REC [O] [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Darkfic)

[@lizzyl9357]

Theory: Twilight is one of *them *, or at least she works for them. She knew what happened to the Screwloose and the film evidence, but she lies to cover up for whatever is watching the ponies. That or she knows they're too powerful for ponykind to fight, and she's trying to keep everypony mercifully oblivious to *their * existence

[@splinkyz]

Me: *watching* *sudden loud knocking behind me* Me: *flops out of chair and screams*

[@josephrenshaw5609]

do you have a monster that wont leave you alone there has got to be a better way well good news you can get a life

[@jeremypedersen6894]

joseph renshaw THERE HAS TO BE A BETTER WAY. Try Neil breen

[@lunakei404]

@spr267 As someone who tends to scream at anything loud, I could've fell off of my bed, and say the Lord's Prayer over and over again until it was gone. I am not a catholic or anything, in which I'm agnostic, but I do believe in religion.

[@LilaHubert-jl9zd]

FLOP LIKE A FISH

[@DandysworldFan20]

@@josephrenshaw5609monster gun it would get rid of it of 3 shots bang bang bang I like you monster gun.

[@wanderingcalamity360]

Final thoughts: This reminds me a lot of the movie "They" by Wes Craven, which similarly deals with a person suffering from mental illness and being pursued by monsters that hide well from humanity. It also reminds me of the creepypasta "Don't be so afraid of the Dark", what with the implied design and hunting habits of the creatures. The ending was a bit of a letdown, what with the camera failing before any big reveal or true climax, but sometimes it's what's left to the imagination that's truly terrifying. And Twilight writing the report at the end was very in line with the ending of "They". All in all, it was very good. Definitely gave me chills, because who hasn't felt watched when they're alone or seen something that they couldn't prove was there out of the corner of their eyes?

[@DarkOneSixtyfour]

Oh yeah this is the type of dark I like! Little to no violence or blood but it sends a chill up your spine

[@sourfrog4263]

Same

[@DEUS_VULT_INFIDEL]

Reminds me of a creepypasta I read about vampires, and the strange moments when you walk into a room only to forget why you were there. This was awesome.

[@michaelorphellotorres3500]

That's more like the silence from drwho so yeah not really scary if you think of it comediacally

[@charizardreact2038]

Liberty Prime what's it called

[@carlthomaswilliamsjr.2995]

What's it called?

[@lunakei404]

DEUS VULT, INFIDEL What is the story called? I rlly want to know.

[@cyan-sky1188]

God, the voice acting was amazing! It was so convincing and gripping, it was fantastic!

[@undeadgamer8812]

either I'm now paranoid or I'm seeing things out of the corner of my eye.

[@mushroompot8931]

Same

[@DefectiveDictionary777]

They know... 0_0

[@Blueflag04]

same

[@lillyquirk6626]

Oof man

[@NPC_GENERIC_ENEMY_INFANTRY]

SCP has breached containment and has escaprd. All local MTF units responding to threat, ETA 2 mikes.

[@Frostblitz96]

State your name and clearance level!

[@agentcharles1632]

the sight is experiencing multiple keter and Euclid level containment breaches full sight lock down initiated

[@lordhenrykillingbelow8330]

Pure cringe.

[@jasonburnett5713]

The creatures in this video remind me of the shadow walkers from “A Fleeting Light in the Darkness”. The way they only appear out of the corner of your eyes and stalk and mess with their prey

[@Epic11705]

Maybe that’s what they are…

[@dirge6080]

For some reason, Screwloose sounds like Lapis to me...

[@entraptaenvents767]

Now that you say so it actually does🙂

[@alien-eater]

Ehhh

[@Alex918YT]

Not to me, Lapis’s voice is a little higher in pitch.

[@excelsiorwolphskye9985]

Jeez, when Scribbler said Twilight Sparkle I had a Forever Faithful flashback ~shudders~

[@samuelbedsole5089]

Hear that? No? Good. I have a question for you: do you know what it is like to be alone? You may answer yes, but now answer me this; why do you talk to yourself when you are sure you are alone, why do you look around in an empty room, and finally... why are you afraid? The answer, because you are not alone. Hello?...... Tell me, do you ever see something in the corner of your eye? A dark shape, like a shadow? Do you ever see a dim shape in the dark, an outline you dismiss as strain? Ever see that second shadow, that voice in the night? Ever hear that second set of footsteps behind you in the hall when you are alone? Admit it, you have. You know it. Imagine something that must never be seen, must never be unveiled. What would it do? Feel that breathe on your neck? The hairs on your neck standing on end? That is a sign from THEM, a small mercy on their part. It's Them telling you one thing.... don't look around. Now, next time you are in a room alone, listening to your favorite song, reading a good book, on your knees in prayer, or in a more intimate position alone, yet you feel someone there. Don't feel shy to call out.... Who's there?

