Commander, Akagi is here for you (Part 2)

[@RyumaBrunestud]

I hope this fanfic is to your liking n_n Remember that you can support these random projects on www.patreon.com/RyuumaBrunestud I had to eliminate some scenes for certain problems and I also apologize for the darkness effects in the images, I am not good with those things. If you want to discuss some changes or ideas, you can comment on them in this video or directly on twitter: twitter.com/RyumaBrunestud Any criticism or idea that you want to contribute I will listen to it. n_nU

[@RyumaBrunestud]

To be honest, eliminate two possible endings and one of these ends was already linked to the third part, so I think I'll have to discard all that... Also delete some parodies towards Initial D, for example, on the mountain, would appear Keisuke and the classic "Kansei Dorifto"... Even with the changes made at the last moment, I hope that this is to your liking. Greetings and we'll see you sooner or later... o_O!

[@bruhmomento146]

@@RyumaBrunestud How do you actually make these?

[@SebTheBastion2006]

First of all, great job on the second part. Second of all, after this series ends, can one for amagi and/or kaga

[@wisdoom9153]

1. I'm actually wondering if there will be an episode where Akagi and Commander will be ended up lovey dovey, you know, change of pace in case this yandere loop is starting to get stale a little 2. Amagi you sly fox... 3. Even so, still hoping on Amagi's own story with Commander (maybe discussing about her condition, more on that later) Other than that, I'm thoroughly enjoying this. Deeply appreciated. Now about Amagi story. This is purely my preference, so you may find it boring. - Use opening scene where Amagi and Kaga see Akagi 'strolling' with Commander, and then tricked them again (just like what you did here) to get alone with him. (i assume Commander is male) - Proceed to do absurd things (again) with Commander, but this time, when things gone wrong, Amagi DID NOT manage to come out safely and need to get medical attention. - In Amagi room, both sitting near the door chatting while playing Go (you know, chessboard game) Akagi says that the injury was minor and nothing to worry about, but Commander insist to nurse her since both Akagi and Kaga still gone somewhere. - Commander ask Amagi why did she seems to overwork herself, she answered that it's her duty to guide the younglings; then he asked her why she tricked her sisters again and do something dangerous, and she answered because it was fun. - both fell silent for a moment, then she said that it's a lie; she did it because that's the only way she can spend time together with him. she know that it's a wrong thing to do, but she don't want anyone to disrupt them. Commander say that she can always ask him but rebutted and ask whether he can escape from Akagi or not, to which he didn't answer. - Commander rephrase his words and say that she can trick her sisters and spend time with him, but still against the idea of doing something absurd just so they can be alone, and pointed out that right now they are alone without anyone's obstruction. Amagi smiled, apologize and affirmed his words. - Finally, Commander ask her what did she told her sisters to do, Amagi giggle and answered that she told Akagi to give something 'special' for him and said that Kaga was there to make sure it's not something live threatening. Commander shuddered, he can feel cold sweats coming out from his skin as he realized that Amagi always been that kind of girl. A fox. A dignified and beautiful fox, but still a fox nonetheless.

[@spectator6233]

i think there was a slight disconnect between part 1 and 2 and why amagi took commander up the mountain but other than that pretty nice

[@SLDFSpectreSix]

(Akagi was no longer in her room.) Commander: "Haha. I'm in danger."

[@Risen_Star]

I think if the commander was a bit smarter, he wouldnt go for the obvious route.

[@zsu-23-4kirov6]

**commander a few years later** “And that kids is how I met your mother.”

[@Sanzumori78]

Hudson-like kids: Bullshish, Mom is conceiving on us!

[@piglin469]

thus Akagi- chan is born

[@-ZM_Gaming-]

I didn't think I would get focked by a Female Kitsune...

