Reading the PJO self insert fanfiction I wrote in 9th grade

[@yashvisolanki5412]

"Did that chicken girl just compare my warship to the Titanic?" : Leo Valdez

[@no.comment._.]

BEST PART IS THAT HE WAS CALLED "LEONARDO"!! HIS NAME IS LEONIDAS Also, the longer you watch, the better it gets

[@djshadowz9832]

Cringe is the best 😎

[@Ana-ty7ng]

Ah yes, Liam Onedirection, my favorite Percy Jackson character

[@Percy_Jackson-gq8jz]

Ah yes he was very good in the battle of the direction 12th book in the Olympian series!

[@ima_dinosaur_rar]

yess

[@lemontaylor1730]

THE FACT THAT ITS CALLED LIVE LAUGH LOVE IS SENDING ME😂

[@ima_dinosaur_rar]

Live laugh love the lorax!

[@jasonluvsbricks1843]

"Okay, so his name was Logan, but he was basically liam" 😭

[@apekshan]

The blue shirt gives me Percy vibes, the hair gives me piper vibes, the purple bandana like Jason /Frank vibes cause the colour reminds me of the camp Jupiter flag, then like the mom jeans really give me Sally vibes......the whole thing kind of reminds me of like Hazel, I feel like her style is cute and comfortable...... I can’t decide....

[@apekshan]

@@Unclaimeddemigod 😂😂 the fanfic tho...👌🏻

[@apekshan]

@@Unclaimeddemigod 😂

[@LesbianWeirdo]

@@Unclaimeddemigod YES PUNS! 😂

[@namratamehta2532]

yes it is Hazel. i finally found out the video unclaimed demigod.

[@GoAwayImSleeping]

Its Obviously Leos Mom

[@yashvisolanki5412]

This gives me flashbacks of all the atrocious self inserts I read since 7th grade

[@yashvisolanki5412]

Thank you for making me reconsider my decision on making a Pjo fanfic

[@lesbiansuperjesus]

no, make it so you can reread it later and make a video on it.

[@Portahooty]

@@lesbiansuperjesusthat’s honestly my plan lol

[@shifatara9176]

Love the braids!Rockin it,girl!U kinda look like how I imagine Katie Gardiner from the Demeter Cabin to look like.💚🌱🪴

[@Persassyproduction_fanpage]

Honestly I loved this story, not to read a whole book but like for a 9th grade fanfic it was hilarious.

[@Persassyproduction_fanpage]

@@Unclaimeddemigod your welcome, it was perfect ☺️

[@catherineturk3819]

I laughed, I cried, what a beautiful story.

[@SleepyNoah15]

Gonna watch the rest of the video but first for me maybe Hazel the costume.

[@ITZ_VIOLET_]

The jacket makes me think Piper, but the jeans and bandanna are throwing me off so I’m going to guess, Hazel?

[@the_irrelevant_fox]

I think Hazel too, especially after she mentioned the mom jeans

[@the_irrelevant_fox]

I love your picture

[@ThechildofApollo]

This is just… PURE GOLD!

[@Omega.73]

Yes it is finally happening! This was just great! :D I think UD x Leo is my OTP now omg!!! Your facial expressions and gestures are so hilarious and awesome! We need a second part!

[@GlitchOfficialYT]

This is concerning. It’s also funny though. I need to read mine, there’s a full paragraph ranting about dead soul bread (the main character is a Hades kid and dead, if you can’t tell. The second book everyone was too sarcastic, and in Tartarus, and I killed percabeth. Also, I brought Luke back to life. I think I needed help when I wrote it)

[@ghostking9425]

Finally the wait is over. Thank you for uploading this and it is really good.

[@fastcheetah2788]

@@Unclaimeddemigod Did you write any fanfics in 7th,8th and 6th. I found out about percy jackson from my school am on the second book in the heros of olympus.