[@bonnietelocole6777]

good story. brings the fear out of ones soul. :) (Im not lying I actually love it)

[@samuelbedsole5089]

Thanks.

[@bonnietelocole6777]

Samuel Bedsole your welcome :3

[@brodiecrain13]

wait...isn't that nearly word for word from that one doctor who episode. that fear is superpower one

[@samuelbedsole5089]

Brodie Crain I drew inspiration from it, kind of an homage of sorts.

[@br7078]

I like how we can't know for sure what happened. This being Screw Loose, she could've just gotten mad and paranoid but those cracks sure are suspitious.

[@Megalotron]

long live the badass, and hilarious, queen of (Not counting scribbles of coarse) darkfics and readings in gen

[@ZGuy0fSci]

so, TheLostNarrator the *'Darkfic Duchess'* ? ^_< (***** is queen in my book too, lol but Lost a nicely close 2nd)

[@Sentifray]

This is such a well written and well thought out fic, that feeling is now linked with fear and death

[@GutiSerenade]

Ooohhh, that was delicously dark. Well done Lost! c:

[@marcusmillhouse3309]

how long did it take to edit this? this looks like weeks.

[@thelostnarrator]

Marcus Millhouse This reading took about a day to put together. Readings like this don't take too long once I know what I'm doing with the video. Truth Be Told (another reading I did) took way longer, and that was because of the numerous VAs and SFX. Just depends on what is going on in the video. :)

[@marcusmillhouse3309]

TheLostNarrator Wow I'm impressed. Keep up the good work lost :)

[@myparentsaredivorced4573]

+TheLostNarrator This story caused me to sleep with the light on. Thanks, lost. :(( sarcastically, and thankfully )

[@RedWolf777SG]

That's was an excellent work, dear, nice touch with static and all and I just love your new intro logo. The voice actresses where also excellent as well. Keep up the good work. =3

[@wanderingcalamity360]

Initial thoughts from the description: This sounds really good.

[@thewastelandbrony]

Let's see.............. The hairs on my arms, legs and the back of my neck were standing straight up by the end. This story scared the shit out of. I love your readings and can't wait for more to come

[@peabody66]

It's so good to hear Scribbler voice Twilight Sparkle again after so long.

[@infiniterats3870]

its 3 in the morning and all my lights are off except for the nightlight in the hall which just barely provides enough light to make everything just barely visible in the gloom. Now im never getting to sleep!

[@Jamespapi92x]

At a time I thought it'd be like those [REC] horror movies, like the actual virus in the universe

[@thenewadventuresofhenry6998]

This feels disturbingly accurate.

[@RandomPopcultureNewsFreak]

WHOOOA VER Y NICE DARKFIC LostNarrator =D Glad to see them back in action .Normally the jump scares don't really do it for me ,but those loud ass fucking knocks on the door made my day ^_^.As much as i love scribbler's work ,she still need a little bit more practice on Twilight sparkles Voice impression. Damn girl I love how you and Emogak make some of the best badass fic voice overs around =O!I love the way she brings so much life,emotion and fear and implements it and uses it for her character screwloose in this fanfic =) Take care Lost peace!I can't wait to see what you have in store for February!

[@pinkdracula3681]

This one was really good. Great performance from everyone, as always.

[@CloppingIsMyThing]

OMG OMG that one doctor who episode Ha That was me could not stop saying it

[@merlinfidds4619]

weeping angels?

[@WadeBarrett97]

What were the creatures attacking Screw Loose?

[@BloopTheNoop]

Wade Barrett hockey players

[@animooredpanda7097]

I'd like to think it's something that plays tricks with you.

[@revaslatts8011]

I have no idea!

[@kawaiiqueee]

Honestly it's up to interpretation. The thing that really gets me is how Screw Loose is insane and everything could've been in her head

[@robertavram1388]

hope they make a part 2 this time twilight see them

[@vorple_grove]

Listening to this years later lol! i had a theory, the "things" that she was "seeing" or something. is us, the viewer, watching the cartoon or something. She noticed us, somehow, but can only see us slightly, we watch, we listen, and we seem wrong. idk if it's a stretch, but i can see it. Thats why it would say "they" since there are lots of us, she knows we are watching, but doesn't know what we are. Everything else her spiraling into paranoia & instanty.

[@searous5590]

This reminds me of the audio logs in Borderlands.