[@mikayari185]

"...but if you laze a lot your physical endurance will not be enough for Akagi..." *I like where this is going.*

[@SleepyBoyo]

Don't lick me

[@FoxtrotStudi0s]

Alright.... *Locks self in truck* *Backs over her.*

[@SleepyBoyo]

@@FoxtrotStudi0s how you end up here...again

[@FoxtrotStudi0s]

@@SleepyBoyo because I hate akagi

[@SleepyBoyo]

@@FoxtrotStudi0s oh ok

[@JordanLZ]

Senko-San : Don't fluff so suddenly Akagi : FLUFF ME MOAAAAAAAAR, YOU FOOL !!!

[@bruhmomento146]

I'm literally dying from this

[@mikayari185]

Virgin vs Chad

[@4T3hM4kr0n]

YES! OH MY GOD A SENKO REFERENCE!

[@kazemikun6797]

After that night.... Akagi Chan was Born

[@csar630]

Didn't Akashi accidentally make them-

[@kazemikun6797]

Nah, I'm sure this is the Cause (Insert Lenny face here)

[@AugustGreen_]

Wait a minute wouldn't it be 9 months?

[@sherlock9397]

August Green it’s probably different with ship girls and not to mention she is a fox so it’s probably a lot quicker

[@k.cunninghamt.g.m.4839]

RUNNNN!

[@kusanagibonjet]

Ending is even worse scenario than part one. LOL Commander just played himself for locking the room and Akagi's even more thirsty! XD XD

[@RyumaBrunestud]

Now the Commander must survive one more chapter... xD

[@kusanagibonjet]

@@RyumaBrunestud Siriusly? 1 more Episode?! I can't wait what's going to happen to Shikikan's fate... XD

[@chii6235]

Commander: *sees akagi* Also the commander: Ah shit here we go again

[@lokegerhardsson8979]

The same

[@rexflamevermillion5527]

Akagi - why are you running why are you running

[@neisvestno2444]

@@bruhwatdafuq >jojo pfp. Yeap, didn't expect anything else.

[@iaminpain8407]

@@bruhwatdafuq thing is im just very unhinged i like yanderes *thinks back* oh shit

[@andromedaputraharyanto5420]

*_Current Objective: Survive_*

[@FoxtrotStudi0s]

*THATS WHAT IVE BEEN TRYING TO DO I HAVE A 20 FT MECH TO HELP ME OUT WITH MISSLES THAT COULD DESTROY AN ENTIRE FLEET OF DESTROYERS WITH ONE GO*

[@SleepyBoyo]

Objective secondary: Plan

[@FoxtrotStudi0s]

@@SleepyBoyo *_Third objective: Run._*

[@SleepyBoyo]

@@FoxtrotStudi0s (Please How To do that Chat Speech you using) forth objective: Pretend to be puppy to notice akagi

[@FoxtrotStudi0s]

@@SleepyBoyo ok for slant words you do this _ Akagi is a bitch _ but make sure the under scores are touching the letters For bold you use these: * Akagi is fucking physco * Same thing as with the underscores And to do both you do: _* I'ma kill akagi with a ballistic missle *_ Same rule as the underscore too so you get: _Akagi is a bitch_ *Akagi is fucking physco* *_I'ma kill akagi with a ballistic missle_*

[@leader_big_shiee]

man this fan-fic plus the creepy music made akagi feel like a horror character,i am genuinely scared rn

[@sweetsugar_forcake]

me too including my brother

[@Risen_Star]

It has the intended effect XD

[@shengqin5920]

Agreed.

[@sabertx3273]

While I wasn't scared (I was laughing most of the time), it did definitely have that horror feel.

[@aldyzero6676]

How to calm a 9-tailed yandere fox 101: just fluff her tails Kaga's weakness: cute puppy face of the commander RUN IDIOT! RUN! (going straight to his own room instead of Enty's room to seek protection)

[@itskaiser4645]

@Solarchos safest room is taihou room so you can start a yandere Civil War

[@sweetsugar_forcake]

@@itskaiser4645 commander:hemmm,intresting

[@genesisreach4442]

@@itskaiser4645 would Roon also be acceptable?