[@fastcheetah2788]

@@Unclaimeddemigod Did you find out in the s.a.m.e g.r.a.d.e. A.s m.e. f.r.o.m. y.o.u.r. English teacher (thank you english teacher.) And thats how i got into it.

[@fastcheetah2788]

@@Unclaimeddemigod t.h.e first book in the original series. 2nd book my mom read it to me.3,4,5 read with mom. In the beggining my mom read then when we got 1from another libary we finshed it off. Now they have the second of the first book in HOO. And yes whoever said they could be friends Leo and Percy (i do spoilers but i dont mind to myself.) Is true.

[@jj-st5bz]

OMG! Your fanfiction is amazing! I loved it!!

[@that.hellokittygirl]

Lol my fanfic is a self insert and a Ana (mE) x Nico di Angelo and My irl bestie x Percy (Do not judge we wrote it a few years ago and yes, I do still like Nico but the fanfiction is... *idk anymore* )

[@reynaavilaramirez-arellano3375]

Wait what did you upload it on?

[@that.hellokittygirl]

@@reynaavilaramirez-arellano3375 i didn't post it anywhere- XD I'm too self-conscious to do anything with my life~ the only people who can view it is just me and my bestie (she wrote it with me)

[@that.hellokittygirl]

@@Unclaimeddemigod Lol hiii

[@vidushigaur3122]

Getting piper vibes from your outfit.

[@aarohimukhopadhyay1309]

First! been waiting for this for a long time now!!! Btw, your braids are making you look 110% beautiful!

[@shifatara9176]

Ikr!She kinda looks like Katie Gardiner from the Demeter Cabin(or at least,that’s how I imagine her).🪴🌱💚

[@aarohimukhopadhyay1309]

@@shifatara9176 Well actually yes, i didn't think about that lately!

[@kdnfbdbsjdkdnrbr]

I'm literally dying of laughter

[@filipgajic9212]

The first character is sally jackson

[@pip_nightshade7034]

Im making a self insert fanfic of me and Percy. And possibly me and Nico. THERES NO DOUBT ABOUT IT THATS JUST WHAT IM DOING 😂😂😂

[@pip_nightshade7034]

@@Unclaimeddemigod yessss also I loved your self insert fanfic of you and leo. I loved she-man xD

[@Ghostqueen1313]

I feel like it's Piper

[@demigodsinger5737]

My guesses: Samirah al abbas, though she normally has open hair Clarisse La rue (Maybe one day when she forgives percy and is calm, so she decides to wear calm blue) Percy Jackson, but he normally wears a 'poseidon junior swimmers t-shirt and a hoodie' The purple reminds me of roman, like a purple roman flag tied as a bandana Hazel might have worn something like this, but i cant remember any seen of the book in which she plaits her hair Oh i love ur fanfic so much

[@user27592]

Is she Clarisse? The bandana made me think?!?

[@GloriannaDewett]

That was a pretty good fan fic. The braking the nose scene was funny 🤣

[@Unclaimeddemigod]

you give me too much credit hahaha

[@ResaChiic]

LEO SHERMAN I CANT

[@sxnnysky3]

FR NOT THE NAME NOT EVEN FITTING HIS ETHNICITY 💀 😭 🙏🏼

[@yashvisolanki5412]

This wasn't as nearly as cringy as the traumatising ones I've read

[@yashvisolanki5412]

@@Unclaimeddemigod *Nike vibes intensify*

[@Sydjam818]

Oh my gods this is the best thing I’ve seen all day 😂😂😂

[@izzy-no7kf]

This is giving me flashbacks to my leo dtage whe i had a crush on him. Yikes

[@ITZ_VIOLET_]

Could you please read 1 star reviews for the Riordanverse book?

[@browniebrowniedabrowniebrownie]

when I say I laughed, I mean I ALMOST DIED THIS WAS AMAZING

[@browniebrowniedabrowniebrownie]

@@Unclaimeddemigod i absolutely LOVE your videos!

[@browniebrowniedabrowniebrownie]

@@Unclaimeddemigod of course!

