True, having an outline to explain what the film is about and keep you on track is invaluable. I really like David Lynch's approach of writing. He starts with 50 to 60 index cards for the beats of the film, then write rearranges them accordingly, then fleshes the scenes out and begins his dialog.
@e2renity8 ай бұрын
i'm just a middle schooler trying to write a short film for graduation and this video helped me so much! the quality is just impeccable and the tips are so helpful for me. thank you so much!
@Dream_E257 ай бұрын
i just graduated the 8th and i’m trying to get a short film made this summer man
@Melanie_martiniii6 ай бұрын
@@Dream_E25i hope u do it! And is so, maybe show me?
@TheInterestingInformer5 ай бұрын
Yall are so young, you have much time and future ahead of you 👏 make good use of it
@binayakpradhan14245 ай бұрын
And I need for college department anniversary
@shopwornbear11719 ай бұрын
I am, at the ripe old age of 58, writing my first draft for my first short subject film. I appreciated learning about that "log line". It actually gave me the perfect road map to developing the idea. Thank you for this series, it'll be put to very good use when I have my final draft ready to storyboard and shoot (a no budget film, this ought to be interesting).
@Noe_8 ай бұрын
How is it going?
@shopwornbear11718 ай бұрын
@@Noe_ Slowly.. very very slowly...LOL. I'm trying to write in the character, divided into 3 other characters in order to get the concept working. So far, nothing is landing as well as I think it should be.
@Noe_8 ай бұрын
@@shopwornbear1171 That's ok. Don't rush it. I will wait...
@alonsodorame50536 ай бұрын
@@shopwornbear1171 Do not discourage, keep it going!
@kaxar69546 ай бұрын
Same here. I am motivated to write my first script. It is based on a real event and just want to get started.
@melissamokhtari4 жыл бұрын
first of all, your acting in those short bits is impeccable. second, i'm tryin to make my next videos a little more well-planned so your series is helping me out a lot!!
@RianSpaulding4 жыл бұрын
You're too kind! Thanks for checking it out!
@intellectualtheta93213 жыл бұрын
Usually I don't like any video but this video forced me to like it because it is so underrated and hard worked
@tiagoloureiro33023 жыл бұрын
Man this is an underrated video, Such good quality :U
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
🙏
@gxdpictures3 жыл бұрын
Bro, I be binge-watching screen writing tips on youtube now for about weeks and this was the best video I saw so far! Some how I got so much chills and trust just by the way you‘re smiling and telling what you gotta tell us... love that positive energy! Keep your work on🤝🔥
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
🙏 Appreciate you!
@agnesnyarkoaeshun24512 жыл бұрын
Definitely the best and informative video. This is just what I needed. God bless you🙏🙏
@half.cooked.noodle87813 жыл бұрын
The video isn’t just informative but so creative as well. Loved it
@MdHasan-rl2ek Жыл бұрын
Bcoz of script
@apex305THC Жыл бұрын
Absolutely CRUSHED IT with this one, bro! Straight facts, to the point, concise and super entertaining! Thank you, Rian!
@rhysmckernan94763 жыл бұрын
This is my personal view, I do moving image/film in high-school. I've found that its helpful to find inspiration and learn from many people. Obviously dont copy them but have a style that is your own but also comfortable and unique it'll take sometime. But listening to professional advice especially in schools might not often be very helpful when it comes to creativity. They expect too much in a short time at times.
@EmmaLangdon3 жыл бұрын
I did media studies this semester so I’ve been getting into writing and outlining short films so thank you this was really helpful and I like how you acted scenes out ahah
@sarathputhiyedath11 ай бұрын
Man u have a lot of knowledge😍 I think I need to watch your video twice 😍🙏
@KimDaKreative11 ай бұрын
Great video, the first thing I loved was your honesty. "I am not a professional writer" Helpful, Thank you.
@IornaLawrence Жыл бұрын
The young man there give me what I need this year. He also advised to push goals. God bless you
@SoCreate4 жыл бұрын
Great content! Love that you mentioned the importance of planning.