[@itskaiser4645]

@@genesisreach4442any yandere room is an acceptable option

[@rodrey330g9]

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[@xolove0024]

Can't imagine how commander can handle Akagi, Taiho, and Roon at the same time >.

[@europanzer3929]

He doesn't. He either runs to the hills or goes out all guns blazing.

[@Anugrah_Amriza]

europanzer oh crap...i have Akagi and Roon in my dock. Now i need to live with Enty and Takao. Atago is out of the question since she will drag me out..

[@SimplyDuker]

Simple: *death by snu snu* OR he doesn't

[@raveakihara2610]

I will call enty,mamagi and bismarck to sleep in my room if it were to happend lmao....

[@earendurvoneinzbern7585]

Belfast, her maids, and, Enterprise would protect me.

[@BlackTemplar6th]

*akagi* "The commander's going to caress my tails!" *Commander silently mouths "kill me"*

[@solmanthe1st835]

Akagi: *Docks* Commander: *Gamemode updated to Survival Mode*

[@solmanthe1st835]

Ryuma: What happened that night I'll leave it to your imagination Meanwhile commander: *Current Objective: Survive.*

[@snakecorp.3399]

Kaga: Commander... you don't intend to leave me alone and escape. right? *Kaga puts her tails around the commander* Commander: ...

[@shitbox7853]

Akagi: **takes out wheelchair* Commander: (she's gonna break my legs!)

[@mr.cuddlesworth3144]

For the last part, I'll just assume he was forced to fall asleep with her.

[@amethium]

The commander got raped by Akagi btw.

[@cotesia7931]

Hoho not even sleep

[@adiutrixpiafidelis]

Akagi can suffocate someone with that "soft attack"

[@sphee4149]

@@amethium waet So thats how loli akagi was born?

[@next6459]

@@sphee4149 Maybe...

[@ch0mpd136]

*That moment when your running away from Akagi and enter Eugen's room only to release you entered Roon's*

[@iaminpain8407]

ah yes roon i like roon

[@rodrey330g9]

“On this episode of the C-Files... The commander took a joy ride and a girl got hit, and then some FNAF stuff happened. And then he got rekt,”

[@hmmmyes6934]

" *Akagi was no longer in her room* " *Kira Yoshikage theme plays*

[@rexflamevermillion5527]

shikikan : * laughs * im in danger

[@daffatalenta9672]

Akagi pls come home, kaga is waiting for you 😢

[@amberninja1074]

Same for me still no akagi.

[@AlexiaofHorus]

@@amberninja1074 cries in bad luck

[@adiutrixpiafidelis]

Everyone want to become a commander until Agaki docked in

[@terrencechandler9937]

Oh yes!

[@Anugrah_Amriza]

Adiutrix Pia Fidelis i prefer Kancolle Akagi wasting my materials than Azur Lane Akagi. Reason? Azur Lane Akagi will literally use all of my money to make sure i can't leave my own room while Kancolle Akagi will just keep asking me to feed her

[@simonkorica9467]

@@Anugrah_Amriza again, I fail to see this as a flaw, i'm right where I want to be.

[@gooseling2277]

Why every commander is like shoddy ol' sweaty virgins who doesn't wann to accept the truth instead?

[@WinterElectro]

@@Ken-df8cp The sad truth

[@earendurvoneinzbern7585]

A wise man once said,"Don't stick dick in crazy!"

[@xavyishvalda3608]

I'm pretty sure the commander wants to bang,but banging everyday non-stop is fatal.And IMO, I'd rather died of old age than being sucked dried

[@BURNSLASH]

Don't leave it to our imagination *Convey each and everything thoroughly!*

[@NachoK66]

Why escape from her? Accept all her love!

[@stephenlee1664]

I would have just ran straight at her and accept all of her love and fluffs. It isn't rape if I consent to it.

[@theplaya4608]

@@stephenlee1664 same she would love to have commander with her even in bed if u get me

[@naomy1701]

i couldnt have told if it was fanfic or part of the Akagi quest, well made! (a few typos have snuck in, but they are neglectable in the grand scheme of how entertaining this was ^^)

[@pierre-alaingingras9768]

4:53 WAIT does the tails are their own sentient being or...