[@mwjn2001]

this is now one of my personal favorite darkfics

[@moonlightscreations3339]

This explains so much for me! Everytime in Alone, I don't fe alone, and it gives me the creeps

[@alexbaker4674]

I love the reference to [REC] the Spanish horror film

[@tickedoffsquid37]

What reference? I've watched the English adaptation called Quarantine and I didn't hear the reference.

[@xanaberry9670]

I think this is why she's called screwloose

[@Frostblitz96]

“Applebpoom, get the spin-ultra-shovel.”

[@tvmanfan]

As much as i wished this was more related to the movie I love this

[@missdevil1105]

tvmanfan ikr?

[@excelsiorwolphskye9985]

Glad to see you're feeling better!

[@jadeice8456]

that's was intriguing to say the least you did a good job (:

[@shadow65465]

What a fantastic video and I like the reference to the Shadow People.

[@NatashaReeder]

Reference to dr.who? The Silence 😕

[@zemthemaniac]

There was a Doctor Who reference, but it wasn't the Silence, it was to Prisoner Zero (from The Eleventh Hour). That's why Screw Loose specifically mentioned "the corner of your eye" a few times. As to the creatures themselves, I never really had a particular visual in mind for them. I decided to let the reader's imagination take care of that.

[@mythmask7864]

The Silence... (IK who they are so....) The Silence? What is that? A book club? NO ITS A EVIL RACE OF PEOPLE.... Oh NEVERMIND it's to long to explain.

[@mythmask7864]

I know. I happen to watch doctor who... I was joking about forgetting.. Cause they make you forget... Remember? '-_- -ADoctorWhoFanIs I

[@Frostblitz96]

You mean “Dr Hooves?”

[@ink_the_wolfin6618]

You mean Dr. HOOVES

[@keithdp2823]

HEY U. SCROLLING THROUGH THE COMMENTS. GET YOUR BACK AGAINST THE WALL! NOW!!!

[@valentinalee4047]

NEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xD

[@tickedoffsquid37]

Already have, but there is a window behind me, should I be worried...

[@auggiesdeadacc5154]

you can’t make me.

[@CourtneyIsLovely]

no

[@artastic_friend]

I’m lying face-up on a bed, does that count?

[@Lndmk227]

A good reading, but I'd suggest lowering the register of your voice and adding a little background music as you get to the main sequence of the video. You just sound a little too... "normal" in this fic. Given a darker tone with the voice and music, it would help with the atmosphere. You did well, I just felt like it could be improved. Thank you for this reading. :)

[@nadinethompson8875]

thanks for making this video for me to watch now I can sleep just fine

[@myparentsaredivorced4573]

I'm DEFINITELY going to peacefully sleep tonight.

[@Cobrawolf]

I get the feeling that it is changelings that she encountered.

[@johnwoods3778]

I looked over my shoulder right after hearing this

[@bridgetteanimations9996]

This be a great backstory for screw loose

[@hellotheregeneralkenobi4399]

If this was canon I would have guessed something like the nightmare forces, but unlike the nightmare forces they doesn't hide in your nightmares but in the shadows ( sometimes literally) and they are more common, maybe they would have been called shadow forces? What do YOU think?

[@austinpraiswater2532]

dont watch this in full screen and then suddenly alt-tab to a still image, feels weird when you expect everything in that image to be moving

[@bonnieli6573]

Lol

[@BreakerInc]

Love the voice you gave her!

[@axza9590]

Tell me have you ever thought you've seen something out of the corner of your eye when you were alone because I can say with garontee that there are thing out there our minds don't want to comprehend.so was it real...,, YES !

[@jeffthekillerpony5027]

This was the best one my opinion except for something sweet to bite

[@someguygotit3143]

Sounds like I’m listening to a News Reporter read this.

[@breckenkareg5724]

as I listened to this my dogs were outside and jumped at the window...I thought I was about to die

[@Bewildering3630]

My guard will officially never be down again

[@justtrash5353]

This just freaked me right the fuck out I love your work!

[@leviathanquinn2670]

Somehow their presence comforts me

[@brunoshitman9017]

Imagine if she meant the shadows I see lmao. That’s be pretty crazy

[@ciiath]

THE CREEPIEST THING IS, MY VIDEO KEPT BUFFERING AND IT KEPT LOADING OH GOD IM SCARED OF A KIDS SHOW FANFIC HELP ME

[@KisameOwnsYouAll]

Screw Loose's voice is so nice.

[@briangriffin5988]

Ok we covered it up for now the the void is leaking out we're gonna have to recapture them before they see them

[@sprintraprabbit5062]

after I read this I looked over my shoulder

[@pastelpoet7289]

So the things that were chasing ScrewLoose were Changelings I'm guessing?