[@readerobsession1111]

Yay I’ve been waiting

[@alex-13-7-9]

WE NEED PART 2 🤣🤣🤣

[@jamiecaniglia]

I dunno if I want to laugh or cry or maybe both. On one hand it's always cringe when you read your old fanfictions written years ago, but on the other hand I'm pretty sure I would've done the same thing if I had internet access back when I was in 9th grade so it would be pretty hypocritical of me if I laughed, so here I am, watching this video 2 years later, and having very mixed feelings about all this

[@ChildOfAres0317]

"Friend zoned , I didn't inow guys could do that " Me : *sHe Is jUsT A fRiEnD*

[@kennedyvanderlugt1455]

ur outfit gives me piper and leo vibes

[@idontknow.8930]

I need a part 2 lol I cringed so much

[@idontknow.8930]

@@Unclaimeddemigod I’m just gonna rewatch it cause I have nothing else to do when my family is still sleeping lol

[@sxnnysky3]

Help why didn’t you just give Rick credit Leonardo Sherman is killing me 😭 💀 🙏🏼

[@YuenyuenHong-xi3rp]

I love ur fanfic soo much! Ur writing style is so great! What’s ur profile called?

[@makennabright6337]

~weird things~

[@Bluestarloopy]

You are 100% Jason grace. first of, the purple headband so you obviously from camp jupiter. 2, Mum jeans? I feel like Jason totally gives of dad vibes. he id the dad of the group. 3, the jacket. need I say more?

[@newtnelsontheweird]

I think it's Hazel?

[@cracksinmybrokenheart4681]

BUT I’M LOVING IT

[@Hazelnut222]

I heard mom jeans and thought HAZEL!!!

[@Unclaimeddemigod]

you have a GIGANTIC brain Hazelnut

[@Hazelnut222]

Me: freaking out cuz my fav KZbinr replied to my comment

[@ms_mcshizzle]

I think ur dressed up like Piper cuz she has her hair in braids and she’s wearing Mom jeans. Also I thought ur fanfic was so funny and I inserted my name when it said Ella/me lol 😂

[@elvenjedi6883]

I'm going to die lol, this is wonderful

[@livdream5798]

Ahahaha my name is Ella, I'm laughing so hard I'm crying right now

[@Unclaimeddemigod]

I am so sorry for dishonoring your name in this way

[@livdream5798]

Don't worry, I feel flattered because you thought it was pretty enough to use in your fanfiction

[@sxnnysky3]

My name is Ela pronounced the same way and when she said she was dating Leo I was like “ohohohoho this will be good 😈 “

[@livdream5798]

@@sxnnysky3 And it was, of course 😂

[@makennabright6337]

Definitely a 10

[@makennabright6337]

On the cringe-o-meter

[@WolfDaughterOfApollo19]

i also got a pjo fanfic i'm writing. fanfic series, really. it's not really a self insert book, but it does have plenty of OCs and i have my self insert somewhere in the series. if you want your OC to be in it, tell me all about them.

[@three-moons6036]

It’s just caleo with you😂

[@Unclaimeddemigod]

I am OFFENDED I am not (and definitely was not) that much older than Leo! Plus, we’re the cuter ship

[@three-moons6036]

@@Unclaimeddemigod the notification I got on my phone gave me heart attack.🤣 it was just I am offended

[@ghostking9425]

I think it is The costume of Piper? Or Sally Jackson

[@apekshan]

Yeah..........I kinda got a lot of sally vibes......but I think she’s dressed as Percy cause of the blue shirt?

[@ghostking9425]

@@Unclaimeddemigod Whose cosplay is it then?

[@ghostking9425]

@@Unclaimeddemigod ok😎👍

[@slapcrap625]

I read the whole story and I liked it until you added the superhero part.

