pov: jimin as mafia leader and kidnapped you from a dark alley😊😊

[@_j.m35]

ACP: daya kuch to garbar hai Meanwhile this FF: NEW CIDDDDDDDDDD

[@stabbed_byu]

I laughed too hard after seeing "CID" 😭

[@zainabfatima5670]

Self respect left the chat 🙂

[@park-noor]

Ammm......yah....🙂

[@sonakshimeena5926]

Correct sleft respect 0%

[@c.lmishra9140]

Yes.. I just want to cryy currently Jimin forced y/n to do it but still she just fucking kissed him?? Like wtf dude?!

[@Fatima-sp2sp]

Let me explain they loved each other . Hmm Am i correct Then they met jimin lost his control it was wrong He cared her it was right hmm So she also loved him so it was easy to forgive him . Think they were childhood friends. Nothing is complicated. But i know that y/n should not forgive him that easily she should ignore him be cold with him . So author it can be little more regretted one

[@rishilallmun8305]

Yes

[@rish...6008]

Rip to English vocabulary and corrections 😆😆😅 But it's a good ff....

[@Minabindassentertainment]

where is y/n self respect how can she forgive him

[@gokuvlogger8834]

☺️you know it’s world wide super😉

[@park-noor]

Thank you

[@aamnakashaf1538]

Self respect? Sense? Nothing

[@nainikasonnathi6694]

for real

[@storyheaven-u1t]

Guys pls support me, I also write one shots 😭🙏

[@mamasprincess1024]

Dear don't mind but just how can a girl love her RAPIST & how can a guy rape the girl he loves? 🤔These kind of ffs r not good 4 society. Ur story was overall good but the rape part doesn't make any sense. But don't loose hope, I'm just giving suggestion✌️😇

[@park-noor]

And i'll take this suggestion seriously......sorry for my mistake....and also thank you for your suggestion.... 🙏🥺

[@mamasprincess1024]

@@park-noor I'm really happy that u didn't mind anything, actually I'm a psychologist so I felt my responsibility 2 suggest u🥰 Love from PAKISTAN 🇵🇰💚🇰🇷

[@ammandawilliam248]

I was thinking about it. If I was at her place, I would never forgive him forget about being with him for my life . He rapped me . It's not a joke. Even if he was her husband he couldn't rape her . it's marital rape.in the end it is just imagination but it is a wrong message for young generation than you can rape your partner and it is not an issue.

[@hafnasanzo]

I felt the same 😁apart from that part I loved the ff

[@yashi_0]

At first it was good, but later i felt like this FF is just a stupid joke because you know in real life a girl atleast has some self respect,i mean i don't understand how can you think that a normal girl can forgive a rapist , how is it even possible. Moreover the last part where he says that it's not fair and all, it's just meaning less because it's not like the girl didn't inform and just leave. It's just my point,or may be many of your viewers. I don't want to demotivate you ,but I also don't want you to write things that are mostly not acceptable in reality.

[@ammandawilliam248]

I don't think any girl can forgive her rapist that easily. Forget about being with him for whole life . It is a wrong message for young generation

[@savitamaheshwari3886]

Its not acceptable in reality its true but she just started writing as everyone say mistakes make the human perfect

[@jakelsmith2590]

I started laughing when it said flashback and after flashback

[@park-noor]

Amm...why? Is anything wrong in my ff...and I'm very sorry for my bad english....and i'll try my best for new ff ....because this was mg first ff🥺🥺

[@jakelsmith2590]

@@park-noor no nothing is wrong I just thought I was funny sorry 🥺🥺🥺🥺

[@jakelsmith2590]

@@park-noor and also the English is just fine as long as I can understand it it’s okay

[@arhamasalmanadil-q1f]

its literally very amazing i just love it

[@roopamroopam4516]

RIP self respect🙃🙃😑😑

[@army.girls.143]

Really its your first ff i can't believe it 😲

[@park-noor]

Yupp...this is my first ff☺️☺️

[@army.girls.143]

Its good

[@saithirshad700]

Your first ff is amazing

[@jahnviaprana7119]

Unnie you put so much effort but the story was not interesting in last the end was same like every ff please put some revenge how can yn forgive jimin that easily tell me if someone that you trust so much and that person did something bad to you so you forgive that person that easily do you not get angry and don't you want to take revenge please i will request you if you are making mafia ff so you have to put this kind of emotions 💜💜💜💜 love you unnie

[@park-noor]