[@Freshonions77]

Me:watching Hears banging on my door Me: NOPE jumps out window

[@nickwooden5661]

My bedroom door wasn't latched and it creaked open right after this ended and I about had a heart attack

[@celestiallight5582]

this gave me chills down my spine.😱😨

[@jasperquinn9015]

I love your voice and stuff bro. YOU FUCKIN' ROCK IT!

[@myparentsaredivorced4573]

Hey, Lost. Do you ever have trouble going to sleep after you narrate these grimdark fanfics? I probably would, especially like something sweet to bite.

[@hailleejordan7815]

love the opening

[@AdvancedGB2000]

I thought this was going to be a pony version of the movie REC but i was close

[@revaslatts8011]

This reminds me of Doctor Who. Either the Silence or Prisoner Zero. Hey, Doctor, we have a problem! Look for the crazy blue psychopath.

[@yttryff6159]

You have been gifted with the ability to sea creatures that do not want to be seen so you can see the incorporeal😊 I hope you do not die by their blades

[@jeweltara]

Twilight your logic will doom us all!! great story

[@BloopTheNoop]

Should’ve hit the mystery box

[@uncleodd6088]

I'm getting Sanity Conscious again.

[@Navisparxx]

This creeped me the hell out😢

[@collinrobinson9966]

Such a good fic.

[@Bewildering3630]

I will never sleep again my voice is quivering as I'm saying the words in this comment

[@vincentlenyi3372]

why did I watch this before bed

[@AJponyAPschannel]

Say, Lost (or would your prefer LN?), you'd do crossovers? I'd got one of man vs. food and frozen if you'd like the links

[@michaelorphellotorres3500]

Hey Tap how ya doing?

[@sarahholmes6290]

LOVE it love it love it keep it up

[@fabiolatrujillo10]

This scared the crap out of me

[@wizardfoxangel5300]

Thank goodness somepony found her video

[@FoXyGaming]

Awesome fic!

[@alexissmith7308]

Omg that was AWESOME

[@SnazzGirl]

Me: this wasn’t scary at all! Also me: *locks all doors at night and screams when hears bird.*

[@bennygairns2235]

Can anyone see any abnormalities in the footage?

[@michaelbuono4007]

I think the story is just someone relapsing into madness

[@RedMoonSolitary]

I wonder if this is an extension on the trees are screaming??

[@lorenaestevao5679]

Maybe if that pony never come to this florest by the curiosity, Maybe she ill be alive.

[@ropethepope6218]

Wow you have a really pretty voice

[@Moralityoverconsistency]

Watching the show this character gets better slowly of there very strange disorder 😌

[@carlthomaswilliamsjr.2995]

I just had an idea...what if Twilight is one of those creatures? Like what if she and a few others were hunting her? That is why she dismisses it a lot.

[@Kaithetwat]

love it love it love it!!!!

[@bonnietelocole6777]

hello!

[@Kaithetwat]

Bonnietelo Cole hi!

[@bonnietelocole6777]

Cyborg clips dont mind me watching all the grimdarks ever read by The Lost Narrator :3

[@Kaithetwat]

Bonnietelo Cole​ Im guilty of that!

[@bonnietelocole6777]

Cyborg clips x3

[@SkylerFLUFFY]

Does cameras and motion detectors count as being with someone because that's all I'm around in my house.

[@feelinfine.6598]

Okay, so people did survive this story... The comments show it... I thought I was gonna get killed at da ennndddd....

[@ZGuy0fSci]

Slenderman, Slendermane.... one of Derpy as the 'silver slender-pony', Seems a popular theme eh? the monster(s) just of of sight that know when or if you know... lolz * and reminds me of the speech in Turok2:Seeds of Evil, 'the Shadow of Oblivion'.

[@madkinsongamer7772]

oh,so now i'm going to die because of you? Fair enough. \_0.0_/

[@morgangriggs6453]

now there coming for all of the people who.....watch this vidoe......

[@tommydacursingbrony1984]

your fucking badass & awsome TheLostNarrator

[@thelostnarrator]

You are fucking awesome in my book :)

[@tommydacursingbrony1984]

TheLostNarrator you'd be more fucking awsome if you'd refrence me in one of your videos ( also you'd be INFINTLY MORE FUCKING AWSOME IF YOU'D SUBSCRIBE TO MY CHANNEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!) Your awsome and badass

[@black-woods7253]

+TheLostNarrator omg makemore i love it your so awsome

[@skyproaura7086]

+TheLostNarrator ur great at narrating you inspire me to narrate thanks your so awsome