@RianSpaulding4 жыл бұрын
Thanks for checking it out! 🙏
@ben59867 ай бұрын
Thanks for sharing your knowledge. I just figured out at age 32 that I want to become a film writer and I’m also very scared to do it. But I realized that rather than sleeping on top of my dream it’s better to fall asleep while working for it. I will make use of all your tips for my first draft and let’s see how it goes
@thomascrow19753 жыл бұрын
this seems like a high subscriber channel, shocked that you only have 2k. great great quality keep up the good work!
@ricechopsticktempura2 жыл бұрын
I WANT TO WRITE A SCRIPT JUST FOR FUN BUT I DONT KNOW HOW TO START WRITING IT SO I SEARCH IT SO IT WILL HELP ME THANKS MAN!
@lowiss3804 Жыл бұрын
I LOVE how great is your video! Creative, informative, perfectly done !
@mauui8445 Жыл бұрын
npc
@djwatson3 жыл бұрын
Love the production quality of this video Rian - we'll done!
@chefbrittan84 Жыл бұрын
Final Draft is a must have tool for writing.
@Sticks3 жыл бұрын
Great video man! Love the effort you put into making this entertaining to watch 🙌🏼
@mauui8445 Жыл бұрын
npc
@amaneemoore30754 ай бұрын
Thank you so much...I am in the process of writing my very first film and your series just helped me out tremendously... thank God for you ❤.... blessings
@story_teacup Жыл бұрын
I like your "I'll wait". Made me like, even though I was just looking for an alpha crash course on scriptwriting😂😂😂
@gabrielacanto1771 Жыл бұрын
Loved these tips. First, I agree with you, sitting down with your screenwriting software is not a good first step. Second, though my writing approach is very different, the flash card method definitively works! Third, Loglines, Synopsis and Treatments are a must, but I feel like at the beginning when you are still figuring out the story, you don't know all the key aspects to fill those out. What I do is set up a playlist or a specific source of inspiration that helps me get into the mood / universe of the story and I begin by writing the first ideas that come to mind in a notebook. I try to do this consistenly for a few days and then retype what I wrote on the screenwriting software without changing anything. I repeat this process until I have a decent rough draft. Last, asking for feedback from strangers and friends is very valuable to spot the necessary changes quickly.
@amourie3 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! I've done it before but I like watching videos like these at the beginning of the process to refresh me :)
@DiamondBeyblade3 жыл бұрын
This is super good! You're a super underrated youtuber, hope you get a well-deserved 1M or more! :D
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
🙏
@DiamondBeyblade3 жыл бұрын
@@RianSpaulding Oh yeah, using this video's basic 'outline' I guess I can say, I've written 3 scripts for 3 different short films I am going to make. They turned out really great, so thanks for the information and help!!!
@Randomfacts-yt-1Сағат бұрын
Super information ❤❤
@thorpism3 жыл бұрын
Great video! Perfect balance of just getting right to the point but also entertaining. Every tip was like a clear action step, very helpful. New sub here, thank you.
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
Appreciate it! 🙏
@dddlll16143 жыл бұрын
Very very underrated video. This is very useful, informative.
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
Appreciate it!
@itsavannahsunshine17213 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this video, I am in my MFA film and we are wrting our first script. I appreciate your humor and creative expression! thank you
@itsavannahsunshine17213 жыл бұрын
OMG the not so quick cup of coffee just made me crack up
@ndvpiano Жыл бұрын
This video is amazing. I see you haven't posted in a few years. You definitely have the talent to be posting often on youtube!
@surajbinawade1953 жыл бұрын
It's not about the video has so views and we should go for it but u have proven that the clear content and planning is so important for writing thanks a lot sir!
@XxSEETH3RxX Жыл бұрын
I wrote features before going to short scripts. Now I'm hooked on writing short scripts because it helps you get into the story quicker which I had a problem with while writing features. I'm also learning to make short films. And your videos are helpful
@doodlecatuwu74703 жыл бұрын
This made more sense then any other video I’ve seen
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
🙏
@abraamlincoln40982 жыл бұрын
hey man, as i see last video is 1 year ago, why did you stop. this video helped me so much thanks, carry on
@thewellvideoproductions8244 Жыл бұрын
Excellent production and tips!