[@aldyzero6676]

That logic only works for a yandere 9-tailed fox

[@santrielvonzuerknekah6118]

@@aldyzero6676 I can't argue against that

[@SpeedsoftSpades]

@@santrielvonzuerknekah6118 No one can

[@darklordkageryuu]

It might be a fanfic , but BOY does it mirror Akagi's personality , at least that's how i see Akagi XD

[@Vert344]

7:54........... I recognize that mountain road......... (Tokyo Extreme Racer Drift 2 Flasbacks)........ Mount Akina/Haruna......... Hgnmmmm..... Part of the 5 consecutive hairpins........... Eeyyuuuup........... Lots of good aand bad memories here. lol *Eurobeat intensifying in the distance*

[@kono_ryu]

I was reading every letter inside the text boxes Now I feel chills I think Akagi made him fluff her tails while he sleeps

[@zwartayatsukimercury5047]

Ehehehehe! The way she Smiles & Giggle is so "Adorable"! Yare Yare. Everybody is scared of Akagi. Me? No. I find her "Pretty" & "Innocent."

[@mdsx01]

Locked in a room by a crazed aircraft carrier? Just loudly say that you have some swimsuit pics of Indianapolis. Mere walls cannot stop Portland.

[@erlhoods777]

The Commander is helpless while Akagi attempts to do IT to Commander.

[@cotesia7931]

Pretty roller coaster in middle But yeah that ending give me chill since i watched it 2.00am xD Men, the scene when akagi is no longer on the bed keep getting me cold shoulder. What if she is behind me all the time xD Thanks for add amagi in your story

[@lazermens]

It's an omae wa mo shindeiru for you then

[@Misile91]

Commander- Finally, work over and time for some well deserved rest Akagi- Imma ruin this whole man career Also Commander- LET ME SLEEP DAMMIT

[@HunterDeRiot]

When the worst comes, just fluff up Akagis tails! 100% effective!

[@straffanvonarfan6549]

Even each tails has their own yandere mind.. Also just realize that these are fan project, always though that this is an event. Well done m8 :))

[@viethoangnguyen7372]

Can you do part 3,please ? I love Akagi

[@RyumaBrunestud]

In the near future, I must first dream and live the scenario... xD

[@subject0x845]

We probably going to need security guards for the commander but I don't think that would not be enough.

[@AlexiaofHorus]

Nothing will be enough for the commander he's boned XD

[@reneromero9913]

@@AlexiaofHorus get a marine division with anti tank weponry ,a tank platoon, and a squadren of f 18 super hornets eqipt with exortset anti ship missiles

[@Crownless.idkwhatshappening]

Every time i read the following phrase "Commander, Akagi is here for you." I always get the feeling the commander should jump out of a window and start running.

[@3seven651]

Commander actually talking... that's nice, very funny harem protagonist, hahaha

[@terrencechandler9937]

yes it is!

[@TrollorRuby]

Oh god. The music just adds to the chill of Akagi. i'm having thoughts about whether I should continue trying to get her, or not attempt to.

[@ManofCulture]

Being a commander is fun isn't it?

[@sweetsugar_forcake]

yeah

[@kazukimave5156]

The commander should've hide to Enterprise room.😂

[@simonbengtsson9241]

Little Akagi-chan was born nine months after that incident.

