In this essay I will outline both the positive and negative features of this video. This will be making use of my expertise in video editing, as I am, in fact, MurkyHickory501's 'former; However, I would like to preface this by commenting on how for the most part, I find this video highly enjoyable and I would like to formally recommend liking and subscribing to this KZbin channel. One reason I find this video enjoyable is because of the sequence of events beginning at around 2:50 in this video. In it, you will find skenglord9 get launched off the volcano and proceed to die. I found the Wilhelm scream (recommended by me btw) to made the whole situation even more humorous along with the 'YOU DIED' dark souls thingy (also recommended by me). Furthermore, the image of Richard with low opacity on the image ads a humorous note to it, causing humor because of how unexpected it was. However, some may see this as a visual glitch and see it in a less humorous manor. Therefore, one reason why this video was funny was because of that scene. However, one reason why this video was not so good was because of Harrison's mic. For example, there were many times when his mic was so shit it either cut him out or you can hardly hear what he is saying. This made the video worse primarily because it make it hurt your ears, meaning that it could cause new viewers to not continue watching the video because it is so bad, leading to bad channel growth. Furthermore, Harrison's voice makes you automatically not want to watch the video, but this effect is amplified by his bad mic. As a result, Harrison should buy a new mic for his VR. On the other hand, a reason why this video was good was because of the intro. This video opens with a humorous moment when toby rightfully insults Harrison and I further reenforce the insult, capturing the viewers attention. Furthermore, the introductions to the characters were completed in a humorous way, as the nicknames and insults thrown towards the players were quite funny. To cap it off, the Walter White image further reenforced the humor as it creates a sense of ridiculousness. Overall, the intro was quite well rounded and made, with touches of humor too. Overall, I would agree if someone were to state that the video is of good quality and surplus humor. This is primarily because of the intro, and the scene where skelglord9 died, because of their humor and quality editing. Some would argue that the video was made worse by Harrison and his mic, which did not meet the humor standards that I assume Toby wanted. The only thing that made Harrison's presence in this video entertaining in any way was his mortifying looks. To add injury to insult, his humor was subpar. Nevertheless, despite Harrison's presence, I found this video mostly enjoyable, entertaining and funny, and would recommend MurkyHickory501 to others.