzzy flick lol hahahahhahahaa

[@STEJTHEGREATEST]

I bet the actors have suffered a HUGE DROP in self-esteem after learning that someone who epitomises "cool" like yourself considers this "cheezy". I can tell you're REALLY cool the way how you spell cheesy with a Z. I would never have thought to do that.

[@kimO.7439]

Saw that twist coming.

[@georgeschlaline6057]

What the Hell? What girl?

[@reme001]

George, you must be blind!

[@hv0e25]

the clean finger nails and makeup on the female actress are highly unrealistic.

[@miimeowjess]

Damn kindof like, but can't hear it

[@jenellwatkins5086]

He is cute

[@montanabulldog9687]

. . . THAT, is why you "Away's" have a WEAPON, "At the Ready" , . . at ALL TIMES !.

[@STEJTHEGREATEST]

Or just be like caesar's legion and train in melee combat, so you're ready to fight at any time, even if your guns are out of reach!!

[@montanabulldog9687]

@@STEJTHEGREATEST The "Only" thing that STUPID gets you, is . . . DEAD !.

[@chrisvoa]

What a tragic tale but really well done! If you have a spare 6mins check out our short post apocalyptic film TREY kzbin.info/www/bejne/rmemnIdjntaAa9k

[@d.satheeshsatheesh402]

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[@adriandeklerk887]

The girl has way too much mascara.

[@woodsmanforlife1677]

Bad audio. Cloth clean, nylon tent and blue pack in near new condition; girl wearing a bra. FAIL!!!!

[@donfinley2540]

Another bad script and aweful actors stop wasting your time making these inaccurate films.

[@jesussaldana5215]

Don Finley well Don , you think you can make a better short film than this? Everybody else seems to like it. I thought it was pretty good myself. Make a better short film than this and put everybody to shame and I’ll shut my mouth and watch only your films. Otherwise respect the craft even if it is low budget. Asshole. 😠