pouring my heart and soul into a song for no one to listen to

[@epic233-officiale]

the melody is god tier

[@TFearsome]

6:05 the transition is so good here

[@Dcyaboi33]

Bro cooked on this fr 🔥 🔥🔥

[@thanhtung1482013]

i enjoy it , thank you so much dont worry Cal, you do a best work for this, keep it up

[@coopcraze]

2:25 hard as hell brother keep it up

[@grin_vod]

holy cow this is a banger

[@calroy222]

IF THIS DOES GOOD ILL POST IT ON SOUNDCLOUD BUT I DONT EXPECT THIS TO DO GOOD

[@epic233-officiale]

do it!

[@shayengd4150]

fire. im eating pizzza

[@ivanayalaminaya1678]

perfect

[@b_ountyhunter]

This is a banger wtf let bro cook

[@TFearsome]

you gotta release a slightly slowed version!

[@calroy222]

@@TFearsome ill do that maybe next year

[@MortemKage]

Ayo. Fire.

[@calroy222]

i hate mixing and cant to it properly lol sorry if it sounds bad

[@j-flosenpai]

Not sure if you’d like feedback or not, but here’s some brief things I noted: 1) I liked the variation in sounds you picked. One thing to consider is giving some instruments more or less reverb so that it all sounds as if they were recorded in a similar space. 2) The song lacked a well-defined structure imo, almost like it’s randomly going from point a to point b. Made it a little tough for me to get into a groove. 3) I think there could be more variation in the chords/bass line you use, it basically repeats a similar progression through most of it. Changing the chords around some more could help define a structure to the song too. 4) I thought you arranged your sounds well, giving some tracks a ton of space by muting the others. Using silence is a really cool choice that I often forget about. I won’t comment on mixing since I’m listening through terrible headphones atm. I could relisten through my studio headset if you’d like that feedback. Take all this with a grain of salt. At the end of the day, what’s important is that you like what you put out there.

[@calroy222]

@@j-flosenpai thanks for your opinion! im always open to hear what listeners think i have to improve or do more. thanks for giving flowers and giving me tips it really helps! whenever i make music im always rushing bc im busy so i dont have time to perfect it completely. im also still new to fl and using a professional daw in general so ive zero experience on mixing or any of the complicated things. ive only really used onlinesequencer.net in my 2 years of beat making. hopefully i can improve with these tips you gave. thanks!

[@ivanayalaminaya1678]

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[@addictedyounoob3164]

this doesnt even soudn half bad, keep it up! Not my preferred genre until 3:00 when I started to become a bit hooked. I think the buildups are a bit long but nonetheless don't say no one will listen to this, you're wrong. people will definitely listen to this and enjoy it.

[@hoon-kay4840]

Needs so much more ambience!! Songs tell a story and I feel as if this is just some sounds on top of eachother, yk?

[@calroy222]

@@hoon-kay4840 trust me ik that lol. all of my songs are fueled by my emotions. i didnt wanna add any bc i didnt feel like it. thanks for the feedback tho!

[@calroy222]

if it doesnt sound good to you thats alright! maybe my music js isnt your cup of tea

[@zanexenosbyatch]

THIS SHHHII IS SO GOOD