[@puppykitten1557]

@@Unclaimeddemigod both of them are played by the same girl in the musical, so maybe you’re not too far off

[@adelinesadventures12]

Its Hazel

[@natalierodrigues7065]

I think you are hazel because of the bandana

[@asmitarai1224]

Hazel!!!

[@True_Cthulu]

oh no, why does this fanfic exist

[@Skyx_dragons]

I’m getting hazelnut vibes? 1:39 …..it give hazel

[@alpacasuitcase4629]

I’m from the UK what’s the equivalent of 9th grade. What age. Is it like year 9 (13-14yrs old)

[@firewingy]

It’s 14-15 years old

[@alpacasuitcase4629]

@@firewingy thanks

[@the_irrelevant_fox]

Frank or Hazel?

[@sadhvimp4]

Is this the fan fiction u were talking abt in the q&A? Lol (I haven’t watched this yet cuz I’m in school but I will later and find out)

[@idenolan1234]

Piper or sally

[@cringeygachakidthatalsodoe7154]

Unpopular opinion: Connor and Travis Troll do not compete with Gred and Forge

[@gumdropreaders2764]

AGREED GRED AND FORGE ARE WAY BETTER (not saying i don’t like the stoll brothers, i just think the weasley twins are better

[@uiopadoihwohj2793]

how is that even a comparision tho? we barely get to see any of the stoll twins and you are comparing them to characters who at least have a 100 pages

[@True_Cthulu]

you are piper?

[@archertwinsies43]

Are you dressed up as Piper? Because in a certain fan art I saw her wearing a bandana, and duh, she always has her signature braids! And, btw, you said your not at writing fan-fiction, well, I agree to disagree!

[@allybally6617]

ALL OF THEM

[@kdnfbdbsjdkdnrbr]

You are supposed to Hazel, right?

[@fastcheetah2788]

I think your Hazel

[@brodycoffey910]

Pls do a vid about this wretched reply to a comment on a video called "memes that make me a god" by realJake

[@moirainabox4367]

are you hazel?????

[@meganbell5587]

Are you Piper????

[@natsolace1499]

Hazel!!!!!!!

[@idontknow.8930]

You can get copy righted if you right a fan fiction and use their full names?

[@idontknow.8930]

@@Unclaimeddemigod 😂 good cause I thought I had to remove all there last names in the fan fiction I’m writing

[@candyzheng5589]

What is your real name? I didn’t catch it in the video

[@candyzheng5589]

@@Unclaimeddemigod okay, thx

[@annaw4823]

IM DYING- 🤣

[@filipgajic9212]

hi

[@JosslynMaldonado]

Sally Jackson

[@latishawhite9061]

Hazel

[@Sherman-b8r]

hazel

[@rahhh5808]

hmm i think your Rachel

[@sarahbenyon2757]

HAZEL IS THTA YOU

[@YuenyuenHong-xi3rp]

Wait u read it when u were in 9th grade?

[@aaliyahcarlyle7203]

Should I write a self insert with Luke? I want to but people don’t really like him :/ he’s one of my favorite characters tho

[@ban4naman331]

you dress up as hazel

[@the_irrelevant_fox]

Hey I don't know if you'll see this or not but I made a list of 20 PJO questions to make a video for my channel and I was wondering if you'd be interested in looking at it or possibly making a video on it. I love the fanfic and your outfit gives me Hazel vibes 😊

[@the_irrelevant_fox]

@@Unclaimeddemigod I can send them through Instagram if that's okay

[@the_irrelevant_fox]

@@Unclaimeddemigod okay my username is avi_irrelevant, I sent them. Thanks so much for being willing to check them out

[@latishawhite9061]

I'm sorry that was tarrable

[@taylortexas9778]

Damn G “Ella” kinda a Mary Sue tho

[@taylortexas9778]

I can tell

[@taylortexas9778]

Also your content is really good! I was only joking!

[@cracksinmybrokenheart4681]

I agree this is so cringyyy

[@cracksinmybrokenheart4681]

And I’ve read worse

[@F8ibtetffuu]

Hazel