Amm....yahh....i'll try my best .... Sorry for my mistake ....this was my first ff... And i'll try my best and.....i'll promise that new ff will be my best ....and thank you so much for your suggestion unnie.....and I love you tooo☺️☺️

[@SaraSara-mt9jp]

Yeah I love this so much unnie

[@park-noor]

Amm....thnk ...dear

[@kashvi1141]

I love it sooo much ✨✨🤞🏻🤞🏻

[@park-noor]

Thank. You

[@rishilallmun8305]

Same I love it 💜💜

[@triptishaw6768]

You ff so lovely it is my favorite one you are the best 💜💜

[@park-noor]

Amm...thank you so much...dear

[@triptishaw6768]

You welcome 😊

[@kabirajmed7313]

It's really good love it🥰🥰🥰🥰💜💜💜💜💜

[@peehudabguhar4459]

Omg i dont belive this is your first ff This is so Nice i will give this 100/10000000😁😁😁😁💓💓💗💖💛💜💚💙💋💟

[@ashwiniajukumar6178]

unnie ur amazing

[@aestaeticsugar8116]

He freaking forced her bruh

[@smileintertanment8905]

Bonus part please

[@stabbed_byu]

English definitely died 💀

[@sadafrizvi436]

I was surprised by seeing it's your first FF and it was just great ✨♥️♥️ loved it Keep it up 🙂

[@park-noor]

Amm...yah ...thnk you..

[@Anushkamishra25]

this ff is really amazing 💜💜 well can u make as a (when your mafia husband forcefully do 'it' with u bc of jealousy) pls try this

[@lovelyk-pop9744]

🙂

[@taniya_0775]

Your story was very good 💜 but listen to me Siso make a bonus part which she give him a silent treatment nd he needs to gain her trust then ur story was perfect ending 😇

[@sanjidaislamkhusbu7390]

Can you please give Bonus part 💜💜💜

[@zonasajjad3137]

Kya y/n k koi self respect Nii hy

[@siyatribhuvan8506]

I just love this FF best FF ever please make more love you alot dear 🥰🥰🙂🙂 we will always support you

[@siyatribhuvan8506]

Yes

[@siyatribhuvan8506]

I would love to watch your videos

[@siyatribhuvan8506]

Right now I have watched your video it was good please make more of these

[@kaavyasri1465]

yeah.....its so nice and i dont know that they are chilhood friends....😇😇

[@park-noor]

Yahh!!...thank you...

[@siddiqui8255]

This ff is so good I love it so much 👍❤️ keep it up

[@park-noor]

Thank you so much.....☺️☺️

[@savitamaheshwari3886]

Unnie it was great ff but think about it even if he was her best friend you should not do this how can he do something like this to to his love once she forgive him so easily she should give him a punishment even if it should not be that harmful or Harsh but he should get punishment for giving this bad with her even it's any girl

[@savitamaheshwari3886]

She also have some self respect and her mother should regretted what should I do her daughter

[@park-noor]

Amm.....i'm very sorry...

[@savitamaheshwari3886]

@@park-noor no need off sorry unnie you wrote really well maybe u can make bounus she forgive him he should get his punishment which he deserve

[@savitamaheshwari3886]

Keep it up u are a good writer

[@vaishnavisharma2072]

Its so good but she get rapped she give him no reaction means she even not cry get angry. These are small mistake I feel but your ff is so good

[@afrozahaque6221]

It was amazing author 😘😘😘😘 Keep going....... 😘😘😘 amd make some great ff's 🫰🫰🫰🫰 And can you plz make a ff about Namjoon plz 🥺🥺🥺🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏He is bias, my love, my life, my everything 💖💖💖💖 can you plz make it 🙏🙏🙏🙏

[@park-noor]

Sure!! My dear...

[@afrozahaque6221]

@@park-noor thank u sooo muchhhhh 😘😘😘😘

[@btsarmygirl8930]

Really nice

[@hafnasanzo]

Story is nice.... But I wish he hadn't done 'it'. And also she shouldn't be forgiving him for doing it... She didn't cry or show any anger. Also how did they recognize each other.... Especially yn. When did she realize it's Jimin. Dear author.. I'm just giving my opinion since it's ur first😬

[@aab9833]

Self respect gai pani me chapak

[@aditiyadav40476]

What about yn's family dinner

[@park-noor]

Later.....bunny!

[@AishwaryyashGupta]

Admin even this is just for entertainment or imagination but you should not promote abuse, sexual stuff like this where mens are dominating over womens