[@notsopog4889]

Commander:sees akagi at night Akagi:jumps on his bed But is an wood commander In the building just few meter's away Commander:Pulls out awm with 2x scope and suppressor got you bitch fires hits akagi head goes in room and take out akagi in bag and goes in park to put the bag commander goes in room and sleeps his bead 1:18pm later Commader:sudenly wakes up wtf an eagle voice wait its 1pm sees in window an eagle Commander:huh that must be yorktown eagle wait yorktown gives his eagle in enty but why the eagle is here wait hear's not akagi giggles or taihou and roon giggles enterprise:c co comander(giggles) skill activation sexy rape e(giggles) commander:wtf enty pls stop that oh no(flute sad meme) commander:s-h-i-t

[@blackrose1293]

2:52 Broke the fourth wall after doing an X-men reference, nice

[@ianvazquez004]

Comander's options escape or sleep* Comander: I make my options

[@racheldodd3]

Commander: is it safe? Me: uh... *sees Akagi running around* yes? Commander: I'm in danger

[@leoliu5472]

I felt so stupid myself that commander is always thinking of escaping. Hugging the foxes’ sisters tails is something I have dreams about.

[@azaelarce3153]

I rather be in love with Kaga instead of akagi she's scary because the song > 4:28 4:31

[@ibreathenapalm1112]

Akagi is basically Senko-san if she's really desperate.

[@greenphoenix7365]

psycho senko

[@tyazze6390]

commander died by fluffyness, again

[@hans3519]

Hell man i feel this poor guys pain cause when i was there for a little i had half of northern parlament breathing down my neck... it was not something i want to happen again it had me scared for weeks after

[@Slightlycamouflaged]

2:48 i am positive we all understood that

[@exolegend8212]

3:56 Commander: NIGERUNDAYO!!

[@insanity9329]

Sweet mother of holy painus! That is one of the reasons I don't wanna have a yandere girl in my life!

[@zwartayatsukimercury5047]

Ehehehehe! Scared aren't ya?

[@insanity9329]

@@zwartayatsukimercury5047 Well, obviously. Do you wanna wake up with a knife near your weewee and in shackles?

[@zwartayatsukimercury5047]

@@insanity9329 ...Yes. cause I'm not scared of Sharp Things. If they do that: I'm ok with it. Cause I wanna hear their Giggle. It's so "Adorable"! Nightmare Syndrome! Soul Chopper! Scissors Arms Omega! Dark Inferno!

[@insanity9329]

@@zwartayatsukimercury5047 Good luck losing your mind, pal.

[@zwartayatsukimercury5047]

@@insanity9329 Really? My mind is always clear (I seen some Scary games & Anime) Death Charm! Hung on Death!

[@friendlyfire3412]

16:28 *ooOOOOOhh! Thats how Akagi-Chan booorn!*

[@sabertx3273]

Nice job on giving the horror aspect to Akagi

[@exmaarmaca]

Commander needs to call the Kool-Aid jar since there is tons of thirsty warships.

[@Tushie_2112]

Is it just me or can someone hear similar bgm to a vn titled "Katawa Shoujo"? *edit Didn't saw the credits at the end ahaha can't help but imagine that scenario as I had oathed Akagi...*shivers

[@rexflamevermillion5527]

Akagi to commander - why are you running why are you running

[@doitsuland2003]

2:14 music on 2x says shikikan went for a joyride through town with a certain white dust in his nose

[@gabriellabonitasukianto6592]

The commander should be like this The normal Akagi I'm so relieved :D

[@classified9798]

14:59 this scared the shit out of me the music

[@modestuncle9589]

Akagi is frightening yeah, but Amagi is just Lovecraft level terrifying

[@dylanlloyd7301]

This is an abusive relationship waiting to happen...

[@IAMEverywhere0123]

Hmm Akagi yandare is good, thank you for this story guy, I need you to make part3.

[@solarchos4352]

TOUCH THE TAILS!!!!

[@terrencechandler9937]

I love the visual novels Ryuuma!

[@gibusspy5544]

Poor SKK locked himself in with a fox.

[@albiakhsanulhakim995]

Maybe if you let akagi take care of you, she will be a good girl. Maybe.

[@jtomtl]

Amagi , akagi and kaga are sisters, so I will take all three of them, let all 27 tails embrace me

[@mr.cuddlesworth3144]

Aren't Atago and Takao also their sisters?