@zeyellowtiger41332 жыл бұрын
how do you only have 5000 subs. you deserve way more than that.
@crieverytim3 жыл бұрын
Man, why hasnt your channel grown???? I came for the Honda element video and don't get it - 1st rate quality and you're likeable. Keep at it... hope it gets some well-deserved traction
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
Appreciate the support!
@creativejuicewithoutpulp3 жыл бұрын
Great video Rian! Loved this, thank you :D
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for checking it out!
@michaelangelo30983 жыл бұрын
This was a great video 👏👏👏
@arshiabasit4342 жыл бұрын
I love when he said "and you are finally ready to sit down, and open up that laptop and start writing...... (smile) DONT DO IT."
@bhargavaboddeti24883 жыл бұрын
This channel deserves to be big!
@MrKclark1989 Жыл бұрын
Thank you sharing this. This honestly help me to figure out how to get started and stay on top of it. Now gotta hold myself accountable.
@SerioMawanzo8 ай бұрын
Thank you...I have just started writing my film script ❤
@PP-rm6oe3 жыл бұрын
Many thanks! Just what I needed. Crystal clear!
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
Glad it helped!!
@yvonnejemutai9786 Жыл бұрын
You know how to have us glued, love it, very helpful
@thethistleboy2 жыл бұрын
Gosh I love this aspect ratio
@mariannedemirdji30824 жыл бұрын
Really cinematic introduction, and quality info! I wish I could hit up a coffeeshop and write a script 😢
@RianSpaulding4 жыл бұрын
🙏 Hopefully soon!!
@elyheard685 Жыл бұрын
this is what I wanted. Thank you
@benbenson6533 Жыл бұрын
great video, very helpful tips. Hope to see more videos from you sir!
@palootto40217 ай бұрын
Awesome to-the-point presentation!
@dominickrouser8124 Жыл бұрын
I actually plan on writing a two-hour short film called "Garfield" which is based on the orange cat of the same name. It is a slow-burn horror short in the same vain of Hereditary, Midsommar, The Witch, The Lighthouse.... You get the idea. I plan on selling the short film script to A24 films and getting it Shown at the Sundance Film Festival and I personally hope that the film will win and get produced by Sundance before getting a theatrical release and a KZbin release too.
@nsungemakonda Жыл бұрын
Two-hour short film?
@apex305THC Жыл бұрын
I thought the same thing..@@nsungemakonda
@substancespace2380 Жыл бұрын
Thankyou so much sir, ...I love this
@taylorsmithmedia Жыл бұрын
This is really awesome man. Thank you for the genuine guidance.
@izyschuwi Жыл бұрын
very well explained, thank you so much
@mauui8445 Жыл бұрын
npc
@mainlinetruth3 жыл бұрын
You are right about the best tip. Take action! Set goals and move forward. Great video thank you.
@Anth7408 ай бұрын
Excellent video, love your vibe mate really engaging video 🙌
@waridikenya2 жыл бұрын
Just subscribed to support your great work. Kudos . Am now ready to write my first script as I wanna make my first short film about Rethinking Tourism
@AftonLin3 жыл бұрын
Great video! I'm working on writing a short film for my junior thesis and this really helped :]
@bilalemin4125 Жыл бұрын
REALLY GODDAMN UNDERRATED CHANNEL
@Genbastudio3 жыл бұрын
Great video and tips Rian! thanks for sharing
@nolanmolt3 жыл бұрын
Awesome video, I just subscribed! Make moreeee!
@RayAdamsCanada3 жыл бұрын
Amazing high quality video. Thank you. It helped me alot.
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
🙏
@storypathy2 жыл бұрын
Taking the time to outline or plan will always ease the anxiety of writing and life in general😆
@amanatbrar22033 жыл бұрын
Loving it 😍
@mogmajor68803 жыл бұрын
Man your video as really helped me a lot
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
👍🏻 Glad to hear it!
