reading out my personal statement (for medicine) that got me into Oxford!

I read out the personal statement that got me offers from all 4 of the medical schools I applied to (in the UK).
I analyse and critique each paragraph as well as give useful tips for those of you who are currently writing a personal statement.
TIME STAMPS (for sections of my personal statement):
Introduction - 4:05
Main Body 1 - 6:00
Main Body 2 - 12:02
Main Body 3 - 15:05
Main Body 4 - 18:17
Conclusion: 21:35
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[@simplyfran7041]

You, this statement, explanation of the statement is 👌🏾🤩🤩

[@alexi2369]

I wanna give u a big big hug for this vid... I can't find enough motivation to finish any of my drafts to send it to my mentor. Hopefully it'll change in 20 minutes. If not... idk what to do. Again, thank you! You're amazing and inspiring and so hard-working~

[@emmanuelappiah1122]

It’s so fascinating to hear your personal statement, it flows so well! It took me such a long time to get mine to a level where I’m happy with it, and I only really got it there very recently! I should finally be ready to submit everything sometime next week.

[@toluduckworth]

Wishing you the best!!

[@shiminhoang2759]

i love this so much. I remember first reading this statement and seeing how happy/proud you were. your growth and determination inspires me everyday!!

[@toluduckworth]

Thank you so much!!

[@II-bn8gc]

Thank you for sharing this, it gave me a lot of inspiration and motivation to write my personal statement.

[@zion9146]

great vid

[@user-ft8yr5cs5q]

hi please can i ask what did you get in your gcses? did you get all 9s or all a*s in your gcses?

[@OmbaiJeje]

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