[@terrencechandler9937]

@@mr.cuddlesworth3144 Yeah they are

[@viethoangnguyen7372]

@@mr.cuddlesworth3144 They don't have tails to touch

[@jtomtl]

Mr. Cuddlesworth no, atago and Takao are heavy cruiser

[@viethoangnguyen7372]

@@jtomtl But they are sister

[@maharlikunph5645]

It almost like a fox fight lol

[@EXafro]

Shikikan : ah shit, here we go again

[@juno5679]

i recommend watching this while listening to some BGMs of The Witch's House

[@Unit-sg1wc]

15:22 when you turn off the last light and run into your bedroom before the demon catches you

[@hypership9774]

if akagi goes to Ara Ara then the commander is fucked xD

[@TejanoWeeb]

I’m willing to pay top dollars for a an AzurLane visual novel

[@sauceboi5965]

Hell no

[@colinmasterson666]

Smudge the Cat that would be like 100 hours long at the shortest or 500+ hours long at the most simply due to the amount of shipgirls to chose from, and all the good, neutral and bad ends… Most, if not 90%, of the bad ends would be at the hands of one or more of the Yanderes in the fleet.

[@wolflives4316]

But imagine the panic while you read! And the flat out terror as your door creaks open while in the novel, your hiding from akagi or taihou.

[@siegfried2k4]

Azur lane crosswave is a kind of a visual novel because the combat is just 10% of the game

[@snakecorp.3399]

This is what I mean that if Kaga before she rested on his shoulder she could have put her tails around his body to hold him in place.

[@SimplyDuker]

The ending is simple: *death by snu snu*

[@odsts6658]

I have now officially terrified of that ship

[@admiraldannyresko4763]

7:51 that a great corner to drift

[@Hataliano]

Akagi : *Giggles* Commander : im in danger Me that think ima commander : bitch , ima beat LB sans phase 3 "CANT STOP ME!!"

[@epic8013]

4:51 ok that bit actually made laugh

[@FRFFW]

What happens that night? Good way : Akagi notice that the commander take care of her she come to just say thank and end of sleep with him she cover half of the commander body with her tail and cuddle to him "just sleep" Bad way : Akagi didnt figure out how she end up in her room but she still want commander to rub on her tail and the special stuff she talking about "Special"

[@rvpairofdicethewanderer2383]

Not sure if I approve how Amagi behaved in this segment but man, that was an OK story. If I were another member in that base I bet I'd be seeing a white outline somewhere there. XD

[@alostghost7899]

I still like akagi

[@rav3727]

"what happened that night. I'll leave to your imagination" Me: haha CBT Commander: 👁️👄👁️

[@dennycahyalie3775]

The terror from akagi can be scary, but I love her

[@shiroen5037]

I wish that I am the commander.

[@sweetsugar_forcake]

well then you must date with her

[@toadskywalker6417]

This just proves my theory. Akagi is a bonafide yandere

[@vaultboi76]

I suddenly got hooked on these videos- what I find weird is that I only recently found out about Akagi because I found a chasing nextbot of her in that Garrys mod game.

[@noodlemochi322]

When i look at the road at 8:08 I feel like i wanna drift there

[@gianniskappa7241]

Akagi i love you!

[@Hinata0928]

What happened? 10 rounds of srutal beggs, nonstop til dawn breaks.

[@shadowtrooper262]

You know, when I first started out AL, I thought that it is best not to have Akagi in my dock but at the same time I needed her. Well, I did have her but for one condition (for now) I will not use her. (But I also stored some good planes for her.)

[@Anugrah_Amriza]

shadowtrooper 262 well if you have fully enchanced planes for Akagi, youre fked because Akagi will use them to 'pin' you. I suggest you have Enty, Yorktown, Takao, Z23 as bodyguards

[@Tiopilot]

Jjajaj 15:00 es una referencia a Sacary movie XD

[@deathraptorf22gaming]

Yep it's confirmed Akagi is insane and I'm pretty sure nothing short of cryostasis will keep her away from the commander he's not safe anywhere I feel like I have to keep a close eye on the akagi in my fleet while maintaining maximum distance LOL