@kaxar69546 ай бұрын
I don't like to read other people's script because I am afraid of plagiarism
@fggyleafexist17533 жыл бұрын
I'm being mentored to film and script-write a short film. This helped a lot
@gianthills Жыл бұрын
I would advise making a short film as close to a silent film as possible, to design it so visuals alone tell the story. If you only have 5 minutes you don't want to clutter it up with dialogue.
@JoeHenkel3 жыл бұрын
Fantastic!
@triflow3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for this video, it really helps me out!
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear it!!
@armonrichardson84023 жыл бұрын
Great watch, i appreciate you
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
🙏
@golden_fpv90233 жыл бұрын
This guy looks like a cartoon character in a Disney short film!! 😮😮 No hate, and not that it’s a bad thing. lol Amazing content, man!! Definitely helped a lot!
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
I'll take it! Thanks for checking it out!
@judithmlilo5936 ай бұрын
This is so helpful thank you
@poorvikgowda57943 жыл бұрын
Man you're awesome!
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
🙏
@Little7mamah7 ай бұрын
Loved your video man thank you
@manunited78822 жыл бұрын
Second of all, Im not a professional writer by any means - hahaha that had me in stitches 🤣
@torocruz11923 ай бұрын
Amazing sooo helpful ty G !!!!
@billpexal3 жыл бұрын
Nice insight man
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
🙏
@sibahlezembe91963 жыл бұрын
This video is really helpful
@shamgates1253 Жыл бұрын
Hello, you Said that this is the Second video of the series, please can you put a link for the first one? thanks
@renahaswah70923 жыл бұрын
crazy how I started watching u for SF content, but now I happen to be trying to get started in writing a series. Do u have any advice on writing scripts for a whole series? Maybe with the goal of getting it in the hands of Netflix... Lofty goals are better than no goals lol
@JUSTINOMALINO3 жыл бұрын
Great video man!
@thewellvideoproductions82443 жыл бұрын
Very helpful, thank you!
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
Awesome! Glad I could help!
@beetlejuicebeetlejuicebeet32323 жыл бұрын
Can I just use google docs with Grammarly? Or is there a special thing I have to do and that's why I need more software?
@RianSpaulding3 жыл бұрын
Scripts have a specific format that they're written in. The software makes the formatting much much easier. I'd try out one of the free ones before buying anything. Good luck!
@beetlejuicebeetlejuicebeet32323 жыл бұрын
@@RianSpaulding Thanks!
@user-xo2sf4gy1o4 жыл бұрын
Can you do more San Francisco neighborhood tours or just SF related videos?
@DannyNipProductions3 жыл бұрын
Thank u so much for sharing thi helpful video .❤
@demondoll200110 ай бұрын
This is very helpful!
@aminbayervand77042 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much. I have this idea of making a short film about someone who loses his bird. ( As a lovebird, I've lost 3), but I don't know how to start writing ...
@fernandomaron872 жыл бұрын
Watch a lot of other short movies, the idea will start to shape on your head at some moment. Don't copy them, but analyze their camera work and their stories.
@francampbell41533 жыл бұрын
Thank you 😊 💓 ☺ 💗 💛 💖 😊
@louisgahide98402 жыл бұрын
suuuper helpfull thanks!
@3bdulRahman75 Жыл бұрын
Bro i didn't know Jim Carrey had a brother. Thanks for the tips. nice video
@TrophyCityFootball Жыл бұрын
Well explained. I just subscribed 😊 and hit the bell 🔔 ding dong
@janeenchambers32976 ай бұрын
Excellent--Thanks!
@thestorysaga-tss2 жыл бұрын
Hello how to write many actions (not fight) in the same scene. For example : if man writing a book in his room, then clean the room , dress changing , switch off the light and go out As follows , Scene. Room Int/Day Man writing book ------cut to---- Int/Day Man cleaning Room ------cut to-------- Int/Day Man dress changing .------cut to ------ Int/Day Man switching off light and go out. Is this correct ? If not how to write it ? Reply please.
@JJMcgechan11 ай бұрын
Best thing you can do it type it up. Then redraft. Easier to see it as a whole thing and get the ideas out there. The process is a lot easier